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portrait wind


school work
so much time, pencils 3H, 2B, 4B, 6B.

EDIT: new photo
Image details
Image size
950x648px 306.53 KB
Canon EOS 10D
Shutter Speed
1/500 second
Focal Length
40 mm
ISO Speed
Date Taken
Jul 26, 2009, 10:43:16 AM
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OISOR5's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Firstly, this work is of the most divine pulchritude. And secondly, I'm new to DeviantArt, but I just needed to give you feedback on this awesome drawing.
I love it, its absolutely stellar.
However, I think the shading looks a bit rushed in the neck area, and could use a diminutive bit of more work to improve it and create a smoother transition.
Your skill really does show in the hair, which I think is this piece's greatest attribute and I'm sure you meant it to be with its dynamic movement. I must also point out the eyes are also beautifully drafted, they almost have a scintillating quality to them. I am no professional, and your definitely better than me, but I can see that you put a load of work into your artwork despite the small shading issues I pointed out. I'm sure a bit more patience on top of all the time you've already put into this piece could iron out any of these issues and your artwork would appear even better. Laziness is what kills me when I draw sometimes <img src="…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>.
But keep up the good work, your work is inspirational and just tiptoes away from being epitomic.
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BrunoB86's avatar
awesome effect!
PonderHope's avatar
Crazy good. Whoa. o_o Shading, anatomy, detail. Wow. :heart:
marcoamorim's avatar
nice, very nice.
Dennine's avatar
omfg! The hair is soo detailed! I love it... :D
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NamyCupcake's avatar
I love the hair!
Jiieh's avatar
holy shit! this artwork is breathtaking. beautiful.
InfinityTechi's avatar
Amazing! I really love.
Where do you go to school?
CorinaWan's avatar
I love your trade mark of bringing out the beauty of your subjects in the eyes lips and hair.
CorinaWan's avatar
You have this trade mark of bringing out the beauty of your subjects. The eyes and mouth are again wonderfully executed. Perhaps just to be pedantic, you could accentuate the collar bones more.
Ph4mous's avatar
So good... hopefully I will get to your standard one day :)
IvyClover's avatar
I love her hair...SO MUCH
beautiful <3 i love your art.
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tetriarch's avatar
This is absolutely perfect!!!! I love it.. I wish to be good at least 0,5% of this... Really perfect... ;)
SkewIt's avatar
People, there is no such thing. She worked her ass of to reach the level she is on now. You aren't born with this.. You have to work for it.
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noemieSworld's avatar
THE HAIR! my god surely that it take so much time!!!
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pretty awesome.
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