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small piece 26

watercolor and pen on watercolor paper
13cm x 14,5cm

part of Small Pieces, a series of 51 paintings made for a special project in collaboration with my musician; 
to know more about the project and to get originals and limited edition prints -

( 16/51 original paintings still available - )

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I'm new to Deviantart, so I'm not sure how this works? I've never been asked to critique anyones work before, so thank you for the opportunity! One of the main reasons I love watercolor is because it floats around on the page and dries in a lovely dreamy transparency, which I think you have captured really wonderfully here. Watercolor is easy to overwork, but your use of the paint and overall style is refined and delicate. I also enjoy the simplicity of her dress, contrasted with the detail of her face. It brings a captivating balance to the whole piece. I like the white detail of her hair, but I think adding a bit more texture, especially around her shoulder area, might help the color contrast of her hair and dress pop more. Hope that helps (?)! I enjoy your work.
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The color choice is really powerful, and the way you applied the water to paper is noticeable enough so as to see exactly how it is applied. I'm not sure how I feel about the sloshes of paint to the side, they pull the viewer away from other details in the girl's arm and neck (intentional?). The face is exquisite, the hair layered beautifully. Overall this piece is just a stunning expression of your own inner beauty as an artist, and your first photo uploaded since I've been following you. This is my first critique, also. Hope I did well.
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Obsidian-Eyes Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2017   General Artist
beautiful, love the choice of colours
Trucny Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2017
awww.. that is awesome !!
Rose-Kira-chan Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2016  Student General Artist
Simple yet beautiful! 
mbinz Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2016
Love the simplicity of these; although I'm sure it takes skill to make something that 'looks' so effortless yet be so beautiful! `¬)
aepatton Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
your artwork is so astonishingly beautiful
FieldsOfCoffee Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2016
With just one main color, you captured so many unique layers and emotions. Well done
foureyes Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2016
Heart Love 
Hoochie69 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2016
Wonderful work i love it
convallaria Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2016   Traditional Artist
I like the use of few colors. 
prl05 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Clivia-nobilis Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
NaminF Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2016
This is so beautiful *^*
Wolfartnight Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2016
Your watercolor works are goals
heromomo Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2016
this is awesome XD
xclt Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2016
How you do what you do is beyond me but I love your works so very much.
Xxlove-melodyxX Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2016
Your artworks always speaks so much much feelings :heart: Your choice of colors and how you arrange those colors on paper have such great depth and meaning to it that it always makes me feel something in my heart :rose: Thank you so much for showing us such beautiful and touching artworks...they are the essence of emotions and meaningfulness..:heart:
JennyTang2038 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2016  Student General Artist
I know right? It's so strange how much one can be influenced by just a simple artwork. Her work holds so much emotion. XD
Her artwork does hold a lot of emotions indeed :aww: :heart: :rose:
vin113 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2016  Hobbyist Photographer
Love it Heart 
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