It's a Dragon's World Pt. 13 It's a Dragon's World
Pt. 13 The Fifth Dragon
From inside my cell, I could hear Ben's screams. Those weren't normal screams from what I could tell.
I could also hear the voices of two other people. I assumed it was his parents.
"Behind us is Titus, as well as some baby dragons." They explained.
I could hear footsteps: It was Sarah! I tried to run towards her but chocked a little. I remembered I was still chained by my ne
me in Equestria? part 3It was the one person that I feared, the person who even after three years I still feared and respected, the one person who could make me drop to my knees in awe. My Father. He was in a ball of magic, his body bloody and mangled. I ran past the princess to him and started to try to figure out how he had gotten in this state. When I didn't feel a pulse I collapsed in a bawling fit. The man who had kept me sane while I was in my world. He kept my mind from reverting to what it was now. I realized that I had become, I had become a sick shadow of a man that enjoyed torturing the animals that I ate. I had become what I was afraid of. And now that my father was in front me dying all I wanted was to save him, I had reverted to myself. I turned to the ponies and begged, "Please save him, I don't care what you do with me just save my father!" the yellow one was the first to walk over and look at him. She examined him for a few seconds and then quickly said, "His body is basically broken in everme in Equestria? part 34 years ago in Personal More Like This
me in Equestria? part 2I sat through the explanation of the history of this world without interrupting once and at the end of it Twilight asked me if I had any questions. I did, I slowly backed up next to the window and said, "I have one, the pony people in this world are vegetarians? They only eat plants?" they nodded as I sighed and said, "I was afraid of that. You see my people are omnivores. If you don't know what that means I'll tell you. It means that I eat both plants and meat. I eat animals. My people slaughter them, sometimes just for the fun of taking the life of an innocent animal. This is the reason I can't live here. So I am going to be living in the everfree forest. It seems the most similar to my world and the animals have no connection to the rest of this world so I can eat them with a clean conscious." I jumped through the window as the yellow one desperately screamed, "NO, PLEASE LEAVE THE ANIMALS ALONE!!!" that was three years ago. I had grown two feet and had found a blacksmith in canterlme in Equestria? part 24 years ago in Personal More Like This
me in Equestria? part 6i jumped off the balcony and started sprinting towards my next target: Applejack, scaring several ponies in town. when i arrived i was tackled by three young fillies screaming, "CUTIE MARK CRUSADERS, MONSTER HUNTERS!!!" i played with them a bit, making obstcles and letting them get hits in until a large colt came by and lifted them off of me. they were still giggling while i explained the situation to the red colt who i had learned was big macintosh. the fillies were trying to jump on me all the way to the farm, the one named scootaloo was the last to give up. she was very inventive in ways to trip me. it was amusing to see her face when i easily doged everything she threw at me. she finally gave in when i multiplied until there were twenty of me doing the moonwalk. i laughed as they joined in yelling, "CUTIE MARK CRUSADERS, DANCE MASTERS!!!" i snapped my fingers and Vinyl scratch appeared,and we proceded to untill Applejack got back from selling apples and brought rainbow dash with heme in Equestria? part 64 years ago in Personal More Like This
me in Equestria? part 8A week had passed and most of my bloodlust had been slated. Walking through the path that led back to ponyville I couldn't help but think of how everypony had fared with me gone, and of how the princesses would try to punish me. Lost in my thoughts I didn't notice as a yellow blur tackled me. I grunted as the sword in my heart was pushed deeper. As I stood up the Pegasus noticed all the weapons shoved into my body. Needless to say she jumped back in horror. I laughed as I pulled the weapons out and said, "Relax Fluttershy, I'm immortal remember? Anyway I'm going to see somepony if you want to come with your more than welcome. She nodded and we walked at a moderate pace until we got to our destination, the home of Doctor Whooves. He had helped me tame my wild side more than a few times over the years and I was hoping that he could do it again. I knocked on the door five times before Derpy finally opened the door. She looked very tired but still mustered a smile when she saw me, "Oh heyme in Equestria? part 84 years ago in Personal More Like This
Daily Deviation Suggestion GuidelinesHow do I make a suggestion?Daily Deviation Suggestion Guidelines5 years ago in Personal More Like This
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don't worryseasons, there are many of them, some of them shorter than others, perhaps for special reasons, to be followed by other long seasons.don't worry3 years ago in Personal More Like This
