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When they came in, they always came in fast. They skid low across the atmosphere like silvery stones, flushed with coldness and dawn. áIt seems like they had been coming for a few years now, and perhaps observing for some time before that. áWe knew what they had been doing for awhile, but due to the scale of the previous conflict their depredations went unnoticed. áUnnoticed at least by nations and armies. áThe inhabitants of a remote farm would go missing. áBandits, of course. áA fishing vessel might disappear, just before dawn on a clear calm night. áDrift mine, most likely. áHowever, the disappearance of all the human inhabitants from certain remote island chains seemed harder to explain.

As things were rebuilt, one missing person became ten, then a hundred, then a thousand. A sort of harvest was suspected. It took radar and collective will to finally see them clearly. Silent, swift, and hungry. We almost never saw them at all. We never found any trace of their victims. áThey came on calm nights, tearing across darkened skies, seeking with a purposefulness that spoke of long planning. Sometimes there was a burst of radio static across the upper bands, but more often there were just empty houses, drifting boats, and uneaten meals come dawn.

It was determined that Something Must Be Done by those that determine such things. Experts were called in. The wartime radar pickets were refurbished and expanded, and all eyes turned to the edge of the stratosphere. One of the reconnaissance balloons finally got a picture. They were about seventy feet long, and glinted brightly in the sunlight. Their ships were tapered and featureless, with skins of perfect mirror brightness. áThe shape gave them the only name we have: They were Teardrops.


Treichler had dreamed of Alma again. They were in Vienna, and it was June. The city seemed renewed and washed clean by a recent rain. The city center had been rebuilt, and she was waiting for him in the park. She was wearing white, and held something in her hand. The dream always ended before he could see what it was.

He snapped out of his reverie, and couldn’t held but notice the grayness of the landscape. It was always gray, but now it seemed exceptionally colorless. No more Alma, no more Vienna. He stretched and stepped out of the truck, nodding to the driver. The sun had not yet risen over the dead stubble and deserted buildings, but the sky gave a slight even glow. In the dimness of six o’clock the interceptor was being fuelled on the tarmac before him. áThey were blowing the fuel lines out with steam, and the lights on the airfield turned this into a halo. á

The interceptor looked not so much sleek as purposeful, the stub wings supporting two oversize engines. Low and gray, it was a hunched thing. áIt had the appearance of being doubled over under the weight of the jets, mounted at the joint where wing met fuselage. The silhouette was that of a peddler with a burden. He would sit between the engines, and below and in front of the wing spar. The wings were swept back, tapering and drooping gently towards the tips. áThey were small for the size of the aircraft. The nose was glazed.

While the outside spoke of brutal elegance, from within the cockpit it was a rococo accumulation of scavenged parts, worn leather, and tube steel framing. The Soviets didn't bother taking off the Reichsadlers, and WESTSOC didn't bother taking off the red stars. There wasn't time for that sort of thing. áThere wasn't time for a lot of things. The seat was a high gee affair, reclined slightly and evoking the sense of being in an oversize catcher's mitt. áTreichler put his flight helmet on, while he perched on, rather than sitting in the seat. áYour range of motion is limited once you strap in, so it was easier to adjust your helmet, throat mike, gloves, and collar before you were in all the way. áIt was a comforting ritual. áOnce he was satisfied with the fit of his gear, he eased in and slipped his feet into the rudder pedals. áNot an inch of space seemed to be wasted. áThrottle at your left hand, Control stick in the center. áBasic instruments in a cluster in front of you, navigation aids in a smaller cluster above it, just in front of the hatch. áYou arm the bomb from a selector panel below the main panel. áThe effect would be claustrophobic if it wasn't for the panoramic view that peeked at you from behind and around all the other artifacts. áTreichler flipped on the main power and set the source to 'Ext'. áHe plugged in his headset to the familiar pop and faint hum of interference from the external generator. áThe panel lamps came on, and all instruments read normal.

Settling in, his mind drifted a little. He remembered neighborhoods of long acquaintance, avenues of crumbling brick and the bright water of the river at flood. áThe air here smelled of many things, but never of the cold clean water of April flood stage. áThe preflight check was like a mumbled prayer, perfunctory but meeting all the requirements of the form. áThe panel lamps warmed, illuminating the dials with an amber glow. áTreichler exhaled and regarded the mist of his breath. áOnly just then did he realize how chill the morning was. áHe pulled the hatch shut, grabbing the tube steel handle with his right hand and bringing it down with nuanced force. áHe flipped the release latches at the front corners to lock them, looking to the left and to the right. áInternal power on. A low hum from the generator behind him. áThumbs up to Old Trigby on the left, who then unplugged the electrical umbilical. áThe mechanic flashed him his usual grin and returned the gesture. There was something sad in his eyes, though it only showed there. Thumbs up to the man on the right, who removed the wheel chocks and gave his approval as well. áHe was new. Never caught his name. They moved to the left, past the wingtip and stood by with fire extinguishers. á

