Another submission in response to the prose/poetry forum. This time it's * wildoats' challenge to write a script. Coming straight on top of ~jesusbite's short story challenge, you'll see that there are similarities to my last deviation.
Unlike the short story, which I rather like, I think this shows how much I need to learn about writing scripts. I think the concept is quite good, and has humorous potential, but I don't think my treatment has done it anywhere near justice.
So this is more of a draft for comments and reaction than anything else. Relying entirely on speech is somewhat unnerving
written for a friend i worry about sometimes. i know she has things of her own to worry about, but she still takes time to think of me occasionally. she has no idea how amazing a person she is. i hope this will make her feel better when she loses hope. i will always be there for her. i think she can figure out who she is. hey you! read and remember, every word is truth.
and if any of you are sad or lonely. pretend this is about you, it could be. hope you feel better.