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The Story of the Bad Egg, p. 8
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By Aeonna   |   Watch
Published: May 25, 2011
© 2011 - 2019 Aeonna
This is an illustration from an odd story book I wrote. I wanted to finish it by April 28th, but no such luck.

Read the whole story here [link]
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idiacanthusStudent
Ooh, what an interesting story this was! I think the illustrations are just gorgeous, and move along at a quick pace -- I was sad when the story was over! ;y; The line quality and placement of characters is lovely here. The sparse colors and use of white also add a lot of power to the scene. Nice!
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AeonnaProfessional Interface Designer
Thank you!

I would have liked to colour the whole story, but I was never sure what style to go with. This picture was the least bad of a series of experiments. I'd like to do something with more colours, perhaps similar in style to what you do. I'll have to try that out when I have more time on my hands : )
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Oh? Comic? OwO

*reads*

That is so awesome! I really have to say this, this is probably the best I've read so far. Not only does it have a funny and nice plot, it actually ENDS instead of going on... and on... and on... like so many others. And into oblivion with the mindless fans

Well done, well done! :clap:
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AeonnaProfessional Interface Designer
Thank you!

There are quite a few webcomics with good endings, so don't give up on them entirely : )
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True, though sometimes I feel like some are a little silly |D (i.e., Homestuck, I think it's cool but 6,000 pages sounds a bit on the verge of preposterous)
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jello-bombHobbyist General Artist
This is amazing! I read the comic and I was really impressed. Lovely contrast and style!
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AeonnaProfessional Interface Designer
Thank you! I'm so glad to hear you think so ^^
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GabbiProfessional Digital Artist
Haha! Så läcker!! Och jag fick mig många skratt! XD
Men jag måste säga att det här var en väldigt cool historia! Läcker stil på bilderna också! :heart:
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AeonnaProfessional Interface Designer
Det tog så otroligt lång tid! Du gjorde Frost snabbare än jag hann klart med 36 sidor. Vad effektiv du har varit!
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GabbiProfessional Digital Artist
Ja men Frost hade inte alls samma detaljrikedom som dina bilder har! XD
Sen får man ju ha i åtanke att du har haft riktigt jobb också (till skillnad från mig), men snart ska jag börja på min ungdomspraktik! :la: Det kommer bli spännande.
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AeonnaProfessional Interface Designer
Åh grattis! Hoppas det är ett bra ställe : )
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GabbiProfessional Digital Artist
Tack tack! :la:
Jag tror det blir bra. Jag kommer vara på Fryshuset och hjälpa till i några månader. :D
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PlotholetsiProfessional General Artist
I adore it, but it feels a little incomplete. The ending was a bit sudden. But it was really fun, and I loved the artwork, and I <3 the 'book wyrm' child ^_^
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AeonnaProfessional Interface Designer
Hm, sudden... I'll have to read through it again later on with fresh eyes. Right now I just can't.
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Funny thing is, I arbitrarily went to corneralley yesterday to see if there was anything new, and lo and behold, there was! Or at least half of it.
I'm glad I could read all of it.
Altogether, very cute and fun to read. The story was engaging and fun and made me chuckle in many places. A very fun twist with the dragon eggs!
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AeonnaProfessional Interface Designer
Thanks! Glad you liked it :)
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