The Inferior Spider-Man: PrologueThe Inferior Spider-Man: Prologue1 year ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
Prologue: Time's are Changing.
"He's gone?" Was all Otto Octavius, now stolen the identity of Peter Parker said. His greatest victory.
He rose from the chair as he removed the device on his head. A device that was used to eliminate the remains of his greatest enemy. But not only eliminated, but humiliated and "proved" to Peter Parker that he was the better Spider-Man.
"I'm free..." Octavius said as he grinned a somewhat dark smile as he killed Peter both in body and mind. He had done it. Peter has been ripped clean from existence. Otto then rises from the chair and looked at the mirror, admiring his new youth that he'd taken and realized just how it feels to win.
It was then he heard his cellphone ring. He looked down and saw it was Mary Jane Watson , the woman Peter loved and the woman Otto originally lusted over before he felt he needed to keep her "safe". He decided to ignore it, he wanted to gloat more into his victory instead. Moments later the call went straight to voicemail and
The Inferior Spider-Man Chapter ThirteenThe Inferior Spider-Man Chapter Thirteen1 year ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
Chapter Thirteen: Amazing vs. Superior Part 2.
“Come on Octavius! I thought you had more fight in you?!” The newly symbiotic enhanced Peter Parker demanded as held Otto Octavius, now in his first “Superior” costume, by the throat. It seemed so quick once the symbiote rejoined with Peter as he not only freed himself of Otto’s trap, but attacked him so viscously that his costume “shattered” like glass.
“What the hell was that costume glass thing anyway?” Flash asked as the attack also freed them of the mechanical tentacles trapping them.
“That was Octavius’s very soul being attacked.” Julia Carpenter’s voiced explained “Memories and experiences are built in layers within one’s mind and soul. When the symbiote severed Otto’s connection to Peter’s brain, the damage destroyed a chunk of his consciousness. The change in Octavius’s appearance is a manifestation of the damage.”
Spider-Man: Hail to the King Chapter SixSpider-Man: Hail to the King Chapter Six9 months ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
Chapter Six: Night Terrors.
New Jersey, in an unknown apartment complex, the crying of an infant wakes up a single father from his sleep.
“I’m coming Stan, I’m coming…” The father groaned as he walked to his son with a bottle already ready. The father picked up his son as he fed the child.
“Well since you woke me up, I guess I’ll watch the news, maybe we can see of Peter’s work.” The man said as he picked up a TV remote and turned it on the evening news.
“And in major news, Alchemax CEO Elizabeth Allen and her son Norman Osborn JR. have been kidnapped by the Goblin criminal gang along with symbiotic serial killer Carnage.” The news anchor said once the television was turned on. In that instant it seemed everything else stopped for the man as he starred at the TV.
“No…” The father said as he simply fed his child completely and once complete, he placed his now sleeping baby and walked to a closet door.
The Inferior Spider-Man Chapter TenThe Inferior Spider-Man Chapter Ten1 year ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
Chapter Ten: Head in the Game.
Avengers Tower, the building was in frenzy as Iron Man, Hank Pym, Beast, and Miguel O’Hara were preparing the machine needed to return Peter Parker to his rightful body.
“Is everything in order?” Miguel asked.
“Yes, Strange used his magic to keep Octavius’s original brain alive enough to extract Peter’s consciousness, though it was slightly damaged by decomposition so we also extract the genetic memories of Kaine and the Venom symbiote to create a perfect copy of Peter’s mind.” Stark answered Spider-Man 2099.
“Good. Now there’s one last thing we need. To keep this machine stable and allow us to both terminate the Octavius mind and place Peter’s mind back in, we need a telepath to keep Otto in check and us safe.” Miguel explained the final piece of his plan.
“Then you have the last part of your plan Miguel…” A weak female voice was heard as the scientist looked to se
The Inferior Spider-Man Chapter ElvevenThe Inferior Spider-Man Chapter Elveven1 year ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
Chapter Eleven: The Return of…
Deep within the sub consciousness of Peter Parker’s brain, the battle for the survival of Peter Parker has been declared in full force. The heroes have been facing twist manifestations of their fears that were created by Otto Octavius, in his current Spider-Man form, who simply watched the fight in amusement, going as far as casually drinking a glass of wine.
