Mary SueMary Sue3 years ago in Profiles More Like This
-> Credit to Archie Comics
Well she is!
"A Mary Sue is a fictional character with overly idealized and hackneyed mannerisms, lacking noteworthy flaws. It is generally accepted as a character whose positive aspects overwhelm their other traits until they become one-dimensional."
She is a literal Mary Sue, and her fan base only exemplifies this fact.
She is the same copy-paste "Smart, Beautiful, rich, mature, leader, caring, compassionate, kind, down-to-earth" girl that is shoved into every story, and every fanfiction that we all hate.
She is built up and idealized as the perfect woman, and we all know it.
What really irks me however is not just the fact she is A Mary sue, but the fact that her Mary-sue-ness only serves to ruin the fandom that I like.
She continually derails the main character that I like, changing him from the fun and free-going hero into a drama-loving lapdog.
She derails the entire plot of the comic as well, takin
Knuckles the Echidna: REAL Character ProfileKnuckles the Echidna: REAL Character Profile3 years ago in Profiles More Like This
CONCEPT: "MOBIUS" - REAL Character Profiles - The Main Crew
Nicknames: Knucklehead (Sonic usually calls him this when Knuckles goofs up)
(Knuckles is commonly given the nicknames "Knux," "Rad Red," "Fists of Fury," and "Knuckie." These nicknames are not canonical to the game storyline. The first three are derived from the Archie Sonic the Hedgehog comics and the fourth was a pet name given to him by Rouge in the English dub of Sonic X. In the games, he has no other known nicknames.)
(If you choose to get technical, Knuckles is more than likely a Short-nosed Echidna.)
Age: 16 years of age
Date of Birth: Unknown
(Knuckles' DOB is generally confirmed as February 2nd, since that was the release of his first video game. However, it is not canon to the video game storyline, as his true DOB is unknown. If you find it necess
Shadow and Rouge's WeddingForeverShadow and Rouge's Wedding7 years ago in General More Like This
(The Wedding of Shadow and Rouge)
Shadow the Hedgehog stood in front of the mirror, the sweat was running down the back of his head, he kept trying to take a few deep breathes, he was wearing a ravishing black tux with a white shirt with shiny black lapels and black bow tie. He had taken off his white gloves and gold bracelets and he was wearing shiny black shoes instead of his usual sneakers.
He had been dreaming about this day for a long time, he had been looking forward to it for a long time, and now he was really nervous. Shadow stared at himself; he could hardly believe that he was now marrying the woman of his dreams, he was nervous of seeing her, and how it would turn out in the end.
He thought back to when he proposed to her, he was standing on the cliff staring at the sunset with her. He was feeling sad and upset because it had been the anniversary of Maria dying on the ARK, and he had gone to Club Rouge to find the one person who would make him feel
Sonics' Valentines Chapter 5Sonics' ValentinesSonics' Valentines Chapter 59 years ago in General Fiction More Like This
Sonic and Rouge had beaten Amy and sent her off in tears.
Sonic: Phew…I think that might be the last I ever see her…
Rouge: Hopefully, I'm tired of her pushing MY man around!
Sonic blushed and smiled at Rouges' comment.
Sonic: Rouge…what was it that made you fall in love with me?
Rouge turned towards Sonics and opened her mouth to begin her explanation.
Rouge: I've tried showing signs that I did…like when you fought me,
Shadow and Omega in the forest. Didn't you notice that I never laid a hand on you...?
Sonic: …Yeah, now that I think of it…
Rouge: And on the ARK after Shadow "died". Did you notice that I went to talk to you about it first?
Sonic: Yes…I remember.
Rouge: And on Emerald Beach when you were there, didn't you notice we flirted with each other?
Sonic was blushing a light blush now.
Sonic: Yea…I recall that too…
Rouge was now smiling again.
Rouge: That's because I love and trust you and only you…
Sonic: I also remember you calling me your boyfrie
Shadamy - Comfort"Hmph. I figured I would find you here."Shadamy - Comfort4 years ago in Fan Fiction More Like This
Amy's back straightened and she turned to the voice; her piko hammer appearing with a loud POP! But as she blinked, she recognized the figure and her defensive frown turned into a blank smile.
"Hey Shadow, what's up?"
Shadow's eyes narrowed at the forced friendliness. He pushed his back of the tree he'd used as a leaning post and slowly moved towards her. His eyes were pointed to the sky, but his peripheral vision was centered in the pink female beside him.
