The Broken 10 scriptThe Broken #10: Developing a Sense of Self Part 2: Meddling, Chapter 5: LegacyMore Like This
By Ave Messer
SPLIT: http://pridehigh.wikia.com/wiki/Split Doesn't have her costume yet
MRS. CROCHE: red hair, amicable demeanor, slightly plump figure
MR. CROCHE: black hair, moderately muscular
(Open to PROTEAN's dorm, dark, as SPLIT steps in)
SPLIT: Vince? (Sees that the room is empty and turns to go, seeing MRS. CROCHE in the doorway)
MRS. CROCHE: (Scrutinizing the room) Dark in here, isn't it?
SPLIT: (Nods) One of the guys who lives here is a vampire.
MRS. CROCHE: Yes, Grant told me about that.
SPLIT: (Perks up a little) Grant-that's Vince's brother. You know him?
MRS. CROCHE: (Smiles) I'm his mother.
SPLIT: (Blushes) I'm sorry, Mrs. Croche. Vince doesn't have many family pictures.
MRS. CROCHE: Ah, you must be (Snaps her fingers, trailing off) Did he ever mention a name? (Back to full volume) Vince's friend.
SPLIT: Amber. (Extends her hand) It's nice to
The Broken 11 scriptThe Broken #11: Developing a Sense of Self Part 2: Meddling, Chapter 6: CostumesMore Like This
By Ave Messer
OLD MAN: not necessarily all that old looking, but something shouldindicate he's been around for quite some time. Any race for him is fine (his name is not Vecini, so he doesn't have to be Italian)
(Open to PROTEAN, looking light-hearted, going to his room. He gets to the doorway and sees SPLIT sitting on the bed, scanning one of his mythology books)
PROTEAN: Don't you want to turn on some light?
SPLIT: (Starts a little and looks up) I was thinking Lucian might come back.
PROTEAN: I don't see much of him these days. The guy does like to be left alone.
SPLIT: So, you were on a date?
PROTEAN: Yeah, Grant and my mom sprung it on me. Not much I can do in that circumstance. But she was nice. (SPLIT grabs the back of her neck, looking like
The Broken 12 scriptThe Broken #12: Developing a Sense of Self Part 3: Growing Closer, Chapter 1: MeetingsMore Like This
By Ave Messer
(Open to SPLIT and PROTEAN, in costume, in SPLIT's dorm)
PROTEAN: It seems like a fun outfit.
SPLIT: Oh sure. You realize that it only has one sandal. What's this, a platform? (Turns her left foot for emphasis) It looks oriental.
PROTEAN: You're charmingly asymmetrical.
SPLIT: Weird is a better word. (Puts weight on both feet evenly. Thinks) Odd. I don't feel any difference between them. (Speaks) Yours looks nice, though. (Gets into a Tai Chi stance)
PROTEAN: I know. (Looks down at his costume) The open feet are great. I'll always be able to feel the ground beneath my feet.
SPLIT: Or paws. (Grabs her cape) I wonder why I have this. It's not like I fly.
PROTEAN: (Shrugs) Ask Vecini. He might know. (Gr
The Broken 6Amber walked in a huff, ignoring the pain in her ankle from taking control mid-stride. "You seem upset," George stated from a window. Amber just shot him a glare and picked up speed. "He had to be told sooner or later," George continued, popping up from window to window. He kept trying to get her attention as she darted into the library.More Like This
Amber headed to the bookshelves and breathed a sigh of relief that there was nothing reflective in their midst. All that looked back at her were the spines of books. She pulled one down and opened it, attempting to read it there. Another person pushed past and Amber realized she had to sit down or be in people's way. She headed to an end of the library far away from the windows and sat, cracking open the book.
"You can't ignore me forever," George spoke from the musty reflection in the metal table leg.
"Shut up," Amber whispered. A few people looked over at her before returning to their respective books.
"Told ya." George seemed quite proud of himself.
The Broken 6 scriptThe Broken #6: Developing a Sense of Self Part 2: Meddling, Chapter 1: AftermathMore Like This
By Ave Messer
SPLIT: http://pridehigh.wikia.com/wiki/Split Doesn't have her costume yet.
