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Make Her Eyes Blue (Third Draft - Clean) by AGoodReed, literature

Artist // Hobbyist // Literature
  • July 31
  • People's Republic of China
  • Deviant for 11 years
  • He / Him
My Bio

Expat. Husband. Dad. Christian. Writer. Reader. Comic and film fan. Germaphobe. Kind of bilingual, but not really.

I'm active elsewhere online...



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Favourite Movies
Spider-Man: Into the SpiderVerse, Ed Wood, UHF, Batman v Superman: Dawn of Justice
Favourite TV Shows
Seinfeld, Farscape, Justice League Unlimited, Cheers
Favourite Bands / Musical Artists
"Weird Al" Yankovic, Demon Hunter, Theocracy, RED
Favourite Books
The Bible, The Circle Series (Ted Dekker), Unoffendable (Brant Hansen)
Favourite Writers
Brant Hansen, Ted Dekker, Stephen King,
Favourite Games
Starfox 64, WWF No Mercy, Braid, Ultimate Spider-Man
Favourite Gaming Platform
Tools of the Trade
Keyboard and word processor
Other Interests
Pro wrestling, theology, superheroes, monsters, baseball, hard rock and metal
Since I'm not that active here lately, here's where else I am online: And if Parler ever gets going again, I'll link you to there, too.
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The new story is called "Make Her Eyes Blue (First Draft)." I'm working on the second draft and will probably have it up as early as today. It depends on if I can get the climax revised during my daughter's afternoon nap or not. The second draft is looking to change a lot of the dialogue during the climax. It also adds a bit more to the main characters' joint backstory and spreads the exposition out a bit. I hope everything flows better this time around. The second draft will be the one I share with my friends at the Christian Geek Central forums in hopes that they will give me good feedback that will help me revise it even further to make it the best it can be. Ideally, I'd like to get it read on The Untold Podcast (which is on hiatus right now), or perhaps publish it somewhere outside of dA. After I post the second draft, I'm going to also post a couple pictures of the main characters. Hope you like them.
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I am finally close to finishing my first short story since "Standoff." It features all-new characters. It's a werewolf story (as I hinted at in one of my Inktober 2020 pictures), but this werewolf has a new twist that I haven't explored before. I hope to write more with her after this. I also hope to write more from the "Standoff" universe, too. And someday, I'll get a new Carmen story. But one thing at a time.
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Thanks for the watch!
Thanks for the fav... Old friend. ;)
Thanks for the :+fav: for Dedwyre's Celeste by Kostmeyer  - much appreciated :)
Thanks for drawing it for me all those years ago.
Scary how long ago that was! Hope all is well with you :)
thanks for  the watch
You're welcome