Fan Fiction Review No. 1Fan Fiction Review No. 14 years ago in Reviews & Guides More Like This
Tag Team Fan Fiction Review: Memoirs of an OC, Outsider Character
Boq: Alright. So I am told that Arsenio has something 'special' that he wants to review with me. *cracks knuckles* Let's get this over with*looks over to see Arsenio laying on the floor, foaming at the mouth and what seems to be smoke coming out of his ears* Oh... dear...
Arsenio: Blarglelargle...*twitches* Go on...with...out me...*goes limp*
Boq: Arsenio! No! Stay with me! *pulls a lifeless Aresnio into his arms*
Arsenio: Bleeeeeh...*looks like an absolute mess*
Boq: No! I shall give you the kiss of life! *puckers up and moves in*
Arsenio: *punched Boq in the face* I liiiiiiiiiiiiiiiive!
Boq: Oh, you sod!
Arsenio: You didn't think it'd be that easy, did you? *eyes narrow suspiciously*
Boq: You know you're secretly gay for me. It's only a matter of time before you realize it. *clears throat* Anyways, what on earth brought on a reaction like that? Did you read Twilight again?
Naruto's BirthdayThis is the sequel of saving lives.Naruto's Birthday7 years ago in Fan Fiction More Like This
Its been a couple weeks since when Naruto and Sakura told each other that they loved one another. They had gone out quite a lot since then and were just about to go on another date. They had dinner at Ichirakus and then went by the lake, where they had the first date and danced while Naruto sang. As they walked, just enjoying each others company, Sakura was thinking about their first night, when Naruto almost died.
After Tsunade, the medical ninjas and their left Sakura had just laid with Naruto, her head resting against his chest. He had fallen asleep, from exhaustion probably, and she just moved in closer. She sat there hearing his heartbeat, thinking of all the things he had done for her. She sat up and looked at him, noticing how cute and peaceful he looked. Just as she was about to leave, Naruto subconsciously pulled her in closer. She didnt mind it
Hopes and Dreams Ch. 13Chapter 13 - Containing the Demon with In; Spiritual EscapeHopes and Dreams Ch. 138 years ago in Fan Fiction More Like This
Sakura and Yamato were almost at their limits. Twice they had tried to subdue Naruto in his five tailed state and both attempts failed. They couldnt figure out anyway to hold him down. Falling back far enough out of his range, Sakura was feeling more and more helpless.
Captain Yamato, she said, What should we do?
What can we do? He replied. We tried a sneak attack, we tried surrounding him. I dont think we can do anymore.
GIVING UP IS NOT AN OPTION!!! she yelled. She couldnt give up on him; she wouldnt. He wouldnt give up on her. He always made her feel stronger. She knew what she had to do. Without saying a word, Sakura ran at her love with all she had left.
SAKURA NO!!! yelled Yamato. He had to work fast. He clapped his hands together as he gathered up his chakra. I have to get there in time! he thought. I
Christmas SurprisesHeres the 8th edition in my NaruSaku series, itll probably be my last for a while, so I hope you enjoy it!Christmas Surprises7 years ago in Fan Fiction More Like This
Oh, and things in '' will be thoughts and "" will be spoken.
Christmas was right around the corner and everyone in Konoha was getting ready. Naruto had left Sakura at their apartment to decorate, while he went out to get the gifts.
'Hmm, lets see, I got a present for Shikamaru, Ino, Kiba and Hinata, Choji, Neji, Ten-ten and Lee, Baa-Chan, Pervy Sage, Kakashi, Shino, Iruka, Yamato and even Sai! I still feel like Im missing someone though!' Naruto thought, walking around the stores, 'WAIT! OH MY GOD! I FORGOT SAKURA-CHAN! I need to get to the jewelry store and fast!'
He ran as fast as he could and managed to get there, half an hour before it closed. As soon as he walked in, he noticed Kiba standing in the corner looking at necklaces while scratching his head cluelessly.
