Hi guys! This one took a while to make. It is an example of what my novel series The Kuos would be if it was a visual one.
So zoom in! Read and give opinions.
The story is pretty limited but can hopefully give the idea of the long one
Hi from ProjectComment! I'm commenting as part of the Everything Must Go contest .
Your 3D work is amazing, and from looking at this comic, I'm blown away by how much detail you put into everything - the characters, the textures in the background...if I didn't know better, I would've thought that these were screenshots from a high-quality game . The first panel, with the amazingly detailed background, and last panel, with the close-up shot of Ruby's eyes, are my favorites - it almost looks like her eyes are on fire, mirroring the sun.
There's nothing I can suggest about your lovely artwork, but I can make a few suggestions about the comic . While helpful, I think that your diagram about the reading order isn't necessary; you can simply write read from left to right in the description, or add small arrows connecting the panels if it's unclear. Additionally, I suggest using a more professional font for the sound effects (the 'click' and exclamation marks), as the current font doesn't mesh well with the seriousness of the story and the more elegant-looking font you used for the dialogue.
Hope this helps, and keep up the excellent work!