The Freedom DefendersEpisode 2 Here comes the Freedom DefendersThe Freedom Defenders2 years ago in Settings More Like This
The aftermath of the attack on Zed Doom's castle had almost been just as bad as the attack itself, if not worse. Sam Carter and his robot friend D-27 Maxie were placed in one of the dormitories of Commander Rex's base of operations. The human child was sitting in a corner with his hands wrapped around his legs and crying. He was very sad about the loss of his parents.
What's going to happen now?
Will I ever see them again?
This can't be real. Just a nightmare...
Sam's mind raced around a track full of such thoughts until he heard the door to his dormitory open and saw Scorch Flamehog, still in his alternate attire (that would be his superhero outfit and superpowers in play), walk in the room. In a bright white flash of light he switched his attire and went back to being his regular self. Hayden Winston.
"Scorch?" Sam asked.
"It's Hayden, actually. And I wanted to show you around the base." Ha
The Freedom DefendersEpisode 3 A Dragon's ArrivalThe Freedom Defenders2 years ago in Settings More Like This
Sam Carter, D-27 Maxie, Hayden Winston looked at Emerald City's skyscrapers, today was just another ordinary day in the city. Sam looked down with sorrow in his eyes. Hayden knew exactly what that look in his eyes meant.
"Still thinking about your parents?" Hayden asked. Sam only nodded his head in response while still looking down.
*Will they ever be found? What was Zed Doom planning to do with them? Are they even still alive?* Questions and uncertainties ran through his mind like a comet going at the speed of light. So fast, he couldn't think straight.
Hayden picked up the human child and looked at him straight into his eyes. "I promised you that I'd find them. And I'm not one to break my promises." At first, Sam was scared to hear Hayden sound so cruel. But he then realized it wasn't cruelty in his voice, it was determination. Hayden would set things right if it was the last thing he did.
Then Hayden's communicator had started ri
Writing Tips: Avoiding Bad WorldbuildingOne of the first mistakes that a writer of speculative fiction (science fiction, fantasy, or supernatural horror) makes is front-loading every little bit of information of their world that they painstakingly made. One of the last mistakes that a writer of speculative fiction makes is giving stupid details of their world, unknowingly retconing things, and explaining things that don't need explaining because this usually ends their career or irreparably damages a franchise. Today's lesson is about "bad worldbuilding" because the hardest part of actually creating a fictional world is giving too much detail.Writing Tips: Avoiding Bad Worldbuilding6 months ago in Articles & Interviews More Like This
This one is going to be different for different types of media. For example, most television shows have a build-as-you-go kind of feel (think Fairly Odd Parents), while a series of novels is usually planned out from the beginning. As an aside, if you're planning out an entire series of novels, make sure that at least the very first one can stand completely on its own to the point where
Scars of Chaos II Ch. 21Chapter 21 The EmperorScars of Chaos II Ch. 212 years ago in Settings More Like This
This man's intentions were made clear as soon as he showed himself. That wasn't exactly a good idea, at least that's what Jacob believed.
"Who are you?" Jacob asked.
"No doubt the golden goddess said to you that I was another form of your nemesis. In a way, she is correct." The man said. "But this "incarnation" has an identity of his own. You may call me Mateus Palamecia! Your new Emperor!"
The man levitated in the air and wielded a staff that obeyed his commands without him even so much as touch it. But Jacob and the others were far from impressed.
"Bow down to the Emperor of all existence!" Mateus declared.
"Never!" Jacob said, summoning the Trueflame.
"Not in a million years!" Cheryl said, summoning her weapon. A samurai's sword named the Lightbringer!
"Since when could one man hold the entire plane of existence by the throat?" Ryoku asked, summoning a scythe steeped in Darkness. The DeathScythe!
Tye said brought out his two fists to fight with. "Time for a be
FenyvesFenyves3 years ago in Emotional More Like This
A csend méhében fekszünk. Burkot vont körénk a némaság. Áthatolhatatlan falat teremtett az akarat, ami bennünk a kezdetekkor gyökeret vert.
