MLP: FiM - Season Four Episode IdeasSince we’re gonna have to wait a little while before we see Twilight settle into her new Princesshood, I thought I’d ease the pain and inspire with some episode prompt ideas. I tried to make them sound like they would be ideas that could fit in the show.MLP: FiM - Season Four Episode Ideas2 years ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
We already know that the first two episodes will be continuing rom where we left off at the end of Magical Mystery Cure. So here iss how I think the first two episodes will go down:
We already know that the Season 4 2-part opener will focus on Twilight's fears and questions after becoming a princess, so my guess is that this 2-parter will introduce a new villain who tempts Twilight with her wish of not wanting to leave her friends in the same vein as Ursula from The Little Mermaid. The twist would be that this villain was also responsible for turning Princess Luna into Nightmare Moon.
• Pinkie Pie discovers meditation and learns to be relaxed, but it ends up freaking out the entire town.
• An episode foc
The Fall Of The Rainbow Factory chapter 1The Fall Of The Rainbow Factory chapter 13 years ago in Settings More Like This
THE FALL OF THE RAINBOW FACTORY
Chapter 1: Welcome to the Factory
It was a Normal sunny bright day in cloudsdale. The sun was shinning bright and the Pegasus ponies were flying around going about their daily tasks, while some ponies were taking their tests at flight school so they can finally get a job in cloudsdale. However...after the recent disappearance of scootaloo, many ponies refused to be in flight school...that is when trouble was really brewing, as many of the flight school students were rapidly disappearing, many families began to get worried and even accuse the staff members of their disappearance, to which the staff denied all accusations and the school kept running. A few days after all of this two young Pegasus ponies were going to take their flight exam like all of the rest. One Pony had orange fur and a long brown mane much like Braeburn the earth pony, only his hair also had orange streaks in his mane. He wore a black jacket looking a lot like the jackets that the pon
Equestria Girls - Possible EndingAs the bright light swirled all around her, Twilight remarked that she would never get used to this sort of travel. Oh sure she knew how to teleport, and had even become rather proficient at it, but this was something else altogether. It had been mere moments since she stepped back through the portal, connecting her world of Equestria to the strange one she had been sent to. A world of bizarre creatures known as humans. She had been sent there to retrieve a very important crown for Celestia and had gone through quite an ordeal to get it back.Equestria Girls - Possible Ending2 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
Thankfully, she'd been successful in her task and was now on her way back to her own world, with the crown in her possession. Though the journey back was far from pleasant. Travelling through this portal was like being shot out of a cannon, fast and disorienting. But she put up with it, knowing it would only be a few more moments before she was back home. And soon enough, that feeling of dizziness passed from her and she opened her eyes again. Loo
Time Traveling Kids of the Mane Six! Ch. 35Time Traveling Kids of the Mane Six! Ch. 3510 months ago in Short Stories More Like This
Chapter 35: Cherry, You Gotta Stand Up Tall… (first draft)
Tempest’s eyes shifted back and forth, following Cherry’s incessant pacing beneath the shade of a distant apple tree. He peered upwards for a moment to see that the morning sun had stopped rising, its warm rays now transforming into a searing heat. In fact, it had gotten so hot that Apple Bloom, Big Macintosh, and Granny Smith had left the apple field to go to town for some grocery shopping and drinks. While Fluttershy napped in the shade of another tree, Tempest, Flora, and Berry shared a single tree’s shade while they sat around waiting for “the talk” to be over. Whatever was being said back at the barn with Bismarck, Radiance, and their mothers, it had to have been a long and awkward conversation.
“Could they take any longer?” Flora groaned, speaking from the shade on the opposite side of the tree as Tempest. “I mean, where did this heat even come from? It ha
Time Traveling Kids of the Mane Six! Ch. 42Time Traveling Kids of the Mane Six! Ch. 424 months ago in Short Stories More Like This
Chapter 42: Family Matters
While all of Applejack’s guests began to sit down at the dinner table, Andromeda’s attention stayed with Tempest. Ever since Rainbow Dash had arrived, he had not focused on anything or anypony else but her. His jaw was clenched and his eyes seethed with hidden anger. He was not making any effort to hide these expressions. Seeing his emotional crisis, Andromeda took hold of his hoof. After a moment, Tempest’s gaze finally tore away from his mother and towards the warm grip that interrupted him.
