Friendship is Magic IN MY SCHOOL PAPERFriendship is Magic IN MY SCHOOL PAPER2 years ago in Articles & Interviews More Like This
Judging a Horse Show
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic premiered October 10 2010. The show was developed by Lauren Faust, who previously wokred on The Powerpuff Girls and Foster's Home for Imaginary Friends. After a critical essay was posted on the imageboard 4chan.org, discussing the author's disguest with it, older people began to watch the show. With the unexpected fan base, the show has quickly become one of the popular kids' shows this year. The show is now nearing the end of its second season with a third season in pre-production.
The show stars six ponies, Fluttershy, Rarity, Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, Applejack, with the main character being Twilight Sparkle. The show resolves around Twilight Sparkles' lessons on friendship and magic. Each episode starts with a problem and ends up with a closing narration of the lesson that episode's main character learned.
Staring with the obvious, the show is a girl's show, a little girl's show, but at the same time its more t
Time Traveling Kids of the Mane Six! Ch. 13Time Traveling Kids of the Mane Six! Ch. 131 year ago in Short Stories More Like This
CHAPTER 13: Twins in Time (First draft. Final version in the works)
Berry Pie woke up in a panic and jumped to his feet. Cold sweat and rain ran down his body with light drips onto the wooden floor. Looking down at his twin sister sleeping safe and sound beside him, he relaxed his tense shoulders and breathed a sigh of relief. He had almost forgotten where they were until his mind fully adjusted to consciousness again. There were in the Apple farm treehouse.
How they had made it here, he couldn't remember, but at this point he didn't care as his sky-blue eyes scanned his slowly darkening surroundings. The room was full of crayon-drawn posters in a stack, a picture frame, and various other things. This did not look like the setup Berry knew as a colt or saw recently, reminding him what Bismarck said about how they had traveled back in time.
If there was any proof, the pictures and drawings of and by Scootaloo, Sweetie Belle, and Apple Bloom in the room confirmed it. He approach
Time Traveling Kids of the Mane Six! Ch. 9Time Traveling Kids of the Mane Six! Ch. 92 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
CHAPTER 9: Welcome to the Past (First draft. Final version in the works)
Zecora's eyes snapped awake and her body jerked from the sound of twigs snapping outside of her house, nearly making her fall out of bed. Twilight and her friends visited often but she was not expecting visitors at sunrise. Whatever was outside was either trying to break in or was in need of help. Getting up, the zebra made her way to the door slowly, ready for any intruder who may cross her path. Anything could be in the Everfree Forest and she was too smart to take chances. Listening carefully, she could hear voices outside.
"Yes, Flora, I think we are in the past." a voice whispered in mid-conversation. "Whatever my brother did, it caused a chain reaction that sent us all through time."
"But how far back?" a small squeaky voice asked. That one must have been "Flora."
"Look at the decorations around the hut. My mom said she donated some of these masks to a museum because they were significant artifacts.
Time Traveling Kids of the Mane Six! Ch. 27Time Traveling Kids of the Mane Six! Ch. 273 months ago in Short Stories More Like This
Chapter 27: Time to Panic (first draft)
“What’s going on?” Fluttershy asked Rainbow Dash, who was pacing back and forth.
“Why don’t you ask Twilight?” the blue pegasus mare replied. “I’m sure she’s got a lot more to say about all this than I do.”
“What’s that supposed to mean?” she demanded. “What is this about?”
“The past few days I’ve been noticing some very suspicious ponies that I have never met before,” Rainbow Dash said. “At first I thought they were just visitors from Canterlot or something like that, but I recently found out that they’re actually time travelers!”
All five of the other mares stared at her.
“Time travelers?” Applejack repeated. “Puh-lease. There’s no such thing as time travel. That’s just one of those hocus-pocus mare’s tale spells.”
“Oh, it exists!