The moment of truth. áTreichler flipped the fuel cock to 'Main' and pressed 'Air Start'. Compressed air coughed the engine turbines into motion with a shudder. áHe set the throttle to five percent, and stabbed the ignition button. áHis mouth was moving, silently voicing words even he didn't know. A violent cough, and the engines belched a thick white vapor. áBetter be ready to get out in a hurry. áYou never strap yourself in yet, unless you want to burn to death. áThe right engine made a healthy whine, but the left stayed silent. áHe cut the fuel to the left engine with a curse, and advanced the throttle on the right one to ten percent. áThe compressed air system needed to recharge. áThis was bad. áWe didn't have time to waste. áThis would be a tricky enough intercept on its own without being ten minutes late. áThirty PSI. áGood enough. áThrottle to five percent. áIgnition. áA thump, then the whine became a two part harmony. áThis was much better. áHe advanced the throttle to thirty percent and the interceptor rolled forward with that massive but floaty feeling of a full wheelbarrow. áHe was moving at the speed a man walked, but not for long. áHe steered the nosewheel with the rudder pedals. The interceptor passed from the revetment to the end of the long runway, turning into the chill wind. Throttle to fifty. áThe walk became a jog. áThrough the pedals, he steered left slightly, pointing the acrylic nose down the center of the runway, slapping the release hooks of his harness onto the loops at the shoulders and crotch of the gee seat. áFaster now. áThe interceptor vibrated, and Treichler slowly advanced the throttle all the way. áNot too fast. áThey'll catch fire if you do that. áThe whine advanced exquisitely, and the engines keened like angels in pain. áThe faint smell of kerosene and ammonia wafted through the cockpit. áWarm enough. Almost time. áFaster, faster, faster the vibration diminished and the tires tiptoed a few final bumps. He was in the air. áNeeded just a few feet of altitude. áThe aerodynamics were messy when the gear was coming up. Okay. áHe rotated the selector and began raising the gear. áThe low roar of eddying air shuddered across the aluminum origami of the bay doors, then a clunk, then silence. áThree red lights. áThe gear was up and locked. á

He armed the booster and waited the eight seconds of eternity, the dead and empty fields racing by below him. áAll dark these days. áThe ready light was like a consummation. áHe flipped the safety up on the arming panel and tripped the rocket ignition. áWhat happened next always surprised him. áIt surprised him not with its violence, but with its purity. áAmmonia and hydrazine were both pumped into the ignition chamber, and combined explosively to give him the thrust he needed to reach the edge of the sky within five minutes. áThat really didn't capture the essence of the experience, though. áThere he was, trundling along in his cartoon jet, overburdened by fuel and foreboding, then a moment later perched atop a column of yellow fire big as a building, leaving a contrail that could be seen from the next state. áTime to get to thirty degrees.

The controls were already heavy, the ailerons fighting to cut into the swift air flowing over the wings. áBack. Pulling hard. áHe became aware that he was sweating. áKansas floated below him, a distant and faded patchwork. áTen thousand feet. áThe curve of the earth was already visible, ever so slightly. áAnother few seconds and the angle of the horizon lined up with a thin red line painted on the inside of the canopy. Thirty degrees. áTime to stand on it. áHis left arm felt clumsy and heavy, reaching for the throttle. áHe flipped the release and sent the engines to emergency power. áHis arm felt like it was made of lead, and it was as if someone was sitting on his chest. áFor the next forty seconds the rocket and the jets were putting out enough combined power that he would be at the edge of the atmosphere at burnout. He clung to the immovable control stick reflexively. áAt this speed the air was so thick and viscous it might as well be wet concrete. áThe interceptor was fully ballistic at this point, with the stubby wings mere decorations atop a pillar of angry bright fire. á

In the spectacle, Treichler had almost forgotten his oxygen mask. áWouldn't do to black out. áHe clipped his mask on with fumbling fingers against the gees. áFlip of the switch, and a reading of normal flow. áThe rubber was cold against his face. Airspeed was 500 knots and slowly accelerating, arcing slowly upwards past 45 degrees. In less than a minute the rocket would burn itself out, having consumed two tons of fuel and oxidizer. áHe would be around 28,000 feet then, still accelerating on inertia and jet thrust. áAt 32,000 gravity and the thin air would betray him and he would hang in a stall for a long instant before beginning his terrible glide towards his quarry. áHe was at 60 degrees. He gently rolled the interceptor onto its back, the blue Earth above him, and the blackness of night spread below his feet. áThe stars were always out up here. áThe rocket rattled rather than roared, then made no sound at all. Burnout. áThe pressure on his chest lessened and he flipped the arming switch on the weapons panel from 'On', past 'Off', to 'Vent', purging the pump system of any remaining hydrazine. áIt was nasty stuff, and had to be treated with respect. áHe backed the throttle down to 30 percent, the engines leaning their mixtures automatically in the thin, cold air. áOnly 600 pounds of fuel left. áThrottling down to ten percent, barely moving. áBarely moving. The mach meter showed 0.8, but the sky was thin and smooth in the darkness. He was pointed towards Denver, with the rising sun behind him. áRelease would come at the foothills of the Rockies, with the intercept proper thirty miles west. áVery cold now. áHis fingers felt heavy through his gloves, and his boots felt tight on his swollen feet. áTime to get a target and get down out of the freezing night. He was the man of the hour, he thought, his face making something like a smile inside his mask. He thought of the look in Old Trigby’s eyes again, and of Alma, then dismissed it all with a shrug.

