Night's Desires Ch.1In ancient Mobious, in Obscurity Forest, a battle rages between the creatures of the night. Moonclaw: the werewolf pack, and Darkfang: the vampire clan. Locked in a bloody war, centuries long, each wishing to undo the other.Night's Desires Ch.15 years ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
But when a prince and princess find love within their enemies; will it end the war, or make everything worse than it already is
Within the fortress of Moonclaw; the prince, Shadow, sat in his room bored. He lay on his bed, stroking the head of his loyal pet wolf, Kyani. She happily wagged her tail and he scratched behind her ear. Shadow just stared out his window, up to the moon.
"Stupid parents " He growled, "Why did I even get grounded? All I did was set the garden on fire " Shadow let out a sigh. He looked out to the moonlit forest then sat up. He threw open his window and looked to the ground twenty feet below. Kyani looked to him, perplexed look on her face.
"I'm going for a walk" He told her, "I'll be back for dinner, before Mom and Dad can no
Amy Rose - Mary Sue Test FunAmy Rose - Mary Sue Test Fun4 years ago in Reviews & Guides More Like This
The Name: Amy Rose
+ Is the character named after you (this includes your first, middle, and last names, and any nicknames or online names you use)? [20 points]
+ Is the character's name an unusual spelling of a more common word or name? [3 points]
Nope~ Amy is a very common name.
(Japanese language has it as Emi because of the way they build their words using previously made character. They do it for the sound: not for the spelling)
+ Is the character's name a noun or adjective not normally used as a name? [2 points]
+2 for last name (As according to first question)
+ Does the character's name contain unnecessary hyphens, apostrophes, or other punctuation? (e.g. M'chelle, Gloria-Angelica, etc.) [4 points]
Nuh uh ~
+ Does the character have more than one first, middle, or last name, without reason? [3 points]
Nope. She doesn't even HAVE a middle
Mary SueMary Sue4 years ago in Profiles More Like This
-> Credit to Archie Comics
Well she is!
"A Mary Sue is a fictional character with overly idealized and hackneyed mannerisms, lacking noteworthy flaws. It is generally accepted as a character whose positive aspects overwhelm their other traits until they become one-dimensional."
She is a literal Mary Sue, and her fan base only exemplifies this fact.
She is the same copy-paste "Smart, Beautiful, rich, mature, leader, caring, compassionate, kind, down-to-earth" girl that is shoved into every story, and every fanfiction that we all hate.
She is built up and idealized as the perfect woman, and we all know it.
What really irks me however is not just the fact she is A Mary sue, but the fact that her Mary-sue-ness only serves to ruin the fandom that I like.
She continually derails the main character that I like, changing him from the fun and free-going hero into a drama-loving lapdog.
She derails the entire plot of the comic as well, takin
Sonic: The Blue Blur~Sonic: The Blue Blur ~Sonic: The Blue Blur8 years ago in Urban & Spoken Word More Like This
For many the horizon
Is a place that can't be reached.
But for the fasted of them all
It's a barrier to be breached.
His velvet fur is electric blue
And his eyes shine emerald green.
He wouldn't stop to save his life
'Cause there's too much to be seen!
He has many friends and rivals
A hero through and through.
He'll strut his stuff and talk some smack
But his heart is pure and true.
The love of his life is life itself
His adventures never end.
They're amazing, wild, and full of suspense
The next one's 'round the bend.
The danger's near, but the sky is clear
It's time to rock-'n-roll!
The pompous Doc doesn't stand a chance
He'll crawl back in his hole.
The danger's often very real
And the path's not always lit.
But courage runs in the Blue Blur's veins
And he'll never ever quit!
For many the horizon
Is a place that can't be reached.
But for the fasted of them all
It's a barrier to be breached.
SALLY.EXESALLY.EXE3 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
I'm a big fan of the Sonic the Hedgehog series, like a lot of people. I narrowed down to the classic Sonic the Hedgehog cartoon shows though, because I think the rest SEGA had spawned was rat-crap. Each to their own.
I was browsing E-bay the other day. I wondered if there would be any items about my favourite character from the series, Sally Acorn. Indeed, what I found was a plushie that was manufactured in SEGA WORLD of Sydney, which closed down due to the lack of visitors in 2006. Those Sally plushies were very rare, but I didn't have the money to buy her and my parents would despise me for it. I examined the plushie for a while as the article came with pictures. This Sally even had her jacket. On it, was written with a permanent marker "GOD". I don't really know what it meant. Probably the initials of the child owning her before they sold her.
