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Critique by malborne May 22, 2012, 3:18:25 PM
You never cease to amaze me. ♥ This really caught my eye and as soon as I saw this, I literally mouthed "wow..". It is so beautiful. First thing's first, LOVE the idea and it is definitely original. The technique is fantastic, really clean and well drawn. Definitely pleasing to the eyes and very interesting to the mind. Almost as if she doesn't want him to disappear. I love how the butterflies are the only ones colored: not too much, but not too many. Nevertheless, this is truly a great sketch drawing. (: Well done. ♥ I am a big fan of your work. (:
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Simply stunning. I love the contrast of black and white with the pink. I was unsure of the butterflies trailing off onto the other page, but didn't like what I saw when I took them away. This brings me to say that I love the usage of space, starting from the left with an almost blank canvas those butterflies draw you in and create a nice flow and guidance to the bodies. The smoother lines on the woman and sharp edges on the man have a wonderful reflection on their emotions. Overall, this piece is beautiful and really caught my attention.
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kizu-TIGERkatzi Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Student Artisan Crafter
this is incredible awesome!
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Arahiriel Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Professional General Artist
Wow! I love the emotions you are evoking through this picture.
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AbleKerhulas Featured By Owner May 7, 2013
Awesome work
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fruilhe Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this is so nice...
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veroscas Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012
super like XDDDD
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Sawyer458 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012  Student General Artist
I love it! I saw your work on youtube, and instantly fell in love:) The use of art material is outstanding and gives it more of a outer-world art art affect:) Great job!
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JudeRio Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this is my favorite piece of art you have done so far. i love it :)
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Your work has been featured in my journal: [link] :heart:
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charcharie Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
This is absolutely brilliant! I love it!
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PersonDev Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012
Wow. That's beautiful. Personally, I like the one on the right a little more. But, those butterflies, though small, are still beautiful.
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teomolte Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012
belissimo il taglio
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bresslerphoto Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Love this.
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tdc-sakuranbo Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012
It actually almost looks like the figure on the left is sucking the creativity out of the figure on the right. If we think about how the right sides of our brains are normally said to be the more creative halves, while the left sides are normally the more analytical, it's refreshing to see how this work reverses the association. There is just as much beauty in logic as there is beauty in art and creativity - is it not?
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samgrisham Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
amazing
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Aloof-I Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Student General Artist
The title adds a whole another meaning to your drawing, which relates to me perfectly at the moment, which is the goal of art, to 'relate' to somone else with your own experiences, i think it's very touching :)
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SusanGerman Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012
when I looked this pic, thought this would be a great tattoo!
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Lady-Buffy Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012
semplice ma molto bello =)
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kymay Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I love this so much. It's interpretive and beautiful and really speaks to me in a way not many paintings I see do so. I would tattoo this on my body.
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charlotterae Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012
You're honestly one of my favourite artists.
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AmyRPF13 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
It says so much...
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CSuk-1T Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012   Digital Artist
I'm not saying a word as the drawing speaks volumes for itself :clap: Well done ;)
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Mistique7 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Oh my god this is just so lovely :heart:
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jackieofsuburbia Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I totally love your works, no words.
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taverymuch Featured By Owner May 30, 2012
love the concept, beautifull execution. very partial to the black and white.
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randallapker Featured By Owner May 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I like where you are going with this! It is always exciting to see what new stuff you have come up with when I get a chance to hit a computer. Thanks for sharing your work! Can't wait to see what you do with this style if you end up playing around with it a bit.
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Miyako-Cupcakequeen Featured By Owner May 29, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
Wonderful *Q*
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GoupilFactory Featured By Owner May 28, 2012
<3
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mukhma Featured By Owner May 27, 2012
This is absolutely incredible!!!!!!!
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Poppybear Featured By Owner May 27, 2012  Student General Artist
Wowza!
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SilentKittyEater Featured By Owner May 26, 2012
Wow. Exquisite, even in its very simplicity.
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earth-gurl Featured By Owner May 26, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Absolutely lovely.
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RNDave Featured By Owner May 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Un altro disegno stupendo, complimenti :+fav:
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noreasonkamel Featured By Owner May 25, 2012
this is such a trip. Amazing
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PAIN--addict Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wOw! just...AMAZING!!! XOXOXO
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dex444 Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Professional General Artist
nice!
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appa-appa-away Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, really cool work!
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nicks1789 Featured By Owner May 25, 2012
Greatttttttttttt and Amaaaaaaaazing
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RosesAndViolets Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Student General Artist
Lovely :heart:
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Soar9 Featured By Owner May 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the piece, but for me, seeing the separation between the two pieces of paper is kinda ruining it. I wish you would use Photoshop or something to erase that boundary line.
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lillbro Featured By Owner May 24, 2012
I love your work,espeically pieces like this where you can see another kind of drawing, like a more unfinished stage in development. You are a true source of inspiration!
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lonexbunnyx7 Featured By Owner May 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That's AWESOME!!!!!!!!!
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ArsiZyr Featured By Owner May 24, 2012  Student Interface Designer
I love you :love: :happybounce:
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seivanov18 Featured By Owner May 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
cool!)))
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Mechanical-Lung Featured By Owner May 24, 2012  Student General Artist
A little different from your other works, the simplicity is quite refreshing, beautiful.
Everything; the thin lines, the fragility of the two figures holding hands, their flesh and bodies disappearing in fluttering butterflies and into thin air, the fragmentation of the bones, all this gives an enigmatic feeling that I personally find really enjoyable and poetic.
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R6E6D6 Featured By Owner May 24, 2012
I love this
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DougQ Featured By Owner May 24, 2012  Hobbyist
nice
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HowCanIimprove Featured By Owner May 23, 2012  Student General Artist
This is incredibly beautiful
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noemieSworld Featured By Owner May 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
wow, this is simply stunning!!
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Gradnient Featured By Owner May 23, 2012
This is... Incredible as always!
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ah-sha Featured By Owner May 23, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Your composition is lacking :( and the negative space on the left is too overwhelming.

The butterfly just look like a last minute addition in a desperation to add color or something eye catching. Why doesn't the male have any effects added?

In the end, it looks like you drew the woman first and then got lazy when adding the male- who clearly isn't as detailed.
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