The interceptors didn't use radar, or at least not sets mounted on the aircraft themselves. áThey were too big, too heavy, and were something that the Teardrops could sense. áWhen we (meaning WESTSOC) first seriously tried interdicting them, bombers were used, fitted out with missiles and search radar. áThe first couple intercepts were successful, with shootdowns on both the Denver and Mojave approaches. áThese initial victories couldn't be followed up though, and subsequent experience showed that the Teardrops would go into near vertical dives when the tracking radars were turned on. áThese dives were usually around Mach 3, and weren't something even the newer missiles could catch up to. áIn the end, it proved more effective to use ground radar and guide the interceptors with radio beacons. áThe ground radars were passive, which is to say that instead of sending out their own radio signal and waiting for it to bounce back from the target they painted their picture with signals from other radio sources. áUsually we used one of the remaining commercial radio signals, but the medium wave weather band could be used too. áYou could even use background radiation, but your range really dropped off. áIf the Teardrop was coming in, Grand Junction and Rio Rancho would be triangulating the position and speed right now. So far, they hadn’t figured out that they were being tracked with music, which was heartening. They were fallible.

The Earth was a pool of blue above him, spreading slowly as if to welcome him. Treichler flexed his hands cautiously, one then the other. áThe swelling didn’t seem so bad now, but was still painful. áHe fumbled at the dial for the direction finder, rotating the aerial slowly through an ocean of static until he heard faint music. It was Rhapsody in Blue, which was appropriate enough. Lili Marlene would have been more welcome, if only for old times’ sake. Either way, that was his beacon, about five degrees to his right. The air was slowly thickening as he descended, making a thin hiss barely audible over the engines. It was enough to give some control again. áHe pushed the stick to the left, and the interceptor rolled slowly upright. The Earth looked lush and wet and was growing beneath him once again. The engine sipped fuel, throttle almost at zero. This was all gravity now. áJust a little rudder put the nose on the beacon. Treichler flexed his aching hands and tried moving his feet, giving up on the tingle in his toes after a few tries. áIt was easy to drift off the beacon if you didn’t pay constant attention. The thick gloves didn’t help. It was deathly cold and almost silent. áThe engine’s whine seemed very distant, and the air outside was a thin hiss across the wings. Gershwin was scratchy and distorted this close to the ionosphere at dawn, and barely more than static.
á áThe primordial blue of the atmosphere came rising up to embrace him again. áA faint shuddering rhythm came to him through the wings. They had something to bite into again. Shivering slightly, he began the long descent back to warmth and life after thirty seconds in eternity. The interceptor falls in slow motion, grossly out of scale. The aircraft is tiny and gray, a secret thing gripping fifteen kilotons of ruin beneath it. A little fire to chase away your teardrops, Treichler reflected. This smile was no more successful than the last. He was on the right path now. He was triangulating from the Alberta and Fort Pleasant transmitters, faint metronymic beats hammering out a counterpoint to the old song.
á áIt wouldn’t be long now. Treichler tensed slightly at this thought, or rather at the implications. All he had to do was turn his key to the red part of the dial and flip the arming switches and the bomb would be ready. The press of the button on the control stick would finalize everything. A successful intercept would prevent Teardrop incursions for between three and six weeks. áIt was a race. He fell faster now, quickening his descent with each moment. The stub wings whistled slightly, and began to shudder. Sound was catching up with him again. The sun was breaking across the mountains, fresh bright light on the last snows of winter. Each peak glowed like a beacon, calling him back to Earth above the purple whispers of the vanishing night.
á áThere was vibration as he descended into warmer air, but it wasn’t too bad. The morning was as bright and clear as any he had seen, and he was the hunter this time. The wings started doing their job again, and his hands hurt a little less. He advanced the throttle to a more respectable setting and enjoyed the whine of the engines. Their precision, their power, and their seeming fury all comforted him as he raced above the bright peaks in a shallow dive. As fast as the Teardrop was, he was faster. Much faster, and accelerating. He would catch up to his quarry in about eight minutes, lobbing his bomb in an arc as he went into a steep climb. Interceptors rarely saw a Teardrop. If you did, it was because something was wrong. Getting the bomb within a mile of a Teardrop was close enough. There were two fuses: One was for altitude, and one was for proximity. The proximity fuse used radar, but it was a clever design that only armed itself once the first fuse did. The target didn’t have time to take evasive maneuvers, and probably not even time to become aware of the bomb before it went off.
á áHe followed the beam, the faint murmur of a waltz turning to the occasional crackle of multipath as he descended. He was listening, straining, waiting for... There. The ping of the tracking station. He was on the right path, and closing as he should. He started sweating again. Another ping. The tones would get more and more frequent the closer he got. When they bled together into a single sound he was to pull up sharply, hit the release, and get away as best he could. Usually it was best to do a half roll and dive, heading back the way you came. You had to be at least five miles away when it went off, and ten was better. It was fused to go off about a thousand feet above the Teardrop, smashing it downwards into the jagged peaks with the blast. This would also keep the fallout to the east at acceptable levels, though there were few left to sicken. Utah was all but deserted by now. We were being nibbled away. Town by town, night by night, they disappeared. Never livestock or anything else alive. Just people. What the War did not harvest, the Teardrops did.
á áHe turned his key to the red quadrant of the arming panel. His hand shook, or perhaps it was the turbulence. Four switches followed, and with each a name. Click. The lamp for ‘Preheat’ came on and an air hose fed hot air, bled from the starboard engine to warm the arming and electric systems in the bomb. Alma. With you it was always spring. Click. The lamp for ‘Lock’ went from green to red. The tamper could now move freely when the cordite was detonated. Theo. I’ll be joining you soon, just like old times. Click. Now ‘Elec Main’ glowed green and the detonator had electric power. Father. I did as you would have done. A pause, and then a final click. ‘Main Arm’ flicked, then glowed green. He could drop it any time now. Vienna. A small brass button on the control column was all he needed to press to finish things.
á áTreichler was close now, and still speeding up. At 375 knots he was almost level with the tallest peaks, and squinting into the sunrise. The wings were starting their vain protest, rattling and groaning in the thickening air. The tones were close together, and getting closer. Almost there. Sweat ran into his eyes. He took off the oxygen mask, chancing the thin air for the last few minutes. Almost there. He screamed through a jagged pass and a wooded valley stretched out below him, all tall pines and snow in the shadows. He was low, and getting lower, trading altitude for speed at usurious rates. The tones were so close they almost bled together. Wait. Remember the training. Remember. Make this one different. An icy river zigzagged below him, a bright and curling ribbon that heightened the sense of speed. The sun was painfully bright, the mountains seemed a dark wall, rising up to claim him.