“Such an amusing show…” Octavius gleefully said as he took another sip “…this proves fear is an effective use of power.”
Flash Thompson wasn’t doing so great as he failed to combat a doppelganger of himself that had the Carnage symbiote. Even with his expirence with fighting Carnage, the image of Carnage having his own face deeply disturbed him.
“What’s wrong Flashy boy?! Afraid of what you wanted to be?!” The Flash/Carnage said as he formed an ax from his fist and threw it at Venom who nearly dodged it.
“Wanted to be?!
The Inferior Spider-Man Chapter FiveThe Inferior Spider-Man Chapter Five1 year ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
Chapter Five: The Night Mary Jane…
“Hello Mary Jane…” Spider-Man, Otto Octavius, said to the red headed woman as he rose from the darkness behind her.
Shocked, MJ jumped in surprise before calming down once she saw “Peter” and sighed in relief.
“Oh thank god it’s you tiger…” Mary Jane said as she hugged “Spider-Man, shocking Otto somewhat “…I was so worried for you.”
“I just need to pretend to be Parker long enough to fool her blind. Then when the moments right, I’ll quickly dispose of her and frame that rouge clone.” Otto thought as he was essentially planning the murder of Peter’s greatest love.
“Uh Peter you still with me?” MJ asked in confusing as she let go from the embrace, bringing Otto back to reality.
“Oh um yeah…MJ, I was trying to figure out why this city is after me again.” “Peter” said in a stutter, trying to act as casu
The Inferior Spider-Man Chapter OneThe Inferior Spider-Man Chapter One1 year ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
Chapter One: Black Horizon.
Avengers Tower, if one word can describe the tone of this building’s occupants, mercy isn’t one of them. In the briefing room, the main members of the Avengers that include Captain America, Iron Man, Wolverine, Thor, Black Widow, and Spider Woman look at a hologram replaying “Spider-Man’s” brutal murder of Norman Osborn.
“I don’t know what’s crazier; the fact that Spider-Man just killed Osborn in a heartbeat or that bastard Jameson is defending him?!” Wolverine growled angrily as he tried hard not to slice the holographic projector.
“At ease Logan…” Captain America said calmly “…we’re all shocked at these turns of events. It seems the Spider-Man we’ve seen recently seems to be very “different” for a lack of better words. As of right now, Spider-Man is now a rejected member of the Avengers”
“So Spider-Man has betrayed us? Thou shall not es
New Amalgam Comics: Dark ClawDark ClawNew Amalgam Comics: Dark Claw2 years ago in Profiles More Like This
Real Name: James 'Logan' Wayne
Occupation: Superhero and Founder of The Judgement League of Avengers, the Claw Family.
Known Relatives: Thomas Wayne (Father, Deceased), Martha Wayne (Mother, Deceased), Bruce Wayne (Half-Brother, M.I.A.)
Affiliation: Judgement League of Avengers
Base of Operations: Wayne Manor, The Claw-Cave
Personality: Logan is a very dark and cynical individual, having suffered the loss of his family, as well as the total lack of true friends over his life. The closest thing he has to a friend is his sidekick Sparrow, who he treats as a daughter, due to neither of them having any real family to speak of.
Appearance: Logan is a short but well-built man. He is often described as havign a somewhat animalistic posture. He also has medium-length black hair, which is often spiked up.
The Dark Claw outfit is black, but with yellow claw marks; three on each thigh, an
The Inferior Spider-Man Chapter SevenThe Inferior Spider-Man Chapter Seven1 year ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
Chapter Seven: Ignorance Abolished.
It had only been a few hours since Otto’s attack since Otto’s failed attempt to murder Mary Jane Watson and things hasn’t been going so well. Miguel O’Hara, in his “21st civies” disguise, was waiting outside MJ’s hospital room in a state of guilt. Despite saving her from certain death, Mary Jane suffered extreme blood loss and broken bones that once she had placed in surgery and is now in a medicated coma and has recently been given a blood transfusion.
