Tips for Original Sonic FC'sTips On How To Make An Original Sonic Fan Character
Do you want to make a Sonic fan character, but are afraid of critics telling you it's unoriginal? Well fear not! I created this for two reasons! One of which is obvious, to help you fellow Sonic fan character creators to make a unique character that you and your fans will love! There's that, and I have nothing better to do...
If any examples in the following text sound like one of your characters, it is pure coincidence. Any reference I make to a fan character is either to my own characters or totally made up. Please do not think I am targeting you! I'm not.
I don't know how many people do this first, but I like to create a story first before designing my character. It helps me decide what kind of character I'm making! Is he/she normal? Supermobian? From another world? You have to be careful though, one wrong move and originality can easily go out the window! Here are some tips;
First things first, what's t
The Ult. Sonic Fanchara GuideThe Ult. Sonic Fanchara Guide6 years ago in Fantasy More Like This
The Ultimate Sonic Fan Character Creation GuideDISCLAIMER TYPE THINGY: This is a guide of tips for making the most unique and awesome Sonic fan character possible. Everything in here is what I believe makes a truly awesome and not "Mary Sue-infested" Sonic fan character, and is strictly MY OPINION. You, as the reader, do not have to follow these guidelines exactly. I am not, in any way, personally attacking and/or defending any fan characters out there and/or any fan characters mentioned here. I also do not claim any of them as my own. There are many Sonic fan characters out there who break these guidelines and are still unique, awesome, and greatly received by the public. I even broke some of these rules. Heck, SEGA themselves even went past these limits. But like I said, no one is being forced to follow these guidelines (even if I capitalize "DO NOT DO THIS"), so continue reading to find out how to make your character super special awesome! And if you have any questi
How Not To Get A Mary SueX-x-X-x-X-x-X How to Create A Well balanced Female Lead X-x-X-x-X-x-XHow Not To Get A Mary Sue4 years ago in Profiles More Like This
For most people, the problems that people will have with a character is the lack of balance they might have.
Mary-Sues are the most popular characters that exemplify this.
Mary Sues are characters that have more good traits than flaws and therefore look perfect for the audience. That can include all sorta of aspects in the character 'life'.
1) You have over-powered Mary-sues who can defeat any and every opponent and therefore are respected and awed by everyone.
2) Realtionship-Sues who are so much of the woman that every man who meets her is obviously struck with love the minute they see her, even when the character has no real qualities that WOULD normally attract men. And these are also the ones who are able to take their pick of the guy and somehow always end up getting with the most sought-after man in the series.
3) You have the feminist-sues/tom-boy sues who are the perfect women in their being less "girly" on
Sonamy: 3. Meet the familyA couple of months had passed since those joyful days. Sonic and Amy were perfectly happy with each other, and so were Tails and Cream. It was a beautiful day and Amy decided to visit her boyfriend. She opened the door with the key Sonic had given her for their first month together as a couple.Sonamy: 3. Meet the family5 years ago in Fan Fiction More Like This
Amy: Sonic, you here?
Sonic: Hey Ames, I'm upstairs.
She quickly ran up the stairs and found Sonic in his chamber, sitting on the bed. He was reading a letter.
Amy: You received a letter? From who?
Amy looked surprised. She had always thought that Sonic was an orphan. Yet again, he had never spoken about his past. Well, it had to come sooner or later.
Amy: You never told me you had a mother, Sonic.
Sonic: Doesn't everyone have a mother, Ames?
She giggled and hit him softly on his head.
Amy: Yes silly, but you never told me about yours.
Sonic: You never asked.
Amy: Guess that's true. What did she wrote?