Then he saw it. Treichler saw it. The teardrop. Close and cold, spitting a thin streamer of violet fire as it raced ahead, following the valley. It seemed tiny, just a garish pinprick in the long shadows. Tone.

With an inhuman sound Treichler heaved the stick back with all his might, and the wing spars groaned. He snapped his head to the left, eyeballing the alignment of the 35░ line on the canopy with the horizon. Too many mountains to be certain. The groaning wings silenced his curse as he pressed the release. It made the tiniest click, and the next tenth of a second lasted years. Then the bomb released with a clunk, and four blank cartridges fired from their sockets, pushing the bomb clear. The next movements were all instinct. He was pointed almost straight up, and was losing speed rapidly. He had seconds to get away. Roll right. Dive sharply. The edges of his vision went dark with the gees. The valley floor slid into view, and began to fill his field of vision. The aircraft shook and vibrated. How long? How far? The instruments were blurs. A dud?

Treichler’s heart sank. Then a terrible light overtook everything. For a split second the world was white, and then it was dim. Afterimages burned into Treichler’s eyes. The heat hung in the air, content to curl and bubble the smoking paint from the underside of the wings. He realized that he was too close to the explosion. The next moment brought an avalanche of wind and fire. The interceptor was swatted from its dive and sent tumbling upwards. Spinning like a broken toy, it was outmatched and overpowered by the fury it had released. Trailing corkscrew plumes of black smoke, the interceptor began its final descent.

Blacking out from the blow, Treichler awoke to smoke and ruin. The glazed nose was shattered, and a hot wind whistled in through zigzag cracks. This alone dispersed the choking kerosene fumes from the leaking tanks. Engine temperature was pegged in the red, nozzles burning through and the turbine bearings starting to wobble and fail. The keening of the engines ascending to a scream as tortured metal entered its death throes. His face burned and cut, Treichler fought the stick to correct the spin. Reduce power, rudder opposite to the spin. His fuel almost gone, he squinted through the blood and could make out the pass he entered the valley through. He might make it, or at least make it far enough that he could bail out somewhere that wasn’t on fire. His leather gloves smoldered slightly, and the shattered instruments were obscured by an increasing amount of smoke. He was on fire. He slammed the throttle to full power. If he could get enough speed, he could blow the flames out, or at least keep them from creeping forward into the cockpit for a few minutes. The smoke cleared slightly, and he could see the small mirror at the top of the cockpit. The starboard engine was on fire, its aluminum fairing stripped away and jagged orange jets were poking out of holes in the shattered motor. The port engine was somewhat better, trailing black smoke from the overheated nozzle. Just a few minutes. Maybe seconds. He had come through too much to give up, though the valley floor was a carpet of fire and his aircraft a cinder.

The world was orange and blood red. The aircraft hissed and rattled. The vibration became pronounced. Then he saw it. Saw it again, when it should have perished in the blast. It had doubled back in a snap turn that should be impossible. The Teardrop was racing below him, the torch of violet at the tail longer, but irregular and jagged. Its mirror surface now seemed somehow cracked and veined, and it was shedding pieces of itself like droplets of molten silver. It too, was heading for the pass. Treichler knew in that instant what he had to do, and that he would die that day.

