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When you'll go away,
Tears will fill my life night and day,
When you'll be gone,
All I would do is mourn,
When you'll be there,
I'll be standing with regrets here,
As you can see,
You are very dear to me,
So please don't go anywhere,
Beacause if you did I will not care ,
And to myself dare,
To commit sucide since everything in love and war is fair....................
I wrote this when someone precious to me was going to leave me.
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Glistening specks of white floated against the darkness that blanketed the world above. A large, bright ball hid behind the silent gray whisps calmly passing by through the night. An array of inverted sunlight streamed through the flying pedestrians and spied brilliantly onto the land below. Threads of green sprouted up from the soil of which they were born on, and a crystal mirror reflected the looming scene above on it's icy surface as it gushed foward in a maze of movement. Tall, thick buildings of nature climbed their way up into the sky and presented flocks of warm colors upward one last time. But their fire did nothing to heat the icy atmosphere of Autumn. Instead, vibrant colors drifted in the air, waiting until a gentle arm swooped them off and carried them to an unknown destination. To one it seemed as though the enviroment was motionless, monotonous, and dead, but life gleamed with every step if the way as it had always been. Mortals could not see, hear, or feel them, but their looming prescence were enough to convince them real.

So this is what it's come to. A very peculiar decoy thought to itself as it rested on nature's blanket, draping a leg over the gap ahead of it and swinging it around. He gladly took in a whoop of cold air, deploying it as soon as it entered. Although he proceeded to fidget without a care in the world, he was deep in thought; decieving the atmosphere around it, carefully plotting the next idol to complete the ledge which now briefly existed.

The chances were low.

It was risky.

But this was all it had to live for.

A final desperate hope that every single one of his brethren, including himself, strived for. The 'Mastermind' behind all of it controlled them with unrelenting force, manipulating and commanding them everything he needed or wanted. In truth, none of them had a life - the only reason why they followed so was because it was what they were created to do. Each had a different story to tell, but none of them took it happily.

The creature stared up at the sky in deep reminisce. It had been bestowed with the name of a deadly sin, and took the title and put it to great pride. He would walk amongst the innocent, those of which he hated, and drive them into mad oblivion. He urged them silently to fight in every way possible, and succeeded without them knowing of whom had done so. He was none other than a manipulator, a predator, an enemy, an assassin, a decoy, an enigma, a lier, a cheater, and a theif.

At times he would ask himself why he was so. Simply for the pleasure? Is that all he would do - bask in that of guilty amusement that didn't even satisfy his real needs? Most of the time his twisted mind would say yes, but at rational times such as this one where he had time to freely think about the situation, he would stumble back and forth in mild anticipation, more so reaching for the inevitable than THAT.

Is this all I am? The words would not stop echoing in his mind, as the words caved in on his very spirituallity and mocked him with short trances. He glanced over to the icy water yards away. Although a flashback came and went within a split-second, he needn't anything to know that was his punishment in the afterlife.

And he welcomed it.

He welcomed it with wide arms, at times impatient and finding himself walking towards it. He would sit by the rivers edge and stare at his own reflection, but he would go no further, for it was then he was reminded of the duty he had to fullfill. He could've ended his life anytime he wanted to, and everybody knew that he could, but he didn't because it wasn't meant to be. He'd have to wait. He was not all after his punishment, but simply leaving the strings. He wanted to be on his own, not controlled by another. He wanted to become that of which he hated.

Someday, he always thought to himself, someday it will happen. Lies entered his mind and manipulated him into thinking he WAS the ruler, and so would he remain. However, fantasies vanished before him like mist and he snapped into the unforgiving reality. There was no hope for him. Trash was all he would be after they accomplished what was to be done. And he hated it. He hated it all.

Cowardly ways were just of his doing. His qualia was nothing compared to that of his indulgence. Was he no better than his brother? Could he be different? And what of the others?

What of the others . . .

A quiet chuckle slipped through the corner of his mouth. It was impossible for him to think that way. He had always been so for himself that consideration never really took a toll in his life, and NOW to remember back to his comrades and pity them for their ignorance? It was ridiculous.

So who cared if they remained to be toys for Father? Certainly he didn't give a damn. Yet, it wasn't all him to sit around and ponder about those whom he traveled, more so glancing down at his feet and teasing the pipsqueaks that would never beat him.

Or so he thought.

That staring down at his feet was staring down at the core of the Earth. They were all equal, so who was he to say that he was superior? On the other hand, who's to say he wasn't? Internal conflict was a heavy burden he carried. Perhaps others did as well? Of course. Who's was more pitiful? In a way, he cared not whom had the greater difficulties but only wished he be left alone. Just wished to be human.

Sadness engulfed his corrupted being, and he gently bent his head down in defeat. A small tear fell down his face, and he grinned. Mentally laughing, his grin grew wider and wider until it was ear-to-ear.

But he dared not make a move, nor a sound.

He was still, like the rest, and would remain so until it was time.

He could never be human, and he knew it. It saddened him greatly and tormented his soul. Clenching a fist, he tried desperately to hide his melancholy in. Even when alone, he did not like feeding the world his weakness. Nobody would ever see it, except for the creature that created him and used him for personal gain. Nonetheless, as tense as he was, he could no longer hide it in. The helpless creature tipped his head back and screamed out, raw emotions purging themselves into the outer world. He fell onto his knees and continued to scream as it rained and then poured on his very being. Tears fell like waterfalls and screams ripped out like a banshee, but he did not stop, nor hesitate. For once he let his emotions out, something he had never done in his entire life. The melody of hate, pain, deppression, and so much more spilled out into the dead space around him. He stared up with abused amythest eyes into the night sky, mentally cursing at the heavens for bestowing upon him such a cruel fate.

