[KH] Stepsiblings: Eighty-seven, ALTERNATE ch. 5Eighty-seven, a Kingdom Hearts fanfic by Raberba girlMore Like This
ALTERNATE chapter 5 (outtake) [rough draft]
When I wake up, I'm disoriented because it's dark and there was some weird sound that woke me, like whenever that black portal thing opens. I'm pretty sure that evil Saïx is back, but there's more people, too.
As I'm squinting, trying to figure out who they are, one of them hurries over to me and throws back the hood he's wearing but I already knew who it was because I could sense his doomgaze beaming at me, I'm reaching out and grabbing him Saïx Saïx "Saïx! It's really you?! You're the real one?!"
"Axel, what is this?!" He pulls one of his hands out of mine and helplessly pats at the cage thing. "Can you get out?"
"Sure I can get out, I've just been hanging out in here all this time for FUN."
"Axel...." distress unhappiness pain
"I'm okay, bro. I really missed you."
[KH] Stepsiblings: Eighty-seven, chapter 5Eighty-seven, a Kingdom Hearts fanfic by Raberba girlMore Like This
Part 5 (rough draft)
When I wake up, it's dark. Evil Saïx is back, he's pulled the boards off one of the windows and is now just kind of standing there...glowing. And his hair's floating. Not blowing in a breeze, floating. It's really, really, really creep--
"MOON! SHINE DOWN!
"FLAMING--!" Then I curl up and cover my head out of instinct, because suddenly he's roaring like an animal and smashing stuff. How much like a cage is this thing? Will it protect me if he comes over here, or will that huge club of his come whipping straight through these nothing-ribbons and crush me to death? "I'm sorry," I whisper, but of course no one can hear me. If I die, I'll never see the people I love ever again. Did I mess up anywhere? If I'd figured things out sooner, done something different, could I have avoided all this?
He finally goes