Fejünk felett ezernyi levél és gally sarjad.
Száraz papírszíveket roncsol össze az idő, de a burkon belül, az Eredőből a törzsön át egy világ épül a Mindenség felé.
Ne sértsd fel a kérget viharos szerelmeddel! A bölcső minden fájdalmad átérzi majd eztán. Fájdalmaidért hogyan is vezekelhetne a saját fájdalmával, melyet önkezűen okoztál?
Ki elénk belépsz, vetkőzd le a hétköznapok durva posztóját, vagy légy közömbös és hagyd a gyökeret tovább lüktetni (magadban). Ne sértsd fel hiába a talajt! Tűleveleink félve szúrnak fel
31A tavasz pillanatai315 years ago in Concrete Poetry More Like This
Napsütés cirógatja barázdált arcomat,
Talán ez lesz, mi enyhítheti kínomat.
Hallom a madarak lágy dallamát,
Ami az ágak közt oly vidáman szökik át.
De még fáj, szinte úgy hogy éget,
El kell fogadnom a kegyetlen véget.
De ahogy a tavasz újra reményt ébreszt,
Én is úgy próbállak emlékké varázsolni téged.
Remélem, a nap majd süt oly hevesen,
Hogy ezen az egészen a lelkem majd nevessen.
De még csak most jött a tavasz épphogy csak megjelent,
Remélem, hoz új álmokat, reményt és szerelmet!
35Ballagás355 years ago in Concrete Poetry More Like This
Elballagott a vén diák, iskolája zárva már,
Új lehetõségek, élet, csodák mi rá vár.
Az együtt töltött évek szép emléke megmarad,
Nevetve emlékszünk vissza, ha feldereng egy pillanat!
Féktelen gyermekkorunk magunk mögött hagytuk,
Sok élményt, barátságot, tudást kaptunk.
Ez is mint minden változás kissé rémiszt,
Magunk mögött hagyni a megszeretett régit.
De megyünk tovább mert ez az élet rendje,
A szépet, jót folyton keresve.
Saiba-ju :Cyber Beasts: Chapter 1Chapter 1Saiba-ju :Cyber Beasts: Chapter 12 years ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
In 1983, members of a large DNA experimenting facility deep in the mountains of Japan vanished overnight. A century later, an American TV crew visits the deserted site and bears witness of strange creatures that have done horrific murders no outsiders have ever seen.
"Ugh...that don't feel right. What is that?" A black skinned man with a camera, brown eyes, red shirt, black pants, brown shoes and a bald head asked. "Did you hear that just now? It sounded like someone was screaming for a second." A woman with a brown jacket, blue pants, black pants, blue eyes and long red hair said. The two people then notice a group of strange looking creatures, two of them holding arms of a woman with white cloth. They seem to be like animals but with humanoid bodies, cybernetic components on them and all look dark looking with black smoke emitting from them and glowing red eyes and markings. "Huh? What's going on? I thought this was an abandoned facility, what are those things
DepressedDepressed8 years ago in Spoken Word More Like This
Once again all alone
I suppose I must deserve it
I'm clingy and annoying
Obnoxious and dense
Rash and silly
Lazy and obsessive
Sometimes I hate myself
I want to draw people in
But only push them away
I cry so much lately
Because everything hurts
Maybe I'm not meant to be happy
I force my smile
I fake my laugh
Does anyone notice?
Does anyone care?
It's not "Like Me" to be so
Depressed? Upset? Angry?
What is 'like me'?
Someone tell me
Because I don't know myself anymore
Once again, as before
I'm all alone
By the Hand of BastBy the Hand of Bast4 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
With the last hieroglyph finished, Wati set aside the scroll he had been working on. He closed The Book of the Dead and ran his hands along the cover. Despite the fact he wrote these words on a regular basis, never had it been so hard. Ra had long since disappeared for his usual voyage, and the wick of his lamp was nearly burnt to the end. As the flame died its orange glow was replaced by the ghostly light of the moon filtering through the linens that covered the windows and door of his small hut.