His brothers, they heard, and snickered.

His sister, she felt, but went mute.

His Father, he saw, and laughed.

Shaking and collapsing onto the ground was nothing he would ever do, but now it made no difference. He had utterly humiliated himself, stripped himself of his dignity and let the world see it. There was nothing to give back to him. Nobody pitied him, nobody cared about him, nobody loved him. He was a tool and nothing more, and he hated it. Eventually he grew silent and the atmosphere went dead yet again. Lastly, before the end, he cried a small stream onto the ground but caused no physical damage to anything.

Once he stopped, he got up on his feet, brushed off the dirt and mud, and left.

And that was all.
Disclaimer: I don't own Envy, Father, the other sins from FMAB, Fullmetal Alchemist/Brotherhood, or the moon.

Ah, it's about time I write something! :)

In this short oneshot story, I based it off of Envy's emotional torment from Brotherhood. All he wanted was to be human, as it says in the anime (perhaps even the manga, but I think the 2009 anime and manga vary a little bit). Yes, I know Envy was a sadistic creature that enjoyed seeing humans suffer and thought himself superior to them, and I included that in this oneshot. However, what if Envy felt something in his heart for others and was being broken by emotional stress because of the false life he is living? What if Envy wasn't all that bad? What if Envy could've been good, but never had the support or love or care and was simply lost?

A short burst of inspiration in this was from:
The songs I listened to while writing this was:

Please give feedback. It's very encouraging to see comments and it makes me feel like people care. If you see any mistakes or don't understand, let me know. :)
No negative feedback. :iconenvynoplz:
I hope you enjoyed it and thank you for reading. :iconenvyhappy:
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Medusa.: " dam it to think it Ben year scene make beat the kishin she ruined everything she ruined  my planes but if she thinks she killed me she get anther thing coming it

take  about year for me to return but thank to
have one if my sankes was hidden I was able to live now it time for revenge  I will make anther

kshin then  that same kishin will kill maka and her friends and my child trader crona soon they will all be dead  this time

my plans wont  be stopped
lord death.: " maka I called you other in day there 4 people who close to being a  kishin

they need to before  it happen the last thing we need is a 2nd kishin to come  no iv all ready sent kid to take

One if them and I like you soul long with black star and tsubaki and corna to head out stop them however I want you to be on ground as pumpkin head may be stronger they look

maka.: "we be on ground  we will put stop them OK crona you ready
crona.: " yea lots get going

ragnarok.: " yea I get rip a part some one who,s close to becoming kishin  
Black star.: " come on out pumpkin I the star am here to beat you

pumpkin head.: " so you brats come here to die did you will ten I make fast work if you
maka.: "OK  corna black star lot do do Resonance link

soul.: " maka you ready to do this
maka.: "yea I am

Black star.: "tsubaki enchanted sword mode
tsubaki.: "right

Black star.: "now you see just how awesome I am he yelled cutting one pukmkin head arms off
maka.: "witch hunter she yelled cutting pumpkin other arm off

ragnarok.: " come on corna lots do this
corna.: " right  he said cutting pumpkin in huff

maka.: " look that it for him you can change back now soul
Black star.: " you to tsubaki

Pumpkin.: " hahahaha did you brats think the fight was over
maka.: "what he,s not dead yet but how

Black star.: " so this guy can regrow his body parts huh
Pumpkin.: " that right as long as one part if my body is lift I keep coming back

Black star.: " is that so then I just have to cut you tell there noting lift you ugly pig
pumpkin.: "ugly  way dont i jsut shut that mouth if yours brat he yelled powering up

maka.: "black star you dumb ass you gone made him mad his wave length is  to strong now
Pumpkin.: " now i will show you my power kids he yelled punching maka in her stomach then

elbowing black star in his stomach and knee crona in his stomach  then pucnhed corna in his stomach to
maka.: "urk she yells spiting

Black star.: " cough he yelled spiting
crona.: " oaugh he yelled spiting

tsubaki.: "black star no
Soul.: "dam it ar eyou OK maka  

then pumpkin kicked soul in his face  pucnhed  tsubaki in her face and in her stomach
tsubaki.: " aoguh she yelled spiting

Soul.: "dam you  you call that punch iv Ben hit hard then that before and dam you black star you just had go piss  this guy off if we want beat him we do it as team right maka

maka.: " right
pumpkin;;hhahahaha you brats wont be making anther move level vines he yelled

maka.: "wha what  he doing
With in siscs maka soul black star corna and tsubaki war tied up in vines around there

arms legs
maka.: " ugh these vines ae to tight i can't free my self the more i stuggle the tight they warp around me and mroe vines are stell coming dam it i cant stand being tied up like this

tsubaki.: " black star way you go and get us tied up she yelled
Soul.: "I can cut my self free then maka

crona.: "I can't get lose
ragnarok.: " corna you dumb ass looks like i have to cut you free

Pumpkin.: "vines vines he yelled
As more vines warped around ever before warping there months gagging them

maka.: "mphpmhp she yelled
Soul faslty cut him self free
soul.: " hold on maka i will cut you lose then he cut maka free

and then ragnarok cut corna free and cut black star and tsubkai
maka.: "OK that dos it soul get ready

Soul.: " right
maka.: "soul Resonance now Genie Hunteeeeeeeeeeer she yelled cutting in to pumpkin

