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Vacation in the Crystal EmpireVacation in the Crystal Empire6 months ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
A/N I was actually trying to write more of Everypony Loves and watching the premiere episode of the third season when I came up with this. I only have one more chapter planned, TWO max. Unless this is really well received and after the ending people really want more I might consider it unless I can't think of a coherent way to continue it. Anyway, I hope you all enjoy it. I Loooove comments so let me know what you think. Also I'm sorry that Pinkie Pie's part wasn't as good, I'm not very good at writing for her, but I'm trying to improve! (yay)
Vacation in the Crystal Empire.
Chapter
MLP:ViM Chapter 3: Meeting TwilightMISSY: Wow! I've never been to-MLP:ViM Chapter 3: Meeting Twilight3 months ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
TIMBERWOLVES:GRRRRRRRRRRR!
PETE: What smells like shit?
MAC: LANGUAGE!!!
LEO: I got this!
(Leo then casts a fire spell and swings his sword. The Timberwolves fall & break. Pete barfs on them)
MISSY: RUNNNN!
(Meanwhile)
SPIKE: Hey, Twi? Did you hear that?
TWILIGHT: Hear what?
SPIKE: Must be me. I'm still going to check it out.
TWILIGHT: Sure.
(Spike then ran outside and Pete ran over him)
PETE: Sorry little guy.
(Twilight then runsoutside)
TWILIGHT: SPIKE! What di- wait. Who are you. I've never seen your kind before?
(20 minutes later)
LEO: Soooo, are there any more ponies like you?
TWILIGHT: Well, there are so
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Could she say that she was once a great and powerful magician? Maybe, but then who would believe her? Twilight had shown her just how wrong her ways were, and all of Equestria was quick to remind her of that. And if she claimed to have changed, nopony would take it seriously anyway. The cruel irony of a pony who had been reformed. A lack of belonging to one side, or the other. Maybe that wasn't so bad after all...
"Ohh, the sorrowful and drenched Trixie does not feel happy at all." That was what it had come to. She was sitting under a tree, in the heavy rain of night. All she had was her hat and cloak, only barely keeping her warm given how
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Rediscovery (Rebirth of the Empire)Rediscovery (Rebirth of the Empire)6 months ago in Songs & Lyrics More Like This
The Crystal Empire Trilogy
– Ponies with Stratovarius [Click here for the accompanying song] Rediscovery (Rebirth of the Empire)
a) Ghost
Where did the world once disappear
When we were praying for freedom
The light was blinding my eyes,
Then darkness came;
Was that the end…?
What waited were the graying walls
Lifeless city and kingdom
Is this the worth of my existence
Has nothing changed?
Am I alive and trapped in the death
Or dead and lost my afterlife
Was I ever anything else
Than these crippling chains around my neck
They say time had forgotten our life
Yet the scars are still fresh in my heart
Can't I just leave it b
Pillow Thoughts II - Chapter 3 --AppleDash--Pillow Thoughts II - Chapter 3 --AppleDash--1 year ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
Pillow Thoughts II
Chapter 3
Can't we just stay put?
Rainbow froze, looking at the Princess, knowing that she had to move.
Applejack snapped her out of it: "Dash, go get Twilight! Go!!"
The pegasus shook her head violently and soared into the air. She heard the pony crowd gasping; that meant the masked alicorn started attacking again. Rainbow could feel the tension in her wings as she desperately tried to gain speed. Finally she saw the library in the distance and was forced to slow down, to make sure she didn't crash into it.
Luckily for her, a window was open. She landed in the treehouse, shouting after the purple unicorn: "Twilight!!
Princess of My HeartPrincess of My Heart2 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
Twilight Sparkle
Look at her, isn't she beautiful?
The lilac coat and flowing mane, I think she's a godess!
Did I mention I like her mane?
Magic, schmagic, who needs magic when she has the looks!
You may disagree my friend, but as the saying goes,
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder, and my eyes like what they see.
I'll admit it right now, I'm in love with her,truly, madly, deeply.
What? That's crazy, or so you say. Whatever, love and tolerance.
I love her mane, I love her eyes, her hooves, her face, oh my!
I love everything about her, down to the smallest molecule.
There's heaps of things that I could say, but I just don't have the time o
Eternal Night - Chapter Three"But your majesty, I must insist that you take an escort with you." Shining Armour said.Eternal Night - Chapter Three4 months ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
He was following Luna down the marble hallways of the Canterlot palace, towards a large wooden door. The door magically opened as the Queen approached, leading them both outside. The air was cool and there were many stars tonight, all surrounding a crescent moon. The door had led them to the balcony of the castle's tallest tower, which Luna often used for private flights out of the city.
