sorry for the late answer- I was really much busy lately (working working drinking drinking)
But this time I have no real ideas for usefull critiques
I just could tell my local syphaties/wishes: I think maybe would be could if the main ship were much biger, closer to the spectator. and maybe
would be usefull little composition corrections- like a bit croping top and bottom, that viewer were more concentrated on main objects (ship, bcg ships, gate's entrance). And maybe would be nice some water-flow/bubles-way after the main ship, maybe it would add little dynamics.
just such observations. This is a good work, with everything in right places, so I cannot tell much
and btw- HAPPY NEW YEAR!