Writing in first personSo, I've never actually written a story using first person, and I'm curious to try it. So I want to write one to try it out.
I've been thinking about writing from the point of view of Ascaris (I'm torn between the name Ascaris and Dracun, still deciding) who is Scollex's brother (they're both named after something relating to parasitic worms). He hasn't appeared yet before, but I want to add more antagonists to my story universe thingy. So far I have Glen, which is an enemy mainly to Kage (however he's also hostile towards the others due to them being killers and stuff), and Scollex, who is also an enemy to Kage (but he might get along with Zehnder or something). Ascaris might be a little different when it comes to motives though. Won't spoil anything.
Anyway, this should be an interesting thing for me, might write it today, but chances are slim 'cause I don't think I'll have time to.
I want to know which name you guys think is better, Ascaris or Dracun.
The Tape That Is Ours. “Kay, HB Kay! Thanks f**king God I found you... I've been lookin' for you through this stupid city the whole day, for f**k's sakes...” Jeff panted, running his way as he caught up to HB Kay, who was leaning arm-crossed against the wall that leaded into a dark alley, watching how her colleague scanned around the dull area with a flashlight to look for any evidence left from the murder that took place the previous day.The Tape That Is Ours. in Short Stories More Like This
He rested bending down with his hands on his knees, panting heavily from the way he had been running doing since he was let known the bad news. She glanced down at him over her shoulder, a somewhat careless expression on her dreadful face. He straightened himself with one last deep breath and fixed his hair slightly with his hand. She turned her body to face him, raising an eyebrow with a small bit of interest in the information he was about to offer, leaning her head forward very lightly.
“Jack told me today in the morning something bad