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That's a funny place for cheese
this was written for week 14 of the 52-week challenge sponsored by thewrittenrevolution and six word stories groups that challenged us to write a story form an animals point of view...
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Pigs fly briefly from high places
do not read too much into this... i know it sounds (or could be read as) dark but that is not my intention here... the thought for this came to my head after seeing a deviant id of a flying pig much like the one used on Pink Floyds Animals...my synapse network took over from that point...
see, nothing dark about flying pigs at all...just their shadows
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Jake


Growing up in Las Vegas is probably the most difficult thing a teenager can endure. I mean, it is the crime capitol of America—crime and kids don't exactly mix. The easiest way I can describe it to you is like a glass containing oil and water: the two substances don't go together without mixing them; and I don't intend to become a criminal.
For some reason, you never get used to the blinding glare of the neon signs outside of almost every single building, or the prostitutes walking the streets, not the constant honking of vehicle horns and angry screams of tourists and citizens, or the never ending, earsplitting shrieks of police sirens.
You don't even get used to the gunshots outside your window at night.
You're uneasy when you go out in the day, terrified when you go out at night, and—if you're like me, anyway—you often sneak into bars and casinos with your fake I.D.'s and nobody takes a second glance at you. You can do anything you want in Sin City, believe it or not—which is exactly why it can be so scary.
Why my parents chose to raise me and my nine-year-old sister in possibly the most dangerous city in America is beyond me. Well, actually, it isn't beyond me; it's right in front of me, so close that I can reach out and grab it.
Dear old mom and dad are first class criminals themselves.
Now, a jury has just convicted them of first-degree murder for killing our crazy cat-lady of a neighbor, Mrs. Berry, and they've been sentenced to twenty-five to life. In a single day, I've gone from a normal, good-looking (if I do say so myself), football-playing, seventeen-year-old guy, to a single parent to my nine-year-old sister, Jess.
A judge ordered my sister and me to move to Montana to live with our aunt and uncle for three months—until I turn eighteen and am a legal adult.
So we're moving to Montana.
Yeah. My thoughts exactly. No offense to the good people of Montana, but I'm a city boy, born and raised in Vegas. I'd never survive in the countryside. Seriously, could you think of two places that were more different?
Call me when you find an answer to that question.
My name is Jake Ryder.
Welcome to my hell.
rewrite of chapter one. I've decided to go a different direction with the story
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The poem is my own, however the kid was photographed by someone and I found it online. If anyone has anything to say about it, please tell me I would love feedback, plus if you have any recommendations or such for this kind of art (or poetry i guess) please tell me. Mostly this kind of emotional poetry is what I focus on. And it is usually free-written
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Do you remember?
How we explored?
Without a map but instinctively knew where we were going
Eagerly moving through the curves and creases of our new world
Each step burned into our memory
How eventually we knew all those secret places
Sometimes rushing in the eager anticipation of what we knew we would find
Sometimes slowly, lingering dragging out the end result

How we still often wonder what they have done
Where they have been
So long and slender
Soothing
Instilling a passion deep within
Sometimes held tight like a trophy
Molded for only you
Remember we were worshipped

Touch
Press
Caress
Sculpting the world around us
We guided you
Tracing lines and curves
When we were cold we made you shiver
When we were warm you craved us

We know we made you shudder
Remember we made you cry
You screamed out loud
When we whispered our dreams
On your face
On your nape
In your hair
Against your lips

Together we traced out your life
Now only shadows of what we use to be
Memories of our journeys burned within us
No specks or blemishes upon us
Not rough any-more
Always smooth and slender
Could we explore a new world?
We always wonder
for my friend ... i hope this works

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I walk this desert, no stream in sight, my beliefs dead. With my
dreams far, I see mirages everywhere from what I could have 
been if my morals still existed. From there I saw my old threats.
Soul for sale, it said. 
That was hardly ironic. I had no use for it, and the predators
already made their bids, darkness staring me in the face. That's
alright. I've survived long enough, ready to fade.
Slowly, I kneel to the ground, the warmth of the sun thrown
away like an old rag. I knew, because all around me the desert
was burning. When you've lost everything, what could you do
but watch it turn to ash?
I walk this desert, no stream in sight, my beliefs dead. With my
dreams far, I see mirages everywhere from what I could have
been, if my morals still existed. From there I saw my old threats.
Soul, for sale, it said.
That was hardly ironic. I had no use for it, and the predators
already made their bids, darkness staring me in the face. That's
alright. I've survived long enough, ready to fade.
Slowly, I kneel to the ground, the warmth of the sun thrown
away like an old rag. I knew, because all around me the desert
was burning. When you've lost everything, what could you do
but watch it turn to ash?