me in Equestria? part 11"Please Pinkie don't do this, I don't want anypony to see me like this!" she stopped singing just long enough to look at the hole in my skull and gasp, "OMIGOSH! WHAT HAPPENED TO YOU?" "If you can give me five minutes I can repair this and make some things right." She looked at me worriedly for a minute then asked, "do you pinkie promise?" I laughed and said "Cross my heart, hope to fly Stick a cupcake in my eye If to Pinkie, I might lie I shall kiss my ass goodbye." She looked kind of surprised and disgusted at that last part but accepted it and let me go. I flashed into my cave and drank the potion letting its power quickly take effect. I laughed to myself as the consequences started showing up. For the next ten minutes I would be puking blood, come to think of it I don't know what color my blood is anymore. I supposed I would figure out and flashed back to pinkie. I smiled as I held in my vomit and strolled over to her, everypony was giving me a wide berth. I sighed as I conjured myme in Equestria? part 114 years ago in Personal More Like This
Mahou Galaxy!I've just been informed that some of you that watch me may not be getting notifications that I've been posting updates for Mahou Galaxy. If you like TG/TF stuff or even just Sci-fi/Fantasy, I think you'll like this story! I'm hoping to get some comments and constructive criticism, and I put up a chapter every couple of days, so please give it a read! Chapter one is right here:Mahou Galaxy!9 months ago in Personal More Like This
Look out, they've got a sexy anime avatar!On twitter today I made the mistake of poking my nose into a really, really stupid conversation. To tell the truth, sometimes I can't help myself. I see something that strikes me as particularly dumb and I need to interject. This time, someone was railing on about how all gamergaters have anime avatars. I responded by pointing out that an inordinate number of SJWs are either goony beardmen or hair-dyed overweight women. I never actually disparaged either of those things, I merely stated that there were some standard warning signs that you might be dealing with that sort of person. In response, I was called a hypocrite for having an anime avatar(though it's not, it's one of aku's images, the same one I use as my DA avatar) as I called dying hair a way to get attention and I was further chastised with the gem of an argument that I must me ashamed of my appearance because I use a character avatar. 140 characters is woefully inadequate to respond tLook out, they've got a sexy anime avatar!2 months ago in Personal More Like This
me in Equestria? part 9The politicians were more or less the same as in my world, constantly arguing and ignorant about what would actually work. They were at each-others' throats about what to do about me, I was obviously an oddity with great power. They argued for hours about how my presence would affect the balance of power in Equestria. It was all annoying but my breaking point was when they were discussing how to get rid of me if need be. "HOLD IT RIGHT THERE! IF YOU THINK THAT YOU CONTROL ME THAN YOU ARE SADLY MISTAKEN!!! IF IT WEREN'T FOR CELESTIA YOU WOULD ALL BE ASH RIGHT NOW!!!! I AM A GOD, I REPRESENT ALL THAT IS EVIL AND YET YOU ARE STILL ALIVE, I HAVE ENOUGH POWER TO COMPLETELY DESTROY DISCORD, LUNA, CELESTIA, AND THE ELEMENTS OF HARMONY WITH A SINGLE THOUGHT!!!! YOU HAVE THE GALL TO THINK THAT YOU CAN CONTROL ME?!?!?" Chains rose up out of the ground and wrapped every-pony up in a neat row. They were screaming and panicking until I removed their mouths. "Look here, I am not seeking trouble. howme in Equestria? part 94 years ago in Personal More Like This
Otto and Victoria, Octovictorian EtiquetteWatch depthRADIUSOtto and Victoria, Octovictorian Etiquette2 years ago in Art Features More Like This
There is no cosmic law that states artists must suffer many long years and demeaning day-jobs before a window of opportunity cracks open just enough to hop on through.
Fellow deviant Brian Kesinger is a case in point.
His first “day-job” in 1996—he was hired straight out of his senior year of high school—was drawing Tarzan for Disney.
Brian stayed at Disney and he considers every day there a part of his ongoing education as an artist. He most recent
update number twosince were already halfway toward the goal, I'm now giving you guys the official info on the competition.update number two4 years ago in Personal More Like This
The contest is going to be called, "music art" that because you will be using specially chosen music to create your stories/art.
In round one, there will be about 10 songs to choose from
In round two, you'll be able to choose any video game music you want to use
in round three, the music is all up to you you get to choose whatever you want
The one catch by the music is, if you chose a certain song from certain band or game in one round you will not be allowed to use any music that game or band in the other rounds if you make it through
Also be needing three people to volunteer as judges instead of competing
confirmed judges: :iconkiller990: :iconBlackbluedawg:
the top eight of the first round go to round number two, the top four of that round go on to the final round
in the end though only one will be left standing and will be rewarded with cheesy tabloid fame and a small fortune w
FansI just wanted to use this journal as thanks for everyone out there who checks out my stuff, comments, favs, whatever you do.Fans1 year ago in Personal More Like This
Thank you ^^.