Their speeds were almost matched, and Treichler had the advantage of a little altitude. The pass seemed like the eye of a needle, a minute space between the dark mountains. He relaxed slightly. It seemed simple now. The jagged forest was unburned and green, the pines rising up to greet them as the valley narrowed to the pass. The Teardrop was very close, and getting closer. Rising slowly, it sought the same path of escape past the mountains. Treichler regarding the flaming reflection of his aircraft in the cracked mirror surface. The Teardrop was barely fifty feet away. It was time. Treichler applied emergency power and rolled to the right. Inverted, he pulled the stick back and pointed his nose at the wounded intruder. He collided with the Teardrop just as they crested the pass. He hit it just off center, at the base of his starboard wing. The flaming, screaming engine snapped forward and tore away from its mounts. The interceptor lurched crosswise, burying its nose deeper into the Teardrop. The mirror surface shattered and the acrylic nose disintegrated, bright sharp fragments filling the cockpit. It was like glass, but swirled as if alive. It writhed and danced in the air, as if was trying to reform itself into a solid shape again. The interceptor tumbled end over end, a pinwheel of silver and fire. The main spar tore away from the fuselage with a wrenching sound and the noseless, wingless fuselage tumbled through the pass into the next valley.

Treichler sat on the tube steel chair in what was left of the cockpit. For a moment, he felt nothing so much as confusion. Dazed and concussed, he wondered where his aircraft had gone and at the sky beneath his feet. The icy air struck him like a blow as the ruined cockpit tumbled into the wind, and the cuts on his face burned. This snapped him back to reality, though his vision was blurred, and his left arm was numb and likely broken. The canopy had been torn away, along with the glazed nose and most of the instrument panel. Everything was coated in silver. He was still gripping the control stick with his right hand. He was still alive. This thought finally registered as the wingless fuselage ceased tumbling and plunged into the steep shadowy depths of the silent valley. As if underwater, he fumbled the quick release on his harness and stood up. The slipstream peeled him away from the ruined aircraft, and time sped up again. The parachute that was his seat cushion opened with a snap and spread above him. The jerk of deceleration was excruciating, his left arm useless but as a source of pain. The fuselage shot away, hitting the slope five hundred feet below and disintegrating in a puff. It was silent again, but for the wind and a faint clanging echo across the pines, which faded quickly. Treichler soared down the slope, slowed by the icy draft that was rising to meet the pass behind him. He had bailed out far too low, but it wouldn’t kill him this time. The pines were small here, and narrowly spaced on the snowy slope. They seemed tiny, and perhaps they were. Nonetheless, they seemed much larger as they rose to meet him. It might hurt, but this one was survivable. Survivable. He mouthed the word in disbelief as he smashed into one treetop, then another, then another. After that he lost count, and decided he would like to pass out for awhile.

He woke up a few feet above the ground, suspended like a very battered spider by his parachute webbing. His arm hurt, but that seemed alright. The hike out would be tough, but this was April, and the pass would be clear. He realized he was covered in silver, courtesy of the Teardrop. He rubbed a little of the material between him fingers as he searched for the release for the parachute. It looked like quicksilver, but it felt like glass. It quivered slightly, and grew milky and stiff. Whatever it was, was no more. He raised his head to regard the sunrise, the slope bathed in shattered silver tears turning golden with the light of morning. Treichler tumbled awkwardly to the ground and began his long journey home.
This is a short story inspired by a painting I did a while back. It's 1948, but not *our* 1948. I hope you enjoy it.
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You paused as you walked into the room. So many choices.

You looked around, feeling slightly crest-fallen. None of the cats really looked like on you could get along with.

Maybe you shouldn't buy a cat. You didn't know if your apartment even allowed cats.
Besides, would you really have the time to take care of one?

Sighing, you turned to leave.

"I'm really sorry Miss Elizabeta. I don't think I'm ready for a cat."

She nodded and shrugged, "Come back if you change your mind."

Sighing again, you left.

-----Time skip------

"I can't deal vith him." You looked over at your German friend. Ludwig was glaring at something behind the couch. He had called you over, saying that his cat was a pain in the ass.

"So what do you want me to do?" Standing up, you walked over and peered around him.

"Take him."


You blinked down at the little cat standing before you. He had a strange curl of hair. His beige fur ruffled.

"What kind of meow is that kitty?"


His eyes were closed.

"Is he blind?" You looked over at Ludwig. He scowled, "I don't zink so. He just likes keeping his eyes closed."

Alrighty then. Never seen a cat do that before.

"Ve-meow!!!" He chirped, rubbing his head against your legs.

Maybe you should get a cat. Specifically this cat. You bent down and picked him up.
Purring, he licked your face.

"I'll take him!"


-----Time skip-----

"NOOOOOOO! FELI!!!!" You shouted in exasperation.

The cat ignored your plea, diving head first into the pot of tomato sauce you had left cooling on the counter.


"No no no no no no!" You quickly lifted him out. "Tomatoes are bad for cats!!"


You smiled slightly. Every time you said something, he would always answer.

"Let's get you cleaned up."

Feliciano wriggled happily in your arms. Tomato sauce was splashed across the chest of your shirt.

Walking into the bathroom, you set the cat inside the tub.

He tried to jump out, his claws skittering against the porcelain sides.

"Sorry kitty."

"Veeeeeeee-meow!!" He whined, shrinking away from the faucet.

You felt bad, but you couldn't let him eat the sauce.

You managed to calm him down and clean him up.
(However. You were splattered with more tomato sause and scratched twice. Feli apologized by licking your hand.)