“Damn you Octavius!” Miguel growled internally “You claim you’re a hero but in the end you’re a man with an ever growing ego that will be you’re damnation!”
Miguel then turned to see two older women and an older man who resembled the current mayor. He instantly recognized them as MJ’s Aunt Anna and Peter’s Aunt May and Uncle-in-Law Jameson Sr.
“Hello, are you a friend of Mary Jane’s?” Aunt
The Inferior Spider-Man Chapter FourThe Inferior Spider-Man Chapter Four1 year ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
Chapter Four: Beta Testing.
Flash was in a state of shock for a lack of a better word. After being saved by the Scarlet Spider, he learned that his ally is a clone of Peter Parker. Abet a very rude, vulgar, and not so jolly version of Peter, yet he had some the heart Peter had that that Otto Octavius ripped from the world when he stolen Peter’s life.
“So…you’re a clone?” Venom asked casually to hide his shock.
Kaine simply rolled his eyes in annoyance as he answered “Yeah idiot, I am a perfect clone of Peter, but as you seen in our fight with Carnage…” Scarlet Spider then had one of his long claws come from his wrist “…I’ve been modified.”
Kaine then tells Venom his name, his history once he was created by the mad scientist the Jackal, and his new lease on life after he was cured of his cellular degeneration. Scarlet Spider also explains how retains all of Peter’s memories and as such he too was shocked on
The Inferior Spider-Man Chapter EightThe Inferior Spider-Man Chapter Eight1 year ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
Chapter Eight: Old vs. New.
Deep within Otto Octavius’s secret hideout, Otto was finishing the final touches to his new weapon of his newfound anger and vengeance.
“He thinks he can hide from me?!” Otto growled to himself as he attached his modified web shooters to his wrists as his clawed glove.
“He dares to call me a coward and tarnish what took months for me to save this city from scum?!” Otto hissed as he puts on his new mask that had black, sinister reflective eyes.
“And he DARES to back off my plan to make the heroes and Parker’s methods obsolete?!” Octavius yelled as he pressed a button on his wrist and a red, spider shaped device on his back activated as four long, spider-like mechanical limbs unfolded and took position.
“Well this is my time of reckoning! No more morals, no more mercy, and to hell with responsibility! Today I will snuff out the lives of Parker’s little circle of weaklings and I will prove that I
The Inferior Spider-Man EpilogueThe Inferior Spider-Man Epilogue1 year ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
Epilogue: Amazing New Days.
It’s been a few months since Peter had been resurrected and things seem to be going surprisingly good for the Spiders, despite all the hardships Otto Octavius had dropped on their shoulders. For Peter, he had to physically and emotionally recover from some of the trauma he’d experienced when he died twice and hasn’t been able to use his body during Otto’s rein. However, Peter had his friends and family back him up during his recovery, especially a fully healed Mary Jane and the combine help of Aunt May and J. Jonah Jameson Sr.
Miguel O’Hara, despite completing his mission of reestablishing Peter into his body, felt obligated to help out Peter and (in his words) said that he “needs some vacation time”. So he along with Madame Web, Tony Stark, and Hank Pym, created some fail safes so Peter won’t have his mind transferred again as now that it’s publicly known that Peter is now Spider-Man again, some villains
The Inferior Spider-Man Chapter NineThe Inferior Spider-Man Chapter Nine1 year ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
Chapter Nine: Great Minds Never Think Alike.
Mercy Hospital, in one of the intensive care rooms, Julia Carpenter, the second Madame Web, laid ever more still ever since he went in her comatose state. One of the nurses came check her vitals routinely to ensure no complications occur.
“I wonder if even psychics are aware when in a coma?” the nurse thought as she finished the check and left to other patients. Unknown to her, Julia’s hand began to twitch and her eyes began to move under the closed eyelids.
Meanwhile outside city hall, two Spider-Men were preparing for the fight of their lives. Miguel O’Hara, Spider-Man 2099, took a defensive stance while Otto Octavius, in the body of the modern Spider-Man Peter Parker, took the offensive stance.
“That was a clever trick you’ve set up for me.” Otto said calmly as he seemed to be stalling for something.