Inwardly he was shaking his head. The face that was usually bright with blissful unaware happy cheerfulness was now bland, frozen, and emotionless .
He gave a slow breath. It just wasn't right that she should be like this maybe for a few days; but how long had it been since he'd seen her smile? And he did not mean the fake one she was displaying now.
"So They're finally getting married "
He turned his head to her, noting that it was she who'd brought it up. He turned to the sk
SxR Wedding Part 2Shadow and Rouges Wedding, Part TwoSxR Wedding Part 27 years ago in General More Like This
From this day on
Soon Shadow was standing at the alter, Espio was standing with him holding the ring box, Shadow was wringing his hands, He looked down the aisle for when his bride was to appear. Relax Shadow! whispered Espio, I cant! Shadow hissed out of the corner of his mouth Im too excited!
Near the front, Sonic, Tails, Knuckles and everyone else were all dressed in their best clothes waiting with baited breath for the bride to emerge. All the men were wearing black tuxedos with black, white or red ties whilst the girls were dressed in pretty ladies suits or slender gowns.
Just then the wedding march began, then Shadow saw Cream the flower girl skip up the aisle throwing petals about, as she skipped a few ohhs and ahhs echoed around the church. Shadow could feel sweat run down his head and his heart beat harder in his chest.
Then in came the bride, as she emerged everyone gas
Un dia normal en el cole xDUn dia normal en el cole xD7 years ago in Fantasy More Like This
-En el castillo Bathory...-
-Gloomy: -Bebiéndose un vaso de leche- T^T No quiero ir al cole, hoy toca deporte!!
-Umbra: -Tomándose una tostada- Gloomy, si le pones empeño hasta puedes aprobar deporte n_nU
-Vlad: Y para que quiere ella aprobarlo >_>? Si no va a ser deportista -.- -Tomándose una copa de sangre-
-Elizabeth: NO PIENSO IR AL COLEGIO, SOY UNA CONDESA DDDDD_>UUUU -Van todos a vestirse y a arreglarse-
-Volcán: -Se cae por las escaleras medio sobado aun- XOx HOSTIA!!!! -Llega al suelo- =_= Ya se han ido todos?
-Frost: -Mirada asesina a Volcán- ¬¬... VES A ARREGLARTE COÑÑÑÑÑOOOOOO DDDDDDF3 Pues espero que haya más tías como tú
-Náyades: >w>U -deja el último desayuno delante de Br-
-Br: - - No tengo hambre
-Saffron: Que raro :0 -Irónica-
-Irgala: -Desayunando- owo Pues yo tengo ganas de ir o3o
-Sol: Lo mismo digo ^^U
-Emily: >ºB -Removiendo el tazón de leche con su brazo de hu
Truth Or Dare -contest entry-Truth Or Dare -contest entry-7 years ago in Fan Fiction More Like This
Truth or Dare
X x x x x x
Truth or Dare?
Hinata glanced up at the sudden question.
His brow arched up just the slightest bit.
Smiling softly, she went back to patching a rip in one of his shirts. Truth.
Sasuke uncrossed his legs from where he sat on the couch and leaned forward, watching her as she worked near the coffee table. Whos your first crush?
Her eyes glittered in humor and her cheeks colored. Neji niisan.
Obviously displeased with the answer, he returned to his previous pose of ankle-on-knee. Hmm
I was five! she shrugged, and folded the finished piece of cloth neatly, then reached for another. And you?
You have to ask truth or dare first. He objected.
A smile. Truth or dare.
Her eyes widened. Hey!
His mouth curled up in a short, smug smile before it disappeared as he spoke. Theres nothing I cant do,
Matter of Trust Ch 15 pt 1Matter of Trust Ch 15 pt 16 years ago in Fan Fiction More Like This
Chapter 15 Move It or Lose It!
Sonic awoke much faster than he had in the past few weeks. Lately he'd woken slowly, allowing the world around him fade into his senses rather than being snapped into focus. Of course, he'd felt safer then, though the exact reason why still blurred in the back of his mind when he attempted pinpointing it. Now something was wrong. His hands were trapped together, but there wasn't a pair of warm hands holding them down, nor was there a weight on his chest, and yet, he couldn't move.
So, it was no surprise that he automatically began to struggle almost wildly, trying to escape.