Sonic: She writes that Sonia and Manic are coming over to live her. They're gon
Rose Diaries Pt10: DirtySecretI walked into the class with a shy smile on my face. It was my first day of highschool and I was nervous. I had just come in, during 3rd semester so, everybody knew eachother, making me feel like the oddball.Rose Diaries Pt10: DirtySecret4 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
I walked up to the teacher, "Hi.. I, um, Im new here. My name is Amy" I looked up and around the room. All eyes were on me. I then smiled as I noticed some of my friends. Then winced when I also noticed some guys I knew... but didnt want to come face to face with ever again.
There sat, at the back of the room, Scourge, his feet propped up onna desk, Shadow, His evil death glare at me, RIXON.... he was just sitting there up straight looking at me dead in the eye, and Sonic. He seemed to be the least bit anything. His head turned gazng out a window obviously trying to ignore me.
"please take a seat Rose," said the teacher determined.
I quietly walked around desks and chairs others occupied and heard people whisper as I walked by:
"Whats up Slut"
The Rose Diaries Pt4: RageprologueThe Rose Diaries Pt4: Rage4 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
"You will never understand!" I yelled with tears filling my eyes
"Why are you acting this way Amy?" Sonic asked confused and a little hurt.
"Leave me alone!" I tried to hurry past him, but he grabbed me cautiuosly.
"Tell me whats wrong!" He demanded. It began to pour down rain and I wasn't about to admit anything to him.
"let go of me!" I comanded. "You'll never know what its like to-" I took a deep breath "to be taken against your own will! The way I was!"
"What are you talking about?" He asked. "Tell me. Did Eggman have anything to do with this?" He said in his usual fighting tone.
I tensed up, "Even being Eggman, he wouldn't have been that cruel to do what those guys did to me." I back away saddend and scared.
Sonic was now quiet "What happened Amy?" He reached for me, but I pulled back farther.
"No!" I yelled. "You were never there for me, you never cared!" I started sobbing and felt sick to my stomach. I asked then, slow and shy "Why did you leave me..?"
Rose Diaries PT13: HATRED:AmyRose:Rose Diaries PT13: HATRED4 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
I sat there legs crossed looking at him in the eye. I couldn't sit here any longer at this table across from him, trying to tell him about my crude night before. I can't just sit here like nothing happened and everything would be okay could I? Sonic seemed like he wanted to know but, something was different about him...
I mean, how are you supose to tell someone, that your "boyfriends" 3 best friends, had...
Had raped you?
I walked home alone in the darkness of a warmish fall evening, arms crossed. I listened to the wind as it somewhat spoke my name: Ammmyyy.... Ammmyyy..
My long flowing hair in the breeze, and my new sweater with my miniskirt made me shiver. It was a bit too cold for me.
When I had told Sonic earlier that day, that I had been raped, and what I had been through, he didn't take it very well. At first, he thought I had problems, and thought that I had made it all up to get attention. I was so upset that he had thought that. I yelled at him and showed
Sonic Talk Show: Ep4 ManicScourge:" Hey, I'm running this talk show thing, today so I'm the host."Sonic Talk Show: Ep4 Manic4 years ago in Profiles More Like This
Manic:" Well this should be interesting."
Scourge:" Okay, smart one, lets get started off with our first question. and this first one was asked by... "fantomthehedgehog" Fantom asks.... Did you really grow up in the sewers, or was just cause your brother got all the fame? well manic are you jealous?"
Manic:" No, I'm not jealous SCOURGE! And yes fantom, I did grow up in the sewers, the fact that I didn't even know sonic, at that time knocks that off."
Scourge:" Heh, whatever you say princess."
Manic:" I Am NOT a Princess."
Scourge:" So says you... well anyways back to the questions.... this next one was asked by... "bromuda" this dude asks... Who's more annoying sonic or sonia? Man! he should've asked me this, cause I have a direct answer for it."
Manic:" Well he didn't so shut it. and as for my answer... Sonia, sonic I can deal, but sonia with her constant nagging and irritability, I mean eeesh.."