Hey Kiba! Naruto said, walking over.
Oh, hi Naruto, Kiba replied.
NaruSaku: Forever pt.2NaruSaku: Forever pt.2NaruSaku: Forever pt.27 years ago in Fan Fiction More Like This
The alarm rang, its metallic ring resonating throughout the bedroom. It seemed less annoyingly loud than usual.
Damn it. Its morning already? Sakura mumbled to herself.
She blindly slapped at the infernal machine, her emerald nails finally finding the snooze button. Like two gun ports off a battleship, her eyes opened to her surroundings. Strong sunlight met her gaze, and made her wince. She flung the crimson sheets of the king sized bed off of her. Two pale legs flung themselves over the side. She stretched her arms upward and yawned. A wave of pleasure racked her body like an orgasm. She took a glance behind her to make sure her husband was at work.
Good, he managed to wake up by himself today.
Sakura sighed in relief at the absent space beside her. She was glad that Naruto finally got to work on time. It would have been a pain to wake him up, especially on a day as important for the Hokage as this one. Satisfied with her hus
Flickering - Entry IFlickering - Entry I - PrologueFlickering - Entry I7 years ago in General More Like This
This greener scenery,
This weather's bringing it all back again,
Great adventures, faces and condensation,
I'm going outside, to take it all in......
(Headlock - Imogen Heap)
It had been three years.......after Jiraiya had died. The ninja had moved on, but his memory wasn't forgotten.
Naruto stood in front of the memorial, and smiled. 'I'm getting closer to your footsteps. I'm right behind them.'
Naruto Uzumaki was now nineteen and a half, and was promoted to Jounnin immediately after coming back from his trip two years ago.
A lot of things had changed while he was gone; like his friends, the village, and other things.
Naruto sighed, and placed a lotus flower on the stone tablet. He walked away while the wind silently blew against the flower.
Naruto had also gone through changes; his hair had grown down to his shoulders, so it was like the Fourth Hokage's, his eyes had lit up a little more, to a deeper yet brighte
narusaku 4o5narusaku 4o56 years ago in Teen More Like This
Sakura opened her eyes and saw that she was still laying in that same opening in the forest on a soft grassy hill as she turned around to find naruto she noticed him laying right beside her without his vest.
"So that's why this pillow is so soft." she said smiling at him ,stroking his face gently with her fingers.
As she looked up and noticed that it must have been noon already because the sun was already high in sky and the temperature was rising smoothly.
"Crap , my shift in the hospital has already started."As she stared at naruto for a moment and was deciding if she should wake him up and go to the hospital or get closer to him and sleep some more and forget about the hospital.
As she crept closer to him putting her head against the warm embrace of his chest she wanted to forget about the hospital and just stay here until he wakes up.
When a few minutes have passed she was almost falling asleep when naruto opened his eyes and saw her laying against his chest as he put his arms arou
NaruSaku - Suicide part 6Naruto was walking through the streets of Konoha with a frown upon his face, this day was shaping up to be horrible. It was supposed to be a great day today, he had finally gotten out of the hospital and the winter sun was shining clearly down on Konoha, but nothing was working out as it should: Sakura was away on a mission, Gin had turned out to be a git, and Hokage-sama would most likely get pissed at him for leaving Gin alone.NaruSaku - Suicide part 67 years ago in Fan Fiction More Like This
Naruto walked around Konoha for over an hour without paying attention to where he was going before he walked straight into a kid that fell on his face Ehh sorry about that kid. Naruto excused as he picked the kid back up from the ground.
Im not a kid. the little guy squeaked, struggling his way out of Narutos hands I am a powerful Ninja! I could take you on right here you know!
Naruto smiled as he looked into the angry little face wearing the Konoha headband, this was obviously a new recruit from the academy.
narusaku 2 out 5narusaku 2 out 56 years ago in Teen More Like This
The girl he loved,the one he had kissed last night in his dream with her pink hair in a pony-tail she was helping a young boy.
he found himself leaning against the door entrance just looking at her face.