A faint rustle came from the direction his back was toward, then footsteps that were only just audible in the thickly-growing grass; The blue hedgehog threw his head back and tried to peer into the darkness, but his approaching captor was invisible, too
Amy Rose-ImpossibleI was running…Amy Rose-Impossible2 years ago in Flash Fiction & Vignettes More Like This
running away…from Him…
He broke my heart...
He really did….
Nothing’s changed….until now.
Guess I was too annoying for him…
Chasing him around…asking him to marry me...
Yeah…Sonic broke my heart…guess that’s not a surprise even.
My hair…my red dress…boots…are soaked.
I don’t care…the rain’s perfect in this situation.
I stopped running and walked now…
Once Upon a Time: Chapter 2Once Upon a TimeOnce Upon a Time: Chapter 26 years ago in Fan Fiction More Like This
Chapter 2: To the Rescue
It has been discovered that someone has kidnapped Miles Prower and has kept him hostage somewhere in these mysterious woods Sonic and friends recently discovered. On top of that, Rouge and Shadow have come to realize that someone is leading them into a trap. Of course, what better way to stop that trap is to purposely walk into it! And, it appears that poor Cream and Amy have stumbled upon a strange world one each of our heroes will stumble upon as well. What is next for our friends why how about the beginning of a life changing journey.
Rouge the Bat and Shadow the Hedgehog arrived in the dense woods just outside of the city limits. They had never wandered to this strange area but nothing seemed out of the ordinary. They had been searching the woods for half and hour now but could not fine the purple haired woman. Rouge was persistent in finding the thief, but Shadow lugged along wishing he could just close his eyes and sleep.
What Happened?What Happened?11 months ago in Romance More Like This
I felt the stone radiate power under my fingertips. Wiping the last of the snow off, I patted the stone and cleared the rest of the altar. My daily tasks completed, I sat next to the master emerald and closed my eyes.
I heard a twig snap and was on my feet in an instant, fists prepared to attack any threats to the emeralds safety. The shadows moved and shifted to reveal a hedgehog of the same name. I dropped my guard marginally. Shadow wasn't one to attack the master emerald for no reason. He sped towards me, practically breaking the sound barrier.
Then I noticed he wasn't alone.
Bloody and bruised, Rouge lay unconscious in his arms, wings bent and broken. Shadow looked like he had fared no better, blood matting his fur and small cuts covering his muzzle and body.
"What the heck Shadow? What happened to you two?"
"No time for explanations. Take her, I need to get back."
Confused, I took the female bat from
Sleepover Spies part 2Chapter TwoSleepover Spies part 27 years ago in General Fiction More Like This
At Amys house, Amy was getting her apartment ready for the sleepover; she had changed her sheets from her normal Sonic patterns, hid her Sonic plushie under her pillow and had changed them to pure white lace.
She had sent up the music centre, the T.V and DVD player for their entertainment and she had put up some inflatable mattresses for Blaze and Rouge when they arrived. She had even sent up a table with drinks and snacks. She had crisps, sweets, cakes, biscuits and cokes. She had asked Blaze and Rouge to bring some snacks but she thought she would set everything up.
Just as she was putting the finishing touches to the room, she heard the doorbell. She rushed downstairs to see who it was; she then looked through her peep hole to see who was there. Her heart soared when she saw Rouge and Blaze standing outside holding their bags.
She opened the door and greeted them. Hey Blaze! she said happily hey Rouge! she said happily. The three friends hug
Sonics' Valentines Chapter 3Sonics' ValentinesSonics' Valentines Chapter 39 years ago in General Fiction More Like This
Sonic was absolutely shocked, he didn't know what to say, he became speechless.
Rouge: I'm sorry for never telling you before…I just didn't have the guts....
Sonic: Rouge… I …I don't know what to say…
Rouge removed her face from Sonics' chest and she stared into his eyes. Sonic stared back into hers, with a happy smile on his face.
Rouge: I-I'd better go, I shouldn't be here…
Sonic wiped the tears off of Rouges' face gently.
Sonic: No…don't leave…at least not until you tell me what you wanted to ask me before.
Rouge: Alright ... Sonic… Sonic the Hedgehog…
Sonic stared deep into her eyes and he waited patiently.
Sonic: Yes? What is it?
Rouge: Will you PLEASE be my Valentine?
Rouge shut her eyes nervously and awaited his answer.
Sonic: Yes Rouge…
Sonic wiped away her tears once more.
