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Hello, My name is Anna and I shall give a critique on this lovely work of yours. Let's start with the plus point: - I really love your ...


Hey! So first of all! I really like the colors you used and how you have blended everything! It is really neat! But if I am to say one ...

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Hey, I do art *blep* So yeah I'm here to does art *blep*, I just draw stuff *blep*

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Hello all! Today is the day, that I will do commissions!

This is what I'm offering:
- Digital sketches: 3$ each (can be more depending on the details)
- Digital line art + sketch: 8$
- Full colored digital drawing with line art: 12$
- Digital painting: 15$
- Traditional sketch 2$
- Traditional ink drawing 5$


We can always discuss the price based upon the drawing you want. 

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2 Kleuren Licht Studie Roze Geel by AhBlepODing Voor Persoon Dik by AhBlepO


 



Roze Licht Studie 1 by AhBlepO
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A look into my mind
This piece is one I made for an exhibition of mine and it took me a very long time to make.

It is made with ink and a 0.05 nip-pen. 

This is a scan of the original picture.

what are your thoughts?
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I decided to get an online portfolio, you guys should check it out when you have a spare moment :)

(I would appreciate it)
Hello, My name is Anna and I shall give a critique on this lovely work of yours.


Let's start with the plus point:

- I really love your use of color, it is very warm and it dictates the mood in the work very passionately. It really gives you a sense of where this work is at and what kind of mood you are going for.
Also, your use of shading is a very good choice, for it is shading with an opposite color of the color you used for your light, giving even more sense of depth and mood in your work.

-The light, color is one thing but the light is very important as well. As I have noticed in this work, you can see that you try to use lighting to your advantage and try to show it in a way that it makes sense, creating the illusion it is really there.

- Your choice to have objects in the foreground is a very good choice, it gives us an idea of depth in the piece which is very important.

Now for a few points, you could improve on:

- As I said earlier, you really try to do the lighting right, but in some spots in this piece, it distracts from the work, simply because they don't seem very natural or necessary. I get what you're going for, sometimes keeping it simple will make the piece even stronger.
For example, the flower next to the window on the floor is lit up, but you don't really see what light is shining upon it, so it makes you think about it for a while and really distracts from the work.

As a great artist once said: More is less.

- Another thing I would like to point out is the use of line art or not. In this piece, I see you have used like art for some things, yet not for others. This is not too distracting but it does lead to an inconsistent work. It makes the viewer a bit confused about what they should expect to see, lines or not.
Like I said, it's not too big of a deal, but could make the difference between a good artwork and a great artwork.


These are my points for what you could improve form wise! I hope it helped you and that it did not seem very unfair.

Anyhow you're really on a great track to becoming amazing! I would love to see more work of yours in the future!

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MadOtto Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2018
Hello~!
And Thank you very much for the fav! ^^
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Momoksha Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2018  Student
Thank you for the fave.!!:tighthug::heart:
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TomboyJessie13 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for faving
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usernamesRfornurdes Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2018
thank you <3
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Mr-Pink-Rose Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2018
Thanks a lot for the fave!
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Sirythcam Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2018  Hobbyist
thank you a lot for the fave! i will be very happy if you'll want to take a look at my gallery again and give me your opinio or some advices, thank you again!
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blue-saphire88 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2018  Hobbyist Artist
Thanks for the fave! Love your art <3 
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AhBlepO Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2018  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you too *blep*
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Invisible-G Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for the fave! :)
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willisrharrower Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2018   Traditional Artist
Hey Anna thanks for adding me to your watchlist!
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