Katniss's Short Second Life -7-Katniss's Short Second Life -7-2 years ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
Katniss's Short Second Life -7-
I eat a lovely lunch made by me since Katniss still hasn't come out of our room. I'm glad we showed Jay and Prim the tape, it brought up some bad memories, but it was worth it. I better not get an episode though, that would scared Prim more than Katniss's nightmares. Also then we'd have to explain more terrible memories and I don't think Katniss could take that.
"Prim!" I holler. "Jay! Lunch is on the counter I'm going to check on mom!"
"Okay, thanks!" Jay's voice replies.
I walk into Katniss and my bedroom. The curtains are closed and there's a big lump on the bed that I guess is Katniss. "Sweetheart," I tentivly ask. "Are you in there?"
"Go away, Haymitch!"
"It's not Haymitch." She pulls down the covers and I see under her eyes is a lot of red, she opens her arms for a hug and I walk over to her. I take her in my arms and ask, "Are you okay?"
"I've been better," she answers.
"You know what, you should go hunt with Gale," I suggest, "in th
This test aria[Wheatley]This test aria2 years ago in Songs & Lyrics More Like This
This test is going to be perfect,
The kind of test of which I dreamed since I was small,
Every subject will gather 'round, see I look lovely in my chasis,
What they don't know is that I'm going to kill them all
This day was going to be perfect,
The kind of day of which I dreamed since I was small,
But instead of testing, with all the test subjects
The testing Procedure; will not go well at all
I could care less about the test,
I will fake any cake,
Subjects, well I'll be lying when I say,
That through any kind of protocol, I'll want you and companion cube to be together,
The truth is that I don't care for them at all
No, I do not love testing room,
In my time there is no room,
But I still want Aperture to be
We must escape before it's too late
Find a way to save the day,
Hope, I'll be lying if I say,
I will fear that I may lose Aperture to one who wants to abuse the facility
for testing I love and cherish each day,
For I love the testing
Eternal Night - PrologueThere are moments in a person's life when they know that things are going to change forever. They feel it deep in their very bones that the lives they once knew will be gone forever. What awaits them afterwards, few can say. But what they do know is that they have no choice but to face it.Eternal Night - Prologue1 year ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
On this night. This cold dark night, one such moment now faces two very important ponies. They stand facing each other in the crumbling ruins of an old castle. One, a shining princess of the sun, face filled with a determination to do what she knows is the right thing. But mixed in with that determination is a sadness, a regret that this thing she must do is necessary. Princess Celestia. Co-ruler of Equestria. Mare of the sun and protector of all the earth ponies, unicorns and pegasi of the land.
The other, one she once called sister. A dark mare, clad in azure armour. Her hair flowing and looking like the night sky above them. Her eryes filled with an anger and pain that only Celestia could understa
HeirHeir2 years ago in Urban & Spoken Word More Like This
You want a cube?
Of Sugar I mean.
Lovely loaves of bread versus . . . me?
Throw out the Peeta and give me a whirl.
Finnick is better than both Peeta and Gale.
Feel my abs, do they astound you?
You fight the power, but let me in!
I promise I won't cost you another mortal sin.
I'm Finnick Odair: hottest enemy.
But let's be honest, you can't resist putting your hands on me.
I grew up with water, you're the girl with flames.
We belong together on a Trojan ad, dame.
Don't gasp at that, you're not that innocent!
I saw you in that cave oh so indecent.
Find another cave with me and I'll show you MY "rent".
We'll rule the games together!
Everdeen and Odair.
Maybe if you're lucky . . We'll even conjure up an heir!!
Abandoned Rue [a hunger games poem]The boom of the canonAbandoned Rue [a hunger games poem]2 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
Another tribute dead
The blood and screams
To kill is what I dread
I was stupid and selfish
I left her all alone
Facing stronger tributes
The future was unknown
The worst decision made
Was to abandon her
I keep thinking of Rue
And what happened after
Her fragile body
Entwined in a net
Pierced with a spear
Her screams, I can't forget
She fell to her knees
The blood on her torso
The beauty in her eyes
Yet filled with sorrow
WinnersWinners2 years ago in Concrete Poetry More Like This
You gave me bread on a rainy day
Such goodness took my breath away.