As she undid her pony-tail and twisted her head around shaking he hair out of her eye's the boy she was treating had already gotten up and had left thanking her on his way out.
As she turned her head toward's the door she was surprised to find naruto there with some sort of red cloth against his lip's.
"Naruto what are you doing here ?!" she asked still looking at him her eyes met his for about 5 seconds they stared into each other's eye's.
'why is he lookig at me like that ?' she tought in herself.
As she asked for the second what he was doing here he walked closer and removed the cloth so that she could see his lips.
"Naruto ! what did you do ?"
"nothing i swear i woke up with it"
As she moved closer making sure she could see the wound clearly.
"it looks like youve bitten your lip pr
NaruSaku TGNW Ch 4Chapter 4-BetrayalNaruSaku TGNW Ch 47 years ago in General Fiction More Like This
Okay, Sasuke, you have some explaining to do, Ray said.
Everyone was in Sasukes apartment. Ino, Choji, Shikamaru, Lee, Neji, Tenten, Kiba, Hinata, Shino, Ray, Okami and Sakura and Sasuke. Oturan was trying to comfort Naruto outside, who took it the hardest.
Okay, it was like this, Sasuke started. When everyone left, I asked Sakura to marry me, and she said yes. We are having our wedding in 4 days.
WWWWWWWHHHHHHHAAAAAAAATTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!????????!!!!!!!! Everyone heard Naruto scream outside, then an explosion. When they looked outside, they saw a huge crater and Oturan knocked out on the ground. There was no sign of Naruto. Sakura nearly screamed at the sight. Suddenly, Okami grabbed Sasuke by the neck and slammed him on the wall.
What are you doing!?! Sakura yelled, but Okami was way too mad to notice.
YOU FUCKEN IDIOT! DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA WHAT YOU HAVE DONE? she screamed at Sasuke, who was
NaruSaku: Summer school pt.2Setting: Two days before the school has field trip for the freshman class. The field trip is to an amusement park. Ino and sakura end up hanging out with shikamaru, kiba, and naruto. The group goes on a couple of the rides and plays some of the games. Ino then suggest that they should go on the giant ferris wheel.NaruSaku: Summer school pt.28 years ago in Fan Fiction More Like This
Ino: (pointing to ferris wheel) Come on lets go on the ferris wheel.
Shikamaru&kiba: Alright lets go.
Sakura: (nervously) Umm....how about we go on another ride. (starts to walk away)
Ino: grab her kiba
(kiba grabs sakura, who struggles to get away)
Sakura: Let me go kiba!
Naruto: Let her go kiba she obviously has a reason why she doesn't want to go. (faces sakura) So tell me sakura why don't you want to go on the ferris wheel? it'll be fun we can see the entire amusement park when we get to the top.
Sakura: Well, it all started when i was little it was the day my parents said i could on the ferris wheel all by myself. At first i was so excited because it meant i would be abl
Realized feelings oneshotRealized feelings oneshot8 years ago in Fan Fiction More Like This
Sakura was staring down at a river under the bridge, she was having sleeping problems ever since Sasuke left the village, even though she cried her heart out, she only received a cold face from the raven haired ninja. She was then snapped out of her trance when her rival Ino arrived. Hey forehead girl. said Ino. Hey Ino-pig Sakura said sadly. Shikamaru and everybody else returned, wanna go to the hospital? Then Sakura suddenly got a whole lot happier, maybe her Sasuke-kun has returned, so the both of them dashed to the hospital.
Naruto was in his hospital bed, sulking and depressed. He looked down on his lap and there was a blue head band, it had a scar right in the middle of it. He was haunted by his promise he could not keep. I failed, i couldn't keep my promise to her... Then he was thinking about certain events that happened these past few days.
