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Kistaro

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I don't think this is quite finished, but I can't see what needs to be worked on anymore. Suggestions would be greatly appreciated. =)

Kistaro is © Kistaro, of course.

Pencil and Photoshop. (8 layers.)
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unfurled
Good portrait of Kistaro.

You put "Advanced Critique Encouraged" (I may get a little nit-picky) so...:

I think the wings could be improved - it looks like Kistaro can't extend his wings/wing struts at all, and that he has Hanging Butt Syndrome (the membrane doesn't cover his hind legs, so they wouldn't be supported in flight - and his butt would hang down.)

A little more muscle definition wouldn't hurt either, it seems almost too smooth.

for some reason, the head bothers me a little. The snout seems to stick out, and, I don't know.. It jsut seems a little long.

I really like it though :)


-Unfurled