New Sonic Underground Part 1Robotropolis, a place where the evil Dr. Robotnik reigns and the Freedom Fighters tries to end that terror. Where music is forbidden, but can be heard by the ones who knows where to look. The place of the Sonic Underground.New Sonic Underground Part 15 years ago in Fan Fiction More Like This
A van is driving to the streets. Inside the van we find Sonic, Sonia and Manic, the royal triplets and the best Freedom Fighters there are. Sonic is nervously walking circles.
Sonia: Sonic Hedgehog, can't you stop walking. You're making me nervous.
Manic: Yeah Sonic, chill.
Sonic: I can't chill. We haven't heard from Cyrus for too long, I haven't seen a SWATbot for hours and even Sleet 'n Dingo disappeared from view. It's making me uncomfortable.
Sonia: Now you mention it, it has been rather quiet.
Suddenly, a loud explosion and the sound of laser fire.
Sonic: If that isn't a familiar sound, then I am a SWATbot.
Manic: Let's go see what's happening.
Manic drove the van further in the street. A few meters further, they saw the SWAT's running and firing their guns. Be
Sonic heroes Blooper XDRouge: Hey Omega, let's throw Shadow at that target and see if he survives that bottomless gorge!Sonic heroes Blooper XD6 years ago in Humor More Like This
Omega: Is that a wise idea?
Rouge: Sure it is! Hey Shadow! We're going in flight formation!
Rouge: Trust me!
* Go in flight formation*
Rouge: One, two three, THROW!
Rouge: *Throws Shadow*
Shadow: AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!- Ompth! *Hits target* AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! *Falls down gorge*
Omega: Are you sure that was a wise idea?
* Three hours later*
Shadow: *Climbs back up all cut up and bloody* You....Guys....
Rouge: Let's do it again! *Grabs Shadow*
Shadow: Now wait a minute!
Shadow: AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!! -Ompth- AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!
Omega: Heh. Heh. I guess it was a little funny.
*Three more hours*
Shadow: *Crawls back up again with more cuts and bullet wounds* I...*Gasp*.....Hate you.....*Wheeze*
Sonamy Child Stories pg2Whoa! Gees lady, cant you get out of my way, I need to be somewhere right now? exclaimed Sonic as he looked up at the dark figure. The dark figure was obviously female; average height, average body shape, quite curvy...Sonamy Child Stories pg26 years ago in Fan Fiction More Like This
The figure was wrapped in dark, black material, similar to an Indian sari or ninja outfit. She wore knee-length black boots (ones that looked like they had escaped from Rouges wardrobe) and most of her face was wrapped in a black scarf, apart from the area around her eyes, which were now fluttering like mad, with thick black mascara and brown eyeliner which highlighted her emerald green eyes really well. Sonic couldnt help but feel a little flirty.
Why good morning to you, Sonic, said the lady.
H-how do you know my name? asked Sonic.
Why, dont you remember me Sonic? questioned the lady.
Well I think Id remember someone as beautiful as you maam, replied Sonic, flirting a littl
The Rose Diaries Pt3:SuductionprologueThe Rose Diaries Pt3:Suduction4 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
I pulled my sunglassed up on my head so my eyes were showing. "Its me, Amy. Amy Rose"
"DDDAAAAAYYYUUUMMMMMMM....." said Knuckles "What happened to you girl! Dang, you got it goin ON"
I starred at him with a 'dont you even dare' look on my face. I glanced around to the rest of the guy's face, Silver with a look of confusion, Shadow with a bad boy grin on his face, Rixon... with his obssesed look....ugh...
And was Rixon looking at my...?
"I glanced down then back at Rixon, "Eyes up dude"
A few laughs from the guys, a blush upon Rixon's face.
Then I saw Sonic's face. He seemed like he wasn't convinced that I was Amy... the Amy he knew back then. I caught his eye and we were starring at eachother
I suddenly relized that he might hate me...
