Critiquing Critiquing StoryStory: Turns out you're doing it wrong.More Like This
Everyone is- and what's more, anyone who tries to make a foray into storytelling without having mastery over their efforts merits endless scorn.
I've had the privilege of sharing advice with some other creators of late, and seen some of the (usually anonymous) criticism being leveled at their work. It's noteworthy for being intense, superficially sophisticated, and misguided.
Now, there are two kinds of creators out there. Those who don't give a fig for what other people think, and dismiss all criticism out of hand.
...Those creators tend not to improve.
Then there are those who care about the quality of their work, take pains to make it enjoyable for others, and are receptive to feedback.
These individuals have the most potential as writers, and are also most vulnerable to their efforts being permanently deformed by vindictive critique.
They'll be assured their characters are flat cutout
Awkward Little MiracleSixty five million years ago, a 6.2 mile wide asteroid slammed into the earth and unleashed hell. The impact released 200 million times more energy than our mightiest atomic bombs, blasting superheated gas and debris in a corona of destruction that settled into a post-apocalyptic orbit around the planet.More Like This
The dinosaurs found it impossible to survive the event.
The alligators? Just dandy. Maybe a bit smug seeing all those cocky tyrannosaurs get theirs.
Contemplating this helps to explain our derpy little miracle:
Raging fire and collapsing infrastructure? Whatever. Stop Drop and Glare evidently works like a charm. That and being built like a little tank.
When we asked the rescuers if any pets had been rescued, they truthfully answered no. However, it wasn't until some weeks later that salvage teams began entering the building. One of them must have come across Tally, Queen of Destruction lounging in the midst of
Godzilla joins the BATTLE SPIRITS trading cardgameThis year, Godzilla will be joining the "Battle Spirits" card game and it will include Legendary Godzilla as a character. Below are image of the trading card flyer that is being advertise in Japan at the moment. I can tell you one thing, I can't wait to get my hands on these. It's about time I tell my Gundam Wars deck to move over and welcome a new set of trading cards for my collection.More Like This
Dragon Kasai- Eternal Pain part 3More Like This
Dragon woke up in a hospital about two day's after that night when he awoke he screamed demanding to leave the hospital the doctor's had to put retains on him after he calmed down a detective walked into his room asking him questions about what happened Dragon told the detective everything he could remember the detective told Dragon that the group that killed his family was known as the serpent. Dragon spent 10 weeks in the hospital on the day he was released the doctor took off the bandages that were wrapped around his arm's
"You were lucky that the whips was only on your arms for a minute" said the doctor
"Where is my gear" asked Dragon
the doctor bought over a box which keep his pistols in Dragon opened the box and picked up both pistols with only little pain in his arms then clipping them to his belt "I might need a proper holster for them" Dragon picked up his clothes the shirt had holes in it and the jeans were ripped "Damn looks I going to need some new clothes"
Dragon left the
Dragon Kasai- Eternal Pain part 1More Like This
it's was a quite afternoon, Dragon sat in his room finishing up the work his father had given that morning, he took a quick glance out his window to see three figures walking along the path to his house
"It couldn't be them" thought Dragon quickly jumping up from his desk running out his bed room but went back to his room to pick up his work running out his room again as he pasted his father office he slid the work under the door and continued running to the door as he reached the stairs there was a knock at the door, quickly as he could he sided down the stairs railing and opened the door as he reached it, his three older sisters stood at the door
"Crystal, Luna, Dawn your back" shouted Dragon giving them a hug
"Hey Dragon boy you sure got bigger" smiled Luna as she rubbed his messy white and black hair "I always did love your messy hair"
"Dragon you better have a good reason for throwing your work under my door" yelled his father as he arrived Dragon's father was a tall man with stra
ART RAFFLEI want to have some fun.. so I'm doing an art raffle. I miss drawing something for other peopleMore Like This
There will be two winners and prize is a fullbody drawing with bg of an oc/character (I will draw anything: ponies, humans, mecha, fantasy creatures.. except nudity)
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