Pumpkin.: " what no not that move aughhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh he yelled blowing up
Soul.: "that's one down  2 go  

maka.: "yea hopeful death kid his all ready take care if his fight
corna.: "we stele have find other two

maka.: "right
oni.: " you brats looking for me

soul.: "this guy not as strong as the last
maka.: " soul right so crona black star way don't you two take them down

black star.: " right now IL hti him with ym soul wave latght Strong Soul Wavelength
He yelled punching oni

oni  dam.: " brat you think that stop me
black star;; no but you may want to look behind you freak

oni.: " whaaaaaaaaaat how did othe rbrat get behid me
crona.: " now  Rose Thorn Storm:

the attack blow huff if oni body up
Black star.: "Planet Destruction Cannon he yelled

The attack blow the other huff  if oni body up
meen will

death the kid.: " shadow Keith your stupid and ulgy and you disgust me Liz Patti transform now death canon

The attack blow up Keith
maka.: " we find you  and you all ready taken care if  that guy

Death kid.: " yes will he was noting we should return to dwma now
Black star.: " right

stein.: " I scene some thing bad is about to bad what

medusa.: " hahahahahahahah these brats did just I had planed now  all do take burned body if shadow  Keith then vines form pumpkin that steel have his DNA on them the lift over

form oni then then in infuse with the Black Clown.and black blood then IL fuse him with the 99 kshin egg that flying Dutchmen  caption had get for me now  once I  finished my work

I will made a 2nd kshin a kshin who power will far surpass that if asura but unlike asura this kishin wont  have the some weakness no not at all it wont have weakness  soon

And the others will ley dead at my feet then i will take there  DNA cetate kishin clones if them to help me rule world hahahahahahahahaahhahahahahaaaaaaaahahahaahah  
ok so this my fist time righting soul eater story it was ltitle harder then I was thnking it wood be to  do it but stell did it
any way this story take palce in artle uvnruse

one where ever thing in manga happen only few thing in manga did not happen like crona turning eivl again but  the fianly batte with medusa that happen in anime happen in this unvurse and if watech the anime end  exas that happen after show over you see

medusa snake mvoeing around that htined at that she not dead after all that and what death the kid others said  befor final epsidoe end

there thee il be anther kishin  some day that in retune give me the idea to make this stroy
beside doing it this way is one onl way I can use corna  who is in awosme charater
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With life down rated,
I'm so fustrated,
I just want to slip into the world of dreams,
Which is equal to strawberries and cream,
Out of this dimension,
Into a soft cloudy place I would gladly mention,
In the world of sleep,
I will creep......................
This is something I wrote when my heart was bubbling up with mixture of feelings .
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dr stein.: " lord death don't you think that some thing going on we had 4 people close to becoming kishins and all after year if  the defeat if the fist kishin

Lord death.: " I think I know where your getting at stein side just informed that some one some  woman leaving with lift over pieces form the lift 4 guys

stein.: " yes  and that true  and there only one woman who fit the bill and that medusa
lord death.: " yes but don't you say maka  killed medusa and form what  I was told it was woman that wood

mean she find way to come back form dead again
spirit.: " medusa is noting my maka can't handle she beat her once and she do it again

stien.: " your missing the point spirit medusa is up to some thing she may be trying to make anther kishin but this time we no idea where her place is she not so dumb hat she  use the some place

medusa.: "  yes the tests some to be working  now  the infuse  if  pieces if there body is  fisnehd now I for next step infusing black blood then  the black clown its only meter if time I will
make the perfect body for this new kishin I can't Wight every thing going as planed

stein.: " maka lord death wood like to  word with you and others
maka.: "  OK lord death what up

Soul.: " ya ins some thing wrong
black star.: " what kind mission do you have for us now am sure it noting I can handle

tsubaki.: " black star  lot him talk wood you
lord death.: " it same that the ones you beat before body's war taken by some one

maka.: " bye who and way
stein.: " by medusa

soul.: "are you cazy maka beat her all ready
maka.: "no that don't make any scene I saw her die

black star.: " dam dos she ever stay dead
crona.: "I don't understand how she be alive Wight maybe it do one if her  snakes

maka.: " huh  snakes corna what you mean?
crona.: " I just remember some thing she said once that she put  few snakes inside eruka my guys is that when

was dieing she release  these snakes form her so that so wood be able to live again I hate to deal with her again but this time we stop her

Medusa.: "yes black blood fusion with the body his Ben excepted now for finally test the fusion with the black clown yes it working my work is just about fished once and then I can

Order him to kill maka crona black star soul tsubaki and the trade watch that side with dwma Kim and Jacqueline then I sent him do with the rest if dwma stands

Lord death.: " maka I want you others to find medusa put end to her before she make anther kishin
maka.: "right we find out where she is

medusa.: "hahahahahhaaa yes it  finished  now I will food him the 99 kishin egg souls and it fisnehd now he his become come a kishin and now kishin shadow pumpkin king keith  the oni

kishin.: "yes master medusa what it that you wood like me to do
Medusa.: " I want you to kill every one at the dwma but start with maka crona black star tsubaki Kim and

jacqunline give them beating like no other make sure they get painful death but watch
All you do watch out for maka kishin hunter

kishin.: " I will make sure these brats are dead word draws in to madness
Medusa.: "good  will help draw them out for you with free help  long time no see free

Free.: "medusa  so your steel alive and I take it your in need if my help again  and take this guy is the new kishin
Medusa.: "yes he is and  yes I am you see we going to set to kill dwma students  do that I need you to sue your

power to  make so only maka corna black star  tsubaki soul and Kim jacqunline
are only ones get out the rest I want you to keep tarp in there  like you did before all you have to is hold them

for in hour it take lenses then hat of them brats to die
free.: "o yes good plan I can't Wight to see the brats at dwma die

medusa.: "here we at dwma am seeing Soul Protect to make so we wont be second by them dam dwma kids and lord death we drawing closer o yes this place  now I will draw them

