thingswhen things go bad. its not fun. you feel out in the cold. like theres no-one to help you, rather like you're falling and cannot do anything, even worse, theres no-one to help you. no rope, no net to catch you. just helpless falling. its worse though, when you can see someone else falling away, away fron you, and you cannot help them. you cant put out a net. its either not possible or you just have to leave them too it. thats the worst. i hate leaving people to fall to their death. and all you can do is watch. just watch them fall, away, away.
LullabyHush, my baby,Lullaby1 year ago in Free Verse More Like This
Be still, don't cry.
Lay with me
A little while.
Close your eyes,
Slow your breath.
Hear your heart
Inside your chest?
Your heart is strong,
It guides you well.
Be sure to listen
To what it tells.
I hear him now,
Outside the room.
It won't be long,
He'll find us soon.
Now close your eyes,
Slow your breath,
And rest your head
Upon my chest.
DaddyIf I could just have one more moment to look you in the eyes again; to hold you in my arms and feel your heart beat just like it used to, just as true as the life you breathed inside of me. If you could just see me now, as an adult, and what I've accomplished so far in my life. If you could face me without holding back tears of pain or sorrow .Daddy3 years ago in Emotional More Like This
I would sob. I would cry until my eyes swell shut. Out of happiness that you returned to see your little girl grow up and graduate high school, and that your years of excruciating anguish were just a nightmare. I would be able to see you smile again smile at my accomplishments, my path, my future. I would gasp for air myself, just to tell you how much I missed everything about you... my hero.
But, fate is too cruel
You'll never be able to meet the wonderful man that my heart has bonded with. You'll never get the chance to see me take hold of any diploma You'll never walk me down the aisle; and keep me from falling down in
Knock Me DownKnock me downKnock Me Down2 years ago in Traditional Fixed Forms More Like This
But I will still rise
But my hope never dies
Tell me I 'can't do it'
But I will prove you wrong
Break me down into pieces
But inside I'll remain strong
A fiery passion burns within me
One that you will not take away
Forever I will stand freely
And my fears, I will slay
AbortionMama, I am living inside you.Abortion5 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
You don't want me here, do you?
You'd rather me be gone.
You are all I know.
You are not a person, but my world.
I've never known anything but you.
This world, you, it's new to me,
But it's all I have.
What am I to expect?
Will I one day be out of here?
Will you raise me in a world where you are there?
You answered it all.
You don't want me.
My own world does not want me.
You went to a doctor,
And they said they would kill me.
And they did.
BullyingBitchBullying7 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
Waste of Space
Sack of Shit
Even memories hurt
Art theft on Deviantart, an Experiment.After being a member of deviantart for a couple years, after browsing through it for honestly several years, I have come to a startling and terrifying realization; art theft is now higher than ever before and less is being done about it. My main fear was that in due time, deviantart will become nothing more than a fancy photobucket where you can't tell if the person who posted the piece is the one who made it, or not. It seemed every week now, a piece that was stolen makes it to the front page, giving users who simply googled the piece in a matter of a few seconds more attention than a user who spent several hours, if not days making a work of art they were proud of. Of course me and several other users reported these thefts, but it is very rare that the issue is resolved. I've reported several pieces but it has been months since a mod has sent me a message informing me that the issue was fixed and the piece was taken down, like it should have been.Art theft on Deviantart, an Experiment.3 years ago in Comedy More Like This
So… in response to this troublin
MLAAS - Chapter 1Chapter 1 - A (not so) Brief IntroductionMLAAS - Chapter 14 years ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
My name is Sarah Marcel. For the past few...well, I'm unsure of how long it's been actually. Let's just say for quite a while now, I've been living an extremely unusual life. Actually, I guess I haven't really been "living" very much of it. You see, for a great deal of my life, I've been a stone statue. I know it sounds unreal. After all, people turning to stone is the stuff of myth and movies, right? You couldn't be more wrong. I figured after all these years, someone out there should know what I've been through, and I've finally decided to put it all on paper. Now, I'm no writer by any means so don't go expecting Harry Potter or whatever you people read these days.
However, before we begin, I suppose I should give a bit of background of myself. I know what you're thinking: "This is boring, let's get to the unusual pa
Looks LieI’m ugly and fatLooks Lie2 years ago in Traditional Fixed Forms More Like This
But I can deal with that
‘Cause it means people like me for me;
Not for what they see.
