Tuesday feedback hourUPDATE: Tuesday Feedback Hour for this week is over, but you can still link your traditional artworks to get comments/critiques next week, also, don't forget to check out the features in the bottom of this journalTuesday feedback hour3 years ago in Deviant Events More Like This
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WorthWhen you finally lie in all this darkness,Worth2 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
you realize the light.
It’s that flask within his hand.
He’s just like you,
eyes blank and gone.
That stare of his,
it just pierces right through.
“Are you the same?
Do you want a drink too?”
He gives you the flask and smiles.
“Where is your light?”
Flask, oh heavenly flask,
it’s in your hand,
it’s worth more than your soul.
Drink, drown, desire.
That makes us two.
Let us go down that path of stupidity.
Let us drown this can empty.
Let us desire every drop of high and darkness,
and scream out to the world.
I don’t know you,
and I’ll forget you,
but this night will always be there.