"Okay Feli. All done." You lifted the cat out of the tub and toweled him off. Feli trotted into the living room and curled up on the couch.

Time to change then.

As you walked out of your room in clean clothing, you noticed that Feli wasn't in the living room.

Oh no. He better not be in the kitchen.

You rushed in and stared.

The kitten was sitting in the pot, covered in tomato sauce and licking his paws.


The pot was completely empty. Guess you weren't having pasta tonight.


----Time skip----

You found out that tomato sauce wasn't the only thing the little cat went crazy about. He chewed all the leaves off your Basil plant.

The pizza delivery guy wasn't safe when Feli was awake.

The first time he had delivered a pie, Feli had run head first into the guy, biting his leg when he didn't surrender the pizza.

You had stopped bringing garlic bread into the house.


Because Feli would rip open the bags and chew on the crust. (Leaving you with saliva soaked bread chunks.)

But all in all, He was a good cat.

-----Time skip-------

Something was nudging the back of your head.

Blinking sleepily, you turned around.

Feliciano was stretched out on his back, snoring. His back feet, shoving your head slowly off the pillow.

"Feli....." You grumbled, trying to nudge his feet out of the way. He twisted away and curled into a small ball.

You closed your eyes.

A few moments later, he started at it again.


"ve-meow" Feliciano mumbled sleepily, still hitting the back of your head with his feet.

"DUDE!" You twisted back around and glared at the cat. He ignored you.
Getting up, you stomped over to the phone.


"Vas?" Oops... You might have woken him up.

"Feliciano won't stop hitting my head with his feet!"

"So? Vat do you vant me to do about it?" He huffed. You could hear a hint exasperation in his voice.

"How do you make him stop?" You glanced over at the little cat. He was spread eagle on his back across your pillow.

"Pull on his curl"

"What? How-" Ludwig hung up on you.


Getting back in bed, you shoved him out of the way. Tugging on his curl seemed a bit mean. Maybe he would stop now.

Five seconds later, he was kicking the back of your head again.

Reaching out a hand, you gently pulled on the curl. Nothing happened, he kept on kicking.

You pulled harder.

"Veeeeee." He stopped for a minute, then resumed.

"God damn it Feli." You tugged on it as hard as you could.

Feliciano shot out of bed, whimpering. He dove into your closet and climbed up a coat to get to the top shelf.

You ran over to the phone and punched the numbers.


"That was mean." You growled

"Vas? Vat did I do?" Ludwig sounded confused.

"Telling me to pull his curl. He ran into my closet whimpering."
There was silence on the other end.

"I'll be over in a bit." Once again, Ludwig hung up on you.

----Time skip-----

"Come on Feli!!" You set a bowl of tomato sauce next to your closet door. The little cat peeked his head out, then quickly hid.

Beside you, Ludwig sighed. "Just leave it zere. He'll come out vhen he's ready." The tall German rubbed his eyes tiredly. He walked over to your bed and sat down.

"I'm sorry I bothered you." You sat next to him and watched the closet door.

"Nein. Don't apologize. Zis is my fault." Ludwig grimaced.

Two hours later-----------

You blinked sleepily. Your face was pressed against your pillow.

SHOOT! You must have fallen asleep while waiting for Feli to come out.
Sitting up,you looked at the closet. The bowl you had set down was empty.

So were was Feli?

You glanced to the right and stifled a giggle.

Ludwig was lying next to you, Feliciano on his head.

"Feli." You whispered. The cat blinked open an eye.

"I'm sorry."

He let out a little purr.

You lay back down and closed your eyes.




You burst into laughter as Ludwig choked on a mouthful of cat hair.
:D Feli is so cuuuuuuuuuuuuute!


Hetalia belongs to Hidekaz Himaruya-san

The picture (c) Hidekaz Himaruya-san
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[Verse 1]
Marching quickly across the land,
Destroying the enemies quick as we can.
Killing our victims and taking no slaves,
Do this for Hitler’s third Reich.

[Verse 2]
The engines of war are roaring,
Blow them apart for it is our calling.
We march quick and we march by his hand,
To put the West under his command.

[Verse 3]
Machine guns are firing the tanks are destroying,
Demolishing our way to glory.
Our general’s smile at the sight of us giving hell,
The Fuhrer knows his armies have done well.

Send the enemy to meet the reaper,
Dig their grave and blow it deeper.
We smash down their walls faster than lightning,
Until the day breaks we will be marching.

They cannot stop us from doing our part,
Our formation strikes like a dart.
They will all die today or tomorrow,
Either way we end their sorrow.
The blitzkrieg will strike and they will pay,
Their countries are ours by the end of the day.

[Verse 4]
WAR! It’s in our blood!
We march towards it put our foes in the mud.
Europe’s land shall be stained red,
Lucifer shall fill his halls with the dead.


[Verse 5]
No country is safe no one shall be spared,
We’ll crush you faster than you can prepare.
Only total victory will satisfy our need,
We are marching and this is our BLITZKRIEG!
Song about the German Blitzkrieg.
Wrote it myself.
Part of a concept album I am writing about Nazi Germany.
This is 1 song from it that has been completed.
Took some time with different lyrics, different timing etc etc.
Overall I like it.