Incy, Wincy SpiderIncy, wincy spider climbed up the water spout.Incy, Wincy Spider1 year ago in Free Verse More Like This
Down came the bleach and washed the spider out.
Out came the spider's guts, they shrivelled in the rain;
And incy, wincy spider never climbed again.
Friend Zone.Friend Zone.Friend Zone.3 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
I just can never seem to get it right.
How can she say that I am not her type?
After the constant phone calls and the facebook messages
And listening to you talk about all of your annoying relatives.
I thought that you and I could’ve been something.
I know now you think all guys are just after one thing.
Especially after the last guy and what he did to you
And I thought since I was the person you came running to.
That maybe, eventually there could be something between us
And you would believe me when I say I am not thinking of my penis.
When I say I long to hear your voice, even if it's only for a little while
And I love the way your delicate dimples develop whenever you smile.
I even love the way you chew your nails wildly whenever you’re nervous.
So when my suppressed feelings for you begin to pierce through the surface
And I confess all of the affection held captive in my chest.
You say that you love me but you can only see me as a best...
This where the mem
Writing Tips -1Writing TipsWriting Tips -14 years ago in Reviews & Guides More Like This
Okay, so writing. Something you are interested in? Well,
lets get to grips with just some of the basics of great writing. These tips
will transform your attitude from "How can I fill this page?" into "How can
I fill this page with good quality writing?"
Part One: Initial Idea
Why is it that finding an idea can be so hard?
Why does everyone else have the power to come up with amazing ideas, and what
are you left with? Nothing... Well, to you, that may be what it seems
like, but I'm sure if you dig deep enough, you don't really lack in
ideas, you just have a hard time bringing them to the surface. Here
are some ways to bring out that buried inspiration:
Base some ideas on real life events
Its probably the easiest way to write, you may have experienced what you are
writing about, this helps the mind describe the situation, it also makes it
sound much more realistic.
Use inspiration from other pieces of writing
Writing Tips 101Over the 10 years of writing, from online role-playing to full out story writing, I've come to learn a few things that I find helps me when I write my stories. They're little tips that I wish I had known when I had first begun this crazy trip. Some of them are rather obvious, yet unless someone points it out you might not realize it until late into writing. As such, I'd like to share some of those things for you now. If you find this even remotely helpful, please consider faving it.Writing Tips 1014 years ago in Reviews & Guides More Like This
1. First Drafts ALWAYS Suck
It's a simple fact. You won't be a pro from the beginning, no matter how much natural talent you may have. Just accept this. So how do you deal with this? Just write. Write the first draft of whatever you're working on. Write a lot of it, if not all of it. From when you start and when you stop, you will see a HUGE progression in your writing. You'll see just how much your writing evolved and improved over time, especially if you got feedback along the way.
With that experi
I'm Sorry (How Beautiful You Are)I'm sorry they can't seeI'm Sorry (How Beautiful You Are)3 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
who you really are.
I'm sorry they never notice
how you try so hard.
I'm sorry that you're lonely,
without a cause or friend.
I'm sorry that they call you a freak;
your confidence - they bend.
I'm sorry you're emotional
and get sad over little things.
And I'm sorry that you're childish,
waiting for what the rainbow brings.
I'm sorry that you're dark -
your soul tortured since that day.
I'm sorry that you feel depressed,
helplessly looking for a new way.
I'm sorry to break it to you:
they don't wish on shooting stars.
I'm sorry that they can not see
just how beautiful you are.
silent.'baby,' she says shakily, 'baby, mummy might have to go to heaven soon.'silent.2 years ago in Flash Fiction & Vignettes More Like This
the little girl jumps excitedly, up and down, up and down. she spins, and her skirt swirls around her chubby little legs, yellow and vibrant. she's wearing a shirt, with 'you are my sunshine!' scrawled on it messily.
'that's awesome, mummy! will you take some photos for me? will you, will you? I wanna see angels, mummy. can you show me angels, pretty please?' she wraps her tiny, tanned hands around her mother's pale, bony ones. 'please, mummy?'
there's no answer, and after a bit, she stops hopping from one foot to the other in anticipation, and looks up. her mother has a fake, forced smile plastered on her face, but her eyes are miserable, and so very far away. the girl tugs on her mum's sleeve, impatient.