NaruSaku: I'm PregnantNaruto and Sakura, Konoha's star couple, sat at their new apartment in the quietest part of the village. The apartment was quite large for 2 people but they, (or to be precise Sakura) knew they would grow into it. Much of the reason Sakura convinced Naruto to buy it was because she found out she was pregnant, though Naruto doesn't know....yet. Naruto being the way he is, just let Sakura convince him to buy it, something Jirayia once told him about 'when the woman wants something, give it to them without question'. Another of the millions of things he questioned his masters logic of, but he usually was right so he just followed it. Naruto himself was sitting on the edge with his arm resting on the rest, his free arm stroking his girlfriend's beautiful pink hair. At the time, Sakura rested her head on his lap, just letting him barrage her hair. They just sat like that for about a good hour, just saying nothing as they watched a movie. Moments like these are what Sakura enjoyed the most,NaruSaku: I'm Pregnant1 year ago in General Fiction More Like This
SakuNaru: Promise Fulfilled"Sakura-chan!" called out a familiar voice. The pink-haired medic turned around to find Uzumaki Naruto. But he wasn't alone: he brought with him a fish-boy, a moody red-head, and a raven-haired Uchiha. Sasuke. Sakura remembered what Naruto told her 6 years ago: The Promise of a Lifetime. He'd bring back Sasuke for her until the day he dies. Now, it's been completed. Sakura cried. She ran towards her love. But it wasn't Sasuke: it was Naruto. He blushed, but wrapped his arms around her all the same. They kissed passionately. Suigetsu, the fish guy, stared in awe. Then looked at Karin, who flushed when he laid eyes on her. Not like Sakura and Naruto noticed, anyway.SakuNaru: Promise Fulfilled8 years ago in General More Like This
Welcome Back - NaruSaku 1-ShotWelcome Back - Naruto X Sakura Pairing One Shot Fanfic!Welcome Back - NaruSaku 1-Shot7 years ago in General More Like This
'When is he coming back....'
These words lingered in the mind of a pink haired kunoichi named Sakura Haruno.
She was a Jounnin of Konohagakure, or the Hidden Leaf Village. Her most favoured job was being the lead medical ninja of Konoha.
She also had a unbelievable strength cast upon, due to the training with Tsunade, the Godaime Hokage.
Sakura was waiting for her best friend, Naruto Uzumaki. Naruto was also a ninja in Konoha, and he was a Gennin. Even though Naruto's skills were at least Jounnin level, he still hadn't passed the Chuunin Exams.
Anyways, Sakura waited at the main gates, as the sun slowly started to set. "Nothing yet...."
Sakura turned away, and walked towards the town center. She sighed, and looked up at the sky.
'Why am I so anxious to see him...well he is my best friend...but I wouldn't be that excited...'
Suddenly, Sakura fell to the ground as she looked up. "Sorry."
A young boy nodded, "I s
Naruto's promise chapter 1Naruto's promise chapter 18 years ago in Fan Fiction More Like This
It's been a week since team 7 has returned home from the tea country. Sasuke was in the hospital again,Naruto was praticing his jutsus, and Sakura was drooling over Sasuke as usual. It was a ordinary day, the sun was bright and no cloud in the sky. Spring like tempertures filled the air, the Sakura trees were blooming and the bird's chirp in harmony. Almost nothing can ruin this day. Or could it?
Doom and gloom, those are the words to describe Sasuke's hospital room, all day he's just angry. He hated the thought that Naruto was getting stronger every day, and recurring thoughts of his murderous older brother Itachi. When the nurse comes in and gives him food, he just growls and yells at the nurses. He always has the curtains closed and darkness envoys the room. "Itachi..." He was remembering his reunion with his hated brother. "You don't interest me right now, you're still too weak, you don't have enough hatered, and you know something else,
Departing Love - NarusakuAs Konoha once again tries to rebuild itself, the days were spent repairing. Naruto has just been released from the hospital. He still couldn't believe Konoha was almost destroyed again by the Akatsuki. He had to help.Departing Love - Narusaku6 years ago in Teen More Like This
He quickly made his way to the Hokage's office.
