Fred + George Weasley AnalysisFred + George Weasley Analysis7 years ago in Academic Essays More Like This
Fred & George: A Short Character Analysis
Right, so first off I'm a big fan of the twins: both twins, not just Fred. I've always appreciated both as separate characters and I've never really understood how so many people never picked up on their differences. So I decided to do what I do best - RANT (wayhey!). Keep in mind this is just my own opinion based on what I've read in books 1-7.
In the first place it's important to know and understand the twins' differences, especially if you're writing a story that puts particular focus on them. Yes, both twins are bonkers, fun-loving, flirtatious, stubborn and lest we forget both in the possession of a razor sharp wit. The books may describe them as identical right down to the last freckle, but this doesn't mean that they are one hundred percent identical in personality - no twins are. In fact, if Fred and George were the same they wouldn't make such a good team. Fred and George are a perfect double act and in any double act you
Is Your Harry Potter OC a Mary Sue?Is Your Harry Potter OC a Mary Sue?3 years ago in Profiles More Like This
Oddly colored hair (naturally or dyed) ie: blue, pink, streaked hair, "bottle red" (Think Rihanna)
Oddly colored eyes (and colored contacts) ie: red, yellow, pink, COLOR-CHANGING EYES
Unnaturally beautiful characters, ie: perfect proportions and complexions, etc.
Being an animagus or a metamorphous (meta is very, very rare and ani is hard to achieve and you have to be registered)
Being a half-breed creature, ie: half-veela, half-vampire, half-werewolf (or a werewolf, for that matter)
Having your character self-harm, ie: cutting, popping pills, etc. (This is a very over-done thing in oc's, and it's frankly not something healthy)
Having them dress in clothing outside the time-period (do your research)*
Having them be goth/emo/scene (seriously over-done)
Giving them tattoo's and piercing (they go to a boarding school in Scotland, seriously guys)
As just a general statement; "Scene", and "Emo" fashions didn't start up until the mid-to-late 2000'
Dear HarryDear Harry,Dear Harry3 years ago in Traditional Fixed Forms More Like This
When you saw that flash of green light, a sinister laugh knocking in your ears and a searing pain on your forehead, did you ever think that you would start childhoods and set souls ablaze?
When you were locked in your cupboard after your awful aunt and uncle refused to give you dinner, again, did you know that you would soon have millions of children smile at the sound of your name?
When you were on the train to Hogwarts, and you met your best friend Ron, did you ever wonder that we were all on the train with you, we were all excited to go to school with you, and we were estatic to be sorted into our proper houses?
Whenever you felt like you were all alone in the world, did you know that we all stood up, applauded and cheered you on, with grins outstretching the world, tears rushing down our cheeks and glasses similar to yours on our faces?
When you were terrified and thought that you had truly met your sticky end, did you know that millions of people would dress up exactly
Harry PotterHarry Potter10 years ago in Traditional Fixed Forms More Like This
Once a powerful dark wizard
Entered a house from the moonless night.
He cursed a little boy's parents who died
Instantly in a flash of green light.
The sorcerer then pointed his wand
Toward the child who remained.
But all his powers were gone instead,
And shall they ever be regained.
It happened many years ago
When every heart had flamed.
All because of one wizard:
Harry, the hero, the boy who lived,
Knew none of this at all.
For his uncle's family that adopted him
Had built a preventive wall.
They lied to Harry about his parents' deaths
And forced him to be their slave.
They made the cupboard his room and said
"Look at the space we'd save!"
All this ended when the moment came
On Harry's lucky day.
Hagrid the giant had came along
To take him far away.
Into the magical world he went,
At Hogwarts he found his friends:
Ron the redhead and Hermione
Whose lecture never ends.
Along with them Harry studied magic,
What made chairs fly and tables crack.
Then they dis
The Demi-Potter Games Chp. 2The Demi-Potter GamesThe Demi-Potter Games Chp. 23 years ago in Humor More Like This
I yelped softly as the girl cut me free. As she did so I tumbled to the ground.
"Harry? Harry, where are you?" I asked, standing up and brushing the dirt from my jeans.
"Who are you?"' Katniss, the girl, asked.
"The name's Percy Jackson, where in Hades am I????"
"Hades?" Katniss asked, the name sounded odd when she said it.
"Your in district twelve." the boy said, disregarding the Hades thing.