“It’s alright, Tempest,” Andromeda said, almost in a whisper.
Tempest glanced back at Rainbow Dash and gave Andi’s hoof a light squeeze. He did not say anything, though words weren’t needed. Andromeda led him to the table and sat him down, taking the seat beside him.
“I get it,” she said. “I know how you feel and I’m with you. Okay?”
Tempest nodded. Andromeda could tell he didn
Friendship is magic - Alternate endingShe almost couldn't believe her eyes. After what seemed like a night that would never end, the sun was finally rising. Twilight stood in the middle of the ruined castle, surrounded by the friends she'd made. Rainbow Dash, Applejack, Fluttershy, Rarity and Pinkie Pie. All of them had, much to her surprise, become incredibly important to her, and together, they'd achieved a great victory. Not only had they discovered the long-lost elements of harmony, but in doing so, they had also vanquished the mare who had threatened the land with eternal night. Nightmare Moon.Friendship is magic - Alternate ending2 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
But now that they had won, the sun's first rays were creeping over the horizon, and with them came a familiar voice. To her friends, it was strange, but to Twilight, it brought a smile to her face. She knew that voice well, and the pony it belonged to. As the sun rose, another light approached the window of the ruin. There was a blinding flash as the six mares covered there eyes. But when the light dimmed, they looked on in joy
Cry for Eternity - Chapter 15Cry for Eternity - Chapter 152 years ago in Drama More Like This
Forty-seven days since the coronation of Princess Twilight Sparkle.
Luna frowned as she cast a critical eye over the image of herself in the mirror, inspecting herself head to hoof. She turned slightly to get a better view of her flank, carefully scrutinizing the way her current attire perfectly hugged her waist, leaving nothing to the imagination. “I had not expected Rarity to create a gown for me, Twilight, and normally I harbor a most intense distaste for clothing, but this is indubitably the most comfortable gown I have ever worn. Quite exquisite, yet pleasantly simple as well. She is an amazing mare.”
“...Yeah, isn’t she?”
“Darn it, Spike, hold still! Your tie is crooked and I’m not letting you go out there like that!” Twilight groaned, pulling the dragon over so she could adjust it. “Anyway, Luna, I agree. She managed to match the color of your coat perfectly. I can’t say I’m a big fan of the l
Time Traveling Kids of the Mane Six! Ch. 10Time Traveling Kids of the Mane Six! Ch. 102 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
CHAPTER 10: Cutie Mark Criss-cross (First draft. Final version in the works)
Bucky's eyesight remained blurry as he looked around, desperately hoping to find something or somepony who could help him. He was in a room of some sort, but felt too nauseous to tell whose it was. His chest heaved with difficulty with each gasp of air becoming more shallow than the last while something clung tightly on his throat. His hoof grasped his neck to feel his Cutie Mark Crusader's cape. He had forgotten that he had put it on, but now it was choking him. Grasping at the knot, he tore it off, flooding oxygen into his lungs. He coughed loudly and painfully, gasping for a while before he sunk his head back to the cold floor. Taking the moment to catch his breath, his green eyes darted around, searching his surroundings. He was inside a small warm bedroom, not the cool basement where he once was. Stuffed animals surrounded him from all sides, their glass eyes watching his every move and motion an
Time Traveling Kids of the Mane Six! Ch. 27Time Traveling Kids of the Mane Six! Ch. 271 year ago in Short Stories More Like This
Chapter 27: Time to Panic (first draft)
“What’s going on?” Fluttershy asked Rainbow Dash, who was pacing back and forth.
“Why don’t you ask Twilight?” the blue pegasus mare replied. “I’m sure she’s got a lot more to say about all this than I do.”
“What’s that supposed to mean?” she demanded. “What is this about?”
“The past few days I’ve been noticing some very suspicious ponies that I have never met before,” Rainbow Dash said. “At first I thought they were just visitors from Canterlot or something like that, but I recently found out that they’re actually time travelers!”
All five of the other mares stared at her.
“Time travelers?” Applejack repeated. “Puh-lease. There’s no such thing as time travel. That’s just one of those hocus-pocus mare’s tale spells.”