"Come on Amy, try this one!" Sally said raising a mini and uh, skimpy red bikini to me. She was always the one out o
Morning with the ChaotixThe sound of annoying bickering heard from the other side of the bedroom door woke up the tired red armadillo. He opened his squinted shut eyes and sat up, setting his attention to the alarm clock resting on his bedstand.Morning with the Chaotix5 years ago in Fan Fiction More Like This
"2:13 a.m.? Charmy is still up to break something this late?" groaned the sleepy armadillo
He set his socked feet to the ground, and rubbed his half-open eyes. He stood up with a 'Thug'-like look in his face. He slowly walked up to the door and kicked it down, no longer bothering the fact that it was built with a twistable knob.
The sound of a loud, heavy, wooden object slamming on the floor startled both the hyper-active bee and a loud mouth crocodile. They set their eyes on the big door that laid on the floor and saw someone walking out of it. Soon, both found out that it was an angry Mighty, who woke up at a wrong time possible.
"What did he break this time, Vector?" mumbled Mighty. Then Vector stood back to let the armadillo see pieces of a broke
Rose Diaries PT11: HopelessAfter returning home from that fight at at school, I was worn out. I was laying on the couch, eyes closed. My side still ached with pain were I was kicked, numerous times, and my face a little red from the impact and body still shaken.Rose Diaries PT11: Hopeless4 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
I lay there, eyes closed, listening to my cellphone ring.
"he- hello?" I answered a little out of breath.
"Hey Amy, you were supose to meet us up at the library for some studying." replied Sonic.
He didnt hear about the fight I guess. I had to tell him what was going on...
I took a breath.
"Sonic? I have to tell you something"
"Um, well, you know your so called 'friends'? Rixon, Shadow, Scourge?"
"Yea, guess so."
"Well they attacked me, and I-" I was startled by a stange glass shattering sound.
"Amy? Amy what are you-" Thats all he could get out before the line went dead.
The phone went staticy. Then I head a voice from it: "Hiya toots"
I dropped the phone and stepped back. I know who that voice belongs to, the only one that calls me that
Rose Diaries PT14: Crime SceneShe was bleeding with tears, ugly tears running down her face. Her cloathing in rips and peices. She begged me to stop and pleaded with me. I was happy to do this. I kept pulling the knife out and re-inserting it as she screamed. I enjoyed this very much. Very much...Rose Diaries PT14: Crime Scene4 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
Stab. Stab, Stab.
I awoke with a gasp in a cold sweat. It was a terrible nightmare that kept coming to me. Ever since I saw Sally and Sonic ever so close... I just...
I sighed as I walked downstairs for some water. It had been weeks since Sonic and I last talked, I was still so upset and angry he wasn't there to help when I needed it most. But Sally, we hardly talked. I was upset with her... but to kill her?
My phone started to ring. "Thats odd, who would call me in the middle of the night?"
I checked the caller ID: Unknown.
"Hello?" I asked sipping some of my water.
The other end was staticy and I could barely make out his words.
"Hello hello?" I hung up and sure enough it called back.
"If this is Kyle,
The Rose Diaries Pt1: Intro."What are you working on Amy?" the curiosity got the better of Cream.The Rose Diaries Pt1: Intro.4 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
"I'm working on this little contraption. You see, when I was only 8 years old, I used a chaos to transform me into 12 years of age, remember Cream?"
Cream nodded, trying to remeber way back then. She wasn't around at that time, but remeberd hearing it from tails.
"I became a freedom fighter and I was really excited. The thing was, I never had any special skills. I was always the one to, well, I was a backround peice... I never had any fighting abilities or experiences. And now, being only 12, I still do not have anything special about me, just a dumb piko-piko hammer..."
"Oh Amy, your special to me. Your our friend, its not like we hate you."
"Like Sonic..." mumbled Amy.
"What was that?" asked Cream.
"Oh, nothing.." she heaved.
"So, tell me about this um, contraption thingy."
