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Silly little story... This idea kept bugging me when I was trying to write something different, so I guess I had to write it down... I'm not very happy with how it came out, but I guess I never will... I like some parts though.

Contains weight gain, some expansion, stuffing,...
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Deadpool441| General Artist
I now pronounce you man and mammal. I just want to apologize for how long this took. Work, and all kept me from this. But in any case, this story was a rather interesting one. I have only read one other story of yours, and that was a rather good one. I loved how the story flowed almost seamlessly from start to finish. I must confess, I was a little turned on by your final description of this wonderful future wife.

My only criticism is that I have read a few stories similar to this, each with the same principal; man meets woman, man falls in love with her, woman and man fall in love, and woman gets fatter while the man falls more in love with her. Otherwise, well done. Completely original.

Overall, I give you a 4.5/5 star rating for the reason stated above. Don't stop writing; you clearly have a knack for it. 

Vision: 4.5/5

Originality: 4.5/5

Technique: 4.5/5

Impact: 4.5/5
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333Blebleble333's avatar
Thanks for the review, I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

The story was meant to be my attempt on the common trope, so your criticism is spot on.
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Deadpool441| General Artist
No problem. As I said before; if there are any other stories you want me to review, let me know, and I'll see what I can do about it
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Tbh this story is extremely well made certain things in my mind popped out and i could imagine her right there. I really enjoy your work and congratulations on making some great stories. (Also your fanbase seems really strange but kind and they give good points of feedback)
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333Blebleble333's avatar
Well, I'm certainly glad that you enjoyed the story. I don't know if my "fanbase" is strange, but it's definitely a kind bunch of people.
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TerminallyPrudential's avatar
Well written I am happy that it was not just a fat fetish story but the people behind it.  
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333Blebleble333's avatar
I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
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112266's avatar
That is an amazing story
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DeviantDemonic's avatar
That was amazing.
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333Blebleble333's avatar
I'm glad that you liked it :)
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Lucky2000Zx|Hobbyist Artist
I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS STORY
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333Blebleble333's avatar
I'm glad that you enjoyed it :)
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HappyJBH's avatar
Very nice, this was an enjoyable story to read. Although to me it seemed the story moved a bit too quick(the jump to when they are living together and how quickly their relationship formed) also the desc and size of the girl seemed a bit crazy but that's just me preferring realism. Overall enjoyable tho
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I'm glad you enjoyed the story. The story moved quickly mostly because I wanted to keep it short and because I'm not really interested in reusing those characters and so I focused on the parts I found 'attractive'. I also prefer realism over such ridiculous sizes, but I just had this silly idea for a story and it turned out to be fun to write...
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OffensiveDefender|Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Honestly man, this is really cute. Your descriptions border on hyperbolic sometimes, but that's not much of an issue.
Seriously, this was super sweet. 8/10, would recommend.
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333Blebleble333's avatar
Thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate it :)
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nightshade010101's avatar
Witting is always a work in progress. 
If you want a critique, do ask. I'm sure someone would respond.
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333Blebleble333's avatar
I'm always interested in any kind of feedback I can get...
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speedfreak94's avatar
well done !!!!!!!.................... any chance of a second ?
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333Blebleble333's avatar
Not in my plans right now, but who knows?
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speedfreak94's avatar
in that case I shall wait for another masterpiece !!
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biggirlsrock's avatar
Excellent tale!!! LOVED IT!!!
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Thanks, I'm glad you like it :)
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7SinsofWG's avatar
This was a wonderful story! Keep up the great work!
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