"What is it, Naruto? I'm a little busy right now."
"Are there any missions I can take? Anything to help this place! Just lay it on me!"
"No. Your mission is to rest. You saved all of Konoha, and we all owe you our lives. I owe you my life two times over."
"Naruto, that's an order!" she barked. Naruto cowered a little in fear, he could see the veins in Tsunade's forehead jerk.
"H-hai. I'll go."
Naruto left without saying another word. Tsunade sighed.
"You do know he's not going to sit still for very long, right? Why didn't you just
tell him to go ask around to see if he'd be of any help?"
"I know. But he's done so much for everyone, but he wants to do more. This has gone beyond trying to retrieve Sa
The Ultimate Torney Part 20Narutos Biggest Obstacle!The Ultimate Torney Part 207 years ago in Fan Fiction More Like This
Ray walked into the bathroom to see Naruto sitting on the floor, tears falling from his face. Ray walked over to him. When Naruto noticed, he scooted away from him. Ray sighed.
Ray she will break up with me if I dont fight
Naruto, calm down. Sakura loves you. She wont do that
SHE SAID SO!!!
Ray backed away, feeling the intensity in his voice. Ray smirked.
You do realize that if you dont fight, Sakura will have to fight me.
Naruto stared at him. He knew that Ray could take on Sakura. He also wouldnt hold back. Naruto didnt want Sakura to fight Ray. He slowly stood up. Ray smiled, patting his back and leading Naruto out of the bathroom. When the exited they saw Sakura and Ino out there. Sakura smiled. She kissed Naruto.
Will the next fighters please come on the field?&
Flickering - Entry IIIFlickering - Entry III - Learn to FlyFlickering - Entry III7 years ago in General More Like This
Naruto woke up the next morning with a crick in his neck. He snapped it, and smiled. "Better."
He got up, and walked into the bathroom. He still couldn't get the thought about last night, how Sakura might have wanted to stay.
He splashed cold water onto his face, and sighed. After getting dressed and cleaned up, Naruto walked out of his house and locked the door.
Yawning, he slowly walked down the street and headed towards the training grounds. His team was already waiting there, and he smiled.
"Hey guys. Sleep well?"
Fea nodded, "Yeah, like a bear in hibernation."
Tarento and Hissori nodded in agreement.
Naruto smirked, "Good, because we are gonna work hard today. We have a serious list of missions to do."
The Gennin looked excited, and Fea stepped forward. "Are they extra hard S rank missions?! Cause I'm ready to unload a whole lot of kick-ass!"
Naruto sweatdropped, "No....you guys aren't even close to S Rank. You'll have to deal with D Ra
Moonlit Return - NarusakuI scan the horizon for you. I waited for you for so long, and you're finally coming back.Moonlit Return - Narusaku6 years ago in Teen More Like This
Tears of happiness flow down my streak as I anticipated your return.
The moon began to rise, seeming to fill the sky, and my heart swelled as I feared you weren't coming. I feared the worst. I trained so hard to prove to you I wasn't worthless. I collapsed to my knees, weeping.
Ino patted my back. "He'll be here," she reassured me. "He never goes back on his promises, you of all people know that."
"Thanks...Ino," I sobbed. In doing that, I felt vulnerable to everything. "You can go home. You don't have to wait with me."
"Please." She saw the urgency of my tone, then walked away.
An hour went by, and I was still on the cold earth beneath my feet. Just then, I saw something walking into my view. "The Fourth?" Clearly I was hallucinating, but why did he still walk straight for me?
Closer and closer he came, and then I knew. It wasn't the Fourth, it was his son: Naruto.