Hi
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not all wounds can be seen
visible -scars- provide stories without asking
the ones you don't see require trust.

something for the April Freestyle contest sponsored by
six-word-stories
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Dear John,

I don't expect you to know me. Then again maybe you do. I do not know...I wonder sometimes weather you visit all the people that care about you...not only just the ones that knew you...maybe sometimes the ones that you never met? I have never had the oppourtunity. I was born too late...Both my siblings were alive when you were...I never had that chance. Of course then I think...If I was alive...how would I have handled your death?...much Like I handled Steve Irwin's I'd imagine...have you met him by the way? Wonderful man...I think Paul would like him...Anyways. I may have reacted like that...except I think it would have been much worse....For Steve I cried every night for about 3 or 4 nights...then I cried all over again when I watched his memorial service on the telly. For you...I don't know weather I would have been able to stop...Eventually of course I would...but even now, I was never alive when you were and i still cry for you...Everytime I hear Paul sing 'Here Today'...everytime he speaks of you...when he gets that look in his eye, that tone of voice...the one that says "Johnny I miss you..." I feel his pain...for some reason. I don't know if there really is such a connection with me...but, I feel I must tell you...When I first saw a picture of you guys as The Beatles. I was very small, My mother was telling me of you...She pointed to each picture and told me your names. I asked how old you all were. She said about her age, a bit older...then she said you were dead. I asked why and she told me you were killed by a random guy. I asked why again and she said no one knows. From the moment I looked at your picture, before I even knew your name. Someting about you...enchanted me. That's the best word i can use to describe it. I don't know what it was either. Just...something about the look on your face....

As I grew I heard your music and the first song I learned all the words to was 'I Wanna Hold Your Hand'. My aunt played it in the car one day and I sung along perfectly. She asked how I, a child of 7 knew that song. I replied with. "Am I not supposed to?" As I got a bit older...around 9ish The Beatles 1 album came out with all you guy's most famous songs. I remember the commercial vividly. It started off with 'I Wanna Hold Your Hand' as the announcer described what songs were on a few others played in the background. Then Paul's face appeared on the screen as he began to sing 'Hey Jude' I then had Paul's face memorized as well as yours. Around the same time Paul was on his 'Back In The U.S Tour' Which the commercial started off with 'Back In The U.S.S.R', as I saw him on stage I then realised how old he was compaired to the pictures I had seen. It really began to sink in how much I had missed. By this point my mother had not kept tabs on you guys for a while and wasn't aware the George was dying of cancer...this almost makes me a little sad since she had told me that he was always her favorite. A few years later I realised that I had actually a connection with Beatleishness from ages as early as 3 and 4. I found out that my favorite character on the original version of Shining Time Station(A show that presented stories of Thomas the Tank Engine in a different way then just a bunch of stories in a row.) was in fact played by Ringo. The tiny Mr Conductor owho actually narrated the stories until he left the show after the first season.

It was however only a few years ago that i fully realised how special you lads were. Around this time of year in 2008 I had a sudden craving to hear 'I Wanna Hold Your Hand'. I went on the internet and found a video on youtube of the music video. Wonderful thing Youtube....it has let me see so many Beatle videos that i would have never seen otherwise. Anyways. I was listening to it and glanced over to the "related videos" and saw a video entitled "You've Got To Hide Your Love Away and Exciteing Adventure Of Paul On The Floor - Beatles Movie Help" Now I had remembered hearing about "Help" since the commercial of it's release on DVD remastered was on at the same time as the others I mentioned. So I clicked on it. As I watched the scene play out I heard the song that is still one of, if not my favorite Beatles song. The way your voice sounded in that song made me feel so calm and happy. As I watched you sing in on the small screen I had I felt as if I were melting. The feeling known as Beatlemania had just to set in...As I continued to watch the events that came I laughed non-stop as Paul shrunk and tried his best not to get crushed in the frey that followed. When the video was over I sat for a few seconds. I stared at the screen and said. "My God...The Beatles are amazing...." I had finally realised what it was that everyone saw. I saw it too. That silliness, that amazing feeling of closeness that You lads gave your fans. We feel like we know you when we've never met you. It is undescribable. My mother came in the room at this point and asked what I was doing. I turned to her and said. "The Beatles are amazing." she said "Yes, what did you find?" I showed her the video and she said she remembered seeing 'Help' in theaters when she was 15. She went with her sister, brother, and friend. As it started all the girls screamed for you. I thought how amazing would it have been to be there. In that time. Maybe even get the chance to see you in person. I never got it. Anyway, after that I became a maniac. I listened to all the songs, got all the movies, watched all the interviews I could find. I even began drawing you lads. It took me a while to really get the hang of your faces but I eventually got it.

So, here I am. 3 years on, telling you all this stuff that you may or may not ever know. One thing I do know is that when the time comes that i get to find you. I will tell you. Untill then I just hope you know how much you mean to all of us still here. Yoko and Sean miss you very much. I can see it when they talk about you. Paul and Ringo do as well. I havn't see Julian talk much but I'm sure he misses you too.  Oh by the way, say hi to George for me, and everyone down here who misses him as well. I hope you both are having a good time.

So, now that this letter is almost over I feel I should mention that I wish you a very Happy Birthday. 70...I bet it feels odd...especially when you think back on everything.

Well, it's about time I shut up now so once again, happy birthday and have a wonderful day.

Kate.

P.S I Love You.

P.S.S Say hi to Julia as well.