Brat out soul protect soul release Vector Arrow she yelled blasting the citying
maka.: " I sense a witch here in dwma

Lord death.: " OK maka corna soul black star tsubaki am sending you out there
maka.: " lord death  I like to Kim and Jacqueline to come long with us

They are witch and student here at dwma so they souls be help us deal with medusa after all
lord death.: " yes they wood be big help they may go long with you

maka others head out to meet medusa
Medusa.: "o so you brats are finally here now

maka.: " medusa  this time there be no coming back for you
Medusa.: " shut up maka  your going to pay for what you down and you will pay with your death long with your

friends free now do it
Free.: "right Independent Cube he yelled
crona.: " o no maka he use his magic to seal the others inside this get be part medusa plan she wanted us to all

be out here she him use this some spell the fist time she want after the fist kishin
maka.: " what dam then we take her down

Medusa.: " that's right crona however this time I all ready have the kishin with me the 2nd  kishin  now  I will have step out if the shadows

maka.: " did you say  you made 2nd kishin no not again
Soul.: "dam anther kishin
Black star.: "we take him down just like we did the fist one

tsubaki.: "black star it wont be that easy the last kishin nearly killed all if us  we may not be beat this one the some way as the last but we can try

crona.: "that all we can do beside this time am here to help last time I was not able to now I can I wont lot him hurt maka

Kim.: "medusa you and the kishin will pay
Jacqueline.: " your veil ways will be stopped here

medusa.: "I give you brat one officer you can die at the hands if the 2nd kishin or  you can join me Kim  Jacqueline what you say
Kim.: " we will never join you
so here the 2nd chapter
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I open my eyes to find myself in a room. I sit up still drowsy from waking up I wipe my eyes to clear my blurry vision. My head is also hurting like it got hit with a baseball bat. Eventually my head stopped hurting but then i see that I'm naked and the only thing covering me is the blanket from the bed. I see my clothes scattered on the floor along with female clothing. I start to move out the bed when all of a sudden I hear a noise that sounds like it would come from a woman. When I look over to my right I see that I'm not alone in this bed. Still sleeping the female was covered in the blanket. Due to my curiosity I had to go ahead and see who they were. When I uncovered the blanket from the mysterious sleeping woman I find out to my horror that it's Heather the queen bee and she was sleeping peacefully like a newborn baby completely naked as well. I then immediately say to myself "what the hell happened last night". I try to retrace my memories from last night but all I can remember is that I was at Duncan's birthday party at a mansion Geoff rented for three days. The last thing I remember I went to get some... DJ eyes pop open and facepalms himself and says with anger "The punch!"

With that outburst the sleeping Heather wakes up. "Mhhm... Ugh whats wrong Deej" says a now awake Heather. Heather stretches out her arms and legs and fixes her long black hair before she scoots towards the gentle giant. She then kisses DJ which surprises him.

DJ shocked with all this quickly breaks the kiss and falls off the bed and says frantically "He-He-He-Heather wha-wha what are you doing?!"

Heather looks at the now frantic and confused DJ with a lustful smile on her face when she says "Oh I'm just giving my boyfriend a good morning kiss thats all"

DJ looks at Heather with a what are you talking about face and says "Um... pause... boyfriend?!" asks the jamaican teen.

"Yep you're my boyfriend since last night" says Heather smiles devilishly. "Oh and by the way DJ you were wonderful last night I didn't know you had it in you"

"Whoa whoa whoa i don't remember doing anything with you last night what are you talking about girl?" ask DJ

"Isn't it obvious we had sex" says Heather as she lies on the edge of the bed looking at DJ with lust filled eyes.

"WHAT?! Naw this can not be true" yells a DJ in denial.

"Well it happened get over it!" snaps Heather now with a scowl look on her face. "You acting like you were sleeping with the devil or something"

"I did sleep with the devil" mumbles DJ

"What was that?!" asks Heather who stares down DJ with evil eyes. "I didn't quite hear you honey"

"I said you need to cover up" says DJ obviously lying to Heather. "I don't need to see you in your birthday suit"

Heather rolls her eyes and smiling seductively while saying "You wasn't saying that last night"

"Wha- whatever just get changed ok please" says a blushing DJ who turns around so he can't see the naked Heather. "I'm going to go to the bathroom to change you can change here in the bedroom" says DJ. "After that we gonna need to check on the others ok"

Heather nodded and says "Ok i need to see how Courtney is doing anyways".

With that DJ picks his clothes up and heads towards the bathroom to change and Heather gets her clothes off the floor and changes into her clothes. DJ and Heather then walk out to see where everyone else is at

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Latin APH: Marcas
Capítulo 5 Final: Mi marca