“Oh, it exists!
HelplessHelpless1 year ago in General Fiction More Like This
I lived in the orphanage on the edge of Ponyville. It was a nice place. The foals there were quite nice too. I couldn't complain. I did wish I had a family though. I would always wonder what it would be like to have a permanent home with a mother and a father. Maybe even a brother or sister. It's too bad my parents didn't want me. They probably thought that I was helpless and wouldn't be able to live up to their expectations or something. I might not have been able to but I am in no way helpless. I guess when you're disabled, ponies automatically assume you can't take care of yourself.
Oh yeah, that's right, I didn't quite introduce myself. My name's Anthea. I'm a unicorn mare and I'm blind.
Anyways, back to the story. Because of my disability, I'd always get special treatment from everypony at the orphanage. Or at least from the ponies who did talk to me. Some wouldn't because they thought I was weird or distant from them which is kinda understandable
MLP: FIM - Season Four Episode Ideas (Part 2)A Princess Defined Parts 1+2MLP: FIM - Season Four Episode Ideas (Part 2)2 years ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
Continuing from the events of “Magical Mystery Cure,” Twilight begins to fear and question her new title, worried that she may have to leave her friends as a result. She also has trouble with Ponyville now viewing Twilight as royalty rather than . . . well, Twilight. She decides to travel to Canterlot and ask Celestia, Luna, and Cadence on what they believe makes a Princess and how they became Princesses in the first place. While Twilight is away, however, a new villain named Crimzio appears in Ponyville and casts a spell of hatred on the whole town that causes them to turn against Twilight! (Remember when Him first appeared in the Powerpuff Girls and made all of Townsville complete dough bags to the girls? Crimzio's spell is just that. And like Him, Crimzio is also based on the Chief Blue Meanie.) It's up to Twilight to save all of Ponyville, stop Crimzio, and help the town rediscover the power of friendship and learn her role as a
Time Traveling Kids of the Mane Six! Ch. 39Time Traveling Kids of the Mane Six! Ch. 396 months ago in Short Stories More Like This
Chapter 39: Faith in a Future
Andromeda sat up in Applejack’s bed where she now resided in place of Cherry. She had no idea how she ended up where she was, but something about it did not bother her. Every day she felt more and more exhausted and each night was becoming more sleepless than the last. To be honest, despite the relentless clock ticking down to their imminent demise filling the back of her mind, Andromeda somehow felt at peace that had been missing for a long time. According to the clock, she had been sleeping for several hours. She saw Cherry nudge Berry when she woke up. They had been sitting down across the room from her.
“Berry,” Cherry said softly. “Berry, get up. Andromeda’s awake.”
Berry snorted as his blue eyes shot open, his body jerking upright in the process.
“Andizup?” he murmured, slurring his words.
Cherry ignored him and made her way to foot of the bed.
“How are you feeling, Andi?” Cherry as
My Idea for the Season 4 Opening of MLPWe already know that the Season 4 2-part opener will focus on Twilight's fears and questions after becoming a princess, and my guess is it'll star a a new villain (it's practically mandatory for a 2-part opening) to make it even more exciting.My Idea for the Season 4 Opening of MLP2 years ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
So my guess is that this villain will play on Twilight's fears and concerns about being a Princess, trying to corrupt her in the process. To hammer it down further, this villain would also be the one responsible for turning Princess Luna into Nightmare Moon, releasing Discord, giving the Changelings the tools to get into Canterlot, and releasing King Sombra.
Let's look at the main villains we've had over three seasons. We've had a physical goddess who wanted to bring about eternal night, a Mad Chimera who turned Ponyville into Wackyland, a horse-insect hybrid with a modus operandi like the succubus, and a literal Darkhorse with a fetish for shiny objects.
The question is: What could top all of this?
One word: GROGAR.
Seriously, It wou
Time Traveling Kids of the Mane Six! Ch. 37Time Traveling Kids of the Mane Six! Ch. 377 months ago in Short Stories More Like This
Chapter 37: Lost Without You
“Is she going to be okay?” Radiance asked while Berry shut the bedroom door behind him.
