Time Traveling Kids of the Mane Six! Ch. 11Time Traveling Kids of the Mane Six! Ch. 113 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
CHAPTER 11: Shelter (First draft. Final version in the works)
The sun continued to rise slowly in the morning chill and the frigid draft of the wind blew through the apple trees of the Apple family. The rumble of thunder echoed in the distance while it whistled around Radiance, making her want to curl into a tight ball. She couldn't hear anything, open her eyes, or move more than a little, but she could feel the bitterness of the breeze down to her bones. Her body shivered and her mind could not think of anything but the cold, as if ice had frozen her in place. Slowly, her senses began to return, and only when the crackle of a small fire could be heard and felt did she relax. Her heavy eyes opened narrowly, watching the blurred movements of the amber sparks in front of her. Their dim glowing air patterns danced before her before rising up into the air and disappearing in the small plume of grey smoke. A figure poked at the smoldering wood, keeping it alive and preventing the w
Brony Advice: Your Questions Answered #82, 83, 84!Brony Advice: Your Questions Answered #82, 83, 84!3 years ago in Editorial More Like This
#82) How long do you think "Friendship is Magic" will last for? What is a good amount of seasons? Honestly, I want it to go on until at least Season 8.
Answer: Season 8 is a stretch. This is really a two-part question. The first part is about how long I realistically think that the show will last, based on speculation and circumstantial evidence. The second is about how long I personally believe the show should last, which is a different matter altogether.
To engage with the first part, we know that the show at least has in front of it another 13 episodes. After that, more might be made, or the show may maintain its success based on repeats. I can't predict when the show will end exactly, but it's pretty much a given that when Hasbro update the toy-line again, the show will be replaced. It's impossible to talk about "Friendship is Magic" without discussing it directly in parallel to the toys, as they both run off of each other and help to sustain one another. There
Pony and the Beast part 1Pony and the Beast part 14 years ago in Romance More Like This
Fluttershy looked into the forest by her new farm home, it was dirty and cramped, her Father's bankruptcy had forced her family here. All that they had to their name was a few books and a necklace, the necklace was the only thing left from their mother. Fluttershy's two sisters complained and whined everyday, they missed being ladies of leisure not women of farm work, the eldest out of the three girls was a white unicorn with grace and beauty except she did not know of kindness and generosity, her name was Rarity, the middle child was a blue pegasus with multi coloured hair, she only cared about money and material items and her name was Rainbow Dash, the youngest child was a yellow pegasus, she was quiet and shy, she was the sweetest and prettiest girl out of the three, she truly did not mind working the farm and looking after her father. Even though the three of them were poor, men came from miles around to ask Fluttershy to marry them, every time she would say no and expla
Moonlight Terror Chapter 1: A Slice of LifeMoonlight Terror Chapter 1: A Slice of Life3 years ago in Horror More Like This
Gorgeous hues of red and orange bled into deep violet as the sun set on the horizon. All across Equestria, ponies would be winding down, some enjoying the sight with their special somepony. Luna however paid no mind to the view, instead engrossing herself into her study. If it wasn’t for the final reading light fading from the sky, she might never have noticed it was time for her to raise the moon. Catching up on one thousand years of history and culture didn’t happen overnight, and at this rate Luna thought it might take another one thousand years.
Luna looked down at the infuriatingly fine print, squinting to try and discern any of the letters. But it was no use; she tossed a loose sheet of parchment in the pages to track her place. She walked over to the balcony, telekinetically opening the doors and sidestepping around her telescope. Taking hold of the energy of the moon as she must have done at least a thousand times since she returned to the castle, she focused
Joining the Herd: Rainbow DashJoining the Herd: Rainbow Dash3 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
For a week, Apple Jack has been hanging out with the gang. But the 5 friends noticed something, ever since Apple Jack came, it was like Allen just disappeared, worst off, it was like he never existed. They asked everyone where Allen was, and people would look at them confused, even Allen's own family claimed that they never had a son named Allen. The five were getting the suspicion that Apple Jack was actually Allen, but they couldn't prove it. But right now all that Richard could think about was the race that was coming up. For a week he was training to for it, to show off that he truly was the best athlete in his town, and now the time has come.
Princess Celestia looked through her magic portal, it has been a week now and she was at full power again, now she had to find her next target. As she was looking for the friend to change next, she saw Richard on a race track, stretching, it looked like he was about to ra
New Discoveries - Epilogue Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo sat in the lower section of the Carousel Boutique, waiting for Rarity to come back. While they waited, they sat at the kitchen table. Sweetie Belle was looking down at the table, her thoughts racing through her mind about what her sister was going to say. Scootaloo sat across from her, a worried look on her face as she watched her unicorn friend looking worried and doubtful.New Discoveries - Epilogue3 years ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
"Don't worry about it, Sweetie Belle," the Pegasus filly said with a smile, "Everything will be alright, you'll see."