I clicked the back button to return to the "Sonic Sally" search, knowing I wouldn't win the auction anyway, only to find another ar
Sonic Projects UpdateSonic Projects Update6 years ago in Drama More Like This
Post date: 2009.
Remember, none of these mean they'll be written or posted in a month or a year, it just means this is the list I hope to write. At the moment, I've never been busier, I'll admit. I don't even pay rent for peep's sake and I'm already set to have a meltdown.
Author Note: Ooh boy. I felt like you all deserved an update on what's been going up and down with my stories lately. I actually am writing between all the time I haven't posted much, but for some reason, I've been multi-writing a variety of workshop stories to the point of never completing them. In spite of this delay, here are a few stories and updates to be expected with their summaries, just so you know I'm not dead:
*~*A Shadow's Little Light - Chapter Nine: Lolita Doll
Summary: The two morally diverse hedgehogs must put their conflict aside in order to join forces and remember what it meant to cooperate side by side like they had once done for Earth not so long ago. Perhaps Amy Rose, with her p
Lost legends 04Lost Legends 04: The BeginningLost legends 045 years ago in Fan Fiction More Like This
Let me take you back to the beginning. Back before Sonic and Amy got together. Before Dr. Robotnik /Eggman became a threat. (Yes we're going back a long time ago.) Before Sonic, Manic and Sonia we're even born. The time we land in is a completely different era for Mobius. The war between normal Anthroes and the New Race breeds is over. You see the New Race breeds are paranormal creatures like Vampires and Werewolves. The three main types of breeds are Vampires, Lycanthropes, and Demons, other paranormals are mini sub-breeds that branch away from the main three. After the war (which for the record the Mobians started because they we're afraid of the New Race) 2 separate kingdoms were established so Mobius could run as smoothly as possible. One kingdom was to rule over normal Mobians so there would be no more prejudice against the new race. The other kingdom was to rule over the New Race so the breeds wouldn't get too happy and start k
Lost Legends 05Lost Legends 05: Head over HeelsLost Legends 055 years ago in Fan Fiction More Like This
* 6 weeks later *
"Don't you two have guys of your own? Why can you leave me and Sam alone?"
"Because it's our duty as your big sisters to annoy the hell out of you. Now, do you want Ameena's black jeans or my blue ones?" Aleena groaned and fell backwards on Ameena's bed. Unfortunately both her sisters had made it their job to 'help' Aleena and Samuel's relationship along. "Can I go now? Sam said he wanted to show me something." Both her sisters gave a frustrated sound. "Go ahead; you're not making this torturing stuff fun anymore." "I'll see you guys later." Aleena went down the hall to her on room where she got dressed and climbed out her window. Aleena had gotten into a fight with her father earlier and had been 'forbidden' to go anywhere outside the Pack's territory. She landed soundlessly and easily shifted into her wolf form, taking off to find her boyfriend.
Where was she? Aleena wouldn't
another fake loveEverything started with this girl in July 2012 a week before Ramadan the month when Muslims fast , I was standing there leaning over the window at my grandma's house... there was an opening of a new shoe-store...I was just there watching people and I was totally bored when I saw that girl coming with her mom and her family they were heading to the shoe-store I used to see that girl a lot in our neighbourhood but I never gave a shit about her .... but that day I don't know what happened I started to stalk her with my eyes watch her moves and I did not even blink you know that moment when you feel you found something you seek ?! that was the same feeling I had there....the more I looked the more I remembered her .... it turned out to be that she was with me in an arabic class when I was 8 or 9 but then I only cared about playing and stupid stuff Love wasn't in my dictionary besides I always used to treat girls as my enemies .... anyways then I remembered her name was "Areej",Areej meansanother fake love2 years ago in Profiles More Like This
Linn's story chapter 3"How did it go?" Asks a round eyed and exited Night. "I'm in." I grin at her and she squeaks. "I knew it. Didn't I say it?" "Yes Night, you said it." I sight when we have to go into the class room. "I guess we always will be followed by camera's now." I nod and smile slightly. "Yeah, starting this afternoon." "OMG, my best friend will be a star!" She squeaks again, and then, with a bit of worry in her face, adds "You won't forget me, right?" I stare at her in amazement and she blushes for a bit. "Night, you don't have to worry hon. You won't let me forget you." I wink at her and then turn my attention to the teacher. "Well, that was boring." Night comments when we leave school after our last lesson. "My guess is that boring isn't the right term for what is going to happen now." We stop and stare at the white trucks in front of our school. Before them, people with camera's are obviously waiting for someone – us, probably. "Wish me luck!" I whisper at Night. "You crazy? I'm not letting yLinn's story chapter 33 years ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
Mario and Sonic: Bejing 2008 Ch11Mario and Sonic: Beijing 2008Mario and Sonic: Bejing 2008 Ch113 years ago in General Fiction More Like This
Let Her Try
Ivo turned his head. Wario and Waluigi were out of sight. He sighed as he followed Mrs. Jany to what he felt like was his doom.