You told the world how you felt.
Through shallow confusion my heart melt.
We grew close and drifted apart.
I still love you with all my heart.
I found you hurt and to a cave we fled.
I could only kiss your lips but I watched as you bled.
I had to go to save your life.
I broke a promise that ended your strife.
You found some berries and ended a life.
We heard a cannon; a dog was near.
We ran for the Cornucopia and fled our fear.
Climbing the metal, making it safe.
Cato appeared but I had faith.
He grabbed you up, said it was over.
I had more luck than a four-leaf clover.
He fell to the dogs and they chewed him up.
The Capitol said, "YO MAN, WASSUP?"
"Only one victor can win in the end!"
I told him I wouldn't go without him.
So we grabbed our berries, sorry Prim.
The Capitol wailed, "NO STOP!"
"The winners are Katniss Everdeen and Peeta Mellark!"
Time Traveling Kids of the Mane Six! Ch. 4Time Traveling Kids of the Mane Six! Ch. 42 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
CHAPTER 4: High Fliers
Orion and Bucky looked up into the deep blue sky in amazement as the last ripples of the rainbow shockwave slowly dissolved high above them, their vivid hues shimmering in a dazzling spectrum before their very eyes. Though both colts had grown up knowing very well what a sonic rainboom was, their familiarity with the great spectacle still never ceased to amaze them. Before the last waves of light finally faded into the azure atmosphere, one more echo of powerful thunder roared around them, as if announcing its departure. Even after the sky returned to normal, the two colts continued to stare upward with a sense of intrigued wonder.
"Was…that," Orion stammered, still in shock, "a sonic rainboom?"
"Yeah, but it was huge! Ah've never seen a one that powerful before!"
Looking at each other with wide grins, they raced past Rainbow Dash’s home and towards the far away woods to see what was happening. Though the phenomenon was nothing new to the ci
My Little Pony Character Profile: GrogarMy Little Pony Character Profile: Grogar7 months ago in Profiles More Like This
The Main Antagonist of "MLP: The Miracle of Friendship"
Titles: The Emperor of Tambelon Island / Successor of Tirek / Second-in-Command to Tirek's army (former)
Age: Over 4,000 years old
Species: Goat/Ram (Formerly unicorn)
Height: Larger than most ponies
Alignment: Pure Evil
Current Status: Vanquished
Allies: Army of over one-hundred goats; General Shimmering Shield (Former Captain of the Canterlot Royal Guard / Shining Armor's former mentor); Zeb (Former witch doctor of the Zebra tribes) / Crunch (Giant black stone guard dog); Bray (meddling donkey servant).
Enemies Courageous Heart, Twilight Sparkle, Fluttershy, Applejack, Rarity, Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, Spike, ect. / Hates nearly every creature in the world except his own kind.
Description: Dark blue coat, dark red eyes, wears a bell around his neck which helps channel his powers, indestructible horns, wea
Eternal Night - Chapter OneAs warm air blew, she approached the platform her subjects had prepared for her. The dark night was glorious to her, as it had always been. She watched with pride as the ponies of the city gathered in their hundreds to watch her perform the ceremony, as she had done for a thousand years now.Eternal Night - Chapter One1 year ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
Princess Luna. Or, as she had been known for the last thousand years, the Queen of the Moon. Her magnificent blue mane flowed behind her as she was clad in her usual armour. She was an imposing sight, yet one the ponies of Equestria had come to respect.
Much had changed since that day all those centuries ago, and all of it had been her doing. To commemorate her victory over her sister, she had commissioned the construction of a new city for unicorns, Pegasi and earth ponies alike. Canterlot, now the capital of the land was the jewel in her crown, and a proud achievement for the ponies. It's spires and palaces of black obsidian were beautiful to behold in the glistening moonlight.
