Rin and Len FanFiction Ch. 3Rin and Len FanFiction Ch. 33 years ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
(Rins point of view)
Everything was a blur, but I had apparently been dragged to the roof of the school. I gasped, someone unfamiliar was standing in front of me. "Hi... My name is Nero Akita... Sorry about that... my sister can be a total ass sometimes... she really does love her Len..." He caught his breath, it was silent for a minute.
"Umm... My name is Rin Kagamine..." Nero held his hand out. I was reluctant, but I shook it.
"I am one class next door to you and Neru." Then someone went up behind him and tickled his side. Nero laughed and looked behind him. "Hey bro! Rin, this is my buddie Kaito! Kaito, this is my newest bro Rin!"
"Hello, I am Kaito, I'm one class above you." He didn't hold his hand out, but just grabbed mine and shook it until I shook back.
"Nice to meet you... Kaito... I am Rin..." I felt my face get hot as Kaito brushed hair out of my face.
"Class starts in three
Mirror-lyricsI wouldn't walk a thousand miles for you,Mirror-lyrics10 years ago in Traditional Fixed Forms More Like This
I have trouble letting go.
I wouldn't try to be someone I am not,
So now I hope you know.
I'm not the girl I used to be,
I thought the darkness took over me,
But I look at you and now I see,
I never really changed.
Brake that mirror on the wall,
Fall down but I can crawl,
I'm alright after all.
Without you I can hide,
Get to see my other side,
I'm not so different after all…
I thought I knew who I was,
But I'm lost without cause,
I have no idea who I am,
And I like it that way.
I thought that I should say,
I'm not over this today,
I guess I never really changed.
Brake that mirror on the wall,
Fall down but I can crawl,
I'm alright after all.
Without you I can hide,
Get to see my other side,
I'm not so different after all…
I've been down for a while,
Forgot that I can smile,
I let go of who I was.
I'm trying to get up,
From the fall which I woke up,
I'm letting go of who I thought I was,
Of who I thought I was
Of who I thought I was…
Character Development QuizYour character is in a stable relationship of some description (if they are not in a relationship in the canon of your story, assume this hypothetically). Your character discovers that their partner has been cheating on them. How does your character react?Character Development Quiz5 years ago in Editorial More Like This
(Ideas: Does your character panic or assume it was a misunderstanding? Will their feelings change as they "cool off"? Will they storm out without a backwards glance or seek resolution? Would they forgive their partner?)
Does your character hold any religious or otherwise existential beliefs? If so, what inspired them to hold those beliefs? If not, why?
If you asked your character what his/her favorite color is, what would they say? Is there any reason they resonate with that particular color?
Does your character have any deep-seated fears? Do these fears motivate how your character acts in his/her day-to-day life?
(Ideas: Mentioning phobias are OK, but think beyond phobias. Does your character wo
Her Beautybeauty has a naturalnessHer Beauty2 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
a realness that comes from
deep with in a person
and it shines out through
their eyes where the light
of the soul escapes
beauty is there in her face
soft and gentle lines
eyes so beautiful and kind
round cheeks and honest
looks that thrill so well
deep beauty she has
though she may think not
and complain of her flaws
only she may be concerned
either about or over
but the whole while beauty
is there upon her face
so often the pretty ones
don't know that they are
comparing themselves to
other forms of beauty and
not really seeing their
own beauty radiating out
but I can see and I can know
beauty is there and wonderful
so obvious to me as I look
at her and into her eyes
full of life and much charm
and filled with her beauty
Character Design TutorialGENERAL ISSUES ABOUT CHARACTER DESIGNCharacter Design Tutorial4 years ago in Reviews & Guides More Like This
[New section!] Over-mirroring aka sticking too much in patterns of the original series!
INTRODUCTION: DESIGN OF CHARACTER'S LOOKS: WHAT IS ITS ROLE IN THE WHOLE CHARACTER DESIGN?
At first: No costume can save a badly made character. Your Average Joe/Jane character won't become any more interesting even if you make him/her to wear turquoise hair and odd-colored neon-color eyes. What makes character interesting is his/her INNER SIDE: his/her personality, history, skills, behavior pattern, odd traits, running gags, simply WHAT (S)HE IS. A rye bread doesn't become into a cream cake even if you put on it whipped cream and strawberries.