On either side of the doorway, stood the shadows of two pots. It had been many days since Tiankhit had left him, but still the barley continued to grow. Wati had so hoped for the emmer wheat to sprout first. Like all men, he wanted a son, but had come to love the idea of his daughter just as much. They were overjoyed when the first leaves pressed their way up through the dirt to tell them the news of their child, and the days passed with excitement as they waited to see if they grew to be bar
Aura: The ResparkAura: The Respark3 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
Aura: The Respark
I, the sheltered child who started to tragically fall from your grace
Into the void of this sudden loneliness
Realizing I followed every single one of your steps
But yet, I failed to hold onto those uplifting moments
Now I feel as if maybe I had forced you to make every one of those promises
That which you still kept
So I don't want to sound dishonest, but out of us, you are the strongest
You make sure to protect
To you, everyone, and everything is dearest
None left to neglect
But with all of that, you take on those heavy burdens
And try your best
Calling out your name into the nothingness
Forgetting about the peace you bestowed upon me
I guess it's just too hard to be away from
Leo Benny and Johnny in Hunchback of Norte Dame #1Leo Benny and Johnny adventures of Hunchback of Norte Dame Part 1Leo Benny and Johnny in Hunchback of Norte Dame #12 years ago in Drama More Like This
It was 15th century Paris and the LKHFF which consist's of Leo Benny Johnny Thundara Talon Johnathan Lionwing and Atticus Wolf have arrived Atticus was new to the adventure team this was his first adventure with them and need to learn they all looked at Leo who was looking at his time band
Atticus: Wow my first time with the LKHFF team I am so excited
Talon: Whoa slow down Atticus
Johnathan Lionwing: Before Atticus blows a fuse can you tell us where we are
Leo: Looks like we have arrived back in Paris France 15th Century
Thundara: No wonder the the houses look different
Benny: Good thing Heath isn't here
Just then Johnny saw a wagon with a puppet show going on and saw kids gathered around it
Johnny: Cool a puppet show
Talon: Go on and enjoy yourself
That is what Johnny did he went to enjoy the show
MORNING IN PARIS, THE CITY AWAKES
TO THE BELLS OF NOTRE DAME THE
FISHERMAN FISHES, THE
The Freedom DefendersEpisode 1 Enter the Blue LegendThe Freedom Defenders2 years ago in Settings More Like This
Hayden Winston entered his commander's quarters as the owner of that room had requested him to. Commander Rex had looked out towards Zed Doom's palace. The Hall of Despair loomed out in the distance of the airship's window. It did not look like an inviting place and one that was best avoided.
"You sent for me, Commander?" Hayden asked.
"Yes." The German Shepard said. "Everything is ready, I assume?"
"Yes, sir. Our best fighters are prepared and ready to begin, sir." Hayden said.
"Glad to hear it." Commander Rex said as he issued the order to storm the palace. Hayden left the dimly lit room to head to the bridge. Why did Commander Rex keep the room dark was a mystery to Hayden.
The pilots of the ship had looked at Hayden entering the bridge. They were expecting his next order. Hayden told them that Commander Rex had given the order. Then everyone had taken their positions to get ready for their assault on Zed Doom's domain.
Changing into his hero outfit,
Fantasy Films Adventures - Spindle and Thread (4)Fantasy Films Adventures - Spindle and Thread (4)1 year ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
Diablo, the Spinning Wheel and Heath rematerialized in the Fantastic Lynx Productions studio housing unit. Rae was placed on a large bed and covered with silk blankets. The sinister lynx eyed the sleeping lioness with a greedy stare.
“At last!” Heath said while rubbing his paws together. “Just a kiss away and Rae will be mine forever.” Heath puckered his lips and leaned closer to Rae’s face.
“Ahem!” Diablo interrupted. “I believe you still owe me the Moon Stone you promised me.”
