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Little Problem..Little Problem..2 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
It was a warm sunny day in San Jose as a small group of friend had come to be a part of the FanimeCon convention as they were excited and ready to have fun as they were all dressed up in their cosplay. David was fixing his blue wig as he was Kaito for the day as he looked at Erica who was dressed as Toeto Luka with Tony dressed as Fon from Reborn. "Where's Juan?" David asked as he remembered him coming out with them from the room as Maria and Eunice walked up behind David dressed as Rin and Len. "Juan said he's going to be by himself for now.." Erica said sad a bit, until she grabbed Tony's arm. "But it's okay, Tony is going to walk around w
The Battle rages on....... The Battle Rages On.....The Battle rages on.......5 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
The hot humid land, brown and soiled
Where all that an enemy's traps have been foiled
For when it was upon this land for those have said:
turning from a dusty brown to a crimson red
The battle scene was all but lost
for it seems to always have a terrible cost
For many that others will always say we won
Little do we know that the battle rages on
We have seen many die at a Battle scene
no matter where or when it has been seen
It happened in space, middle Earth, and the states
Showing more battles in street or political debates.
Thus the Battle rages on....
Age of Innocence InfluenceIf I place you on a pedestal, so fragile and so rareAge of Innocence Influence10 years ago in Songs & Lyrics More Like This
The world shall see you as how you are, delicate and fair.
As if suspending you upon a cord, a glass orb you shall be
Not touched by blackened hands and not so much by me.
Little that I knew that I was dancing with a flame
Sparkling and fiery, a soul that can't be tame.
I took you for a butterfly, a snowflake in the bitter sky
But in the end my hopes were dashed and I saw pieces of them fly.
You've trapped me in your white silk, your words and little web
We go around in circles and my feet drag on like lead.
I want to see you in the air, to see all I can see
But in the end your e
Sobre las relaciones de parejaSobre las relaciones de pareja4 years ago in Articles & Interviews More Like This
Sobre las relaciones de pareja
Vamos a hablar un poco sobre las relaciones amorosas!. Tanto de relaciones funcionales como disfuncionales y esto que sigue es válido tanto para parejas heterosexuales como homosexuales.
Últimamente he estado pensando bastante acerca de este tema, por comentarios que me han llegado, por cosas que he escuchado de amigos, historias, vivencias personales y demás. Empezaré hablando un poco acerca de lo que suelo escuchar más a menudo: la queja.
El descontento y la desilusión, las peleas y los conflictos, suelen ser algo cada día más y más común en cuanto a las rel
NaruOCs and Marysue part 3Ok, my third essay on Sues. This one is mainly on clichés on rivals and backgrounds stories that a lot of OCs have. Before I get started lets get a definition on cliché:NaruOCs and Marysue part 33 years ago in Academic Essays More Like This
something that has become overly familiar or commonplace.
Clichés are a safe for all writers, but it is boring and the reader and or watcher will feel Déjà Vu.
Now, so I will point out the issues and I am sure this will be helpful for everyone who writes and designs characters.
I will also discuss the problem of OCs that push your " OTP"
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1. Rivals and friend
NaruOCs and marysues Part 2OC x Canon characters relationships are a major issue for an OC creator in Naruto.NaruOCs and marysues Part 24 years ago in Academic Essays More Like This
I will try to do my best to point out the mistakes and how to fix them.
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1. Canon family relationships.
First rule is, make it have sense. Especially, if you want a sibling for Naruto or Gaara.
You cannot have a younger sister or brother for either one, unless Gaara's dad gets together with another woman, but still you need to go into detail of what happen for this relationship. As for Naruto, clearly he could not have a younger sibling, seeing how both parents dies
D. Gray Pokeuman Chapter 1D. Gray Pokeuman Chapter 111 months ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
Hey there my name is Allen and I'm an excorcist. I'm also a zoroark with a weapon that helps me deal with a great evil. What is this great evil you ask? Their called akumas deadly weapons made from dark matter and peoples souls they kill people and wear the bodies of their victims. Before I go explaining more about akumas maybe I should explain how I ended up as an akuma hunting zoroark.