However, a good design may help the reader/viewer to notice, tell apart and remember the character more easily. That's why all Naruto characters are not sporting black hair and wearing those green tactical vests: if all character seemed almost similar, it would be pain for the reader to tell who of th
Conlanging: A How-ToAre you the sort of person who looks at Elvish script and realizes with excitement that those gorgeous squiggles actually mean something? When watching Avatar, did you find yourself trying to work out certain Na’vi words? Have you ever wished you could make up your own language, whether as something to share with your friends when you were young, or else a deeper element to flesh out your personal universe? If so, you’re damn weird. But you’re also lucky, because this article for the layman is going to make your linguistic dreams a reality.Conlanging: A How-To2 years ago in Reviews & Guides More Like This
We’re going to talk about language. More specifically, we’re going to talk about what happens when we take language apart into its little recognizable pieces, because it’s from these pieces of real, natural languages that we build our constructed languages, or conlangs. Essentially, you’re going to get a crash-cours
TF-He's GoneTF-He's Gone6 years ago in Science Fiction More Like This
DISCLAIMER: I do not own Transformers, or any of the song/movie quotes used in this story. However, the idea for this story does, indeed, belong to me.
NOTE: DO NOT READ THIS FIC UNLESS YOU HAVE READ THE VEILED THREAT, OR DO NOT MIND SPOILERS FROM SAID BOOK!!! MAJOR SPOILERS ABOUND!
Writing Prompt #14/50
Title: Hes Gone
Rating: T (Just to be safe)
Takes Place: After the Events of Chapter Seven of The Veiled Threat
Teaser: Bumblebee gets some sad news about one of his best Autobot friends, and Sam is there to help him through it.
EVEN THOUGH HE HAD ONLY BEEN INVOLVED IN A
A word about haiku - MS JamesA word about haiku - by Michael JamesA word about haiku - MS James8 years ago in Academic Essays More Like This
I believe there are a few basic precepts about haiku that are largely overlooked, or just flat out just not taught in most basic literary (poetic) courses. Everyone seems to know that a haiku is supposed to be written in the structure of 5-7-5 syllables per line respectively, but there is much more going on than just a simple syllable constraint. I shall attempt to give a brief overview of the main points about haiku.
First off, the 5-7-5 syllable structure most often cited as being the sole 'structural rule' of haiku is based on the original Japanese constraint. However, the Japanese language and more specifically their word structure differ from English in a critical way when it comes to the definition of this structure. In the Japanese language, each sound unit is called an onji as opposed to our syllable. This unit of measure for a word is considerable more concise than what we use to define a syllable (typically only
My Really Long Webcomic GuideMy Really Long Webcomic Guide5 years ago in Reviews & Guides More Like This
Jenny's Really Long Webcomic Guide
I have been getting quite a few emails and questions about starting up your own webcomic, so I decided to compile all the articles I'd written before into this one comprehensive guide.
This massive wall of text has several sections:
- How to start
- Getting the story started
- Readership & research
- The Internets!
These are my own guidelines, based on my own experiences, and these are my solutions to the problems and issues I have encountered along the way. This is not necessarily the one true way. There are probably many different solutions to any problem. And a bajillion books on this very subject too. But regardless of what I have to say, do what works for you!
So take your bathroom breaks now, because you'll be here for a bit! Sit tight and enjoy my blathering!
Part One: "How do you start a webcomic?" A Short Question... with a big, long, friggin' answer.
Okay, a l
Final Supernatural ObsessionLast 25 Ways to Tell Your Obsessed with... SUPERNATURALFinal Supernatural Obsession5 years ago in General Fiction More Like This
76. You don't know if the Colt or Ruby's knife is more badass.
77. You stalk the actors' pages online.
78. You express your love for Supernatural constantly through fan fiction, fan art and nonstop fan chatter.
79. You celebrate Sam and Dean's birthdays.
80. You search the yellow pages for Pamela so she can help you contact the spirit world.
81. You always dress in layers.
82. Those nightmares you've been having seem more like premonitions.
83. You always ask for Supernatural stuff for holidays.
84. Now you want to try a purple nurple, if you haven't already.
85. You have love/hate relationships with some of the characters, like Zachariah and Bela.
86. You completely disregard the mature content warnings on the Internet concerning the show.
87. All your friends know better than to ask you a question about Supernatural knowing you won't stop after that.
88. Whether you've watched the show since it first came out in 2
Bisexual in AmericaBisexual in America6 years ago in Traditional Fixed Forms More Like This
There is this illusion,
That being "bi" is cool.
Jumping to a conclusion
About me is just cruel.
I didn't dream this up.
I'm not playing pretend.
If you call me a slut,
It's your moral sin.
I'm not bisexual
Just because I'm greedy.
It's been perpetual
I'm ostracized by Straights
For being perverted.
Shut out by Lesbians
For being diverted.
"You can't marry a man
And claim to love women.
You have to take a stand.
Make a choice. Us or Them?"
