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To island Pag

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ND Heliopan 3.0 used...
Image size
600x600px 130.97 KB
Make
PENTAX Corporation
Model
PENTAX K10D
Shutter Speed
30/1 second
Aperture
F/22.0
Focal Length
16 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Apr 17, 2009, 3:24:38 PM
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

This scene is definitely beautiful to gaze at, especially with the bridge in the foreground and the mountains in the background. The stillness of the water makes for a very relaxing time riding toward the bridge to the island.

The bridge spanning across the scene is very centered, and it looks very nice, especially when it is being lined up with the mountains. The colors appear quite natural, even a little bit faded. I would assume that the sun was definitely bright, not quite obscured by dust and particles in the air.

Looking at the sky, I feel a bit distracted. <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/f/f…" width="15" height="15" alt=":(" title=":( (Sad)" /> First, the scattered cumulus clouds hanging over the mountains look a bit blurred. And there are multiple white streaks coming down from the upper left corner. The sky looks a bit too dark from the top.

To allow for a very well-balanced scene, I would crop part of the sky so that the length of the remaining sky matches with that of the water.

This is definitely a beautiful shot of the water, the bridge, and the distant mountains. Working on the sky and just a little bit on the colors would make all the difference to how the scene is being viewed! <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)" />