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school work
so much time, pencils 3H, 2B, 4B, 6B.




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Firstly, this work is of the most divine pulchritude. And secondly, I'm new to DeviantArt, but I just needed to give you feedback on this awesome drawing.
I love it, its absolutely stellar.
However, I think the shading looks a bit rushed in the neck area, and could use a diminutive bit of more work to improve it and create a smoother transition.
Your skill really does show in the hair, which I think is this piece's greatest attribute and I'm sure you meant it to be with its dynamic movement. I must also point out the eyes are also beautifully drafted, they almost have a scintillating quality to them. I am no professional, and your definitely better than me, but I can see that you put a load of work into your artwork despite the small shading issues I pointed out. I'm sure a bit more patience on top of all the time you've already put into this piece could iron out any of these issues and your artwork would appear even better. Laziness is what kills me when I draw sometimes :D.
But keep up the good work, your work is inspirational and just tiptoes away from being epitomic.
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Roxy-the-art-nut Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing work...
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:iconjoel68:
joel68 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014
super !
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:iconbrunob86:
BrunoB86 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013
awesome effect!
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:iconponderhope:
PonderHope Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Crazy good. Whoa. o_o Shading, anatomy, detail. Wow. :heart:
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:iconmarcoamorim:
marcoamorim Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
nice, very nice.
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:icondennine:
Dennine Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
omfg! The hair is soo detailed! I love it... :D
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:iconalice99sa:
Alice99sa Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013   Artist
I love this
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:iconargiel:
Argiel Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student Photographer
AmAZING!! :D
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:iconnamycupcake:
NamyCupcake Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012
I love the hair!
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:iconjiieh:
Jiieh Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012
holy shit! this artwork is breathtaking. beautiful.
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:iconinfinitytechi:
InfinityTechi Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Student
Amazing! I really love.
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:iconwritergirl321:
Writergirl321 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012
Where do you go to school?
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:iconcorinawan:
CorinaWan Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012
I love your trade mark of bringing out the beauty of your subjects in the eyes lips and hair.
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:iconcorinawan:
CorinaWan Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012
You have this trade mark of bringing out the beauty of your subjects. The eyes and mouth are again wonderfully executed. Perhaps just to be pedantic, you could accentuate the collar bones more.
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:iconph4mous:
Ph4mous Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
So good... hopefully I will get to your standard one day :)
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IvyClover Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012
I love her hair...SO MUCH
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graciousgremlin Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012
beautiful <3 i love your art.
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:iconmolimondlos:
MoliMondlos Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Non ho parole :O
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:icontetriarch:
tetriarch Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012
This is absolutely perfect!!!! I love it.. I wish to be good at least 0,5% of this... Really perfect... ;)
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SkewIt Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
People, there is no such thing. She worked her ass of to reach the level she is on now. You aren't born with this.. You have to work for it.
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sasuyachan Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012
<3 Perfect !
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noemieSworld Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
THE HAIR! my god surely that it take so much time!!!
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:iconjearommean:
jearommean Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
pretty awesome.
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:icondaj-daj:
Daj-Daj Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
They should make a 'favourite all' button for your gallery! :D
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:iconpjjam:
pjjam Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2011  Student General Artist
There's a few people that I have found that truly are all hand and you ma'am are one of 'em. You're defiantly are an amazing artist.
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i-am-ashley Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011
HOW do you draw hair like that?
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:iconbeautyartlover:
beautyartlover Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
awesome
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L4ZTh30N3 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011
Bellissimo lavoro...complimenti!!!
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:iconcebes7xy:
cebes7xy Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
till now this must be my 10th fav of your gallery
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:iconjoel68:
joel68 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2011
superbe travail !
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:iconanareto:
Anareto Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2011
took my breath away...AMAZING!!!
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MadisonHathaway Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011  Student Photographer
Absolutely incredible. I strive to be able to create art like you do one day.

And by the way, sorry for the flood of favorites. I simply love your art. :D
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BethanyWade Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2011   Traditional Artist
A beautiful blend of quality shading and dramatic image composition! The hair is wonderfully realized with the detailing nicely executed. The shading/shadowing under the chin may be a bit dark for the lighting values of the rest of the drawing, but it truly is an amazing work that invokes emotion from the viewer!

Great stuff! :)
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magnateofcapital Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011
how did you achieve that textured look around the jaw???
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:iconlady-buffy:
Lady-Buffy Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2011
semplicemente perfetto
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:iconjeffbanner:
jeffbanner Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hair texture is great!
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:iconsasosito:
Sasosito Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Fantastico!
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:iconfenderbox:
fenderbox Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2011  Student General Artist
this is quite bewildering
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:iconobizyanko:
Obizyanko Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2011
awesome!! how long have you been drawing?
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:iconwhalenkm:
whalenkm Featured By Owner May 28, 2011
very nice!
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:iconwallartist:
wallartist Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2011
Fantastic.
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:iconvivianfaith:
vivianfaith Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2011
fuking awesome....muito foda...parabéns!!!
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:iconkittyduff:
kittyduff Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2011
Amazing WOwww ! beautiful !!
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:iconsmehuranka:
smehuranka Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2011
stunning
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:iconsaiyanzrepublik:
saiyanzrepublik Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG I LOVE LOVE LOVE THE HAIR :heart:
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sinapsys1 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2010  Student Interface Designer
Awesome
:O
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:iconbrounw:
brounw Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2010
Perfect drawing...

Wonderful.........
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:iconbrounw:
brounw Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2010
Perfect drawing...

Wonderful.........
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lavender2002 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2010
Stunning!!You are really talented artist


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