My Immortal Review: Chapters 2-5More Like This
One of the problems with this story—is everything! Everything is wrong with this story. Nothing about it is right. The very fact that it exists is what's wrong with it. So why should I even bother saying "one" thing is wrong about it?
With that said, one of the things wrong with the chapters is that they're extremely short and unsubstantial. Just like a story should have a beginning, middle, and end, a chapter should be its own self-contained story with a beginning, middle, and end. The purpose of a chapter is to divide the main narrative into sizable, readable portions while at the same time providing their own narrative as to thoroughly entertain the reader.
The chapters in this story, on the other hand, don't do that. They offer no real logical separation of the main narrative, and thus they themselves offer no real narratives themse
Russia Shemiji..Sorry Im about to just Rant for like 3 sentences then go back to drawing....More Like This
I FINALLY GOT MY RUSSIA SHEMIJI to work! I had downloaded it like 7 times and it fiannally worked...... and now russia is crawling the left side of my computer.... GET DOWN! -picks him up and throws him to the ground-
ANYWAYS~! I love rusia so he is totally a worthy 1st Shemiji (You dont know what a shemiji is; look it up in the search box in Deviantart and Put Russia Shemiji so you can see THE ADORABLENESS ON MY SCREEN)
Now he is crawling the top of my screen... DAMMIT IT! I TOLD YOU DOWN *throw*
But thanks for hearing my rant....... I HAVE WANTED A SHEMIJI SO BAD.... now I just have to be carefeul when my mom walks in because she might think he is a VIRUS and she HATES it when I download stuff... actually she doesnt even know that all i have in "my folder" on the desktop is 99% downloaded....
HETALIA OUT! :iconrussiaishappyplz:
Spiritually fitDear one, physical workouts are necessary to maintain health in this life. But training in godliness will bless you in this life and the next. Trust me to work my character in you and train your mind until my attitudes become yours. Let my Spirit coach you in faith and goodness.More Like This
I long to see you spiritually fit. You can exercise your spirit by meditating on my Word and spending time with fellow believers. I invite you to come to me for regular consultations on your spiritual health.
Committing to this training will reap eternal rewards. I am with you every step of the way because I love you.
Build wiselyFrom the beginning I have loved you. And in my love for you, I willingly provide for all your needs. I do this because you are my child and I want to have a relationship with you.More Like This
In meeting your needs, I have also given you the words of life-tools to help you build a foundation in me. Take a lesson from those who rebuilt the temple in Ezra's day: build wisely. Start by building on what you know to be true of me. Start by building on what you know to be true of me. Soak in my faithfulness and grace. Believe that I am holy and just. Know that no matter what may come your way, my love for you does not run out.
With this solid foundation, you can withstand the storms of life.