"I appreciate you concern Captain, but this is a personal matter I must attend to myself. I require nor desire anypony following me right now." She replied.
Shining st
My words on the MLP FIM FandonI wish to share with you all my thoughts on this fandom and all it has done over the past 2 years. I'll begin by answering the most generic question we are all faced with. Many have asked 'what is it about this little girl's show that appeals to these mature men and women?'My words on the MLP FIM Fandon1 year ago in Emotional More Like This
What they fail to see is that it doesn't appeal to grown men and women. It doesn't appeal to the part of us that deals with our everyday decisions. It appeals to a part of us many believe to be a long lost and cherished time.
'Childhood is short and maturity is forever'. Truer words have never been spoken. As we have all grown from a small, insignificant toddlers to the
Fourteen Lines And One TruthFOURTEEN LINES AND ONE TRUTHFourteen Lines And One Truth7 months ago in Traditional Fixed Forms More Like This
If one more than any other
Is she whom you would please
If a certain lady's glance
Is more bracing than a breeze
If there is one whose esteem
Is more precious than bright gems
If a disappointed look from her
Is all that's needed to condemn
Some deny that such a one
Could embody perfect love
Or that she, right before them
Could be the one which I speak of
If there is one in whose eyes you would meet the test
Why would you title any other as "she who is the best?"
Defend CanterlotDefend Canterlot8 months ago in Songs & Lyrics More Like This
Celestia:
Guards, Capture Canterlot
Help me Defend, By Capping Canterlot
Cannot burn me, Defending Canterlot
This is not campground, this is CANTERLOT!!!!
Go back to Everfree Forest, This is my Castle
Go back to the moon, This is my castle
Go back to your mine, YOU ARE NOT GETTING MY GEMS!
You are an colt in a dress
Repeat
Guards:
This is Celstia's Castle, help me cap this castle.
x2
We beat the changlings
Then we beat the diamond dogs
Then we beat them all down
Then he killed them that's good, amen
Celestia:
It's Tea Time, Help me protect my castle
x2
Guards:
WE KILL YOU (With BARE HOOVES)
x3
Changling:
BULLET PROOOOO
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– Ponies with Tarja Turunen [Click here for the accompanying song] Where We Once Cantered
I'm watching the timeline
The tokens left of those days
There once was a time when
I still resembled myself
In those pictures
Younger me once sew
The blanket on which
Older me now sleeps
Drifts in the past
Where we once cantered
We had no fears, we had no cares
There we once cantered
When we were young, me and my friends
I've lived a full life
I've reaped and sown my own share
Cradle of children
Harvest born of first seeds
I remember how I saw them bloom
Grow full of life
And how they faded away
Left in the fields
Where we once
Ninja Apple BloomNinja Apple Bloom6 months ago in Short Stories More Like This
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The day was dreary and dark. The landscape devoid of lush life, replaced with jagged rock and twisted trees, branches like arms outstretched. The calm bluish-grey day hidden behind a veil of dark grey and thunder, yet neigh a drop of rain fell from the sky.
The lone figure of a pony hid behind one of the many trees, her face mostly hidden behind the black fabric of her outfit. Her orange eyes darting around. She was focused, dete
The Complete Analysis of Mare-Do-WellThe Complete Analysis of Mare-Do-Well7 months ago in Profiles More Like This
BASICS
She is the masked superhero Alicorn, or Winged Unicorn, of Equestria who originates from Ponyville, using a cape and wide-brim hat to hide her wings and horn.
Her uniform was designed by Rarity, which was originally used to teach Rainbow Dash a lesson in humility and grace. She is best known for the powers used by her four secret identities: Twilight Sparkle’s Magic, Applejack’s Athleticism, Fluttershy’s Wing Power, and Pinkie Pie’s Pinkie Sense. Because Rarity was only the designer of the uniform, not an actual wearer, her powers will not be taken into account.
Because Mare-Do-Well’s powers originate fro
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They say that time heals all wounds. But that's not true. Sometimes, time only causes the wound to fester—to become infected and burn with the fire of loss.
I have told this story at least a hundred times. And every time is like opening the wound afresh and squeezing a lemon into it. So now, I write it down on paper so that those who wish to hear the tale may read of it. For I will never tell this story again.