'mummy? will you take some photos?' her mother snaps out of it, lines of fatigue etched on her face. she wraps her other hand protectively over her daughter's tiny ones. her daughter stares up at her, con
The shortest scary story everThe last man on earth was sitting in his living room. Then there was a knock on the door.The shortest scary story ever2 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
Martha is uglyMartha is ugly. She is the most ugly person in the universe.Martha is ugly4 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
That's what everyone says. And believes. They belive that Martha is truly horrible. With her dark, messy hair that reaches her shoulders. With her green, very green and little eyes. With her short stature, that makes her more tiny than her classmates. And she's thin, very thin too. And also, Martha has a very pale skin that lets everyone see her veins.
Martha is not timid. She is lovely. She has an outgoing personality, and for sure that she would never let anyone down. She tries to be nice, and she is. Martha can't understand why everyone laughs at her. Why does everyone ignore her, no matter how much she wants to be friends with them. They aren't hypocrites , not at all. They talk shit about her, in front of her face, making possible to her to listen it, they don't give Martha a chance to escape.
She says "It's okay". She doesn't even cry or feel disappointed. She thinks that if she keeps with her kind treatment, the people
What to change in The Lorax movieEven though the Lorax movie has a cult going on (mostly Once-Ler fangirls), but we all agree that the movie has lots of flaws in it.What to change in The Lorax movie3 years ago in Personal More Like This
They are not as bad as the ones in The Grinch or Cat in the Hat movies, but there were more flaws than what we saw in "Horton Hears a Who."
What do you guys think what should've been added and what should've been removed?
In my opinions.....
What should be removed:
*The whole "Thneedville" croc
*The point-less "Romantic" sub-plot
*The Thneedville citizens/characters
*The whole Musical act (even though I liked a few of the songs)
*Making the Once-Ler into an old man (he could've at least wait until the end of winter to plant the last Truffula seed all by himself, instead of wasting 50 years of his life waiting for someone else to plant it -_- )
What I'd like to add to the story:
*Stretch the characters (just a little bit) and the interactions of the Lorax and Once-Ler (like the Lorax's love of the forest and how Once-Ler slowly became the Greed-Le
We Can Put Her Right in the GardenIt was a normal summer afternoon, and Jenny was taking a jog through the park. The seventeen year old girl enjoyed jogging because it allowed her to go outside, get some exercise, and just be alone with her thoughts. With her jog completed, she decided to stop at a park bench to rest and have a drink of water.We Can Put Her Right in the Garden2 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
“Boy, what a workout” she thought to herself.
Suddenly Jenny was approached by a little girl. The girl looked to be about five years old, and something seemed a bit odd about her hair.
“Um, Excuse me ma’am” said the girl, sounding a bit shy “what’s your name?”
“Oh” she responded “my name is Jenny, what’s yours?”
“Gretta” said the girl.
“That’s a nice name,” Jenny said “by the way, where’s your mom?”
“She’s around.” Gretta answered “Hey, do you mind if I tr
ArielShe stood on the beach with only a shawl wrapped around her shoulders. The sun was just a sliver over the horizon, its light not quite banishing the dark. There was a sort of bluish glow that covered the beach, giving it a somber feel. The wind howled and whipped the water into a frenzy. Waves crashed onto the beach, their white crests reminding her of horses stampeding.Ariel4 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
Ariel watched the ocean, standing close enough that the water just barely kissed her bare feet. Her nose was filled with the scent of the salty water. She could practically taste it on her lips. Somewhere a seagull screeched; its call almost lost amongst the roar of the waves. A sigh escaped her lips, its sadness surprising her. It was the sigh of a woman who felt lost. The sigh of a woman who knew not where her heart completely lies. Deep inside, Ariel felt torn between the sea and the man she loved.
When she first gave up her old life she had thought that she was making the right decision. To her there had been no ot
SafeAnd I'm here to staySafe2 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
Nothing can separate us
And I know I'm ok
You cradle me gently
Wrapped in your arms
~Wrapped up in your Arms, Flireflight
July 25, 1998
Jill Valentine's Apartment
Raccoon City, USA
The door slamming echoed in the quiet room as Chris Redfield and Jill Valentine entered the apartment. They got just back from the Raccoon City Hospital, doing dozens of blood tests and checkups. Immediately after walking into the room, they crashed on the couch, exhausted.
