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  • Sep 25
  • Philippines
  • Deviant for 9 years
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Hi there, you probably don't know me, but I'm usually a guy who finds interests in artworks especially including one of my favorite themes like action, adventure, comedy, mixed, or something like that sort. I probably started at March 2012 where everything is new to me, hehe.

I'm also a Huge Anthro Fan, especially when it's gone from medieval to the future ages where I like to see. The ones I love the most is what inspires me to create my artwork and what gives me motivation to join DevArt.

I know art well enough. I know I didn't discovered my full potential yet. But, if you help me, I can fulfill my goals. If you want any help in some drawings or most novels, I 'll be there. Just don't annoy me... seriously...

I have some experiences in art, I am still learning and yet I'm also improving. My goal is to be successful not only in art but also in life.

I'm creating some different types of art and web comics, so if you like to check them, go ahead!

Favourite Visual Artist
Right now, the ones I'm watching here at DevArt
Favourite Movies
Harry Potter, An American Tail, Movies on my shows
Favourite TV Shows
Animaniacs, Pokemon, Digimon, Heathcliff, Kid vs Kat, Tom and Jerry, Phineas and Ferb, and many more...
Favourite Bands / Musical Artists
Extreme, Dramagods, Creed, Andy Timmons
Favourite Books
Bone, Amulet, Warriors, Hank Zipzer
Favourite Writers
Kazu Kibuishi,Jeff Smith, Erin Hunter
Favourite Games
Anything Adventure, Action, or even Mind relaxing games
Favourite Gaming Platform
Mostly on PC
Other Interests
Checking other stuff

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Comments

:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Oh, a new critique that will be coming from me for the first time in history!

...well, not really, I mean I made other critiques in the past, but I haven't made a critique on this DK picture yet...

The visual effects of the scene is quite good, and they really pop out in the comic. What surprises me the most is the atmospheric view point of the picture; you can literally feel what going on in the picture on how the emote, act, and respond. The problem is that is seems small in a sense it lacks some pictures that emphasizes more of the characters actions without spoiling or removing the cliffhanger. For example, the upper part of the comic page; if the readers read only for the first time it can be confusing, because even if you guys are trying to show it that it's simultaneous, both in actions and words, but the readers would find in a bit delaying, but that's just my opinion.

The originality is what made me critique this artwork of yours. You guys have a uniqueness and originality in the storyline just basing on the picture itself. Despite with confusion at first, as a whole it already tells a story without looking at the beginning. It also shows the characters, even the so called extras and cameos, have their own uniqueness and originality as well. When you look at another perspective, they will be seen as very important people despite the fact that they're just like ordinary people like us, the readers and you. Even without the powers, you can still feel their strengths and weaknesses like a real person does, whether they're trying to help, hurt, or just look at the other. I can say more on how it gives meaning to us, but I'll just state that more on the impact section.

Another originality is in terms of appearance. I mean, you guys are one of the few people who draw ectomorphic characters, meaning you guys draw characters with thin fats and long limbs, unlike guys who have anthro drawings nowadays like myself draw mesomorphic or endomorphic styled characters, which is either to perfect or to proportional to a human body or is quite too puffy or large, which is also quite cliche-ish. I cannot say much more, it's astonishing in general, but there might be some disadvantages though; in terms of distance, it can become difficult if the character is far away, for example in right bottom part of the picture, and that's where I'm going to discuss in the technique part.

Please be aware that the originality of the drawings comes connecting with the technique on how it is drawn. Let's go back the characters drawn in the distance.
I know you guys are professionals, far more professionals than I am, but you guys might have to admit, even I criticize myself, it's very hard to draw a character in a distance. As seen in the last part of the comic, if you look more closely, it seems that Bobby is very big than his usual proportion. On the bright side though, even your art is surprisingly unique, it's surprisingly easy as well without including the distance and the proportion, or it is just my mistake. As time progresses your technique in drawing your characters seems to improve as well, from the very beginning until to this page I see right now where it is awesome and outstanding, although there are few tiny flaws that can be seen, obvious or not, but it is not enough to greatly effect the picture.