Mrs. Jany, however, smiled. She turned to look at him, and wrapped her arm around him, making Ivo jolt. "There's nothing to fear."
"I'll believe it when I feel it, Ma'am."
They heard someone running behind him. Ivo and Jany turned, seeing Waluigi running off, bumping into Mrs. Jany. "Sorry." He said, weakly, and ran off.
Ivo saw that he was crying, but it was to late. Waluigi was gone.
Inside the café, Ivo saw Mr. Hue sitting on one of the tables, sipping tea. He slowly sat down next to him, and was confused when Mrs. Jany did the same. "Y-you said that " He stopped.
Mr. Hue placed the teacup down, and looked at the small paper beside him. "So, Ivo is it true? Are you a Red-Eye?"
Ivo started to tear up. He was in shock. "I was one..."
Mr. Hue took Ivo's hand. "There's nothing to
Today's Quote 2011-09-25If gay is another meaning of awesome, then yes, you're VERY gay ♥♥Today's Quote 2011-09-254 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
Bloody love ch 11Shadow has wandering around the castle trying to figure out what he was feeling. Neverless he would ignore it even if it was love that was building towards Sonic. The red striped hedgehog walked down to the core of the castle. He sighed as he went past high technology spacecraft, which was waiting to be used. The ground and walls was made of alien steel, and looked like space colony ark. But with more advanced technology which was out of Shadows understanding. He had tried to study it as much he could to gain more knowledge of his father works. Shadow had only learned how to read the text via telepathy. It's very complex but you can say that Shadow only have touch a stone that have gained the information from another black arm who want to share something directly to Shadow and only Shadow. He cannot read others messages that he isn't allowed to, that's why he barely knows anything about the things that was surrounding him. There are also cases that everyone is allowed to read it like sBloody love ch 113 years ago in Romance More Like This
SeptemberSeptember's but a whisper,September4 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
a curl of autumn
on your cheek
or a wanton leaf
in the tawny gold
and the amber scent
succulent and slumbering,
off your skin
and sends my restless senses
BLACKMAIL - EpilogueBLACKMAIL - Epilogue4 years ago in Drama More Like This
13 years have passed since Shadow spoke his last words. Sonic was now 32 years old, with an amazing job, with a better mansion than the other, having photos of his dead parents in the living room and having a lot of photos from shadow in his room. "I miss you so much", sonic whispers to one of his photos, then goes to the balcony and looks up. Shadow really was his true love, then after his dead sonic never went out with others again. And the only thing he did with the love of his soul was train his son. "DAD! I'm prepared", silver comes into his father's room without knocking, having a masculine yellow shirt on, letting his muscles show; silver was a strong and handsome teenager now with 15 years old. "Alright, take your armament and we will start our journey", sonic says decided turning around to his son. Silver just obeys, leaves the room and enters his own room. The blue hedgehog turns around again and looks up to the night sky: "Don't worry my love, we will take re
Fake How are you?Fake2 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
I am fine, thank you.
How was your weekend?
It was great, tons of fun!
Besides the nights I spent crying….
Are you sure you’re okay?
I Love You BecauseSometimes I miss you.I Love You Because4 years ago in Urban & Spoken Word More Like This
Sometimes I really miss you.
Other times I am craving for you,
And occasionally my heart squeezes longingly so.
Should I dream of you,
I would want you to dream of me too,
To be connected in a way beyond your lovely hands touching my side,
And just maybe, that divine little weight upon my skin.
I used to look for just a girl with a pretty smile,
A beautiful mind and lips that speak sweet things...