You all are responsible for my motivation to get more created, to power up zappy, to never forget the stories you love. I remember back a good while when I was just using Livejournal for my stories and it was flagging back then by a lot and it’s pretty well deceased now. I got some feedback but being here brought a rejuvenation of my creative spirit. I can poke around and see so many arts which inspire me and which I want to save. I mean…I’ve really become a hoarder or them by now with how many things I’ve favorited but really, there’s nuggets of inspiration all in there.
Thank you readers, zappy-targets, friends, everyone. Without you all, Complaints wouldn’t have even gotten done. It was stuck at two parts for well over a year and was basically abandoned till people here took an interest in it and revived it and
Crazy Chocobo lyricsGAS 'EM UP WITH THE GREENS AND LET 'EM GOCrazy Chocobo lyrics4 years ago in Personal More Like This
STAND BACK, STAND CLEAR AS HE PUTS ON THE SHOW
SO CUTE YET FIERCE IS HE FROM HELL?
I CANNOT TELL YET I DON'T EVEN WANNA KNOW
SO YOU WANNA BE A TRAILBLAZER
KICK UP DIRT LIKE A HELLRAISER
TAKE THE REINS BUT DON'T REACT SLOW
IT'S TIME TO FEEL THE FORCE - OF THE CHOCOBO!
SO YOU THINK YOU CAN RIDE THIS CHOCOBO?
GOT CHOCOBUCKS? YOU BETTER PUT 'EM ON THE CHOCOBO
SADDLE UP IF YOU THINK YOU CAN RIDE IN THIS RODEO
ARE WE IN HELL? I DUNNO! KICK THE DIRT LET'S ROLL
COME IF YOU THINK YOU GONNA HIDE THIS CHOCOBO
EVERYBODY'S GONNA WANT TO RIDE YOUR CHOCOBO
IT'S CHOCO-LOCO STYLE IN THE CHOCORODEO
GONNA RIIIDE'M STRAIGHT THROUGH HELL IN THE CHOCOBO RODEO!!
Just so I know it's somewhere I can read in awe.
me in Equestria? part 10I smiled as they tried to talk me out of it. Frankly I was surprised that a creature like me could even make friends let alone friends who actually cared if I lived or died. "Girls, listen I've done the math and I doubt ill live very long after the war anyway. My power will die out without some gruesome ingredients and I refuse to ask for them. I'm too weak to even win them in the arena." They just gaped at me, trying to process this information. "Before I die I am going to repay my debt and help out as much as I can. If you want to know anything about what I plan on doing or my past I'm an open book. Oh and spike don't let me forget, I owe you a favor for turning you into soap." Everypony looked at the doorway where spike was hiding, he was smiling. "It's about time you left. You've been nothing but trouble since you got here. I say good riddance." With that he was gone and Twilight chased after him." I chuckled at his hatred of me, if he truly hated me then that was good. It would mame in Equestria? part 104 years ago in Personal More Like This
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X-tremespeeds rant - Ash is Red-erSo I was pondering about the Ash entry for my Top 5 Underrated Avatar-type Characters List, and then something hit me about how fans of Pokémon often place Red over Ash in many aspects. To quote that same list I made, "...it's not like I don't admit he [Ash] has flaws, he's packed with them: He's gary-stu-like, too naive and even sometimes too stupid for his own good. But are we just going to ignore all the GOOD moments he ever had?". Going back a bit to that, I decided to think my own point thorough, and I decided to, above all, analyze the two by merits and personality.X-tremespeeds rant - Ash is Red-er1 year ago in Personal More Like This
First and foremost, I want to state something: I don't care about the different continuities and their Lutece-applying differences and similarities. Merit is merit, and as far as it reaches, it can be measured.
Starting with Red, what is Red like? Silent, possibly because of him being the previous player character. Inside joke? I dunno. What I do know, and mind you I'm no analyst, is how he b
I am now taking TF request!Right now, I only do dragon TFsI am now taking TF request!4 years ago in Personal More Like This
Here are the requirements
You MUST tell me how your character eats a firetear (read The Icefire tear)
Where the setting is
What kind of dragon you want your character to turn into
How the story ends
and any other extra detail either message me or leave a comment
Finished Dragon TF's
:iconGryphonmon7: | The Blue Firetear http://maverickhunter2.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d45w7oq
:iconMaverickhunter2: | The Icefire tear http://maverickhunter2.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d45udy7
:iconWerechu: | The Dark Firetear http://maverickhunter2.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d45yz08
:iconx007: | The Yellow Firetear CTF story (Choose their fate!) http://maverickhunter2.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d460rgp
:iconGryphonmon7: | The Green Firetear, 2nd request http://maverickhunter2.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d4688sz
:iconDsarvess: | The Crimson Firetear http://maverickhunter2.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d46bzje
:iconcorbynprower: | The Flaming Firetear http://maverickhunter2.deviantart.com/g
The contest is onthat's right,The contest is on4 years ago in Personal More Like This
Ladies and Gentlemen, the Pokemon A to Z Challenge contest begins today, so all requests are on hold.
the rules are simple, over the next few weeks, i'll be posting Pokemon TFs, but they won't be complete. they'll only have the Trigger and Encounter (as applicable). your challenge is to pick the one you like and use them to make complete Transformation stories. they will be judged by me (ask me if you're interested in being a judge). Best 3 stories win.