“Oh right! One shiny white rock coming up!” Heath pulled the blankets off of Rae and reached toward the bodice of her dress when he noticed that her neck was completely bare. “Hey, the Moon Stone ain’t on her!”
“Heath, we had a bargain.” Diablo said. He started flaring up as if he would strike at the lynx. Heath simply head up the Amulet of United Souls and
Fantasy Films Adventures - Spindle and Thread (1)Fantasy Films Adventures - Spindle and Thread (1)1 year ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
A prison bus arrives from the city before coming to a screeching halt at the front of one particular building across the street from the more prominent studio. It’s single passenger slowly emerged through the open doors: Heath Lynx
The dastardly rival of LionKingHeart Fantasy Films, was once again free after serving months in jail. He returned to his studio, Fantasy Lynx Productions. The front gates were closed and held shut by binding chains secured with an old fashioned model lock. Fortunately for Heath, the key to the lock was granted to him upon release. After unlocking and unbinding the chains, he opened up his gates for first time since he moved into the studio.
Before going inside, Heath glanced over his shoulder at the LionKingHeart Fantasy Films Studio across the street. The symbol of a mighty Lion shining along the building, LionKingHeart Fantasy Films is a non-profit production
BLJaR in An American Tail Fievel Goes West PrologBENNY, LEO, JOHNNY AND RAE IN AN AMERICAN TAIL FIEVEL GOES WESTBLJaR in An American Tail Fievel Goes West Prolog2 weeks ago in General Fiction More Like This
*Somewhere in space we see the Sentinel Mega Ship flying across the stars an were on course to another world where Jayden actually has been to before a long time ago.*
Roger Rabbit: (Looking through the bridge rear view) Jeepers it looks a lot like planet earth.
Jayden: That's because it is earth Roger but this earth is in the 1800's now.
Roger Rabbit: (Turns to Jayden concern) What do you mean 1800's?
Sarah: Well you see Roger, Jayden came to this world a long time ago when he was 10 years old an befriended a russian mouse named Fievel Mousekewitz and his family and also a friendly alley cat named Tiger who was a very old cat friend that he knew.
Booster: Mice? You mean the mice ruled the earth instead of humans.
Jayden: No silly. Their are humans on this planet and they ruled the earth but from beyond the humans some of the animals here are similar to the humans but in a different way.
Booster: How different?
SoulHeart Heroes: Sleeping Beauty Ch.1SoulHeart Heroes AdventuresSoulHeart Heroes: Sleeping Beauty Ch.12 years ago in General Fiction More Like This
The Four Wishes
As it starts, a book lies on a tabletop, illuminated by a single flame on a candle. On its cover read “Sleeping Beauty”, decorated in gold coverings and gorgeous designs. As we zoom towards it, the book opens up to the first page of a storybook.
“In a far away land, long ago, lived a king and his fair queen. Many years have they longed for a child and finally their wish as granted. A daughter was born, and they called her “Aurora”. Yes, they named her after the dawn, for she filled their lives with sunshine. Then a great holiday was proclaimed throughout the kingdom, so that all of high and low estate pay homage to the infant princess. And our story begins on that most joyful day....
ENTER THE MYTHRIL Chapter ICHAPTER 1ENTER THE MYTHRIL Chapter I6 years ago in Fantasy More Like This
Somewhere in Scotland. December, 1321 A.D.
It had been a rough week due to the rain and the snow. The flurries and the frozen rain hadnt stopped for about 3 days, and it didnt seem like it would stop anytime soon. The construction of the castle had been delayed several times and some of the workers - human workers - fell sick to the cold weather, hard work and bad feeding. On top of the awful weather, their supplies had been taken by muggers coming from the surrounding woods, several times in the last month. It didnt seem like the guards appointed to custody the caravans were really enough to protect the supplies. A handful of dragons, not more than 10, taking turns in guarding and helping in the raising of the structure had had to send 2 or 3 scouts down hill to scan the landscape from the sky, guarding the caravan and scaring away the muggers. At least the food got to its destination, but the weather and the slow travelling to it ended up sp
Pony-Tales! LyricsPony-Tales! Lyrics3 years ago in Songs & Lyrics More Like This
Life is like a party here in pony-ville
Race-ponies, magic, pegasus - it's a pony-blur
We might solve a problem or go see Bonbon
Tales of Daring-do, bad and good luck tales, oo-oo
D-d-d-danger, watch behind you - there's a vilain out to find you
What to do? Just grab onto some Pony-Tales, oo-oo!
