Donut Shop Brothers #1-Matt Donovan (FINAL)

Well, I wasn't all that satisfied with the previous inking so I redid it.  Frankly, I'm still not all that impressed, but I can at least live with this one.  My only problem now is that I think I overdid it a bit with the shading on Matt's face.  But then again, it does make him a bit more menacing, and menacing is good.
I've learned quite a bit from this one, though, which hopefully I'll remember for the other cover panels of the other six Donut Shop Brothers and the good cops.
As usual, creative criticism is always welcome.