Sonic: I will be your Valentine.
Rouge: W-What? Are you serious?
Rouge opened her eyes and they refilled with tears, but she had the biggest, happiest smile that Sonic had EVER s
Mario and Sonic at the Sochi 2014 Olympic GamesFigure SkatingMario and Sonic at the Sochi 2014 Olympic Games1 year ago in Traditional Fixed Forms More Like This
" 3rd Place goes to Luigi! 2nd Place goes to Tails. And 1st Place is Sonic the Hedgehog!" The announcer said as everyone started cheering for the winners. Tails shyly waved at the crowd. same goes to Luigi who was a bit nervous. Sonic, like usual was grinning to the crowd while waving. The three boys stepped out of stage as they headed back into the stadium "Man! Who knew that Snowboarding could be so hard" Luigi said as he sat down. "Yeah. I thought Mario was the best but Sonic actually is good at it" Tails said. Sonic just grinned and chuckled. "The Next Event Will Be Figure Skating." The announcer said. "Yes! Something I'm good at!" Luigi said. "Figure Skating with Pairs." Luigi frowned, "I'll go find Daisy...Or Mario..." he said as he walked away. Sonic blinked and looked at Tails, "Are you gonna participate?" Sonic asked. "Me...No.."he said. Then a Pink Hedgehog started running toward to Sonic and Tails, "SONIC!! SWEETIE!" She yelled as she went to Sonic hugged him
Matter of Trust Ch 4Matter of Trust Ch 46 years ago in Fan Fiction More Like This
Chapter 4 Good Intentions, Bad Results
Shadow mumbled out something as he brought his right hand over his eyes to rub them. The last thing he remembered was laying down on the couch, then nothing...
Sonic wasn't so lucky as to be there when Shadow awoke this time. Unlike the dark hedgehog, Sonic was a little slower at healing, thus the scrapes and burns up and down his arms still needed to be taken care of.
"Ow! Dammit, leggo!!!"
"Sit still hedgehog." And who better to help take care of him than one of his friends?
The black hedgehog mumbled out something along the lines of 'Shut up' as his brain was in light pain and his ears seemed to perceive sounds triple their volume.
Damned headaches. Annoying as hell...
"Agh!! That burns!!" Sonic's voice escalated, like he was truly in pain. A dark chuckle followed the noise, obviously belonging to someone new. "Oh, so you think
.:Amor:..:Amor:.9 years ago in Horror More Like This
Te vi arrastrarte entre las ánimas perdidas. Por la noche, lentamente, entre sueños lames mis escalofríos. Tus ojos se clavan de nuevo en mi alma. Arrancas la piel de mi pecho con tus uñas negras y susurras palabras de amor en mis pesadillas.
Han pasado cien mil años y aún tus huesos descansan en mi lecho, han pasado cien mil años más y tu maldad aun habita entre mis venas, las cicatrices de tus besos jamás desaparecerán, y el deseo me esclavizará para siempre a tu locura...
Las sombras de tu voz azotan con fiereza en las frágiles ventanas de mi debilidad, tus dedos susurran con una frívola ternura en las llanuras de mis labios, mientras por dentro muero, muero e imploro por un momento, esta eterna tortura...
Las alas rotas de tu carcomido corazón se extienden envolviendo mi melancolía, mientras esperas a que, con una sonrisa cortada sobre esta retorcida mueca de dolor, conteste a tus obscuros deseos de una mórbida felicidad imaginaria...permanece donde estas, allí donde tu cuerpo seco
Sooner Than LaterSooner Than Later8 years ago in General Fiction More Like This
Breath, blush, heart pounding, fur against fur, confusion. Awake.
Sonic's ears rang with his own panting as he startled awake. The echoes of a frenzied dream still bounced about in his mind, the glow refusing to fade, the adrenalin staying deep in his blood. There, against his arm, the soft form of Tails, sleeping on her side, quiet and warm and –
And tantalizingly close. The blush worsened – she had wrapped her arms around his left, breathing warmly and her chest rising and falling softly against his shoulder.
He was near breaking out in a cold sweat. Tails was so soft and warm. It was the closeness that got to him – her peaceful slumber, his mind wandering. She shifted and nuzzled against the pillow, her hair brushing the rim of his ear. Sonic's fingers twitched, nervously, tensely. He felt a tightness in his throat that failed to fade. A battle wailed inside him. Now? Never!Maybe...? Yes!