I ran for him, scre
The Ultimate Torney Part FourTeam 7 Shines!The Ultimate Torney Part Four7 years ago in Fan Fiction More Like This
Tsunade happily arrived back on the podium where she announces the fights. Good morning everyone! I hope you got a good nights sleep, because we have some awesome fights today! First, on Field 7 (anyone see the irony?), we have the sound medical ninja Kabuto fighting against a ninja whose is the definition of hope and will. You know him, you love him, you wouldnt be alive without him, the knuckle-head ninja of Konoha, NARUTO UZUMAKI!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Everyone cheered. Nowadays, everyone treats him well, not like a demon. In fact, he is respected for it. As Naruto walked onto the lake field, he looked back at Sakura and gave a thumbs up to Sakura.
I will win this for you, Sakura! Sakura smiled. He is so kind. He cares so much. If he wins, I will give him a gift.
Well, Naruto, looks like we get to finish our fight, huh? Kabuto smirked. Naruto fumed.
You hurt Sakura. I WONT LET YOU WIN!!!!!!
A Naruto chirstmas part 2 of 3'' means KyuubiA Naruto chirstmas part 2 of 38 years ago in Fan Fiction More Like This
A Naruto Christmas
Part 2 of 3
**2 weeks later**
Konoha was intrenched with snow, snow on trees, snow on roads, snow on buildings, and even there's snow on the Hokage mountain. The visibility is a little below average, gray still filled the sky with clouds with the same color. The temperature is above freezing, more like upper 30's. Many people were outside playing, making snow angels, snow forts, and snowmen. Yes everybody was outside, even Tsunade and Shizune were outside even if only a short while. But someone wasn't, someone who always comes outside rain or shine. It was Naruto who was inside today. This wasn't the first day he was inside, in fact it was 14 days now since he had fresh air. What was Naruto's problem, a bad case of the flu, injured, or too lazy to get up? No, his reasons for not coming out are much more deeper than that. He was hurt, not physically but emotionally. He just can't see his first love seen with another person. This is Na
The Ultimate Torney Part 11Love Always Prevails! CHA!The Ultimate Torney Part 117 years ago in Fan Fiction More Like This
HOW COULD HE UP AND LEAVE WHEN MY MATCH IS UP NEXT!?!
Ino, calm down. He is really upset that killed Okami. He wants her back.
I know Naruto, but, but, he promised to cheer me on in my match!
Ino, listen. He is out there thinking of the same thing you are. He had to go, though. He and Kiba want her back.
Ino was silent. She thought about what Sakura said. She knew in her heart she was right. Ray loved her so much. He wouldnt leave without a good reason. She sighed.
Yeah. I guess youre right, Billboard Brow.
Glad you feel better, Ino Pig.
The girls laughed at their old nicknames. Naruto smiled. He loved seeing Sakura laugh. He also knew that these two wouldnt hold back in their fight.
This is going to be a good match. An old rivalry will finally be settled
Welcome back everyone! Tsunade yelled.
NaruSaku: A taste of True LoveAt the house of Haruno Clan, there were colored ribbons everywhere with cherry blossom trees with flowers and number of guest surrounding the house. The members of the Haruno Clan were in a festive mood; their daughter, Haruno Sakura was getting married to Uchiha Sasuke. Both the groom and the bride were dressed in traditional kimonos and both of them were radiant and elated. Although there was a problem of dowry because Sasukes parents had passed on, the matter was settled after Sasuke sold his house at a great price to Ino, apparently she wanted it pretty badly in order to pay for the dowry. Although the parents were irritated that their new son-in-law was going to live with them, they were nether-less pleased by the marriage. Everyone attended the ceremony, even Naruto showed up, although a bit glum. After the ceremony of proclaiming man and wife between Sasuke and Sakura, and after the wedding dinner. Sasuke led her to the ONLY hotel that he could afford.NaruSaku: A taste of True Love8 years ago in Short Stories More Like This