Bella's Poem To Edward Bella's Poem To EdwardBella's Poem To Edward6 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
I'll love you forever, eternity, be mine
I know nothing about you, except twenty different ways to describe your eyes.
You're made of stone, yet you don't crumble at my touch,
And when the sun is shining, you glitter so much.
Dangerous you may be, sparkling in the light,
But I can't help it my love, I want to be your first delight.
You've waited unrealistically too long,
Even wrote me my very own song.
You know, sex before marriage is the new age thing,
But old fashioned you are, even though you look seventeen.
I feel that I haven't mentioned anything about your eyes yet...
They're like fathomless natatoriums of braise, brighter than when we first met.
My hormones, they rage, but death do us part is the line I will say,
Because when it comes to you, you'll always get your way.
Without you I am nothing, even though I don't even know your favorite color.
But, if I had to guess, I'd say it was the color of your eyes during the summer.
Either way, Edward my l
The Wrong TrainKyle was running late for his first day off middle school. He had over slept and had to take the subway that day. He was 13 and in the seventh grade and his body was fairly small but it didn't bother him. He searched for a train route until...The Wrong Train3 years ago in Settings More Like This
"Oh man! I'll just get on a random one." Kyle said rushing into the first one he saw.
Kyle got in as the door shut behind him as he caught his breath. He looked up to see only women on the subway train. They stared at him with a few giggling and whispers.
"What the hell are they staring at?" Kyle thought taking an empty seat.
Kyle looked around the train noticing he was the only boy on it. He began to get nervous a little bit looking down towards the end of the train to see an empty seat.
"Dam this is awkward. I think i'll just go sit in the back so I can relax my nerves." Kyle said getting up when a voice spoke.
"Where are you going little boy?" A woman spoke.
"Yeah, we were enjoying your company." Another one spoke.
Kyle shuddered turning aroun
Open Letter to dA - ScriptsOpen Letter to dA - Scripts5 years ago in Scraps More Like This
NO MORE NEED TO EVEN READ THIS
dA ignored this letter but fixed everything behind the scenes. Thank you for your support.
I will leave the letter here for at least one week (until September 23rd) before sending it to the helpdesk. This way, people can make suggestions on improvements etc. within this week. You can support this movement by adding the letter to your favourites and spreading the news (for example in your journal).
The quotes used may have been shortened or grammatically corrected. To prove their meaning was not altered however, I attached their source.
I exchanged the places of "Artist's Comments" and the actual deviation so that people would really read this.
Update on October 5th, 2010:
I received the following answer from helpdesk:realitysquared, Oct 04 02:57 pm (PDT):
Thank you for contacting deviantART, I will be assisting you with your support ticket.
We'll make certa