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The sweet sludge at the
Bottom of my to-go cup
Is what I wanted
The entire time I sipped.
I hate Sugar In The Raw.
I really need to learn to use the honey or granulated sugar when I order tea at coffee shops. Sugar In The Raw never dissolves.

This poem is in the tanka style, which is different from the haikus I usually write. I hope I did well.
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Mooncakes1 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I miss you Alyssa.
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aeran Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2010   Writer
Aw! I miss you too girlie.
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