Truthfully, I don't read the stuff you post because it's GIANT WALLS OF TEXT. Break it up a little? You should at least be putting dialogue on new lines. When there's so much text with no breaks, I get lost and my eyes start to go out of focus.
As for the rest of dA's prose/poetry, well uh. To be honest, it's mostly crap. |: Generally, I go to places that cater to that sort of stuff rather than digging around in a site that's mostly directed at visual artists.