“It was easy; all I needed was an angry mad scientist, some holographic explosive mines, and
Spider-Man: Hail to the King Chapter SevenSpider-Man: Hail to the King Chapter Seven9 months ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
Chapter Seven: A Spider’s Family
In a secret warehouse, a lone man watches several screens showing many of the activities of the Goblin Underground for the last month. Specifically a certain Phil Urich who now owes this man a considerable amount of money from his “franchise” and to say he was mad is an understatement.
“That little bastard thinks he can ditch orange to go green without giving me my cut?” The man growled as he got up from his chair as he walked past his crates of weaponry until he found a metal crate that said “Hobgoblin 3.0”. He then opened it as it shows a very high tech version of the Hobgoblin suit Phil Urich had when he used the title.
“It’s time I reposes my merchandise.” Roderick Kingsley said coldly as he grabbed the armored Hobgoblin mask.
Back in daytine New York, specifically at NYPD’s superhuman evidence vault, Carlie Copper was checking over the remains of the Goblin robots from the Goblin Und
The Inferior Spider-Man Chapter TwelveThe Inferior Spider-Man Chapter Twelve1 year ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
Chapter Twelve: Amazing vs. Superior Part 1.
“I’m alive?” Peter Parker questioned in a whisper as he tried to comprehend his resurrection that nearly ended in disaster. He then noticed his surroundings as he saw four individuals resembling his Spider suit in some way: one he obviously knew it was his clone “brother” Kaine, another was the new Venom that helped him take down Carnage when he tried to take over a small town, the third was a Spider-Man from the future he teamed up a few times, but the last one was a black and red Spider-Man with black eyes, claws, and four mechanical limbs coming out of his back. Then the recent memories started flooding back; full of pain, suffering, and betrayal.
“This cannot be!” Octavius thought to himself as he was trying to absorb what has happened. He was so close to maintain his control over Peter’s body, but somehow he failed and he now fears for his life, again. “But the other heroes are still
The Inferior Spider-Man Chapter ThreeThe Inferior Spider-Man Chapter Three1 year ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
Chapter Three: Poisoned Anger.
“How could I end up in this predicament?!” Otto Octavius, Spider-Man, thought in anger as he was held against the wall by an enraged Flash Thompson, aka Venom, who found out Otto’s secret that he killed Peter Parker and took over his friend’s life. What’s worse is that Flash has been taken over by the Venom symbiote that also found that the one who rejected it has been killed before had the chance and to put the cherry on top on this nightmare, both are influenced by the demonic entity buried deep with Flash’s (or even the symbiote’s) soul.
“HURT’S DOESN’T OCTAVIUS?! THIS IS THE PAIN WE KNOW YOU GAVE PETER WHEN HE DIED IN YOUR BODY?! AND WE WILL KILL YOU FOR THAT?!” Venom growled in anger as his claws gripped tighter on Otto’s windpipe.
As it seemed that Otto is good as dead, Otto then sees a fire extinguisher a few feet away and just as Venom was about to use his jaws to bite off the
Injustice Guest Fighter: The RakeName: The RakeInjustice Guest Fighter: The Rake10 months ago in General Fiction More Like This
Debut: 4chan (2005)
Voice: N/A (speaks only in growls and snarls)
Appears as a grey-colored, skin-and-bones wolf man without any hair on him and has very long claws.
The Rake is a horrifying and aggressive monster with a humanoid structure, yet moves like a wild dog. Little is known about the beastial entity other than that it has been sighted by eyewitnesses that are then lost. Human encounters ranged from the 12th century to the present, each of which detailed everything about the creature. It is described as a doglike monster with long, razor-sharp claws and it attacks human beings.
*Intro: A black-and-purple portal appears in the battlefield and out jumps The Rake. The Rake snarls at the opponent.
The Inferior Spider-Man Chapter TwoThe Inferior Spider-Man Chapter Two1 year ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
Chapter Two: Black and Red.
At a bus stop in New York City, people got off as usual, but one passenger seemed to be in a hurry for some reason.
“You seem rather tense sir?” the elderly bus driver asked “Things on your mind?”
“Yeah lots…” The man said as he pulled up his hoodie and mad his way off the bus and walked to a lone alley way.