"How can you be so sure?" asked Sweetie Belle, "How do you know she's going to approve of us being together?"
"I just know," she answered, her reassuring smile on her face, "You need to calm down and stop worrying so much!"
"I'll try," she replied, letting out a small sigh of worry.
Joining the Herd: FluttershyJoining the Herd: Fluttershy3 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
It has been a week since Tom has turned into Twilight Sparkle, and the three friends have been scared. They were wondering which one will be next, who will lose their memories, and who will be last. To help relieve the stress, Fredrick decided to take care of the animals, it always helped him to calm down.
Luna was walking through the halls to go into Celestia's room, to change the next person, but as she went to the white alicorns door, she heard her sister talking to Canterlot's captain of the guard, Shining Armor.
"But Princess Celestia to make copies of them it will take a huge amount of magic, and even then there is almost no chance of success,"
"I am aware of that Shining Armor, but we must try, for the good of Earth,"
"I understand Princess Celestia,"
"That's good to hear, you can go back to your duties,"
Shining Armor opened the door and almost bumped into the black alicorn.
"My apologize Princess Luna,"
Luna told Shining Armor that it was okay and went in
SurvivedI remember the day I was hit by the car. It was a cold morning. The rain fell that day, so heavy that it kicked up a thick mist over the area, letting one see no further than two of his own arm spans. I remember that day vividly. Here I was, foolish and unafraid, braving one of the worst monsoon rains on a bicycle just to get to school. Time was short, and the traffic light ahead of me was turning red.Survived4 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
In blind, oh-so foolish faith I charged right across the road, hoping that someone would spot my light green uniform through the mist and stop before I was hit.
Keyword there being 'hoped'. I was there, making a mad dash across a road who's other side was invisible to me from the mist that was stirred up by the rain. Fighting against the sweeping chills of the wind in the already-frigid rain, I paddled on, squinting my eyes as the winds swept the rain into my face as well, stinging painfully. I paddled as hard as I could, a smile creeping on my face as I saw the other end of the
Dear Spike!Dear Spike,Dear Spike!2 years ago in General Fiction More Like This
Hello, Spikey! It’s me, Pinkie Pie! Guess what? I’m writing you a letter! But it’s not just any letter! Wanna know why I’m writing this letter? Huh? Do ya? Well, read on and find out!
Well, all of us had this really crazy idea. You see, we all had thought of you earlier today when we were all talking and having snacks at Sugarcube Corner. And amongst the cupcakes and the chuckles, we got this idea of sending you letters! But not just normal letters! Oh, no! These letters are special! They’re special because we wanted to write them to you to say thanks! Wanna know why we want to say thanks? Because you are such a hardworking, little dragon! We never get to say thank you enough to you and your purple and green self!
Just think about all the stuffs you’ve done for us! You always are working hard for Twilight, you run errands for any and everypony, and how could anypony forget when you helped save the Crystal Empire? That was, like, super dup
Joining the Herd: Apple JackJoining the Herd: Apple Jack3 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
Allen was on his farm, picking apples and putting them in baskets. His family has been in the apple business for 5 generations, and they were planning to stay in the business for many more generations to com. Now even though Allen was the hardest worker on the farm, his big brother was to get it when their father dies.
As Allen was picking apples he felt a slight shiver come over him, it stopped and Allen looked confused, why did he get a sudden shiver? He shrugged his shoulders and continued to work.
As he climbed down the ladder, his blonde hair grew till it reached the bottom of his neck, and tied itself into a ponytail near the bottom. Allen didn't know why, but he liked his hair long, maybe it was because it made him feel freer in the world, he didn't know, but he didn't care.
Allen picked up the basket of apples and a long blonde horse tail grew from his spine, and tied itself in a pony tail near the bottom. Allen loved the t
Chase Your DreamsChase your dreams.Chase Your Dreams3 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
No matter how foolish,
Or insane they seem...
Chase your dreams.
Never stop running.
Don't let anything
Impede your progress.
Are your eternal goals.
No matter the obstacles,
No matter what happens...
Your dreams are eternal.
Continue the chase,
Never again will you be lonely.
Never again will you suffer.
You may lose your glitter,
But you will never
Lose your sparkle.
Always chase your dreams,
Because no matter what they seem...
If you live your dreams,
Never again will you be lonely.
Applejack's Dress"Applebloom! Get down here," Applejack screamed as she saw the tattered remains of her Gala gown.Applejack's Dress4 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
The young filly slowly made her way down the stairs and was cowering with every step. She had never seen her sister this angry before, and she was terrified.
