What about the Jacuzzi?What about the Jacuzzi?5 years ago in Fan Fiction More Like This
Usopp has just finished adding a jacuzzi to the Going Merry and everyone is excited, well, almost everyone. Luffy is asleep in Namis lawn chair and Nami doesnt want to wake him up. Only one though is going through her mind, Damn it! Why does Luffy have to be shirtless. Do I have to tell more?
What about the Jacuzzi?
The shined on the Grande Line, sea gulls called in the salty sea air, and the peacefulness of it all was ending by a young man on a ship.
ITS READYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!! he cried, CAPITAN USOPPS SUPA RELAXING PIRATE JACUZZI IS COMPLETE
The Straw Hat pirate crew began to sire to witness his latest invention. It was an impressive thing. It was 20x20 feet, 10 jets, marble stairs with sturdy steel railing, a water slide, 3 specially made seats for Robin, Chopper and Luffy. Since they were devil fruit users they couldn't swim or even float in water. The chairs were elevated that only half their bodies were su
The Do's and Don'ts of FanficsHey guys! DragonoftheEastblue here. As you know I'm a fanfiction author and I consider myself to be quite a good one. As I write this I am on a "writing retreat" of sorts at my family country house near the border of Eastern Canada and the United States. So far I have written over 6 thousand words completing several chapters of my fics. Anyways, while I was writing, the idea of writing a list of do's and don'ts on fanfics returned to my head. And since I have completed so much work, now would be a good a time as ever to write said list. So now I give you my list of the top things that will make you a better fanficion author.The Do's and Don'ts of Fanfics2 years ago in Settings More Like This
1. Keep It Real:
The most important thing any author, whether fanficion or original must understand perfectly is keeping the story believable and balanced. It's truly the key to pulling off a good story. Easily 90% of fanfics found on fanficion.net alone are unrealistic jumbles of words that give most readers headaches. An example would be my own work, t
The Do's and Don'ts of Fanfics Part 2So this is the second part of my list. I'll probably do another part when I get around to it. Hope this helps out the new writers.The Do's and Don'ts of Fanfics Part 22 years ago in Settings More Like This
12: This is my BOOMSTICK!:
How many times has this happened to you? You're reading a good fic, everything is done right, and out of the blue the character start talking about the latest Nickelback music video. What?! For some reason some authors think it's alright to add our pop culture to a world that doesn't; worlds such as One Piece, Naruto, Rave, Toriko and Kurohime. There are plenty of Manga out there that take place on Earth. Choose one you like then add the pop culture.
13: "Those who do not study are only cattle dressed up in men's clothes":
Yet another wise proverb for the Empire of China. I've said before you need to plan out your stories beforehand. But even if you've thought it through, are you certain it is done right? I'm sure you've read Naruto fanfics and the author shows Shikamaru or another character playing Shogi. They describe the moveme