How to Avoid Creating a Mary Sue TutorialHiya!How to Avoid Creating a Mary Sue Tutorial5 years ago in Writing More Like This
While reading manymanymany fan fictions and original stories with varying levels, it popped into my mind a few tricks to decrease the Mary Sue aspects from characters. I've sorted the tricks to different categories, hope they are useful! The categories are,
- What is a Mary Sue anyway? And why people create them?
- Before creating him/her, aka General attitude
- When creating him/her
- When writing about him/her
- Notes about fan characters
- Notes about original characters
- Links to other Anti Mary Sue tutorials
Most the tricks I've mentioned in this guide are good to remember all the time. However, the tricks I've marked with a star symbol (*) are optional, kind of extra tricks. I use quite harsh examples in the guide to make stuff clear, but remember that the flaws that are smaller than the ones that I mentioned can be bad, too!
On the other hand: Generally, NONE of mentioned flaws are ABSOLUTELY bad, so you don't necessarily have to throw your character into recycling bin or
Weight Loss Tips and TricksWeight Loss Tips and Tricks6 years ago in Other More Like This
The secret to weight loss is to burn off more than you take in.
It sounds easy but it's easy to forget!
Here are a few simple diet tips to keep in mind.
1. Stop eating four hours before you intend to sleep. For example if you will go to sleep at 10pm, finish your evening meal at 6pm. This allows for proper digestion.
2. If you are an over eater choose the same foods every day. The monotony will soon bore you and you will find yourself eating less.
3. Eat slowly! Count to 30 while you chew each bite.
4. Drink a large glass of water before every meal. Sometimes when you feel hungry you are actually thirsty.
5. If you don't know the nutritional information for a certain food or dish, do not eat it!
6. Crunchy vegetables make great snacks; the crunchiness makes you feel fuller. Try celery and carrot sticks.
7. If you feel like you might snack, try a cup of flavoured tea instead. The calorie count is practically zero but the fruity flavours are sweet and filling.
8. Only eat when hungry not
OC Mary-Sue Test 2.1OC Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu TestOC Mary-Sue Test 2.15 years ago in Writing More Like This
This test is designed for Original Characters. Questions for Role Play Characters and Fan Characters will be added soon.
Now, this tests for both the traditional Mary Sue/Gary Stu, and for 'gloomdog' style characters, which I suppose is a sub-category of the Mary Sue, but is often over-looked in this kind of test.
Further down this test, there is a list of traits and characteristics, each one stating how many points that particular trait is worth. Simply read through the list, and give your character the appropriate number of points for each of the listed traits/characteristics displayed by your character.
When you reach the end of the list, add up all of your character's points and refer to the results at the very bottom of the test to see (approximately) where your character is on the Sue Scale.
Now, while you're taking this test please also take into account
DeviantART: A Critical Community (Part 1)You may have heard...DeviantART: A Critical Community (Part 1)2 years ago in Other More Like This
From the most novice to the most accomplished, dA is home to artists of all types and skills. This mish-mash of talent, experience, knowledge, and eagerness to learn creates a beautiful opportunity for mentorships between those who are learning and those who are willing to lend their time and patience to a burgeoning new artist or writer. But forming those relationships can be daunting for those looking for help and unfulfilling for those offering that help.
This is the first of a two part article series that aims to address a few key points of miscommunication that seem to be common between those willing to offer critique and constructive commentary and those seeking feedback. You may have heard that the critique community on deviantART "sucks" or "doesn't exist", but I'll humbly beg to disagree. I've been an activ
Tips for putting your OC in AkatsukiIf your OC isn't in Akatsuki, they shouldn't have the symbol in their clothing. I don't know why people don't get this. Wearing the Akatsuki symbol is like wearing a swastika or KKK hood everywhere you go. Its just not acceptable.Tips for putting your OC in Akatsuki2 years ago in Writing More Like This
Akatsuki is an evil organization, not an orphanage. If the Akatsuki found a baby at their doorstep, they wouldn’t adopt it; instead they’d do a number of evil things to it. Hidan would sacrifice it, Zetsu would eat it, things like that. The Akatsuki would also not save a random person who was in danger for no reason.
The Akatsuki uniform is pretty static. Look at all the members of Akatsuki. Do any of them have skimpy uniforms that are simply decorated in the pattern as the other uniforms? No? Then why are so many OC’s dressed like this? But what about Zetsu and Hidan, you say. Their uniforms are slightly different than everyone else’s. The keyword here is slightly. Their uniforms don’t very that much,
Writing BEGINNINGS for Short StoriesWriting BEGINNINGS for Short Stories2 years ago in Writing More Like This
I was wondering if you had any tips on starting a short story? Like for instance, I have the scene all laid out in my head, I know exactly what's going on and stuff, I just don't know how to begin without giving away too much info and then boring the reader. If that make any sense.
Tips on how to make a beginning...?
-- Why, yes I do!
The fastest way to start a story -- is NOT at the beginning.
Open the story within one page of Hero Meets Villain, (or Lover Meets Beloved) with the story already in progress. Action scenes and snappy dialogue are the best hooks for snaring your reader, but hints of Mysterious things yet to happen works well too. I also set the stage for the story about to begin with a few lines of Description so that the reader can SEE everything as it happens.
Here are some examples from my fan-fiction:
Opening to HERO (Naruto)
It was supposed to be a