"What were you thinking? Ya ruined mah dress. Rarity's gonna kill me." Applejack turned her gaze to her baby sister and was stunned to see the filly cowering at the foot of the stairs crying. She suddenly felt disgusted with herself, "Applebloom. C'mere."
The filly just stood there shaking like a leaf, "I'm sorry sis." She could not bring herself to get close to her sister.
"Ah'm sorry, sugarcube. I shouldn' have yelled at ya like that." Applejack walked to her sister and gently hugged the filly.
Applebloom continued to cry, "Scootaloo wanted to practice on a dress, an' ah thought ya wouldn't care if we used it." She looked up to her sister, "Ah'm really sorry. Ah'll take it to Rarity and tell her what happened."
"Don' ya'll worry bou
Airshipping Is MagicThe morning air was crisp and cool with barely a breeze blowing. The sky was crystal blue, and the rays of the sun played lazily across the green countryside. It was the perfect day, thought Twilight Blimple, for a flight.Airshipping Is Magic4 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
The little purple sparkly blimp slowly rose into the air, enjoying the wind as it played across her surface. Her propellers spun into life as she turned in a westerly direction, the fluted spire that jutted out from her control deck pointing the way.
Twilight wasn't a big blimp. Her gasbag was large but stubby, her fins small and protruding, and her purple gondola cabin was slung almost apologetically underneath. Growing up as a little balloon in the big city she had always been jealous of the other airships, who always seemed to be more graceful than she. But soon study had paid off.
Today, she was on an important mission. Today she had to ferry vital medical aid across Airquestria. A hailstorm had hit the town of Hull, and puncture repair kits were urgently needed.
Wizards in Training (Request)(WARNING: This story contains descriptions of a man turning into a woman. If this puts you off, feel free to pass this up.)Wizards in Training (Request)1 year ago in Short Stories More Like This
The Pogona Institution for the Magically Inclined; call it your real-world Hogwarts equivalent if you will. This was a prestigious college, located in far off in the Canadian wilderness, surrounded by lush forests and mirror-like lakes, beyond which the snow-covered mountains rise to dominate the skyline. The college itself was not unlike your modern campus grounds, only it featured more of an elegant decor than most other public educational establishments. Despite the absolutely beautiful view, this school was particularly private, and only those who prove themselves to be truly capable of wielding arcane forces are allowed to enter. This process is full of all sorts of challenges and troubles, but some people manage to make it in by the skin of their neck. Two such people are new students Aaron and Bennett, who had just enrolled a week ago.
MLP: Eyes and Hourglasses, Chapter IIMLP: Eyes and Hourglasses, Chapter II3 years ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
MY LITTLE PONY: EYES AND HOURGLASSES
Chapter II: "The Welcome Wagon Comes to Town"
Written by Diane N. Tran
For the first time in her mail-mare career, the pegasus named Derpy Hooves was late in a delivery. That delivery consisted of one single, solitary letter to be dropped off at the very last residence of her rounds, Ponyville's Old Clock Tower. When she arrived at the building, she was, of course, as punctual as ever, but the mail-box was still missing from the lawn and she didn't have the courage to knock on the door again.
Dressed in her saddlebags, pacing back and forth, she was at a loss of what to do at the moment, so she paced some more. If she left it on the doorstep, the wind could blow it away. If she slipped it underneath the doormat, it might not be seen. Then a thought came to her, perhaps she could squeeze the letter between the cracks of the door.
Placing the letter between he
The Lost Journal The Lost JournalThe Lost Journal5 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
I laid curled up on my bed reading a book Father had given me from his ventures out of the cave. The book I was reading was "Lord of the Rings". It was written by a human called JRR Tolkien. I love reading human literature and I would love to one day venture into the towns and cities and see what other literature I could find from the remains of the humans that used to live here.
My name is Ash, I'm a sixteen year old bipedal dragon. I'm about six foot tall, my scales are sky blue as are my wings. I also look like every other dragon, with me having two white horns protruding from the back of my head.
Unison #3: Five WeeksUnison #3: Five Weeks3 years ago in Romance More Like This
It was still a heavenly sight, even now.
Keys were pressed at lightning speed across Magical Melody's piano, assembling a collection of tones with a pronounced classical air. In time, Binary Match recognized it as as a casual rendition of Parasprite Waltz.
Melody hadn't noticed Binary looking through her window yet, and so continued to play. It was like before they'd met, with one clear difference--instead of wrinkled frustration, Melody's face now displayed a peaceful smile.
Only when the song was finished did Binary knock on the front door. Almost immediately she heard the light scrape of a piano stool and the equally light tapping of hooves--galloping hooves, since when did Melody have that much energy?--approaching the door, which opened in mere seconds.
And, then, there was Melody, in front of her, staring at her--and still wearing that smile.
Binary waved. "Hi there."
Melody's smile grew even bigger. "Hi, Binary! Come on in."