But there was no m
Logic's Insight: Twilight IntroductionLogic's Insight: Twilight Introduction2 years ago in Reviews & Guides More Like This
Anyone ever met someone who they had a bad feeling about from the start? Maybe they didn't put themselves out in the open as often, seemed like nice people and looked legitimately trustworthy. Even then, they just seemed like someone you could have a good time with. But you had a bad feeling about this person that only grew the more you hung out with them. Eventually you see them for the manipulative jerk that they really are and see signs that they'll cause trouble. But you look around to see that many of your friends don't see what you see until...the person does something.
That would be the best way to sum up the Twilight Saga. While at first glance, it appears to be a teenage love story about a girl who falls in love with a vampire despite the obvious danger. Good or bad, the premise isn't terrible in itself, in short, it's a nice set up for a decent read. Unfortunately, Twilight is much...much...worse...
There is a three word phrase that I can use to sum up my feelings for this se
What We AreI'm fucked upWhat We Are2 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
You're fucked up
We're all fucked up
but that's okay
We are who we want to be
an everlasting war with society
Hanging by the noose
of poverty and misconception
laughing out suicide
our undead dreams
can never really die
Welcome to our lives
where self medication helps you smile
and forgotten sodomy
Filled in a cyonide world
a sick concoction
of synthetic drugs and
Crying out blasphemy
making truth out of propaganda
take the blade that raped your brother
and the pills that killed your lover
An inspiration made from sin
pain and mistakes
a passion in finding
more than just sorrows
out of these lost souls
Inosense lost as children
just wanting it back
a hopeless wish
made as delinquents
All we are
is what we've become
and losing drug addicts
shot down artists
and starving loners
We're whithered and unseen
but we keep on living
in this war with society
Twihate- A Hateful Twilight listReasons to hate twilight-Twihate- A Hateful Twilight list2 years ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
1. Bella has no personality. No tripping over your shoelaces, the garden fence, your truck, your hair (WTF?!) and your toothbrush don't contribute to personality.
2. There's zilch description about Bella
3. Bella is the perfect little unique snowflake that's different from everyone, thinks she's plain ( though every other boy is in love with her by the 2nd chapter) and therefore is super modest.
4. There's a town full of guys madly after her and she chooses between the two unnatural, fantasy creatures who go sprinting through the jungle , sparkling their asses off. If that ain't disturbing
5. Bella is portrayed as super clumsy. This shows also that she's super dependent on Eddikins and Jacobie
6. Vampires sparkle in the sun. NO, they should go boom!
7. Bella falls in love with Edward solely based on his appearance. WTF?!
8. Edward is 100 years old and he falls in love with a 17 year old and apparently, that's okay.
9. Edward is shockingly immature f
Logic's Insight: Twilight Part 3Reason #3 for hating Twilight, the story and loreLogic's Insight: Twilight Part 32 years ago in Articles & Interviews More Like This
At this point, I'm pretty much beating a dead horse. We don't protagonists that we actually care about, We have a mismatched relationship that we don't care about and it has a dynamic that is completely removed from common sense, so there's really no reason to keep going right?
But what about everyone else?
Ha! My friend, it really doesn't matter what's going on with everyone else because none of it is ever going to inconvenience the nice little love affair that's going on. Mainly because the main characters never care about what's happening around them, the surrounding events of a vampire-werewolf war never complicates matters for Bella's upcoming wedding...hell! The two clans even put up a truce just to keep Bella alive! Nobody even questions what makes this human woman so special.
Jacob loves her. So what? She doesn't really love him! Why should t
100 Things To Smile About100 Things To Smile About100 Things To Smile About6 years ago in Philosophical More Like This
2. Moments in scary movies that make you jump then laugh at yourself for screaming like a girl
3. hot cookies while the center is still gooey
4. catching that perfect shot with the camera
5. laughing until your cheeks hurt
6. the person or thing that makes you laugh like that
7. catching green lights
8. laying with a friend on the hood of your car
9. blasting loud music while beating your friend in a car race while never going over the speed limit
10. warm long showers in the morning
11. seeing somone you love after a long time apart
12. curly hair
13. a book that you still love no matter how many times you read it
14. having your ipod turned low so you can still hear even when people think you can't
15. frozen coffee with chocolate in it
16. being in love
17. knowing the person you love loves you
18. rolling your windows down and driving fast
19. cereal for dinner
20. singing to a baby and having it smile up and stare at you
Eclipse- the summary of a painfully bad SagaEclipse- Book Three...maybe.Eclipse- the summary of a painfully bad Saga2 years ago in Articles & Interviews More Like This
So, continuing the story after New Moon, we see Bella happily wedged in a ferocious love triangle between a dog (which is what Jacob the Werewolf is, essentially) and a Vampire who sparkles more than Tinker bell.