La habitación estaba fría, eso fue lo primero que noté para cuando pude recobrar el sentido, eso y el sonido de la lluvia que aún no cesaba.  El viento también lo podía oír claramente silbando afuera,  y una luz tenue que provenía de la rendija de lo que parecía una puerta era lo único que mis ojos percibían, y fue gracias a esa pequeña luz, que terminé por abrir los ojos.
La cabeza me dolía como si me hubiese tomado varias botellas de alcohol yo solo y me costaba recordar bastante todo lo que había sucedido y el porqué me encontraba así, mas no tardé mucho en volver a traer los recuerdos a mi mente, espantado, colocándome de pié sin pensarlo, tan rápido como mis divinas piernas me lo permitieron, pero mi cabeza daba vueltas y pronto terminé en el piso. Solo entonces noté que traía una venda en mi cabeza y que aquella habitación en la que me encontraba, me era muy familiar, aun que no era  la mía.
-¡Martín!-esa voz… ¿Acaso ese era Seba quién me hablaba?-¡Martín, despertaste! Me tenías preocupado che…-me dijo mientras me ayudaba a volver a la cama, a la vez que yo intentaba reconocer la habitación en la que me encontraba e intentaba reincorporarme. No había notado que él estaba conmigo- ¡Luciano, andá a decirle al Manu que despertó!-gritó desde la puerta.
"Luciano…" ¿Entonces Manu no le había matado…?
-Seba…¿Pero qué pasa acá?-pregunté, estaba totalmente confundido ante la situación. No entendía nada… y para peor, mi cabeza no dejaba de dolerme.
-¿Qué pasa?-respondió Seba, sentado a mi lado, con cara de preocupación aún- ¡Como que qué  pasa! ¡Estuviste inconsciente un día entero, Martín! ¡No sabés lo preocupado que nos tenias, che! ¿Cómo te sientes?
-Me duele la cabeza… y tengo hambre…. Pero aparte de eso estoy bien.- fue mi respuesta, mientras intentaba asimilar lo que el Seba me decía…Dios ¡Un día completo inconsciente!-¿Qué pasó en ese tiempo? ¿Y Manu? Espera… ¡¿Dónde está Manu?!
-Está abajo, Luciano le fue a buscar.-sonrió- Manuel estaba realmente preocupado por vos, Martín, tanto que hasta se le olvidó lo de la venganza y todo.
-No bromees ¿vale? Vos sabés que Manu jamás se olvidaría de una venganza-sonreí algo apenado - ¡Es Manu después de todo! Y para él, yo no soy excusa, Seba, vos debés saberlo… así que decime a verdad ¿Querés…?
-Che, ¡Lo que te digo es verdad!-replicó interrumpiéndome con los brazos cruzados- Aun que no me creas… Ah…Mirá, mejor te cuento para que veas que no te miento.-Suspiró y se sentó  mi lado, mirándome a los ojos- Yo estaba con Luciano, para ese entonces, intentando convencerle de que se ocultara, tal como vos me dijiste que hiciera tras relatarle lo que había pasado, pero para mi sorpresa, de un momento a otro llegó Manu, todo mojado y jadeante, como si hubiese corrido kilómetros, con una cara de preocupación que pocas veces se ve en él.
>>Al principio pensé que venía por lo de la venganza, claro está, pero tan pronto como entró, me agarró de los hombros y me dijo que fuese con él a su casa rápido, con los ojos llenos de angustia y temor, porque vos te habías desmallado y no sabía qué hacer porque no reaccionabas con nada. Obviamente Luciano vino conmigo al escuchar lo sucedido, olvidando todo igual que Manuel, y corrimos tanto como pudimos y llegamos a verte.
>>Manuel te había llevado a su habitación y te había colocado esas vendas en la cabeza, pero ya habían pasado varias horas y vos aún no reaccionabas, así que terminamos por decidir que nos turnaríamos para cuidarte, y bueno…eso, pues ahora ya despertaste.
-Aún no lo creo…-dije bajado la mirada-es difícil de imaginar a Manu preocupado por alguien…más aún, preocupado por mi-sonreí con algo de tristeza- no lo creo…
-¡¡Martín!!-esa voz…-¡Martín! ¡Despertaste!-Levanté la mirada. Manu estaba mirándome desde la puerta, con la respiración agitada. Había subido las escaleras corriendo.
-¿Ma...Manu…?-estaba asombrado de verle con esa cara, y quedé aún más sorprendido cuando le vi entrar, abalanzándose directo hacia mí, para abrazarme- ¡Che…Pero que te…!
-Cállate weón o'-dijo ocultando su rostro en mi hombro- Me asustaste más que la chucha…
Todos pusimos cara de asombro al ver esto, incluso Luciano, que acababa de regresar. Pero tan pronto Manu notó el silencio de la habitación, se separó de mí y me dio un golpe en el hombro.
-¡¡No volvai a hacer eso, weón!!
-Martín…Nosotros nos vamos ahora, tenemos que hacer-dijo Seba, en la puerta, riendo de la reacción de Manuel que traía la cara roja.
-Cuídate muito, argentino-Dijo Luciano, riendo de la misma forma, cerrando a puerta-Ciao Manu.
-Chao…-Le respondió él al brasilero. Ya…ya no había ningún sentimiento de odio entre ellos… ¿Por qué?
La lluvia aumentó y se escuchaba más fuerte azotando la ventana, eso era lo único que se podía oír en ese momento junto al silbido del viento para cuando ambos se marcharon, viniendo tras ello un silencio profundo, es de esos molestos en los que uno no sabe qué decir, menos tomando en cuenta que había sido Manu quién había hecho que me desmallara.
Yo… sencillamente no sabía qué hacer en una situación como esta, mientras que Manu, que estaba sentado a mi lado, con la cabeza agacha, jugaba con sus manos, bastante nervioso y triste  la vez…
-Martín…-dijo finalmente él, pero sin ser capaz de verme a los ojos- yo…lo que pasó ayer…realmente no quería que…Lo siento.
-¿Ah?-no lo podía creer…Manu, ¡¿Manu se había disculpado?!- Esto…Oye Manu, ¿Te encontrás bien, seguro que no estás enfermo ni nada, che?-dije anonadado.
-¡Claro que no po' weón! Es solo que…ayer...-dijo apenado- Sorry Martín, es que no se que me pasó…
-Eh, Manu, no te peocupés, que yo te entiendo, estabas fuera de ti, así que no…ah…-una punzada en mi cabeza me hizo detenerme- disculpa, me duele la cabeza todavía…-sonreí.
-Es mi culpa…-se levantó- puta…me molesta ser así, si en total vo' noteniai nada que ver…¡Pero es que cuando me enojo no se qué me pasa po'!
-Manu…-le sostuve de un brazo y le jalé hacia mi, sujetado su delgado cuerpo entre mis brazos. Estaba frío- dejá de preocuparte, si no es nada. Me has golpeado más fuerte-reí.
-¡Ese no es el punto!-dijo sin hacer esfuerzo alguno por zafarse de mi-me preocupaste…-susurró de manera casi inaudible.
Ok, era definitivo, ESE no era Manu…
-Oye, che ¿Qué te sucedió? Estas actuando raro y ya me estoy empezando a preocupar…¿Acaso te hicieron algo esos dos que estás tratándome así?
-No es nada weón o', no me han hecho nada- se levantó un poco y miró hacia un lado. Estaba totalmente rojo- simplemente me siento un poco culpable… ¡Pero vo' también que te metí en weás que no te incumben po'!
-¡Ja, ja, ja!-no pude evitar reír al ver esa expresión. Si, él era Manu aún, pero un Manu demasiado avergonzado, solo eso- ¡Sos tan lindo Manu!
-¡Déjate de decir weás fletas, maricón!-gritó intentando levantarse de todo- ¡A vo' lo fleto no te lo sacan ni a golpes! ¡S…suéltame!
-Calláte, chilenito-dije jalándole nuevamente hacia mi-Gracias por preocuparte por mi.
-Como si me importara…weón.
Le besé, ¿Cómo no hacerlo?, con esa expresión tan "provocadora" en el rostro, me era imposible resistirme, y aún más al saber que lo que el Seba me había dicho era cierto. Podía ser muy pesado, orgulloso y fastidioso algunas veces -casi siempre-, pero ¿Porqué yo no podía resistirme a él? ¿Qué tenía ese chileno que no podía apartarme de su lado? ¿Qué era lo que le hacía tan especial?
No lo sé…y creo que nunca lograré entender esto del todo, pero desde ese momento, decidí que quería que él fuese mío para siempre, ¡Aún más que antes! Quería que sus ojos, su voz su cuerpo y su alma, me pertenecieran solo a mí y que nadie más que lo arrebatase nunca, sin importar el motivo o la razón o si tan solo se trataba de una broma, porque Manuel es mío y las únicas marcas que puede traer en sobre su divina piel trigueña, son las mías.