"District twelve??" I asked, looking around at the woods. "Where in the world is district twelve? All I remember is Harry and me leaving camp and falling into a black hole, then I got caught in your stupid trap and now here I am." I took a deep breath, where were we? Why were we here?
"Look," the boy said. "don't take this the wrong way but you don't seem very right in the head. We should take you back into town, see what's wrong." The boy grabbed my arm and stared to pull me away.
"WAIT! What about my friend Harry? HARRY!" I yelled.
Harry came out of the b
Mistaken Chapter 1: JoyI couldn't believe my luck when I opened the letter from Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Inside held my letter for my new assigned books but the light gleaming off my new Head Girl badge made me feel punch-drunk with giddiness. I stared at the badge for a good minute before reason found me. My legs carried me down the stairs as fast they could without tripping.Mistaken Chapter 1: Joy4 years ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
"Mom Dad, it came. My letter came in", I yelled to my poor surprised parents.
My mom put down the plate of toast on the table and reached for the envelope and took out my book list.
"Oh Hermione, are you sure you are not taking too many classes?"
Her question stopped my gleefulness short as I ran through what classes I had this semester through my head.
"No, mom I do not think so. Besides Professor McGonagall told me it would be possible to pull off the load. Besides, it is my last year and there is still so much to learn about the magical world."
My dad walked over to my mom to check out the list for himself.
Empaths..."Sick of circling the same road, and sick of bearing the guilt... Perfect in weakness I'm only perfect in just your strength alone... and how can you look at me when I can't stand myself, I'm tired to be honest..."Empaths...2 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
Let's try to put up the wall again...
It didn't work?
Oh well, gotta go out anyway...
all these feelings,
batter at my consciousness
at my heart
at my soul,
Don't know why I even bother...
Because they care?
Please, if they cared, they'd ask what was wrong...
had sunk in those years,
guilt flew in just as something
being your own
Talk to me.
I'll help you.
Don't worry 'bout me,
Harry and Ginny" Harry" whispered a gentle voice in Harry's ear. It was a voice he recognised immediately it was also a voice he had craved to hear during his hunt for the horcruxes.Harry and Ginny5 years ago in General Fiction More Like This
"Ginny" Harry muttered back there was so much tenderness and love in his voice that Ginny turned a shade of red that clashed horribly with her hair. She perched herself on the end of Harry's bed.
"Get dressed anyway you have to come and see everyone" Ginny said returning to her normal pale shade "by everyone I mean Mum, Dad, Bill, Fleur, Charlie, George, Ron and Hermione". Ginny looked as though she was ablout to burst into tears which was very rare for Ginny, Then Harry remembered the reason for her sadness, there was a name missing from her list, Fred, had been killed during the final battle, along with Tonks, Lupin, Colin Creevey and about sixty others, Harry sat up in his bed, and wrapped his arms around the girl he loved, he pressed his face into her flowery scented hair and took a deep breath. Ginny move
The tenderness that's herWith every word written, with every word spokenThe tenderness that's her2 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
I try my best to express myself, without it being broken
For what I feel is deep in my heart, is love that I want to be showing
Every day it develops, every day I feel more loving
Is the tenderness of passion, which I’ve never felt before
A feeling that I got from a girl who I truly adore
Beautiful as a rose and gentle as a peaceful dove
My heart gets filled with warmth, a feeling I describe as love
She’s the most beautiful girl I’ve seen, that’s as simple as I can be
So very cute and filled with joy, she’s the only girl who I want to see
Her adorable smile that always cheers me up, she’s the only one I need
She’s everything I ever wanted, I thank god that he gave her to me
She was the Light She was the LightShe was the Light3 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
The music that surrounds these lyrics
They don't understand
But I can hear it
I can hear it
The hidden message
That you can only find
From reading in-between the lines
These broken lines
That fell apart
When you left her
When you took her heart
When you took her heart
How could you leave
With the door wide open?
You never believed
She'd have loved you longer
She wrote you letters
In her familiar slant
She kept them all
She could never send them
And she still can't
And where were you
On the days she cried
She had always known
That you had lied
She never believed
And you never tried
You made a choice
And she chose a side
She went left
And you stayed right
You were the dark
And she was the light
She was the light
Ebony Way vs Canon- Ch10They walked around Clearwater for quite some time, sticking their heads in a shop every now and then, looking for Tara, which was turning out to be harder than they thought it would be.Ebony Way vs Canon- Ch103 years ago in Humor More Like This
"What do you suppose Tara even looks like?" asked Harry.
