Upside Down Frown

I can see what you've tried to achieve. Using solid lines to link letters together and create an artistic word art piece. But somehow, I just don't think it's worked.

As it is at the moment, I think it's too busy. There are too many lines running around the piece that I don't know where to look! Especially in the top left area of the piece; and since there's so much going on, the text is difficult to read.

The bottom left is a lot nicer, and I love how you've created the E from the D and the lines. That's unique and well made. The N's being linked together is also a nice touch, along with the shading to make it appear that the lines are weaving in together.

Overall, I think if you just cleared up the top right side a little, ensured that it wasn't so busy and that just key points are linked together, then the piece could be a lot better.