Berry didn’t look at her, instead focusing his gaze down the hallway. She couldn’t tell if he was either too distracted by his own thoughts or if he was intentionally hiding his face from her.
“She’s going to be fine,” he answered softly.
“And what about you? Are you going to be alright too?”
Berry didn’t look at her.
“Yeah,” he mumbled as he started walking towards the stairs. “I’m good.”
“Hey,” Radiance said, running in front of him to stop him. “Hold up.”
Berry looked down at the white unicorn mare and let out a deep breath.
“I said I’m fine, Radiance. You don’t…”
Radiance paid no attention and interrupted him with a tight squeeze. Berry, normally an open hugger, found himself caught off-balance, but something about the
Time Traveling Kids of the Mane Six! Ch. 9Time Traveling Kids of the Mane Six! Ch. 93 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
CHAPTER 9: Welcome to the Past (First draft. Final version in the works)
Zecora's eyes snapped awake and her body jerked from the sound of twigs snapping outside of her house, nearly making her fall out of bed. Twilight and her friends visited often but she was not expecting visitors at sunrise. Whatever was outside was either trying to break in or was in need of help. Getting up, the zebra made her way to the door slowly, ready for any intruder who may cross her path. Anything could be in the Everfree Forest and she was too smart to take chances. Listening carefully, she could hear voices outside.
"Yes, Flora, I think we are in the past." a voice whispered in mid-conversation. "Whatever my brother did, it caused a chain reaction that sent us all through time."
"But how far back?" a small squeaky voice asked. That one must have been "Flora."
"Look at the decorations around the hut. My mom said she donated some of these masks to a museum because they were significant artifacts.
Time Traveling Kids of the Mane Six! Ch. 7Time Traveling Kids of the Mane Six! Ch. 73 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
CHAPTER 7: Birthday Cake and Best Friends (First draft. Final version in the works)
Five more minutes until Orion's birthday party. Under normal circumstances, ponies would be expecting their guests to be fashionably late, but those ponies obviously never met the Pie family. Looking at the clock, Andromeda knew that the moment the large hand hit the "12," Berry and Cherry would be at the door.
They couldn't help themselves. Partying was in their blood as well as their upbringing. Andromeda figured any filly raised by Pinkie Pie would be that way. Waiting at the door, Orion and Andromeda smiled and readied to scare their friends in an unexpected welcoming. The twins were renowned for their sneakiness and pranks, so it was time they pulled one on them. Time slowed down as the final seconds inched their way up the clock's face. When the last second hit, the two unicorns threw open the door.
"Gotcha!" they yelled in unison before settling down at the empty sight in front of them.
Time Traveling Kids of the Mane Six! Ch. 38Time Traveling Kids of the Mane Six! Ch. 387 months ago in Short Stories More Like This
Chapter 38: Rage and Regret
Breakfast was quiet despite the seventeen ponies (Apple family and guests, Fluttershy, Rarity, and Pinkie Pie) sitting together at the conjoined tables. Some remained silent because they were still exhausted, some didn’t know how to break the awkward tension, and others just didn’t want to speak at all. Regardless of their reasoning, they all had much on their minds. With Cherry sleeping in, there was still an incomplete feeling that blanketed them all.
Applejack’s eyes drifted from one side of the table to the other. Berry poked at his food, unable to eat. Bismarck and Radiance occasionally whispered something to one another but never spoke up. Orion, Peach, and Bucky were uncharacteristically calm as well. Who knew what was going through their minds? Flora ate slowly, never looking up from her food. Tempest and Andromeda ate quickly, though for different reasons. None of them were going to say anything, so it would be up to Appleja
Time Traveling Kids of the Mane Six! Ch. 11Time Traveling Kids of the Mane Six! Ch. 112 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
CHAPTER 11: Shelter (First draft. Final version in the works)
The sun continued to rise slowly in the morning chill and the frigid draft of the wind blew through the apple trees of the Apple family. The rumble of thunder echoed in the distance while it whistled around Radiance, making her want to curl into a tight ball. She couldn't hear anything, open her eyes, or move more than a little, but she could feel the bitterness of the breeze down to her bones. Her body shivered and her mind could not think of anything but the cold, as if ice had frozen her in place. Slowly, her senses began to return, and only when the crackle of a small fire could be heard and felt did she relax. Her heavy eyes opened narrowly, watching the blurred movements of the amber sparks in front of her. Their dim glowing air patterns danced before her before rising up into the air and disappearing in the small plume of grey smoke. A figure poked at the smoldering wood, keeping it alive and preventing the w
Time Traveling Kids of the Mane Six! Ch. 4Time Traveling Kids of the Mane Six! Ch. 43 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
CHAPTER 4: High Fliers
Orion and Bucky looked up into the deep blue sky in amazement as the last ripples of the rainbow shockwave slowly dissolved high above them, their vivid hues shimmering in a dazzling spectrum before their very eyes. Though both colts had grown up knowing very well what a sonic rainboom was, their familiarity with the great spectacle still never ceased to amaze them. Before the last waves of light finally faded into the azure atmosphere, one more echo of powerful thunder roared around them, as if announcing its departure. Even after the sky returned to normal, the two colts continued to stare upward with a sense of intrigued wonder.