"No idea," said Hermione with a shrug.
"We have got to narrow it down," said Ginny. "There are too many people in this city to make blind guesses."
"She's right," Draco agreed, glancing at the people who were walking down the same street as them. There were at least two hundred, and the city probably held plenty more.
"I'm betting she's in middle school," Ron offered, "and she'll be dressed in things from Hot Topic." He turned to his kind-of-sort-of-girlfriend. "Hermione, do you think you could recognize Hot Topic clothes of you saw them?"
"Maybe," she replied. "I've only been there a couple times, when my family took vacations in America."
"Let's look in that music store," said Luna, pointing at a building across the street.
The others nodded in
i got flowers oncei am lonely.i got flowers once1 year ago in Free Verse More Like This
i received flowers once
and i placed them
in a vase til
the petals all browned
and turned to dust
on the glass of my bureau.
i have never gotten flowers since.
i spend my days
with a boy
whom i love far beyond reason
and he holds me in his arms
and holds me together.
i bite my nails
and pull my hair
over the moment when he
feels the disenchantment
fall over his body,
all clean lines
and smooth shapes,
and realises that leaving
the worst thing
the best thing.
i am lonely
and even with a hand to hold,
and even with a cloak of security
bunching around my shoulders
and hiding my thighs,
i feel my fingers grasping at empty air
because i am too ungratefully
trapped in my head
to remember that my love
is holding my hand
and reminding me more often
than anyone should need to
that i am loved.
Ebony Way vs Canon- Ch8It started as a warm breeze that blew some loose hairs out of Ginny's braid. Ten seconds later, it got warmer, and was a wind that made Draco's cloak stream out behind him. In under a minute, Luna had to brace her legs to stop herself from blowing away as a hot wind came over them all.Ebony Way vs Canon- Ch83 years ago in Humor More Like This
A small tornado swept them all up.
"Hermione!" Harry shouted over the wind. He could see her silhouette through the dust.
"What?" she yelled back.
"Is this supposed to happen?"
"I think s"
She was cut off by the wind. Ron clutched her arm ("To keep her from worrying," he said later, but everyone figured it was to keep himself safe.) and said, "Hold on tight!"
The tornado dumped the group into a field somewhere in another universe much like their own, only it was different somehow.
"Did we get the right universe?" Draco moaned, as he rubbed the bump on the back of his head. "Because this looks a lot like ours."
"Hmmm " said Hermione. "Let's take a look around."
The Empaths v.1The Empaths v.19 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
I am made of second-hand emotion.
I retreat to bare rooms and crawl into notebooks for rest,
exhausted from trying to feel the whole universe at once.
You bring up comfortable silence
(of course you can not say it
but rather introduce us like party guests)
how d'you do
I prefer the distraction of winelightsloudmusic.
just under the engine's hum
but I stubbornly refuse the silence.
Instead I babble
like a magician or politician
(quick everyone look left)
so that I don't have to hear
your thick-smoke thoughts
hanging in the air.
Cemetery CatsThe wolves were out that nightCemetery Cats2 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
and all of the hook laden quips
that we concocted
fell upon lips
like a hummingbird's whisper.
Then, they ignited into flames
like burning stars.
That should have been us:
beautiful ash, supernova romance
with tongue and fingers soaked in ink.
We always did find the taste of Heaven
stale, like coffee three days old.
And with that taste still lingering,
you were a walking oxymoron.
A sinner come to save
these easily swayed, glass bones
from smashing into oblivion.
I longed to taste that wild,
untamed energy beneath your skin.
Devour that dragons heart,
and tattoo love along the bruises
I begged you to leave on my arms.
[ The 7 deadly sins wrapped up
into one nasty little Pisces. ]
You made me violent.
Names come and go,
but the race of these
rose petal hearts
wont easily be forgotten.--
As we spent our nights in graveyards,
with ghosts, in the company of
stone angels and cemetery cats-
Whispering our secrets to the dead.
Buterflies in the atticOur cigarette desireButerflies in the attic2 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
has me swallowing my own teeth.
I once found you hanging
in my attic, limp.
I force fed old sins
into your lungs,
smothinging you in
stray kisses & love
bites. Your vicious,
howling ghost haunted
me for years, warping my days.
My steel heart rusting,
with your devilish whispers
weighing down my fingertips.