PROTEAN: http://pridehigh.wikia.com/wiki/Protean Doesn't have his costume yet.
(Open to SPLIT walking down the hall in a huff.)
GEORGE: (From SPLIT's reflection in the window) You seem upset. (SPLIT shoots him a glare. George pops up in each window she passes) He had to be told sooner or later. (SPLIT darts into the library and heads to the bookshelves, breathing a sigh of relief. She pulls one down and opens it. Another person pushes past and she then heads to an end of the library far away from windows and sits at a table, opening the book again. George speaks from the musty reflection in the table leg) You can't ignore me forever.
SPLIT: (Whispering) Shut up. (A few people look over at her before returning to their respective books)
The Broken 5 scriptThe Broken #5: Operation: RetentionMore Like This
By: Ave Messer, candyman1989, Mr. Banana, BlackHawk, Safeguard, Silverpain
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(Open to SPLIT in her room at school on the phone with JACK SEES, who is in the kitchen of her home. Feel free to cut between the two for the conversation)
JACK SEES: What were you thinking?
SPLIT: (Tilting the phone from her ear because JACK SEES is yelling) Huh? What're you talking about, Dad?
JACK SEES: Oh, don't play dumb with me. It was in the paper, Adrian. (Drops a newspaper on the table, showing the headline "Poseidon Prep Tranny Soul Stealer") They came over to do an interview. Do you have any idea what you've put us through?
SPLIT: The paper?
JACK SEES: You're leaving that school. Your mom and I are coming to unenroll you today. Pack your things.
(Cut to outside PROTEAN's dorm door. SPLIT skids up to it and knocks hurriedly. PROTEAN opens the doo
The Broken 1"Adrian? Adrian?"More Like This
Adrian opened his eyes just a crack, recoiling at the effect. When did light get so--bright? He opened his mouth and let the words find their way out. "Mom?"
"Oh my baby, it's so good to hear your voice."
Adrian risked his own vision and opened his eyes fully. As his eyes focused, he saw his mother and father standing over him. It didn't take much for him to figure out that he was in a hospital. He also realized that he hurt. All over, but especially in the legs.
"Wh-what happened?" he asked. The memory was crystal clear in his mind, but he hoped he had dreamt it.
"Never mind. You're safe now," his mom replied, but Adrian was thinking back to what had happened.
It was a normal drive. They were going through a light when there was an impact and Adrien had felt the car shudder. He could still feel it, too, down to the bone. Somebody had hit the side of the car. Maybe they didn't see that the light was red, or didn't care. But wait, that side was where--
Free! Iwatobi Swim Club cosplay shoot outtakes!When my friends and I first heard of "that swimming anime" called Free!, this is pretty much what we expected:More Like This
Not that there's anything wrong with that hahah, but all we were expecting was to be able to laugh at how exploitable and full of fanservice this show could be because swimming would require everyone to be half-naked. Although it started out that way, the more episodes we watched, the more we realized...
We were wrong. So wrong.
What we got was a heartwarming coming-of-age story with endearing characters and interesting dynamics. It spoke of friendship and learning your self-worth and figuring out what drives you forward.
I'd write more about how I feel about it but it would take up too much time and space over here, so here are a couple of posts that have already done the job well:
1. A detailed literary analysis and trope driven deconstruction of H
StormMore Like This
"Why are we in Kinugawa again?" The redhead beside me asked Hiro. The brunette hadn't really told us anything, but he had called Kou to tell him that I was needed. I didn't understand why in the fact, and the tall man had said something, but I hadn't paid that much attention.
"I don't know why you are here, but the guy you took down last week said that he wanted to talk to the guy that went as Yoshiko, and I guessed it was Yori. You would never choose that name on anything."
A week. That was how long it had been since we needed to head up here in order to find a source of drugs. We had been receiving mysterious calls, but the only thing we had managed to find out of place was different drug deals, but we only had managed to get one the first day. We broke it apart and managed to capture one of the dealers and we managed to get some drugs off them.
As well as a clue that helped solve the mystery of how the Dragon Speed was spreading so fast.
"Yori? You listening?" I glanced at Kai. Thin