I played with lots of elements to learn something more about composition. I removed most of these elements since they kind of disturbed the flow of the pic. Which means most of my tries, to create a ticky compo, were not too successful. Yes you're absolutely right. The quality of that painting is not the best. I wanted to go for a dirty concept arty like look in this one. So don't look for flaws in that painting... just let your eye and brain complete the loose parts.