Comments welcome.
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Three days before his third birthday, my brother's computer started misbehaving.


He was small at birth, our little illegal boy was, and ugly as day.

Although the world's resources crumbling to its knees, no one could have denied my mother of her "accidental" embryo, even while They broke into houses and took women to the quack doctor to eliminate any suspicious growths "in the name of the law". We went through geneticists and neurologists, trying to fit an old computer from Grandma's time into the next generation. We dug deep into emergency stashes and back-up loans and "30310's College Fund", and came up with just enough to satisfy one round of bribes to keep everything [just barely] under the wraps.

Newborns are pretty things, my mother had assured, eyes bright and half to herself. It'll be worth it in the end.

His name was Ray, a pretty all-letters name to make up for his physical disproportions. I held him on the first day of his life and the last day of my [only-]childhood freedom, a Sunday morning. I held him and walked, all the way to the telephone booth outside, where I scratched red paint off the metal bars and sprinkled them like confetti, the only celebration of his birth that he got. Inside, everyone was too busy making sure that his computer worked and his life was planned out into every secretive second.

Outside, I held him in his first hour, fingering the top of his head where his skull had not closed over yet, wondering just how easy it would be to say dropping him was an accident [after all, he was slippery wet] and how hard it would be to keep him alive in the coming years.


Three days before Ray's third birthday, it's my turn again to put his computer on stand-by and tuck him into bed. His face is warm, but maybe it's because the nights these days are cold. A faint smile tugs at my face, quickly distorted into a sneeze; the influenza E bug has been going around school for days. He shakes with even that slight movement. His body and his frail limbs and his eyes that have never seen anything outside of this room are closed off, closed in, closed. Yet, he looks like a normal child. But with both of us in the same room, we're living reminders of how he will never learn to love anyone in the outside world, and how I will never be loved by anyone in this virtual space between these four walls.

Of how we'll never be normal, as long as the other is around.

I put him down and walk away quickly, as silently as I can.


Wednesday afternoon sees my brother sprawled in front of his charger, moved from where he was previously wrapped in his covers. A USB cable trails from under his arm to the black box by the side of his table. It's far too early to be downloading at this time, and I tell him, sniffling between words.

No reply.

I tap his temple hard, right where the reset button for his system is. His head lolls, blue-green veins across his forehead pulsing feverishly, threatening to break through the translucent skin stretched taut over his malfunctioning PC. His eyes remain resolutely shut. He pants, tiny gasps scrabbling for breath to fill his empty lungs. His tiny kid-fingers grasp and ungrasp and his nails scratch and scrabble for purchase on his bedside table.

I scream for my mother.

That night, I watch a public service announcement and learn all over again what a world Ray'd been born to, where even a baby is hated for what he eats, more than an adult is hated for killing them.


"It's your birthday tomorrow."

He hardly looks like a birthday boy mummified in his white bed clothes and whiter blankets, dripping ice compact held to his head by my tingling fingers. A rattling deep down inside persists. The angular corners of a head too small for the things our world has forced inside, are bumpy, protruding, apparent. His hair barely covers the messy stitches.

I wonder whether it's any different inside his head.

I wonder whether it makes a difference, being born under the microscopes and probes of government geneticists, rather than being manually put together by your own parents.

I wonder if he gets headaches too, whenever he thinks too hard about difficult things like hunger and the Thought-Refining Bureau and why it has to be this way.

Our mother bustles in a blur, swooping past me and sweeping him up, cradling his fragile body in its layers of cloth and unknown bugaboo. The ice-pack drops with a splash.

"30310, get your brother your flu medication. He needs it more than you do."

When I come back, and the tablets abate the mournful sniffling and raging fever momentarily, he does not respond, nor thank, nor acknowledge. But, then again, he has yet to learn to speak and I suppose I [should] forgive him.


Birthdays are supposed to be happy things, and we try valiantly to make it so.

My mother cradles her head and keeps vigil next to the crib: Mother Mary with her jaundiced Jesus. My father falls out of the house harried, hurrying to escape the oppressive silence and to make up enough lies to get help for a boy who defied the rules by his very existence. I sit in the corner and squeeze my eyes shut and imagine the cake, a structure of sponge cake and strawberry, one that everyone will throw out in three days, might actually be mine.

Three o'clock comes slowly. My father finally drags in a man, who claims to be an "exp-pe-pert" while he sets down scalpels, screwdrivers, and an empty can of cheap beer. My brother suddenly looks more like a computer than a person, more experiment than creation, and this man comes down on him, using his rusty implements to persuade the layers of skin-tissues-flesh to expose an outdated CPU and the blinking lights of "ERROR ERROR ERROR".

As he leaves, my father slips him another hundred to keep his mouth shut. His grin shows all teeth. He swings himself onto his beat-up hoverbike and disappears, exhaust pipe clipping the side of the phonebooth as he tumbles past.

We throw out the cake two days in advance; none of us can stomach something so red.


My father and mother fight at night in the living room, when they think Ray won't hear and I won't care.

My father analyses things, puts them into charts and spams my mother's mind with frenetic downloading. He counts up his points against Ray, how much he eats, what words he's actually said, who he cannot tell about him, why every revving noise on the street and in the air is another heart palpitation missed, and when it all comes to an end, what we will do. The "5W1H" searching for the root of the problem.