But shockingly, the love triangle isn't the ONLY thing going on here. I mean, sure, that's the focus for 90% of the book, but a whole 10% is reserved for a fight scene!
Whatttt?! Maybe SM realized that sweet nothings got boring when you were just a peeping tom, looking into a love triangle in a non-existent world... a love triangle and nothing else.
Anyways, this book is even foggier in my memory than the last one was. I think they become progressively foggier as the so called saga continues.
So here's what I remember of it
Remember Evil Vampire 1? The poor sap who tried to suck Bella dry when Edward Sparklepants refused? The one who was torn apart and burnt?
Yeah, turns out he has a girlfriend- Enter Evil vamp 2... Well, she'd entered the game in
NamesNames are not found in dictionaries,Names2 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
Names don't tell of one's status, ability, or personality.
Each name is unique.
No matter how common it is.
For although others may share your name.
Share it right down to the last letter,
There never has been, and never will be,
another you again.
And that fact is what makes you, you.
The Ego Of A BronyThe Ego Of A Brony2 years ago in Songs & Lyrics More Like This
Now excuse me ladies and gentlemen,
I got something to say, you're all here and I aint listening,
I think outta the box, what can I say,
That's the reason I called you here, was it a surprise?
I've accepted myself but should that mean I should die?
The haters are crying because one more is lying, to the world, to themselves,
But I'm happy here, if been happy makes me burn in hell then let it,
When it comes to the neighbourhood we bronies all say, love and tolerance bitches,
Ya'll got no right to hate,
So I like ponies what about that makes you wanna hate?
Hen ya'll turn your backs I'll pack up my bags and move to the place,
Where ponies and bronies are welcome,
The sun shines all day,
Nothing ever goes wrong,
With Luna and Celestia,
I'm moving to Equestria!
I'd rather fly high with Rainbow or Fluttershy!
But hold up a minute I aint derping around,
I'll be derping it up when Trixie comes to town!
So gimmie a minute I'll tell you a little tail,
It's the story of a
The Force of Dreams, Chapter 1The Force of Dreams, Chapter 12 years ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
Sunlight had started to pierce through the windows of the library, slowly banishing away the darkness which had gripped it for the past few hours. Twilight sat at her table, flipping close the last page of the red book which sat in front of her. Her mane and tail were both unkempt and had quite a few strands sticking out, signifying how long she had stayed up.
Her library was once again in a complete mess. Papers, books and every single kind of material she could get her hooves on lay scattered across the wooden floor of her living room. Empty cups of cocoa were stacked to her left while a wax stump of what used to be a candle sat to her right, having burnt out hours ago.
"That's it. That's the last book," Twilight grumbled before slamming her face onto the book in front of her. "None of my books hold the answer to the two riddles," she said in a frustrated tone.
"Of all the weeks Spike had to be in Canterlot, why did it have to be this week?" Twilight continued to complain before slow
Grow Up KidI feel alone lately,Grow Up Kid2 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
lost and hurt.
I try to tell my friends,
but they turn it into a contest.
Who's life is worse?
I get it
there are other people out there
who have it worse then me.
Yet venting isn't self centered.
Or I don't think it is.
I want to go back,
to when I was 5.
When I didn't know,
what this kind of hurt is.
When I didn't lay awake in bed,
lost and confused.
But you gotta grow up kid,
two more years,
then you're on your own.
Grow up kid,
because everyone is blaming this on hormones.