On impact, and to put this on a nutshell a bit, this picture is one of the examples on how we reflect on it. The characters, specifically the dream keepers, really show the counterpart of the human race, that means us. To be spot on, every action, every emotion, every instincts they give to us proves that they are like us; they show that they're just ordinary people, and that's what makes them heroes or important persons, unlike in other stories with are too cliche-ish that there is a hero already even in the prelude. Another part is that it gives impact to the readers are the climaxes and the cliffhangers; you give us a whole imagination on what's coming up next without even spoiling the next page too much, hehe.

Overall, the score I gave you guys is 4.75 over 5. I would like to give you a perfect score, but I still believe you guys can improve more than this comic, heck, this is just one of the challenges for you guys, base on my opinion. So, a really fantastic job, and I hope we, as readers and fans, would be amazed on what you about to do next.

A really, really nice job, guys! Now, will you excuse me, I got a DK fanfic to make, haha.
Prelude 258
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Well, this time I'll my OC's do the talking. I think they'll say something about this. I'm quite busy doing Algebra Homework right now. So, I'll let them do the talking...

Kurt: Hey, Ayako, nice meeting ya! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/> So um, well, for starters, I like what you did to the background, it does represent the sky above, and I like it. The perspective is also good, it just shows that you are really running, with style, that is! The colors you used are excellent. They seem to blend well with the picture; not too bright or dark. The proportion of your body is great, well, except the right leg, if I'm not mistaken. To sum it all, I give it a thumps up! How 'bout you sis?

Alice: Okay, bro, I'll take it from here. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/> Let's start with your current apparel, shall we? Okay, about it, it really gives me nostalgia, back to the day when I was studying in elementary school in Japan. It also reminds me of a particular Anime I watch back then too, I forgot what it is, though. The skirt is a bit "short" for my taste, but nevertheless I still like it. That bag you have has a really good affect on you, and I can see that. Your body has a great shape, and the only thing that is not right is your leg, it doesn't have the right proportion. Overall, you did a great job; 4 out of 5, and it also brings back my memories when I was young.
Sailor Fuku
Ah don't worry about it, I myself have troubles too creating a holiday theme picture. I am also very sick at the moment right now. Well, at least it looks nice, not so sketchy and it really suits your style, just an improvement, like I said.
Holly Jolly Christmas
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Time for a little Critique:

Lets start with the Warners - They are nice; peerfect for the season today. I like what they are wearing, it's very simple but olorful. Their expressions are very nice and very lively, but the color of the nose seems to be blurry and the bright colored tone unlike the other pictures you've created. The costumes' color seem to be a bit blurry too; I don't know, maybe because you rush the picture or I'm just seeing things (because I'm very sick today, hehe). Either way, there should be more gradient and shading onto them.

Background - Needs a little work there. I am not sure if the tone of the fireplace and the Christmas tree are not proportional, but it seems that the fireplace, together with the picture frame, doesn't look striking, in my opinion. The colors, on the other hand, look very nice; it strikes the viewers tone. I mean, it fits the theme well and they do somehow seem lively also.

Overall - The whole picture looks alright, but you need to improve, after all, personally, I'm look forward from you artworks and I also like to reach that goal too. So, I'll say I'll give you 7 out of 10 for the picture. But it doesn't mean that the picture is not good; it is very good actually, but needs more improvement.
Holly Jolly Christmas
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

This is my second critique now and I wonder if did it right?

Well, for starters, I can see that you are improving since the last time I saw you draw your Fursona. Personally, you're good at that style, so stick with it or you can improve it more.

The sharpness of the picture improve as well. I can see the edges are beginning to be well defined and it brings out the picture itself.

Your shading or coloring almost remains the same, the only difference that I can see is that it is much clearer than your previous drawings.

Overall, your drawing in the picture is quite detailed, and it has wonderful quality. As a matter of fact, I can't say anything wrong with this picture. Keep up the good work.
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