It was the year 1903, and Dust roared across the vast farm fields of Missouri. In those days, I was the head of a small family owned farm in a rural community. The summer had been hot and dry and a particularly severe drought had
Super Speedy Cider Squeezy 6000 entirely in rhymeWe begin with Flutters asleep in her bed,Super Speedy Cider Squeezy 6000 entirely in rhyme5 months ago in Traditional Fixed Forms More Like This
Rainbow wakes her up, full of much dread.
Flutters, quite groggy, asks Rainbow why,
And we find out the reason is one Pinkie Pie.
She binges on cider before RD gets her share,
But they soon discover Pinkie has beat them there.
The line of tents stretch as far as she sees,
And RD's want for cider this does not appease.
The next morning the ponies all stand in a line,
Waiting their turns to grab their own stein.
Flutters gets her cider, but it was the last drop,
Just before Rainbow the supply does stop.
The ponies are unhappy they now must abstain,
They begin to grumble and loudly complain.
Luna's Sandwich "Tiiiiiiiiiiiiiaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!" Luna yelled as she ran up the spiral staircase to the room she shared with her older sister Celestia.Luna's Sandwich4 months ago in Short Stories More Like This
“What is it Luna?” Came a call from the landing just above the young alicorn.
“Tia I’m huuuuuunnnnnnnnnngrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyy!!!! Can you make me something to eat?” She reached the top landing and made her way into the room where she found Celestia sitting at a table, an open book floating just a few inches away from her face.
“Why don’t you make yourself a sandwich?” Celestia said without looking up from her book.
“I can’t, you know m
spinningthe world is spinning,spinning7 months ago in Flash Fiction & Vignettes More Like This
the sun keeps coming up and going down,
and I am here.
a world full of people tilting lances at imaginary windmills,
imbuing them with character and conditions
rushing at them headlong
only to find themselves running through mist
and nothing more.
people we thought we knew,
pursuits we thought were valuable,
lives we thought worth living.
all imagined
and forced with the singularity
that is our personality
which, like a movie projector
plays out our innermost thoughts
on everyone around us.
everyone's movies, so different, so personal
so
mental.
the sun is up
the world spins
I am on it
what will I
Spider-Mare Theme SongSpider-Mare Theme Song11 months ago in Songs & Lyrics More Like This
Spider-Mare, Spider-Mare,
Zips around with speed and flair.
Spins a web, any size,
Catches Changelings just like flies.
LOOK OUT!
Here comes the Spider-Mare.
Is she strong? Listen bud,
She's got rainbow-powered blood.
When there's trouble, never dread,
Just take a look overhead.
Hey there!
There goes the Spider-Mare.
In the chill of the night,
When trouble's at its prime,
Like a streak of light,
She arrives just in time!
Spider-Mare, Spider-Mare,
Friendly neighborhood Spider-Mare.
With wealth and fame, she gets bored,
Action is her reward.
To her, life is a great big bang up,
Whenever there's a hang up,
You'll find the S
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Surely this sight is that made of lies.
Please fair mare, do not sit there and cry;
briefly climb into my arms and allow thy tears to dry!
Eternal Night - Chapter OneAs warm air blew, she approached the platform her subjects had prepared for her. The dark night was glorious to her, as it had always been. She watched with pride as the ponies of the city gathered in their hundreds to watch her perform the ceremony, as she had done for a thousand years now.Eternal Night - Chapter One4 months ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
Princess Luna. Or, as she had been known for the last thousand years, the Queen of the Moon. Her magnificent blue mane flowed behind her as she was clad in her usual armour. She was an imposing sight, yet one the ponies of Equestria had come to respect.
Much had changed since that day all those centuries ago, and all of it had been her doing. To commemo
Sweet and Elite told entirely in rhymeIn Canterlot our episode does begin,Sweet and Elite told entirely in rhyme5 months ago in Traditional Fixed Forms More Like This
With Rarity choosing to do better than an inn.
To stay the in castle the princess kindly offers,
It's not like it'll be a large dent in her coffers.
Rarity thanks her and goes into the town,
And gets an idea to make Twilight a gown.
She then meets Jet Set and his wife Upper Crust,
But when they find where she's from they leave in disgust.
Rarity can't forget what the pair of them thought,
So she creates something worthy of Canterlot!
She draws up her plans and heads out for supplies,
Before bumping into another, much to her surprise.
She's run into Fancypants and his wife, Fleur De Lis,
And sh
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