Ebony Way vs Canon PrologueA/N: This ties into the infamous fanfiction My Immortal, and if you haven't heard of it, you're probably living under a rock. Or you just don't browse the internet that much, in which case, you might as well be living under a rock. Anyway, My Immortal is good contender for the worst fanfic ever written. The original has been taken down, but duplicates are out there, so read one before you read this.Ebony Way vs Canon Prologue3 years ago in Humor More Like This
Thanks, or, as Tara would say, fangz, for putting up with me!
~ susieboo22 ~
"There's a new student coming today," said Ron.
Hermione closed her book. "But how is that possible? Term's already started."
He shrugged. "Not sure, but apparently she was able to make them bend the rules."
"Probably a first year who missed the train," said Harry.
Ron shook his head. "Nope, she's a seventh year, like us."
She frowned. "How is that even ?"
"Yeah, I asked the same thing."
"Oh, wait, is that her?" Harry asked, glancing down the hall.
A tall girl with long charcoal black hair down to her
I Want to be Who I WasI want to be me again,I Want to be Who I Was3 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
The old me.
Who wasn't exactly a girl.
Another epitome of lonely,
And having no life outside.
Bad haircuts and risky fashion statements,
I never cared about others.
I want to be that girl,
Who was always herself.
She might not have been happy,
She was miserable,
But at least she wasn't a lie.
wanderlust, and what i knowi know things.wanderlust, and what i know1 year ago in Free Verse More Like This
i'd like to pretend to the listening frost on car windscreens
that i know these things from the song of birds down my ears.
'a little birdy told me' they say, but what they're forgetting
is that birds, if they could talk, wouldn't waste time telling
humans other peoples's secrets when they could be teaching
me how to grow featherdown and fly. yet here i am, a bird
telling scraps of paper what i do and don't know.
The Scotty SongThe Scotty SongThe Scotty Song8 years ago in Songs & Lyrics More Like This
Here's a Scotty, there's a Scotty
Down the corridor a Scotty
Funny Scotty, crying Scotty
Scotty Scotty, Spock
Scotty Scotty, warp drive Scotty
Down in engineering Scotty
Scotty get a tricorder
It's Scotty Scotty, Spock
I was once a redshirt
To the planet I beamed down
When the Enterprise was hit
I always wore a frown
When I am off duty
I read tech reports for fun
I don't leave my station
Until the job is done.
Scott Scotty come in Scotty
Beam them up now Mister Scotty
Energizing the transporter
Thank you Mister Scott.
In the Jeffries Tube a Scotty
Och, ye wee bairns Scotty Scotty
Go to warp speed Mister Scotty!
Scotty Scotty Spock.
I rode in a shuttlecraft
Things aren't what they seem
I picked up the bottle
What is it? Why it's green!
Tribbles in the storage bins
On Captain Kirk they fall
Beam them to the Klingon ship
No Tribble at all!
Don't SayDon't say: "Let's just be friends",Don't Say2 years ago in Traditional Fixed Forms More Like This
It's kinder by far
To break a bird's neck than it's
Don't say: "I'd like some time apart",
Though it's easier I know,
To put the cat out than teach it to use
The litter tray
Don't say: "I love you, but "
Because the messenger's shot
Regardless of the good news that precedes
Don't say: "It's over",
It's a kindness (of sorts)
To pull the wool over little lamb's
Don't say: "Stay" though (well,
Not unless you mean it),
Don't lift me to the sky after you broke my
. . .What If?Hermione was sitting in Harry's room at the Dursley's. Harry had called her over to talk. He had been doing that a lot lately since Dumbledor died.. . .What If?5 years ago in Fan Fiction More Like This
He sat on his bed, Hermione in a chair across from him. She looked at him, though he only looked down at his shoes.
Harry spoke first. "What if . . . what if we can't find the horcruxes? What if Voldemort learns what we're doing and stops us before we destroy them all? What if I end up killing more people in the process of stopping him? What if I get you and Ron killed? What if . . ." he inhaled deeply. "What if I die?"
Hermione placed her hands on his face and tilted it up so he looked at her, her own expression soft and caring. She thought for a moment about what she would say without telling him that the same worries had been going through her head. "There is no doubt in my mind that we will not find and destroy all the horcuxes. As for dying, Harry, I would throw myself infront of a killing curse for you. It does not matter if Ron or I