“Alright, just to get my suit on and find Parker before he…” The hooded man said to himself before he sensed someone behind him and saw several thugs surrounding him.
“No way out sucker, just hand me your cash before…” One thug said before suddenly his face was covered in webbing and was suckered punch in the face.
“Who want to end up like him?!” The hooded man growled as the thug’s friends ran off in fear.
After that was over, the man took off his backpack and opened it, revealing his costume as Kaine Parker puts it on and began web swinging as the Scarlet
Spider-man: Are You Happy Now?I'm a bit of a spider-man fan. I enjoy the cartoons, movies and comics...well, the earlier comics. I hate what the newer comics seem to do to Peter Parker. Such as erasing his marriage, killing him multiple times, ruining his character and so on. I like the comics where Peter's happy and having fun while crime fighting, that's why I like the older comics.Spider-man: Are You Happy Now?1 year ago in Horror More Like This
Last week, I found a spider-man comic in the mail. It was wrapped up in brown paper and addressed to me. It didn't say who it was from but I was still rather happy. I quickly ran up to my room and ripped off the brown paper. The cover was white except for a red spider-man symbol and the title in red lettering: "Spider-man: Are You Happy Now?".
I opened the comic and the first page was Peter Parker in his spider-man costume but no mask. He was staring at me with a hateful look in his eyes. In his text bubble it said:
"They all seem to like watching me be ruined. They all like to watch me in pain. YOU like to watch me in pain too, don't
The Inferior Spider-Man Chapter FourteenThe Inferior Spider-Man Chapter Fourteen1 year ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
Chapter Fourteen: Judgment and Freedom.
Otto didn’t know where he was, his surroundings was completely alien to him. The only thing he recalled was being purged from Peter’s mind and having his very being torn apart. He tried to see where he was but all he could figure out he was some realm that was almost pitch black except there was glass-like spider webs with images of variations of Spider-Man.
“Where am I?” Octacvius thought as he began walking in this strange realm, he then noticed he was in his healthy Doctor Octopus body, but without tentacles. He then began to look at then images within the webs as he noticed different incarnations of Spider-Man, One was a young looking one in a black costume with red webbings, another appeared to be young as well, but was obviously female and the spider emblem was much larger, and there was one that had a dark outfit with with goggles and a trench coat.
“What is this place?” Doc Ock asked himself.
Waiting for SupermanWaiting for Superman2 months ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
It was going to be different.
The thought repeated in her mind day after day and night after night. Her current location: a bus, cold and damp and old, traveling down a deserted path during the dead hours of the night. Where was she going? She didn’t know and didn’t care to find out. She was free from that place and free to choose where she would live and how, and that is why she had been in buses the past week. The farther away she was from that place the better, and the less she knew of her location, the safer the haven she would soon arrive in would be.
She was balled up in her seat, her legs brought up to her knees and her arms wrapped around them. Her chin rested on her knees as her eyes looked at the back of the front seat. Torn and missing pieces of fabric formed an endless black hole in the old seat, and the feel of emptiness crawled into her insides the more she stared at it.
Her gaze was blank; a dead look that many confused for blindness, a
The Inferior Spider-Man Chapter SixThe Inferior Spider-Man Chapter Six1 year ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
Chapter Six: Scarlet Fever.
“Noooooo!” Kaine yelled in fear as he rushed to save Mary Jane before he was pinned against the wall by Otto.
“It’s too late now! Soon in a few moments she’ll die of the fall and I will be closer of achieving a Peter-less world! A SUPERIOR WORLD!” Octavius said in triumph as Kaine was helpless as he saw Mary Jane plummet closer to the pavement below.
And just as the young red headed woman was going to face her end, a blue and blur swung at high speeds and caught Mary Jane just in time.
“Thank God I got you time.” Miguel O’Hara, Spider-Man 2099, said in relief as he gently held MJ to safety.
“Peter…” Mary Jane groaned in pain as she shifted in and out of consciousness.
“You’re okay ma’am. I’m taking you to safety.” Miguel tried to calm Mary Jane down.”
“I’ve let you down Peter…I was so stupid…I’ve should’ve known