And I am still looking for this girl every morning,
Every time I open my eyes in bed, and reaching out to touch, you.
I'm okay...I'm okay...3 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
You ask me if I'm okay
And I don't reply;
I just walk away.
Over and over,
Day after day,
It's that same little question
To which I have no say.
Finally after yet another try
I look at you
Meeting your worried eyes.
I put on a smile
And force out a laugh.
"Of course silly!
I'm more than alright."
A sigh escapes your lips
And your hand touches my hip.
Your head leans on mine
And your arms wrap my close.
You whisper in my ear,
"I'm sorry I'm the one who hurts you the most."
You're Not?You're anorexic if you're thinYou're Not?2 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
You're not? Then you're obese.
If you're different, you're insane
You're not? Then you're a fake.
If you're happy, you're hiding something.
You're not? You must be emo.
If you're dating, you're a slut.
You're not? You must have no friends.
If you're popular, you're a jerk.
You're not? You're a nobody.
If you're quiet, you must be disabled.
You're not? You obnoxious freak.
If you're you, you're wrong.
Then you must be perfect.
SlendermanSlendermanSlenderman5 years ago in Concrete Poetry More Like This
Don't go out into the woods, my child.
For Slenderman lives there, out in the wild
Do not ask why he lives in that place
It is mostly because he has no face.
He has long arms that grab you
And take you to a place that will fill you
With dread, and you will wish that
You were dead
Exposed to a Rose, Chapter 3It took every inch of her to keep herself from screaming.Exposed to a Rose, Chapter 33 years ago in Romance More Like This
There she was, standing in front of her favorite Amusement Park, Twinkle Park Waiting for none other than Sonic the Hedgehog, whom had asked her out-- on a date!
Amy's hands were behind her back, one squeezing the other's wrist in all of her excitement. He was rocking back and forth on the tips of her toes, and anxiously whipping her head to each side of her, keeping a look out for her Sonic.
Seeing as she wanted to look her absolute best for her all-time favorite hero, her spines were curled only slightly and she was sporting a simple, azure sundress that almost reached her knees, with blue flats and a headband to match. She was hoping her sapphire outfit would impress Sonic-I mean, blue was his favorite color, after all!
She was starting to get impatient. She'd been waiting for this moment for years. Where the heck was he, anyways? She could've sworn he must've been at least an hour late by now. And seeing all the happy
Lost Legends 01Chapter 1: Coming of ageLost Legends 015 years ago in Fan Fiction More Like This
"Sonic are you alright?"
A blue ear twitched at the sound of his uncle's voice. A whimper escaped from the 10 year old hedgie as another spasm rocked through him. Stefan; 'Sparky' to all his friends bent down next to his nephew. The blue hedgie nearly giving his uncle a heart attack when he started screaming at 2 o'clock in the morning.
"Sonic can you hear me? Come on kid, answer me."
Another spasm rocked through the blue and peach hedgie. His whimpers traded in for screams.
"Make it stop!"
Stefan watched in horror as black claws grew from the flesh of his nephew's finger tips. Huge fangs forcing open the ten year olds mouth. A savage growl rumbling somewhere in Sonics' chest. The full moon shining in through the window of Sonics' room. And in that instant it all made a twisted kind of sense to Stefan.
And then Sonic shifted.
Well not Sonic but his body. Quills seemed to shorten as the ten year
Night's Desire Ch.2Shadow awoke early the next night, which he normally does every night. He stretched and yawned as he pulled himself out of bed. His furry companion's eyes fluttered open to the sound of Shadow getting out of bed. She starched out and walked up to the ebony hedgehog.Night's Desire Ch.25 years ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
"Morning girl" Shadow greeted, scratching behind Kyani's ear; she lolled her tongue in pleasure. Shadow smiled, and then walked over to his dresser. He pulled out black trousers and a red shirt. He walked to his closet and took his sword, that's when he heard Kayli begin to bark.
"Huh? What is it girl?" The grey wolf bristled her neck fur and growled at the window. Shadow looked and saw a light grey bat fly in the window.
" ..?.." Shadow looked at the bat as it looked at him. Then , without any warning, the bat flew over shadow's head and landed on his dresser, right next to his royal pendent.
"Ah! What the-" The bat grabbed the pendant and proceeded to fly out the window. "!! You damn bat!! Get the fuck back here!!" S