It was in Los Angeles. Really a pretty good city at least to the mortal eye. That's one thing about me is that my right eye is cursed. I can see akumas when they try to hide in mortal bodies. Anyway life is tricky when several of your teachers in high school
ClimbingClimbing harderClimbing4 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
Doesn't get me farther
What about you,
I see you way down there
Aren't you coming up?
I'm way up high
I can't see the ground
But what about you,
Why don't you want
To be here with me?
Climbing is just the journey
But once you're up here
It's a whole new view
What about you, huh?
I'll keep trying
Till you come up.
LeashI'm waiting to hideLeash4 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
Once I here your car outside
& my heart on an ultimate high
I'll vanish in the nights
With not a word of goodbye
But I choose to wait for you to catch
My footsteps on the leave
A glimpse of my rear behind
Out the door for life
& you can no longer claim
What you do not obtain
Look at yourself with shame
An overwhelming stench of disgrace
Thorns between me caught
For me you actually fought
An imaginary leash on my neck
& you pull as I draw for breath
Back in my cage I am torn
Blood my only sense of warmth
And it spills without a trace
On you, my blood is at waste
A smirk i caught from front
As you switc
SOLA AND AIMEE FICTION 1- Bi.SOLA AND AIMEE FICTION #1- Bi.SOLA AND AIMEE FICTION 1- Bi.5 years ago in Fantasy More Like This
By turtur6. Sola and Aimee are MY characters. No stealing.
Sola, I have to tell you something.
Hmm, what’s that?
There’s something… I can control it, but it’s becoming more and more powerful as I get older… and I’m afraid you might find out eventually, so I’m going to tell you straight out. I- I’m- I’m bispecies.
What? What is that supposed to mean? Doesn’t exist. Quit the teasing.
I know it sounds far-fetched, but it’s true! My mom is human, but my dad…
Yeah? What species is he? You’re just trying… you’re just… come on, Aimee
Do You Hear Me?Do you hear me?Do You Hear Me?2 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
Screaming at you, begging you.
Do you hear me?
Pleading with you, soothing you.
Can you hear me?
Asking for release, anything to escape.
Can you hear me?
Can't deal with it anymore, I can't!
Are you listening?
It's only the two of us now, everyone else left.
Are you listening?
Don't you see, I'm not lying. I know, the truth hurts.
Listen to me.
There's no turning back now.
Listen to me.
Beautiful crimson stains the asphalt, adding colour to the monochrome city
What's that you say?
You feel betrayed? Well, it's too late now.
What's that you say?
You never wanted this? That's a lie.
Hm?
How do I know?
Simpl
When is mommy coming home?"Daddy, Daddy look how high my kite goes!" The little pink haired girl yelled.When is mommy coming home?2 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
Her dad laughed and praised her, making the little girl smile.
"You made a very pretty kite Luka." He smiled proud at his daughter.
"Thank you daddy!!" She yelled out happily.
"Can I show it to mommy?" She asked.
Her father looked on his watch. "We can go quickly. Visiting time aint over yet." He held his hand out to the little girl. With a smile she took her dads hand.
"When is mommy gonna come home?" She asked.
"When mommy is better~ That will be soon." He explained.
The little girl nodded and walked to her mothers room in the hospital.
With a smile she
VOCALOID Chapter 3Rin ran into her room and slammed her door behind her. She flung herself onto her bed and cried even harder. There was a knock at the door.VOCALOID Chapter 32 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
"R-Rin? I-I heard you crying."
"…"
"Are you okay?"
"No DUH I'M NOT OKAY HAKU! LEN BROKE UP WITH ME!" Rin cried. How could she ask such a STUPID question? Well- she was Haku. 'That dense-headed idiot!' Rin thought. Of course she didn't mean it, though. Miku sprang through her door, looking as happy as ever with a huge smile on her face and a bounce in her step. She lost every sign of happiness when she saw Rin's tear streaked face.
"Rin, what happened to you?" Miku asked, glancing at the po
VOCALOID Chapter 2VOCALOID!VOCALOID Chapter 22 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
Chappie 2!
~ This Chapter is dedicated to ~willSINGforSAKE because she gave me the brilliant idea to add Haku. :D You are awesome, my friend!
