I can't take it anymoreThis chapter fucking sucks. I'm not even going to hide it. No matter how much I look at it, no matter how often I tweek it...it just sucks, through and through. I'm truly ashamed of my writing on this one. I utterly and completely apologize for what I must do.
...I'm doing it over. From about Pg5 to Pg30, it's just the worst crap I've written since my Bleach story 'Das Tier in Mir' on fanfic.net like 4 years ago.
Again, I am very sorry. In good conscience, I just can't publish this piece of garbage. It seemed okay in writing, but when I started drawing it...I realized it was because I hadn't thought-out the imagery that would end up going with it. I'm starting to think was a chapter I wrote when I was really tired or something, cuz....ugh, man, it's awful. I haven't written Ulquiorra so OOC before. His lines are terrible. The pacing is worse. T