"I can't believe any of that just happened," Jill muttered, sadness in her voice.
Chris sighed, "Neither can I."
The night before, the S.T.A.R.S. Alpha Team went looking for their comrades from Bravo Team after losing contact with them. They fled into a mansion, discovered countless monsters and zombies, and found out the truth about the Umbrella Corporation and their captain, Albert Wesker.
Wesker... That name brought anger to Chris. Becau
How to piss people off35 ways to annoy the hell out of people!How to piss people off5 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
1.) Holler random numbers when someone is counting
2.) Go trick or treating in January
3.) Wear your pants backwards
4.) Go christmas Caroling in July
5.)Pau for everything in pennies
6.) Attempt to rob a bank with a Nerf gun
7.) Tie jingle bells to all your clothes
8.)Inform others that they only exist in your imagination
9.)Leave your christmas lights up till September
10.)Chew on the pens you borrowed
11.)Mow your lawn with scissors
12.) Construct crop circles on your front lawn
13.)Make lots of appointments on the 31st of september (there is no 31st~)
14.)Honk and wave to strangers
15.) Keep changing the TV channel every two seconds
16.) Wear weird shoes
17.)Call McDonalds and make a reservation
18.) Throw stones at whoever walks past your house
19.)Loudly recite people's most embarrassing moments in public places
20.)Pretend you have gone completely deaf
21.)Tell everyone that you are Bill Clinton's cousin
22.)Bark like a dog whenever so
For Mjrahabim: Sanctuary RE0Rebecca Chambers had never been so tired in her life. Her body was sore and aching, her muscles screaming for rest as she trudged through the training facility, trying desperately to keep up with the man in front of her. But, it was difficult; more difficult than it should have been. They'd escaped the clutches of zombies, rotting dogs, and freakish, human-like leeches. And only half an hour ago (though it felt like centuries), she had just escaped the clutches of the Centurion.For Mjrahabim: Sanctuary RE09 years ago in General Fiction More Like This
What a great first mission, she thought bitterly, fighting back tears as she stopped walking.
"Billy…" she said quietly, hating how weak her voice sounded. "Can…can we rest?" The ex-marine stopped walking and looked over his shoulder, his rugged features showing concern. The handcuffs around his wrist made a soft clinking noise as he turned to face her.
"You alright?" He asked, looking over her small form critically. Sure, she had told him she was fine earlier, but the reality of the matter was that she
If...IfIf...2 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
If you had never met that one person
If you had never said that one thing
If you had never heard that one rumor
If you had never done that one thing
If you had never attended that one party
If you had never watched that one episode
If you had never missed that one day of school
If you had never been dumped by that one ex
If you had never dumped that one ex
If you had never accepted that one challenge
If your mom/dad had never married that one person
If you had never moved to that new town
If you had never kissed that one person
If you had never sampled that one dish
If you had never agreed to participate in that one contest
If you had never read that one book
If you had never drawn that one picture
If you had never had that one conversation
If you had never taken that one test
If you had never laughed at that one joke
If you had never smiled at that one person who needed cheering up
If you had never agreed to be friends with that one lonely person
If you had never taken that one gla
The Missing PieceLeaves made a crunching sound when they were crushed by light feet, clad in gently used black combat boots. The woman sighed loudly as she stopped, not three feet away from a tombstone. Her bright blue eyes read over the epitaph, tears burning at her eyes.The Missing Piece2 years ago in Drama More Like This
In loving memory
She held her breath, then exhaled. It came out jagged, clearly the woman was close to tears. She inhaled sharply, then held it in until it hurt, then let it out again. A breathing technique she developed to stop her from crying. It worked- most of the time, anyway.
She kneeled down, touching the gravestone delicately. She wore a long sleeved black T-shirt with a gray, sleeveless jacket over top of it, the inside soft and fluffy. She matched it with a pair of worn jeans. They were faded and had holes on them, but she didn't care. She never wore bright colors on days like these.
The sound of rough footsteps was behind her, but she didn't move, didn't look away.