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[TREATOPOLIS] Part 3: Stygian Side
Impotent rage – a need to claw and tear made futile.  As soon as the emotion rose within him it quelled, fizzled out.  As the emotion left, energy drained from his body.  His legs shook as if on the verge of collapse.  He clung to whatever semblance of himself remained, and somehow managed one step.  It did not make the following one harder.  A second step.
    He drew breath – stinging his nose and throat.  Like he had breathed in icicles.  Like he had not spoken, or breathed, or worked the muscles in his throat for a decade.
    Memories flooded slowly.  Ticking by like the hands of a clock.  He felt sluggish.  He felt weary.  Whatever adrenaline had once allowed him to move barely managed to be enough for him to stand.  Legs shaking, breath rattling in his throat, he managed another step.
    His memories – if they could even be called that &
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[TREATOPOLIS] Part 2: Stygian Side
A stumbling shaky step was the only thing he could manage as his eyes open to reveal – what?  How exactly was he to make sense of his surroundings?  How was he supposed to get out of this place?
    With a sound between a grunt and a startled snort, he took a step back.  Followed by another.  Then another.  Things came back slowly, memories bobbing the surface as his surroundings became clear.  The treats, the fragment – stone?  Glittering, shining.  The sensation of suffocating, the fur, the claws, the teeth.  He shook himself in an attempt to make the clinging dredges of the memory dissipate.  Another step – though backwards or forwards he couldn’t tell.
    He remembered the mission – their research.  He remembered the team.  But he looked about and saw nothing – found not a trace.  No treats.  No glittering stones.  No stygians ruffl
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    He looked about feeling quite unlike the odd-duck.  Everywhere his eyes fell, miffed expressions, frowns, scowls, or even outright despair seemed to cloud the faces of the team.  Whatever their mission was, whatever their intentions or goals or hopes of achievement or glory had been sorely overestimated.  This was little more than a ruin – a sugar-covered ruin at that.  It seemed surprising pests didn’t openly battle for what little remained amongst the cracked-open buildings of Treatopolis.  As it stood, he merely feels lucky that the train – if it could even be called that – seemed to function sufficiently enough to lead from point A to point B.  He would have not been surprised if the thing had screeched to an utter halt with a final death rattle or wheeze and simply collapsed upon the tracks.
    Hope was not completely lost, however.  They still had their work ahead of them.
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