There's no way to explain
Why I'm bisexual,
But the title is stained
When deemed conceptual.
I'm faced with the same fears
As so many others:
It took me twenty-four years
To tell my own mother.
Disillusions and lies:
I stand here before you,
Bored Games (SherlockXReader) RQClomp-clomp-creak. The carpeted stairs show sign of ageing as they sigh beneath your feet, breathing in relief as you step on the next one. “He’s just being completely unreasonable.” John tells you, reaching into his inside pocket to deposit the jingling keys. “I’m just glad you wanted to come. I only hope you can deal with him, I’m not leaving the house to him alone when he’s like this.” The two of you reach the door to their apartment, he stops and so do you. “Now, he’s completely booby-trapped the house. I don’t know what’s going to happen when we open the door, but I suggest we stand well back. Knowing Sherlock, we could be incinerated or harpooned or something.”Bored Games (SherlockXReader) RQ1 year ago in Romance More Like This
Getting behind the short male, his arm stretched out to protect you from whatever Sherlock had come up with, you watch as he pushes the door open, only to stand well back against the wall. With the sound of a firecracker, something dark and heavy
Sebastian x Shinigami reader, Demonic love,part 33Sebastian x Shinigami reader, Demonic love,part 331 year ago in Romance More Like This
I furrowed my brows together and the other servants blushed.
"Mister sebastian...what's going on with _____?" Finnian whispered and put his ear against the door again.
"It sounds like she is in pain..""ofcourse, she said ouch didn't she?" Mey-rin and Baldroy whispered to eachother and i pinched the bridge of my nose.
________ hasn't left her room since last night.
A few days ago, when i brought her to her room, she was fine and nothing was wrong with her.
Pluto should also be in the room with her.....he is there to protect her after all.
He is.....only protecting her...right?
"Would you all stop spying on her like that? It looks creepy..."
My lord said behind us and we all looked towards him.
"But, my lord!, it sounds like she is in allot of pain!"Finnian said with a concerned look.
"We can't leave her alone like this!"Mey-rin said and Baldroy nodded.
My lord frowned and pinched his nose.
"Then open the door and don't stand here like
The Ankhthe symbol of lifeThe Ankh2 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
a symbol of equality
a sign of a Matriarch system
the Ankh represents
the female at one end
and the male sign at the other
the cross bar between being the divider
the ancient peoples
of the rich Egyptian land
recognized the mother as the teacher
as the goddess of the family
where as the norm today
is the Patriarchal
where the father is the head
and the family his domain
but in the ancient time
often the way was different
even though the modern cultures
view the past through
their own rose colored eyes
disregarding the fact
that the ancients knew another way
yes the Ankh represents the equality
held upon its side it is obvious a symbol
of the female being the open end
and the male the straight rod
so often misunderstood
by the modern eyes of man
the Ankh will remain
as the age old symbol
of a lost and ancient culture
that was filled with real people
who lived a regular life
not unlike the common person does today
for every king or leader in any time
there are a thousa
Haiku Theory Part 1 -2009-A Lot of Words About A Little PoemHaiku Theory Part 1 -2009-6 years ago in Philosophical More Like This
An Introduction to Haiku Structures
A haiku poem cannot be defined according to the number of syllables and lines it contains (nor by the number of syllables in each line). Although I do not wish to go into the reasons why at this point (I will save that for a later discussion) the form of modern English haiku, as Haruo Shirane writes, is a short poem, usually written in one to three lines. (in Gilbert, 2009) At this point our definition sounds very vague. If the number of syllables and lines do not define a haiku poem, then what does? And if a haiku poem is simply a short one, two or three-line poem then what separates it from other forms of Western short-verse or, in the case of one-line haiku, a sentence?
Patricia Donegan writes, in agreement with the Western haiku community at large, that syllable counting... is not the important thing for haiku in English. Haiku is an experience, not an act of co
The Great SphinxHear my storyThe Great Sphinx2 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
give me a bit of your time
and I will tell you of days long past
for I have been here for ages
times beyond the length of man's memory
I have been here longer than you know
I was here
when everything around me was green and lush
when rains fell heavily
and the waters ran down the sides of my abode
when the great cold ice sheets were almost melted away
and man carved me as the Lion that I am
but then through time the climate changed
many of the humans moved to different places
searching for their game to hunt
and I sat and watched as the green lushness became sand
the rains no longer fell upon me
the sun's heat baked me dry
and the sands began to blow
filling my abode until I was covered
all but my lion head
so I still could see around me
I began seeing the return of man
and a building up of a culture
different than the one I knew before
cities being built
carvings on the walls
telling the great history of these
that built up a kingdom around me
great pyramids were built
The Ryhme Of The Laughing ClownThe Ryhme of the Laughing ClownThe Ryhme Of The Laughing Clown2 years ago in Songs & Lyrics More Like This
"Come Little Children Laughing Jack's got a song now.