Not girly-tails but manly-tails. Oh, Pony-Tales, oo-oo!
When it seems they're headed for the final curtain
the Sonic-RainBoom never fails, that's for certain
The worst of messes become successes!
Tales of Daring-do, bad and good luck tales, oo-oo
Not girly-tails but manly-tails. Oh, Pony-Tales, oo-oo!
SoulHeart Heroes: Sleeping Beauty Ch.2Chapter TwoSoulHeart Heroes: Sleeping Beauty Ch.22 years ago in General Fiction More Like This
“But King Stefan, still fearful of his daughter's life, did then and there decree that every spinning wheel in the kingdom on that very day be burnt. So it was done” said the Narrator.
Every spinning wheel from the village to the edges of the kingdom were all gathered today. By nightfall, they were all piled onto each other and were set aflame. All continues to burn as a gigantic column of smoke rises from the flames. Watching everything, Mistress Flora and Tyler were at the window, staring down below. But both are concerned. How will this stop Maleficent from harming Aurora? Knowing too greatly, she'll just find another way. Both then walked away.
“Silly fiddle faddle!” muttered Flora.
“This is just plain ridiculous!” fumed Tyler.
“Tyler, you need to relax. We'll find a way to save Aurora” said Hanson.
“Hmph! Why can't we just storm into her home and just FORCE her to remove the curse? That's what I would do!
The Freedom DefendersEpisode 4 The Terror of Hade XThe Freedom Defenders1 year ago in Settings More Like This
A few weeks after the incident with the plant monster that Zed Doom sent to destroy Emerald City took place before Commander Rex felt he was ready to berate the Freedom Defenders on their less than perfect performance in getting rid of the monster. There was also the matter of their mysterious savior to discuss.
"What happened back there?" Commander Rex asked. "I gave you a few weeks to explain yourselves, and all you can tell me is virtually nothing!"
"We told you all we knew." Hayden told the Commander.
Ben interceded. "Our demise was interrupted by a dragon."
Johnny chimed in next. "With super quick ninja arts."
Julie said her piece next. "He made it look like child's play compared to us."
"So all we have to go on is someone saving us from that monster and then mysteriously disappearing as soon as he arrived." Hayden finished the report to Commander Rex. "I wish we knew more...."
Commander Rex was silent for a few moments. He w
Heath's Night At The House Of Mouse: Part 4.HAPPY HAETH-VERSERY #4.Heath's Night At The House Of Mouse: Part 4.6 months ago in Humor More Like This
Mickey Mouse: "Thanks Genie for that wonderful performance. How about another round of applause for the funny Genie huh?"
The crowd starts cheering for Genie again.
Heath: (goes to Benny's cousin Alice to flirt with her) "Ha cha hi ya Alice. How's about going from Wonder Land to Wonder Man?"
Alice does like the way he said it and neither does Benny.
Benny: (Roars and literally jumps in front of Heath, baring his teeth) "BACK OFF DOG BREATH!!!!"
Heath: (Very nervous) "Awk! Benny! stop you can't do this to me. You can't- (gets punched). (chuckles nervously) Okay, fine okay, well I deserved that."
Catherine: "Man, that Heath just doesn't give up, does he?"
Mickey Mouse: "Here's a cartoon that will hopefully teach Heath how to be a gentleman." http://www.aparat.com/v/kxyUY/Goofy_-_How_to_Be_a_Gentleman_(2000)
After the cartoon is over, everyone starts cheering.
Catherine: "WOW! That cartoon was wonderful. Don't you think so Albert?"