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Haku opened her eyes to find herself on the couch. She moaned; she had a huge headache. Neru walked downstairs, texting on her new Samsung Epic (that Rin had helped her buy) to Meiko, asking her if she needed a ride to the house. Suddenly, she saw Haku.
"AH! Haku, are you okay?" Neru asked, worried. "What happened to you?"
"Uhhh… well, I had some of that vanilla/leek ice cream that Kaito and Miku tried and failed to make…" Haku groaned. She sat up feeling nauseas
VOCALOIDVOCALOID!VOCALOID2 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
Miku smiled to herself as she arrived from the store with about fifteen leeks.
"Alright, my little cuties!" Miku cheered. "Prepare to be eaten!" She smirked evilly and walked inside to find Len asleep on her couch.
"Len!" Miku shouted. "Len… LEN!" He was still asleep. Miku took a deep breath, and screamed the same scream she used in Kocchi Muite Baby. "AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! WAKE UP YOU LITTLE SHOTA!" She yelped as she smacked him with a leek. Len sat up with watery eyes.
"I'm awake! And OW!" Len shouted in pain. "Miku, that really hurt." Tears streamed down his cheeks. Miku gasped, dropped down on her knees, and gent
With a Spark to the HeartBefore I knew it,With a Spark to the Heart2 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
My heart had been shattered by the wicked hands of fate,
And my future seemed to at once, grow dim.
I was from then on ready to live alone,
But it seemed like when you had come along,
You had changed everything.
I had turned my back on a future I thought,
"I could never have that,"
When your little spark brought the hope back.
I turned my back and looked at what I had,
My friends who were so kind and loyal,
I thought that they would just be fine.
But you came along and took this lonesome hand,
And made me able to smile again,
So now I think I won't be alone.
It's not that I'm scared to be alone,
It may be bec
This happens when you sleep... ....This happens when you sleep...2 years ago in Comedy More Like This
((she needs to come onto chat one day XD that wouold be fun))
*would
*rolls eyes* you don't believe me do you?
((DX LIVE SOULMATE LIVE! *does mouth to mouth to luka*))
** Suki-Kirai-Rin has joined
HAGANNNNEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
LUUUKKKKKKKKKKKKAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA~
((RIRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN))
((luka died on us XD))
((Well poop in the sink and call me Charl
One Hell of a DiseaseIt starts in the mind,One Hell of a Disease2 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
Spreading like wildfire to the heart,
Causing it to rot.
It rots not to black though,
But it becomes red and hot with fever,
And bursts with passion.
Yes, love is a lovely disease,
Infecting the mind with weird thoughts,
And twisting and rotting the heart.
It first starts in the brain,
Festering and infecting the system,
When it finally gets to the heart.
It fills you with thoughts of the one,
Whom infected you with love.
It spreads with a bat of the eye,
A simple body gesture,
Or a kind word.
It glides effortlessly through the air,
And lands right in your fertile mind,
Running rampant.
Oh so many ha
Dark RoomsDear God knows what appears when you sleep,Dark Rooms2 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
When you tuck yourself into your supposedly safe bed,
And pull the covers over your head.
Something might be lurking in the shadows,
Of the door, or the drawer, or the window,
Waiting for your eyes to close.
Thats when it will strike,
Fast like lightning,
Yet you feel no pain as it enters.
And it enters smoothly as it came,
Into your brain to deliver,
Evil scenes beyond imaginable.
You might see pain and experience it,
But it won't be real when you awake again,
Since its all what they call "dreams."
No prayers can keep them away,
Not the toughest steel or wood can keep them at bay.
Regalo para YantPerfecta paraRegalo para Yant5 years ago in Haiku & Eastern More Like This
Proyectar belleza y amor
En personajes.
Perfect to project beauty and love in characters.
Gift for XBlackPearlVoicexSweetening, crossingGift for XBlackPearlVoicex5 years ago in Haiku & Eastern More Like This
And mixing styles makes your art
Beautiful as you.
Endulzando, cruzando y mezclando estilos hace tu arte bello como tú.
Gift for LuizamoonyPlenty of famousGift for Luizamoony5 years ago in Haiku & Eastern More Like This
Girls would love to model
For your cool artwork.
Muchas chicas famosas adorarían modelar para tu genial trabajo artístico.
Sta.sh