<3
I got the idea for this while reading a letter someone wrote from Paul to John. i though hmmm, why not do one from Me to John? and this is what eventually happened when I got going.
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   The air was frosted, burning,
rough. It attempted to displace and distort him, attempted to weaken and shut
him down. It however, did no such thing. It was there to cause sleep, but it
was not working. It was actually awakening him. Loud, harsh hissing became
constant, with the backdraft of even colder air rushing across his body. It all
was disorienting, even behind closed eyes. There was no way he could stay
awake, even open his senses. Effectively useless was he, with no apparent
escape from this cycle of cold mixed with nothing.

   There was an explainable reason for
why this began and would not end. It became abundantly clear that he was indeed
awake, without a chance to actually be awake. His senses did return, however in
a rush of hurtful plenty, bleeding into his very soul. With his eyes opening druggedly, the cold frosted over his eyes, but their own
warmth basked over the icy sheens and melted away the layers on his face. He
saw the glass, the permafrost, the jagged blisters, of pure cold, and even the
rushing-in air pockets, even further cold.

   It was cryogenesis,
and he was exiting it. A folly of noise ensued as the canister shell incasing
him cracked open, beeps and still that bloody hissing. He shifted his muscles
uncontrollably, in what was either a movement from the machine, or a defrosting
motion from his body, that lurched his entire frame
forward, causing him to topple to the floor. His arms extended instinctively,
and his hands met the ground with shaking force. Still completely out of
element, he erected to a full stance, where his dizzying flurry of sensory
details eventually stopped his vision from spinning and allowed him the first
equilibrium he had been granted for many minutes.
   
   However, sheer exhaustion from his unused yet somehow extremely spent muscles caused him to sag miserably, and allowed him no return to an erect stance for many seconds, in which he breathed heavily as he examined his shaking hands. He eventually returned standing, and would take a few steps forward before patting himself down.

   He realized his uniform was still
intact, and ever fully distributed across his person. His steps began again,
quicker, more focused. He needed a mirror; a surface as such-

   But he stopped. It was pitch black. He was in a dense cavern of sand and rock, and it
may very well have ended earlier where had begun. In fact, where were his
weapons? He returned in a short number of steps to the alien pod from which he
emerged, in which he extracted an M4A1, an M1911A1, and a number of combat
tools, all neatly tucked in a channel adjacent to him. His carbine sported a
light, and so he entered a mental state of concentration as he loaded his rifle
and turned his lighting on.

   In this panel he saw his uniform, just as he was frozen in so very desperately; His
helmet, marred by explosives, still had his night light and headset in mount,
chinstrap in place. His shoulder and neck pads, also chewed on by a fragmenting
blast, remained seated in his collar, with a relatively untouched ballistic
vest and camouflage battle dress below. His various harnesses and straps for
his various gear also stayed put, and even his boots retained their polished
look. Most shocking was his watch, frozen mere minutes after his last battle.
However, in that very gear was a man, befuddled by what he saw. In this cave
before him, many years advanced he stood

   He had no idea of what transpired, and somehow could not believe, nor fathom, nor want
to. Never would he fully. However, he maintained his warlike instinct, and
focused on the one goal of escape and survival

   He had to get the hell out of there and figure himself out.
The return to life within a fallen Earth.
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Drop a penny in the dark
And bring the light
Into the sight
Of the feeble eyed
And spin the record so the world is moving
Oh yeah spin it up and run it down
The street like a song which is like
A finger snap and a tap on the sneakers
Which connects me to the headphones...oh yeah...tell me you are listening

I'm just a sinner in this here planet
Oh sweet Calvary on the Hill
Where King of King humbled Himself
So He could kill
The sins of many
Oh yeah He said ain't no greater love than laying down your life
For your brothers and sisters
Oh yeah didja hear, you kings?
Whose robes so majestic and you governors on your thrones
Whose empire like the temple which the Pharisees say
To the king of kings
To bring it down cause He said He would and He said He would raise it up again
Oh yeah you ain't clear on what He wanted to tell youse!
You ain't understanding the vibe He is trying to deliver

He is the temple
He is the foundation
Of the stone
He alone is the stone
The builders rejected
He is the hope
In the eyes of the oppressed
In the eyes of the accused
In the eyes of the ones whom the world
Casts aside Lazarus of society, they call them...

Reminisce  
And see how He carried the burden we couldn't carry
He carried it all right
See His light slice through the darkness
Freed us by His redemptive love
From sin, from hell from the grips of the devil
He looked at the fire in the face
And said
"Fear not children of My Father
Cry no longer, sheep of my flock
See, I bring you hope and light!
See I bring with me hope, redemption, salvation, answer to your prayer...
For as Moses' time My people cried
I heard you cry
I shall move the mountains and upturn the sea
And destroy the chariots and the pharaoh all over again
Just to set you free
Like birds in captivity
I have come to set you free!"

O praise the Lord
My soul
O praise Him whose throne forever be the glory
O praise Him the one whose Name forever cause knees to bend
Alone in Him alone yes, in Him alone
Does glory forever be!

Yes, see Him the faithful one
who wants to see you come home
Yes, see Him whose lights are on at the porch
see He wants to greet you when you come home...
12:33a.m
16/6/2012
Sat

Edited 12:40a.m.
Sat
16/6/12
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