"Was…that," Orion stammered, still in shock, "a sonic rainboom?"
"Yeah, but it was huge! Ah've never seen a one that powerful before!"
Looking at each other with wide grins, they raced past Rainbow Dash’s home and towards the far away woods to see what was happening. Though the phenomenon was nothing new to the ci
Time Traveling Kids of the Mane Six! Ch. 8Time Traveling Kids of the Mane Six! Ch. 83 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
CHAPTER 8: Take Me Back (First draft. Final version in the works)
Orion had run into the basement very quickly, confusing his guests. Bucky and Peach Cobbler both knew that when it came to Orion, trouble usually followed things like this. Whatever was going on in his head was most likely worth seeing, so the two Crusaders chased their friend into the former-lab. Where the basement once was the headquarters for Twilight Sparkle's scientific discoveries, it was not used as much as it once was and had now become more of an archive of data and experiments rather than an active station. Its purpose, however, did not alter the feeling of wonder and amazement the two ponies always experienced when rummaging through them. Shelf after shelf was filled to the brim with books of many colors and sizes and countless documents laid organized in drawers and bins before them. Regardless of the room's organization, there was not as much space left, but Twilight always refused to get rid of any
Discorded Fluttershy, New MeDiscorded Fluttershy, New Me4 years ago in Drama More Like This
"Steal The Heart, Free The Monster"
Hello! Oh! What's that? Oh I already knew I'm not always kind. I know I've lost my temper. Usually The Stare just comes and even a cockatrice can't resist. I don't like it, but I know I sometimes need it. The time at the Gala? I scared -me- that time! Can we, can we please not talk about that?
I still remember when I thought taking care of fillies would be the same as taking care of animals. I was so wrong and I'm not afraid to admit it.
Yes I was a model once, yes I know I could have used my fame for good causes, but I couldn't stand no privacy and being treated like a dress up doll. If I knew how Rarity really felt I'd have quit a lot sooner!
I also effectively kidnapped Celestia's pet bird wanting to nurse her back to health with no clue what kind of animal she really was and no idea she was a phoenix. Er, Philomena, not the Princess.
I fully admit those were my mistakes and no one else's. I'm glad that no one blames me for the paraspri
Welcome, little one...Welcome, little one...3 years ago in General Fiction More Like This
"Hush now, quiet now,
It's time to lay your sleepy head...
Hush now, quiet now,
It's time to go to bed... "
Cloud Puff watched as the tiny ball of fur and feathers before her gave a tiny sigh and rolled over, burying her fragile face into their mother's side. Rainbow Dash smiled at her, silently thanking Cloud for her work in keeping the new-born foal asleep. Rainbow could pull off a sonic rainboom, could fly with the best, and could clear a sky in ten seconds flat. But she couldn't sing a lullaby. For that, she needed her daughter, who was far quieter and calmer then her feather-brained mom.
Padding out of the room, Cloud Puff passed the two boys of the family, both staring at the new child. Holy feathers, she knew that her mom had only come back from hospital with White Whirl today, but babies weren't aliens. Grabbing her little brother, Cloud Puff dragged Sunrise Brisk out of the nursery to his favorite room in the house. Sitting him down in the kitchen, she grabbed an ap