Unison #1: Together, From A DistanceUnison #1: Together, From A Distance3 years ago in Romance More Like This
"You see, it all comes down to reliability."
"Reliability." A chipper, analytical voice was just audible over the singing of birds, the wind whistling through grass and trees, and the playing of several small ponies. While those ponies enjoyed the spring day, however, a white unicorn filly was deep in thought--and thus, in her element.
"The best part about numbers is that once you put them together and perform the necessary operations, you never have to wonder about whether the answer you get is wrong now, or will be wrong in the future." The lecturing filly scribbled numbers and symbols in a notebook as she spoke, then laid the book out on a wooden yard table for three of her other classmates to see. "Unless, you know, you screwed up the operations to begin with. So, uh, let's not do that."
She chuckled. Nopony else did. It was all right. They were busy deciphering her notes, after all. Once she saw them nod their heads, she asked, "Things make more se
Braeburn the Apple ColtThere's a colt from AppleoosaBraeburn the Apple Colt3 years ago in Songs & Lyrics More Like This
Who is very inspirational.
He is very inspirational
Because of many things.
I fly in at 8:11
And he smiles and sais, "Hey there."
When he smiles and sais, "Hey there,"
I swear I could just grow wings.
So today at 8:11
I decided I should meet him.
I decided I should meet him
In the proper pony way.
So today at 8:11,
When he smiled and said, "Hey there,"
I said, "Hi, my name is Soarin,"
And he softly answered, "Hey."
And I said, "My name is Soarin,
And thank you for the extra pie."
And he said his name was Braeburn,
But all I could say after that was, "Pieeeeeee..."
Braeburn the apple colt,
My fuji, my wonder... bolt.
Oh Braeburn the apple colt,
I love him, I love him, I love him.
So I'd like to get my nerve up
To ask him to watch our air race.
He would like it at the air race,
'Cuz the salt there's always free.
So today at 8:11, I told Braeburn we were flying
In a park in Phillydelphia, for the new royal decree.
And then he turned on
Party of One told entirely in rhymeTwilight is reading for a coming exam,Party of One told entirely in rhyme3 years ago in Traditional Fixed Forms More Like This
When she does receive a singing telegram.
For Gummy's birthday there'll be a celebration,
As each friend learns through a singing invitation.
There AJ and RD are playing a game,
When Pinkie announces it is far too tame.
If they only are going for the apples that bobbed,
They're missing the fun and are getting robbed!
They dunk their heads in and find a few jokes,
While Pinkie checks with the rest of the folks.
They all have their fun and say it's a blast,
And Pinkie bemoans that it cannot last.
Twilight remarks they should meet again soon,
Leading to a party the next afternoon.
She invites them all again to her social convention,
But each has something requiring their attention.
Twi needs to study, AJ needs to pick,
And Rarity's mane is now covered in "ick".
The fliers are housesitting for Harry the Bear,
Well, more like cavesitting his homey little lair.
Pinkie is stumped; all her friends are quite busy!
But she soon sees a scene that sends her i
Unison #2: Making A SplashUnison #2: Making A Splash3 years ago in Romance More Like This
What was I thinking?
A star-adorned tiara plopped onto Twilight Sparkle's bed.
It all looked to so good in my head! The actual outfit even looked good! At least to me... but I'm no designer, am I?
Two oversized, star-plastered sets of earrings and bows followed.
And the whole time, I pushed her to make it. Constantly correcting her over the most minor of details, forcing her to abandon her design sensibilities, and being ungrateful about a dress that she had offered to make me for free!
That dress, cluttered with animal and constellation designs, joined her jewelry on the bed with a soft ploomf. Twilight looked at the ensemble, only now finally able to see it for the trainwreck it was.
Whew. Back to some semblance of sanity. But the damage is already done. It's my fault. I asked for this, and I got exactly what I wanted... at the expense of a good friend's image. Maybe even her career. I'm the absolute worst.
She walked out of her bedroom and d
Just What I Wanted: A TG StoryI had always gone to the county fair; it was cheap and a great place to people watch. I never paid any attention to the carnies and the games and rides though; just not my thing. But that day was different.Just What I Wanted: A TG Story1 year ago in Settings More Like This
I was just cutting through the game zone so I could get to the fried cheese on a stick booth when I caught the gypsy woman staring at me. I glanced her way but kept on walking until I heard her say from behind me a simple “Hey”
I turned back to her; a puzzled look on my face. I shrugged my shoulders and said “What?”
“Um…” she looked at me with real earnestness in her eyes “Could you just come here for a second.”
I started to walk slowly her way “Look; I’m really not interested in having my fort…”
She interrupted “No. No: it’s not that.”
I also realized that she wasn’t using a fake Romanian accent like most gypsy fortune tellers, but she continued “I just got the strangest feel