Critique Desired- Fantasy Screenplay INT. A DARK TAVERN- NIGHT
Men and women sit around, talking quietly, drinking,
gambling, and laughing loudly. Some of the people are rather
large, hunched over scaled up tables around the edges of the
pub. The half-giants appear about ten to fifteen feet tall,
while the people in the middle are of average human height.
A FEMALE TRAVELER in a cloak sits with a MALE TRAVELER at
the bar. They order two drinks. The Male Traveler orders a
large mild drink while the Female Traveler orders a small
but heavy drink. They eye the half-giants on one side of the
pub, their faces dimly lit by flickering oil lamps.