Isn't this a little, uh, rushed? It doesn't even look like you tried on the hair.
Firstly Darius this is a sketch, so is meant to be drawn quickly. Secondly, it is a clever merging of the drawing style from the cartoon series and Ailis' own particular style. Thirdly, she has recreated Mob's helmet hairstyle and incorporated a band of highlight, a feature of the drawing style in the series. Finally, as a 'professional' you know all this already. 😉
I do. But can you tell him draw the hair better?
"him" ? Dude, she's a girl.
Please tell this dude that he needs to edit the hair to make it better. It's kinda lackluster for such a good show like Osomatsu-san.