Half of him tucked away inside somewhere safe and se
Poison Kisses chapter 9Chapter 9Poison Kisses chapter 96 years ago in Fan Fiction More Like This
Shadow went into his and Sonics room and looked at them . They were cuddled up together . Shadow growled quietly . He grabbed Silver gently out of Sonics arms . The little albino woke up and looked at Shadow.
Daddy where are we going ?
daddy is taking you to your new home Silver Shadow replied waling out the door .
but I like it here
to damn bad Shadow hissed at him with ever ounce of venoms hate in his body .
Silver whimpered and shrunk down in Shadows arms . Shadow ran to the boat dock . Mephiles was waiting for him there when he arrived. Silver looked and saw Mephiles to and started to struggle.
d-daddy its a monster !!! he screamed at Shadow frightened
Shadow rolled his eyes and hit Silver on the back of the head . The blow caused the little one to go unconscious. Shadow handed him to Mephiles .
I hope you kill the little rat he m
HomelessHomeless7 years ago in Fan Fiction More Like This
A Sonic fan fiction by Tazia Hall
Discalimer: All characters are owned by Sonic Team and DIC. I own none except the kids.
It was midsummer in Knothole as a hot, arid breeze swept through the Great forest, rustling the thirsty foliage. Withered grass lay in brown patches and black scorches occasionally dotted the surrounding meadows and fields. Because of this, the Freedom Fighters were on constant alert for brush fires because several had broken out over the last few weeks.
The drought seemed to drag on and the refugees took to bathing often in what was left of the nearby Great River. The water level had gone down at least four feet, reducing the thundering river to a babbling brook. The dwindling flow negatively affected the village's already meager agricultural yield.
To supplement their food supply, the Freedom Fighters began stocking up on packaged supplies that they pur
Mario and Sonic - London 2012It had been an incredibly long night.Mario and Sonic - London 20123 years ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
So much so, that many members of the clashing teams actually wondered what had happened to the sun. Or whether, in this new world, the sun didn't exist at all.
Of course, they knew that couldn't be true.
In fact, the only member of the Blue Team that had been to the UK was Sonic, then again, that was a fictional England in a legendary story. The Blue Blur couldn't help but wonder if this England would be any different.
So in truth, he was like the others.
None of the groups had been to London.
Despite this, high-spirited little Amy Rose had been exceedingly excited in the idea of once again competing in the Olympic Games. She'd heard about the many brands of stores deep within London, as well as the fact that nothing could be more romantic then spending an evening with her hero (Sonic) in Big Ben. She sighed dreamily at the thought, a blush appearing on her face.
Finally, the sun began to creep over the hills, streaming over the roads and reflectin
SpiderPig songSpiderPig song7 years ago in Humor More Like This
Does whatever a spiderpig does
Can spin a web, any size?
no he can't he's a pig
Can't catch thieves just like flies
Here comes the Spiderpig.
Is he strong?
He gets help from simpson blood.
Can't swing from a thread
Take a look overhead
Hey, there watch out!
There goes the Spiderpig.
In the chill of night
At the scene of a crime
Like a streak of light
He almost arrives on time.
Friendly neighborhood Spiderpig
Wealth and fame
food is his reward.
To him, life is a great big bang up
Whenever there's a hang up
You'll find the Spiderpig.
who is now harry plopper!!!!
Robo-Finalization PtIIIRobo-Finalization Pt IIIRobo-Finalization PtIII8 years ago in General Fiction More Like This
"S-Sir, the hedgehog, he rescued the fox and escaped"
"That's good Snively" the hologram of Robotnik sat in the air, apparently on a chair that was not being displayed by the computer.
"I… is it Sir?" Snively asked a little confused.
"Oh yes Snively, you see I placed a tracking device on the little fur ball while he was in his cell. Well not me specifically, I had a SWATbot place it on him while he slept" Robotnik made himself comfortable in his unseen chair, a look of sinister victory emblazoned on his face.
"Oo, hoo, hoo, hoo, delicious is it not Snively?"
"A masterful plan, Sir, I am to order a strike force to the location sir?"
"Yes Snively, I am downloading the coordinates of the fox to your console; the tracker will update the computer on his movements, find their base Snively, and tear it down along with the rest of the forest after you do" Robotnik slammed his fist onto the arm of the unseen chair.
"Yes, Sir" Snively said, bowing slightly as the