Forsaken 09

Firstly, I love the idea behind this pieces, the positioning of the mannequin and it's imperfections/damage. I'm not sure how this was edited in post but the eyes seem to have lost a bit of detail and the edges of the mannequin of the left side of the neck feel a touch blurred. I would have liked to seen the highlights turned down just a tiny bit and the shadows around the neck and shoulders darkened a little just to make the photo pop a little more. Also if that is a hair and not a crack near the left eye i would have removed that just so it's not as distracting from the overall picture.

Overall i'm probably being a little picky and think you have done a great job!

Critique #4 of 365 days of Critique!