Listen close and you shall see....Pop goes the weasle ahahah"
All around the carnival town
The clown chased the child.
The blood was shed,the soul bled and bled.
Pop goes the weasle..ehehehehhe
A treat 1 or 2 a sweete treat for another.
That's what i'll usually do.
Pop goes the weasle...ahahhahaehehe
Hanging corpses filled with treat's you begin to quiver.
Haunted dream's and twisted fright's i Begin to chuckle.
Pop goes the weasle..ahahhahahahahaha..eheh
Child dear do not try to run you know i will find you.
Let's Play a game of hide and seek.
Pop goes the weasle...eehehehheheheheh....
Early Day, Morning Lightthe dawning sunEarly Day, Morning Light5 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
is peeking out over
the far horizon
bringing it's warmth
to the cool night air
the morning birds are singing
their song of the dawn
as the rays of light
begin to find the dew
that lingers upon the leaves
the light's reflection
from tree to tree
casting a colorful halo
all around this morning
mirroring the leaves light
one to another
and the sparkling droplets
of the liquid light
laying upon the damp ground
as I sit here
enjoying the marvels
of early day, morning light
Peace should dawn
upon the hearts
Blood, sweat and tearsBloodBlood, sweat and tears1 year ago in Free Verse More Like This
The blood dripping down my limbs
As I fight my demons
The sweat soaking my clothes
As I work to overcome this numbness
The tears I shed
As my hopes and dreams keep dying
CloudxReaderxKadaj-A Soldier or A Monster?Pt.1CloudxReaderxKadaj-A Soldier or A Monster?Pt.11 month ago in Drama More Like This
How did this come to be? You, riding at high speeds on your motorcycle while being pursed by three weird guys behind you. You didn't even know who these guys were nor were you doing anything to provoke them..at the moment. You were just riding by, minding your own business when the three strangers decided to give chase. One of them had long, silver hair, with bangs that fell by his intense green eyes. Another was buffer than the first, but had short silver hair that was slicked back without bangs. He had a childish smirk on his face along with sideburns that came down his face on each side. The last, was the leader of the trio. A male with short, sleek, silver hair that fell over the right side of his face, just past and over his ears-just above his shoulders.
Each of them wore wicked smirks on their faces, and their intense green eyes-with a mixture of blue- were focused on you. Their intentions were obvious if they caught you. They were going to be merciless with whatever they wished
EyesDeepEyes1 year ago in Free Verse More Like This
It feels like
They are staring
Into my very soul
And rendering me
Things Never Spoken Ch18Things Never Spoken Ch184 years ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
"Inoue!" came Ichigo's slightly hoarse voice.
Rukia trotted behind him, scanning the vicinity for the girl's familiar reiatsu. Ishida and Sado had split off from them moments ago, deciding if they split into teams they'd be able to cover more ground. "It's kinda quiet I think too quiet."
"They're probably waiting for us Waiting to spring their trap whatever it is " Ichigo muttered. "Stay close."
Rukia paused as they came to an opening in the long hallway, "Wait Ichigo." She seemed alarmed as she gripped her sword's hilt.
Ichigo turned back to look at her, puzzlement creasing his brow, but as Rukia began to speak again a booming roar shrieked down the cavern as bricks flew through the air like angry rain.
Rukia fell back and covered herself as she was violently pelted by falling rocks. As the rumbling stopped she looked up to find the room filled with dust. She could briefly make out the shape of a large creature looming in front of her, but as th
Mythological Couples: Hades and PersephoneWere his eyes playing tricks on him? What was Hades doing in his palace?Mythological Couples: Hades and Persephone1 year ago in Flash Fiction & Vignettes More Like This
“Long time no see, dear brother.” Zeus greeted him. “What brings you here?”
“It’s been quite long, yes.” Hades agreed. “Listen, I’ve wanted to talk to you about something.”
“I am all ears then.” Zeus replied, his curiosity peaked. Whatever the matter, it must be quite important, if Hades was willing to leave his palace.
“I want to marry Persephone.” Hades responded straightforwardly.
He had forgotten his brother was not a man of many words.
“Persephone?” Zeus asked incredulously.
Hades nodded. “I’ve run into her a couple of weeks ago, and I have been unable to stop thinking about her ever since!”
Zeus couldn’t help but smile at his words.
“I don’t see how this is a laughing matter.” Hades responded indignantly.
“I am sorry.” Zeus said. “You’