Martín Hernández, Santiago de Chile
01:34 AM, 11/06/2010
tras MILENIOS DE DEMORA al fin tube el tiempo para terminar "Marcas" (en este cap si que Manu se ve todo tiernoo *O*!!!! amé como se expresa!!! es tan... tan....MANU xD!!!!)
Espero no les moleste el final que se me ocurrió, pero no se preocupen que tiene un "EXTRA" que subiré mañana xD! (ahí explico porqué Manu no mató a Luciano hahaha)
Yaps, eso!! ojalá no me maten...por favor... pero REALMENTE no había tenido tiempo!! y además lo escribí mas o menos apurada ^^U! y bueno, eso...

Capítulo 1[link]
Capítulo 2[link]
Capítulo 3[link]
Capítulo 4[link]
Capítulo 5
Capítulo EXTRA[link]

cuidesne y NO ME MATEN!!!
Los personajes no son mios, son de Latin Hetalia y sus respectivos dueños.
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A/N: Wassup everyone I felt like doing a Duncey fanfic since I do like their pairing. I don't like that potential scott/Courtney pairing though. But since it looks like its possible of happening I just thought of making a way for Duncney to still happen even if Scott and Courtney did get together. NOTE: This is my first Duncney fanfic so they could be OOC a bit. Anways on with the fanfic.


Duncan and Courtney has swapped teams 3 weeks ago and the heroic hamster won the last challenge. Corutney was close to being eliminated and right now she can't go to sleep. It's now 2 o'clock in the morning and Courtney is at the beach sitting on the sand and reflecting.

"Man why did Chris Mclame have to switch me onto the villains team?" questions Courtney "I really don't feel like being with those ruffians especially Gwen! Hmmm well all of them- "

"Except for Alejandro right?" says Someone from the distance who walks towards Courtney

"What are you doing here?" snaps Courtney "You know I don't want you around me Duncan!"

"Same thing you're doing princess" replies Duncan "Just taking a late night stroll on the beach and thinking"

"Oh and what kind of thinking are you doing Neanderthal?" asks Courtney giving Duncan her famous cold glare

"Oh nothing much just finding ways to get my princess back is all" smiles Duncan who sits down next to Courtney

"Oh please don't even start Duncan" says a detested Courtney "I have no time for your little bullshit compliments"

"Oooo Feisty aren't we" says Duncan with a sly grin as he scoots over closer to Courtney "I like that in a chick"

Courtney then blushes at his remark and tries to sound tough when she says "I bet you say that to every girl"

"No only to the girl I love" says Duncan who cups Courtney's chin

"What the hell do you think you're doing?!" snaps a slightly blushing Courtney who slaps Duncan's hand away "You have Gwen !"