1. Each contestants can claim up to three stories max
2. stories MUST include the parts provided (talk to me if you have any questions)
3. the stories are first come first serve, once someone claims a story, no one else can claim it, unless the story is put back on the open list (claimer's choice
4. Special rules will be included with the first TF
5. please try to follow my rules http://gryphonmon7.deviantart.com/journal/42977842/ breaking them may result in disqualification.
3rd prize: a Pokemon Sprite Picture with
freshmen dorm lifeyou start your first day at vore high. You go to the reception hall and to get your room number and class schedule (vore 101, and trust vore are required all other classes you chose) you go to your room to meet your roommate (npc or another member).freshmen dorm life2 years ago in Personal More Like This
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me in Equestria? part 0I wake up christmas morning on the couch for another uneventful day. I get up and walk over to the fireplace, its gone out again. I sigh as I start feeling the 10 below temperature inside my house. I start a new fire as my older sister Kelley walks up the stairs beaming at the prospect of christmas day. I feel sad for her. Even though she is older than me her soul hasnt been crushed and her dreams havent been shattered. She can find happiness in even the smallest of things while I wallow in my own misery by the time I finally get the fire going my mom walks out of her room and tells me to make her coffee. As I walk up the fairly decorated stairs to the kitchen I look at my home. it has a feeling of happiness, not too strong but definitely not weak. It makes me sick to my stomach. I make her coffee and grab the one present I got for christmas out from under our weak little fake tree. I know that it is a watch because I looked at it a couple days ago. I set it to the right time and calleme in Equestria? part 04 years ago in Personal More Like This
me in Equestria? part 5i spent a week doing boring chores before Twilight trusted me enough to leave me alone to sleep. i even got to sleep alone in the basement until one night. Twilight came down to check on me for some reason and saw that i wasnt there. she started teleporting all around until she found me on the balcony. as she approached me her anger was doused when she saw my tears. i sighed and turned to her. several minutes passed untill i finally spoke, "I apologize for not being in the basement but i needed a drink. want one?" i snapped my fingers and offered her a beer. she cocked her head and asked, "Is that, a beer?" I chuckled and said, "Eeyup, my own brew. or would you prefer wine?" she looked at me shocked and took a beer, after an hour of drinking she had gotten me talking about my past. i told her how bored i was with my home and my family. that this world was the best thing that had ever happened to me. it was a good conversation untill the dragon came out and saw twilight passed out on myme in Equestria? part 54 years ago in Personal More Like This
me in Equestria? part 4After a couple days of grieving over my family I was summoned to discuss my punishment with the princesses. I was escorted to a room that had a warm tapestry, it felt wrong for what was about to happen. I walked over to the stone chair that had been set out for me in front of the two alicorns but did not sit down. We looked at each other for several minutes before Celestia said, "Well then, what do you think your punishment should be? Because it's obvious that we can't let you off scot free." I gave her a smile that told her that I was nuts and said, "I have been in this world for three years now, forcibly ripped from my own. This has twisted my spirit and mind past recognition, as such I cannot return to my world even as it is. I would be deemed a threat to my own kind. Over these years I've done extensive research and through the dragons I learned that the elements of harmony are the greatest power here, over even the two of you and discord combined, and through even more research Ime in Equestria? part 44 years ago in Personal More Like This
Tagged Once Again!Tagged by :iconWritingAngel2010:Tagged Once Again!6 months ago in Personal More Like This
-Tag at least 10 people
-State 10 facts about yourself.
-Answer the questions asked by the people who tagged you.
-Make 10 questions for the people you tag.
10 Facts About Me
1.) I work for an automotive company called Pope Davis.
2.) I am an official published writer
3.) I once thought I was part of a secret government experiment.
4.) I love to riff movies.
5.) I listen to music when I am struggling with what to write. (My favorite inspirational music comes from Josh Groban)
6.) I wrestled a bear (no really...true story!)
7.) The first time I ever held a shotgun, I shot 25 out of 30 clay pigeons.
8.) My favorite food is steak...with a baked potato....and salad....and a nice glass of wine or tea..........oh sorry.......zoned out there for a moment.
9.) My childhood hero was Batman
10.) I once dreamed that I was a Saiyan fighting the Teen Titans....no seriously! It was nuts!