"Well, Im assuming, if I find enough energy source, that this thing will allow a two year future to surpass. Making me 14 years old! I can then
Shadamy: High Schools Hard Life part 1Shadamy: High Schools Hard LifeShadamy: High Schools Hard Life part 13 years ago in Drama More Like This
I slammed my locker shut and prepared to travel to maths, but then he arrived. "what do you want Scourge?" I groaned "lighten up chuckles" he said with a smirk, I rolled my eyes at him "just answer me" "I heard you and Sonic broke up" "so what!" "what happened?" he tried to sound concerned, but I could tell that wasn't why he was asking, "none of your business!" Suddenly the bell sounded all through the school, before he could retaliate I made a run for it, "shit, I'm gonna be late!" I mentally kicked myself for not ignoring him. I bolted through the classroom door, with an added "sorry I'm late miss" she looked up at me and smiled, she was a blue rabbit with green highlights and seemed to be in her late twenties, I could already tell she was one of those young hip teachers who everyone liked, I sighed in relief as she sp
SonAmy: Beyond Love Ch. 6Sonia: I woke up with an ache in my neck. A sharp pain shot threw my veins and caused me to grab my neck. "Ow...talk about a crick in your neck," I mumbled. I looked around and remembered that we were in the cave we came to earlier. Further in the back of the dark cave held shadows and darkness as far as the eye could see. I looked towards the opening of the cave and saw the newly risen sun shining into the cave and warmed my skin.SonAmy: Beyond Love Ch. 63 years ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
But I looked around and Manic and Sally were no where in sight. With a scared feeling roaming throughout my body, I got up and walked towards the back of the cave. "Manic...where are you?" I called. I felt my body tremble as the darkness swallowed me in a sea of shadows and silence. "Where are you two? Please answer!" I called again. My voice began to waver, and I got no reply.
I kept walking and heard something...something breathing! I squinted and tried to see in this eerie darkness. I saw Manic and Sally, but they were kissing. My stomach tightened and I
Ask Shadow And Manic Part 1Alright, it is time for the first part of ask Shadow And Manic. We changed it from or so the characters will be equal in the amounts of questions. so thanks 4 all the asked questions. which is only 5...... you all are being shy I guess heh..... and all the questions that were asked will be asked to both characters. this will be most interesting to say the least.Ask Shadow And Manic Part 13 years ago in Profiles More Like This
Now For The Co-Hosts ..... Our Hero SONIC THE HEDGEHOG! ( mwe like shouting ^3^) and Dr. Eggman..... woohoo....."
Dr E:" well, that was a Most enthusiastic welcome."
Me:" ^^ you know it."
Sonic:" i'm heeeere. so who's my..... ( Dun-Dun-Dun) *Horror girl scream* AAAAAH!"
Dr E:" TT What are you doing here?!"
Sonic:" I'M here to host this thing."
Dr E:" You mean Co-Host?"
Sonic:" Who do you think the audience likes more?"
Dr E:" Lets just get on with the questions shall we?"
Sonic:" First lets bring out the special characters, Lets see..... First, Shadow The Hedgehog. And Second, Manic The Hedgehog."
Shadow:" They said
The Rose Diaries: DestinyProlougeThe Rose Diaries: Destiny4 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
The skies started turning a blackish gust, it was ugly and saddening. I stood up and glanced over.
I noticed a girl as I passed by, and froze. I looked there, to the girl staring at me. She... she wasn't me, was she? She had tears stolling down her cheeks, I never saw her cry like that before. Her eyelashes were clumpy and wet from her sobbing. Her cloathing falling over her heaving self, crying and gasping for breathes. Her hair long and,messy flying around her in the wind attacking her. So miserable in her own twisted life. I began to cry and looked away. This girl,
in the mirror.... could not have been me...
For she was, and there was nothing I could do but just stand there
and wait for dawn to break.
After Cream and I went through
that portal, we were seperated. Its been weeks. I hope that she is okay... or maybe... oh no!! Please tell