"Nope me and her are finished" frowns Duncan "Shes going back to Trent"

"Oh so now you're crawling back to me for forgiveness huh?" asks Courtney with a mischievous smile "Well I'm sorry to break it to you but Courtney stopped caring about you a long time ago"

"If so then why do you still keep that skull I carved for you in your pocket?" asks Duncan

"We-Well its good luck" says Courtney

"So I guess that DxC engraving is luck huh?" asks Duncan

Courtney blushes and says "Oh that I forgot all about that"

"Oh really?" asks Duncan who puts his face close to Courtney's

"Really" smiles Courtney

At that moment Duncan kisses a unexpected Courtney. The kiss lasted for about ten seconds and Courtney at first doesn't reject the kiss for a moment but then she pushes Duncan off of her and she gets up from the sand.

"Where are you going princess?" asks Duncan

Courtney turns around and says while nearly in tears "A...way from you!"

Duncans badboy demeanor drops when he says "Princess are you-"

Courtney then dashes off from the scene. Courtney runs into the confessional and because its so early in the morning the camera is turned off. So runs inside and is sobbing

"Why?! Why?!" sobs Courtney "Right when I thought I was over him this has to happen!"

Then suddenly theres a knock on the door and a male voice could be heard

"Hey Princess let me in" says Duncan "Lets talk about this"

"Please leave me alone Duncan!" says a distraught Courtney "I don't want to hear you or see you right now!"

"Ok then that only leaves me with one option" says Duncan

After Duncan makes that last statement its quiet for about 20 seconds and all of a sudden the Confessional door is unlocked opened and with that enters Duncan.

"Look Princess I just wanna-" says Duncan

"Get out!" snaps Courtney who interrupts Duncan "I don't want to talk"

"I'm sorry but I do" says Duncan who closes and Locks the Confessional door

"Wha-what are you doing?!" asks a now scared Courtney who now has her back against the wall.

"I'm not gonna lose you again" says Duncan who now has Courtney pinned against the wall "I messed up when I left you for Gwen and believe it or not I still loved you even when I was with her"

"You liar!" shouts Courtney who is struggling to get out of Duncans grip "If you loved me then why did you leave me?!"

"You kept on driving me crazy with all those ridiculous rules" answers "I want to love the Princess who helped me bag those pb&j sandwiches not the dictator Princess"

Courtney calms down a little bit but still in tears says "Well I'm sorry but that Courtney is here to stay and she doesn't want you around"

"Oh I see then" says Duncan who looks deep into Courtney's black onyx eyes

"What are you talking about Dunca-" says an interrupted Courtney who is then kissed by Duncan again.

Duncan forces his tongue into Courtney's mouth to taste her. At first Courtney was trying to push Duncan off of her but moments later she conceded and wrapped her arms around him and she herself started tongue wrestling with the delinquent

Courtney was thinking to herself *I can't stop myself anymore whether I like it or not I need him*

Minutes passed before they break their kiss. They were breathing heavily from all the kissing still wrapped in each others arms.

Duncan looks at Courtney with a serious face and says "Courtney I don't say this much but I love you and I want you back"

Courtney was so shocked to see how serious Duncan and that he actually called her by her real name that it left her speechless

"Look I know I can be a asshole but just give me another chance Courtney" says Duncan

"I...I….I" says a speechless Courtney "I'm sorry Duncan but its too late for that to happen now"

"W-why is it too late?!" asks Duncan "Why is too late to take me back?!"

"I'm dating Scott now thats why" says Courtney who puts her head down

Duncan's whole world came crashing down when he heard those words come from Courtney's mouth but instead of getting heart broken and emotional he smiles at the thought of something.

"Then how about we just be creep around then?" asks Duncan with a mischievous smile

"What?!" says Courtney who then pushes Duncan away from her and rushes out of the confessional "I can't do that! I won't stoop to your level Duncan"

"You're not too far from stooping to my level though" says Duncan who then walks out of the confessional

"Why you say that?" asks slightly irritated Courtney

"Well you say you have a boyfriend and you're over your ex boyfriend but you still carry around your ex boyfriend's handmade gift, you're with your ex boyfriend right now instead of with your boyfriend, and matter of fact you just got finished tongue wrestling….with guess who? Your ex boyfriend! I can pretty much say you are in the act of cheating Courtney"

"You forced kissed me!" shouts Courtney

"Yeah but you didn't resist me though" says Duncan with a sly grin "Admit it Courtney you miss me just as much as I miss you. I could tell by much you was into that kiss just now"

"No…..I don't" says Courtney "I can be better off without you"

"Remember Courtney C.I.T.'s aren't suppose to lie" smiles Duncan

"Ok!" says Courtney "I miss you and I still love you but I won't cheat on Scott to be with you he doesn't deserve that"

"Oh and you think he really likes you?!" asks Duncan "Look that Dawn chick that he got eliminated last season is who he loves he's just gonna use you until has no need for you anymore!"

"I know that I'm not an idiot!" says Courtney "But I rather go be with someone who will use me than be with someone who will cheat on me"

With that last remark Duncan was about to call it quits

"But!" says Courtney with a lustful smile as she approaches Duncan "I'm always up to forming an alliance"

With that Duncan smiles and says "How about we go to my room and discuss about the details of our alliance"

"Gladly" smiles Courtney who thens links arms with Duncan "Also brace yourself my negotiations could take us all night"

"I hope it does" smiles Duncan as he and Courtney walk off to the mansion

A/N: What do you guys think for it being my first Duncney fanfic.