My mother cries, splutters and burns out.

My mother came crashing out of the room then, pushing past me with a frown too heavy to compute. She spends the rest of the night in the spare room, downloading feel-good oldies - Taylor Swift and Boys Like Girls - into her mind. My father stays in the living room, shuts himself down and crumples into a heap of blissful sleep. I stay up late on the stairs and listen to the sound of someone padding up the street and opening the door of the phonebooth.


Two days after his birthday, I walk into his room again, sit in his empty cot and listen to the sound of my mother crooning baby-rhymes to him downstairs. I tap my own forehead and wonder whether being free from the default software is better or wors - ouch. And whether he gets headaches whenever he gets these thoughts.

Two-and-a-half days after his birthday, I hear an alarm in the distance and the faint noise of sirens.


In the space between Sunday and Monday, a simultaneous judder-shudder-zap goes through my household's computers. One by one, our eyes slam open, our ears begin to smoke, and our computers go on overdrive. In the haze of pain and incessant beeping, there They are, plain as day and twice as menacing.

Monday, 2 PM, They find my brother, still shivering uncontrollably, every spasm another step away from "misbehaving" and one more closer to "breakdown".


Three days after my brother's third birthday, They shut his computer down and it never starts up again. They say They can't blame us, he was cute in his own way, even as They secure our wrists and put us on stand-by, tranquilised all the way to Their headquarters.


[Twenty-six days after my brother's third birthday, and twenty-three days after my brother's death, we're released, and my parents' memories are wiped clean. I'm too young to do anything about anything, They said.

I write all this down and save it in my memory drive, even though it hurts my head to do so, because They don't know what They're talking about sometimes.]
did you get it?


Society honors its living conformists and its dead troublemakers.
short story.

which one will you be?

edit 030111: my second DD. thank you for this, ^GwenavhyeurAnastasia, ~A-Symmetry and all you lovely folks out there.
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"Honey, did you hear something?" Amy sat up in bed and asked her husband softly.

Sonic didn't move, but he perked up his ears and swiveled them towards the window.

"No," he moaned. "Go back to sleep."

She sighed and resettled herself under the covers. But, within minutes she heard the noise again. It was a low roar with a thumping sound, but it seemed muffled.

"Sonic, there it is again. Didn't you hear it?" Amy inquired once more. Only snores were her response.

Sighing again, she curled up against her snoring husband and fell asleep, not hearing the sound again that night.


The next morning, Sonic awoke to greet his wife with a few kisses, but found her side of the bed empty.

He figured that she was already up and downstairs, so he swung his legs over the bed, slipped on his wedding ring and his shoes, and went downstairs.

As he suspected, Amy was at the kitchen table drinking her morning coffee and reading one of her books.

Sonic walked up behind her and hugged her.

"Chotto ai," he purred, which meant "hello my love" in Japanese.

"Chotto ai," Amy repeated, and smooched his cheek.

Sonic saw a warm breakfast on the opposite side of the table, and he sat down to eat.

As he did, his pet boa constrictor, Spike, slithered from the living room and joined him at his chair. He was a very large boa, with blue scales, and black spots, with a smooth, white belly.

Sonic had found him when Amy and his friends had gone to Valley Fair for a day. Spike somehow managed to get into their car and curled up on the top of the back seats.

At first, Amy refused to have Sonic keep a boa constrictor as a pet, but after a full hour of pleading she allowed it. Sonic did have a special way with animals anyways.

"Hey, Spike," Sonic smiled and greeted his snake.

Spike wound himself around his master's chair and flickered his tongue across his face as his own form of greeting.

Sonic slid his two fingers over Spike's head in a petting motion and continued to eat.

"Hey," he said turning to Amy. "where's Lightning?"

"I'm not sure," Amy replied. "I haven't seen her all morning."

Lightning was Sonic's pet white tiger cub. They had found her and her brother, Ghost, in Las Vegas on their vacation. Later, they found out that the cubs had been genetically altered and accidentally released into the desert.

Shadow and Sonic found them. Lightning could run almost as fast as Sonic, and Ghost could turn invisible. Shadow took Ghost and Sonic took Lightning.

When Sonic returned to their hotel, he tried hiding her from Amy, but she soon found out.

But, again, after much of Sonic's pestering, she finally agreed to let her stay too.

"Hm," Sonic thought. "Lightning!" He called, clicking his tongue. "Come here, girl!"

No sooner had he said "come", Lightning was at his feet purring.

Sonic lifted her into his lap and let her eat from his plate, and Spike hung his head over Sonic's shoulder, still smelling his face.

Amy watched and shook her head as Sonic bonded with his pets. He certainly did have a way with animals.


"See you later, Ames," said Sonic before he left to go on one of his runs.

He pulled her against his chest and kissed her.

Lightning and Spike glanced at each other with that sort of "animal" grin, as they watched their master and his wife.

their lips parted, and Sonic gave Amy a final squeeze before bolting out the door, leaving a blue streak behind him that soon faded away.
Chapter 1 is done! :D

Must...keep...writing! :p

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