I write this to you,
This is not a prayer
Not such an inconsequential waste of air,
No, no
I can hardly breathe 
From on all the prayers
Wasted on your ears,
Nor stand...
From how long I've knelt at your feet.
This is a letter 
Sent from a grieving sinner
Whilst still clutching the hand
You stole from him
From me.
Two hands ,in fact,
One so small
I hardly noticed
When it ceased clutching me.
I write this to ask 
Not to pray
As prayers seem to have no worth to you
Surely not mine at least.
I ask only 
That you return them to me.
Let me clutch these hands 
So tightly 
Till they might return my grasp.
Because as I am right now
I doubt, I could ever let them go.
I write this 
Not to pray but to beg
Give them back to me.
Give them back.
I can't let them go.

Written a while ago. Just decided to submit. Hope everyone enjoys.

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Po Feliksie Łukasiewiczu można się było spodziewać wszystkiego, wiedziała o tym cała Europa oraz kilka państw zza oceanu.
   - Kocham Cię.
Jednak takiego wyznania i to w środku konferencji światowej nie spodziewał się nikt, a zwłaszcza ten do którego Polska się zwracał.
   - Hę? Ale, że co? Znowu się schlałeś z Ivanem i masz teraz delirkę albo inne gówno?
Oburzony Ivan się zapowietrzył, Toris parsknął w dokumenty, które przeglądał, a Eliza tłumiła śmiech rękawem.
   - Nie! Skąd taki pomysł! Ja, tak  generalnie, nigdy nie byłem pijany! Po prostu jestem w tobie totalnie na zabój zakochany, Ptaszyno!
Ludwig zacisnął mocno wargi, żeby śmiechem nie przerwać tego teatrzyku, Felicjano siedział z otwartą buzia z której wypadały nitki pasty.
   - Ale to nie logiczne! Ja jestem mężczyzna! I ty też! Chyba...
   - Ale to nie ma nic do rzeczy! Zapytaj Francisa! Generalnie to w miłości nie ma żadnych granic!
Francis jako znawca w tej dziedzinie pokiwał głową.
   - Ale ja jestem za piękny na geja!
Z sali odezwały się powątpiewające stęknięcia.
   - To bądź kobietą w tym związku! Z twoim zapatrzeniem w siebie to totalnie będziesz lepszym uke od Artura!
Kirkland zrobił się czerwony, a Alfred z wszechwiedzącą miną przyznał racje Feliksowi, za co oberwało mu się od Arthura („Że niby ON ma by lepszym uke ode mnie, dobre sobie!")
   - Nie będę niczyim uke! Jak tak ma wyglądać ta konferencja to ja wychodzę! - zebrał wszystkie manatki. Poradzisz sobie, West? - Gilbert spojrzał na brata ale kiedy dotarło do niego, że jest on czerwony od niemego śmiechu rzucił mu w twarz plikiem kartek i wyszedł głośno trzaskając drzwiami.
Zaraz po tym Litwa, Czechy, Węgry i Słowacja rzuciły się do Polski, który pochlipywał.
   - Ale jak to generalnie możliwe, że on tak totalnie nie rozumie moich uczuć?!

Gilbert zmierzał się z upokorzeniem w swoim pokoju, sączył już kolejne piwo żałując, że przez tyle lat picia stał się odporny na działanie alkoholu. Za okna doszło do niego klaskanie.
Niech mówią, że to nie jest miłośc! Że się tylko zdaje nam!
   - Ki diabeł? -zapytał siebie Prusy.
Czerwone i bure i bure, chodź ze mną na górę, na górę!
Dam ci klucz do bramy tam się pokochamy!
   - Alfred znów urządził karaoke – stwierdził.
Jednak kiedy do jego uszu dochodziły kolejne hity discopolo stwierdził, że to nie jest kolejne party hard w wykonaniu Ameryki.
Znany ze swojej odwagi Prusy podniósł dupsko z fotela i ruszył na balkon, co było błędem.
Pod balkonem stał Feliks w błyszczącej, różowej sukni godnej bohaterki Disneyowskiego filmu.
   - Gilbert! Czemuż ty jesteś Gilbert!
Wyrzecz się swego rodu, rzuć tę nazwę!
Lub jeśli tego nie możesz uczynić,
To przysiąż wiernym być mojej miłości,
A ja przestanę być z krwi wódkolubnej.
Nim Prusy zamknął drzwi balkonowe nie omieszkał rzucić w Feliksa doniczką.

Następnego dnia, kiedy Gilbert zszedł do holu hotelu, w którym trwały obrady państw zobaczył owe personifikacje nacji spoglądające w przestrzeń.
   - E ty, mały? Co się tak w przestrzeń gapicie?
Nim Łotwa zdążył odpowiedzieć wśród płatków róż pojawił się Francis.
   - Bo tak jest bardziej dramatycznie!
Nim dowiedział się o co konkretnie chodzi z pierwszych szeregów dało się słyszeć jęki i zawodzenia. Prusy przedarł się do przodu, żeby zobaczyć Elizę tulącą do piersi patelnię.
   - Lizi, co się dzieje? - zapytał przyjaciółki.
   - To przez ciebie!
   - Ale co ja takiego zrobiłem?
   - Odrzuciłeś Feliksa!
   - A teraz, biedaczek, próbuje popełnić samobójstwo – rzucił z tylnego rzędu Roderich.
Gilbert dopiero teraz zwrócił uwagę na Polskę. Wszyscy ze łzami w oczach wpatrywali się jak Łukasiewicz raz po raz wbiega w stos kartonów.
Gilbert wyszedł.
O tym jak Feliks dość nie poradnie stara się przeknać Gilba do swoich uczuć. Mam nadzieje, że nie ma większych błędów.
Możliwe, że kiedyś pojawi się kontynuacjia
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