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Disclaimer: I don't own Envy, Father, the other sins from FMAB, Fullmetal Alchemist/Brotherhood, or the moon.


Ah, it's about time I write something! :)

In this short oneshot story, I based it off of Envy's emotional torment from Brotherhood. All he wanted was to be human, as it says in the anime (perhaps even the manga, but I think the 2009 anime and manga vary a little bit). Yes, I know Envy was a sadistic creature that enjoyed seeing humans suffer and thought himself superior to them, and I included that in this oneshot. However, what if Envy felt something in his heart for others and was being broken by emotional stress because of the false life he is living? What if Envy wasn't all that bad? What if Envy could've been good, but never had the support or love or care and was simply lost?

A short burst of inspiration in this was from:
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The songs I listened to while writing this was:
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Please give feedback. It's very encouraging to see comments and it makes me feel like people care. If you see any mistakes or don't understand, let me know. :)
No negative feedback. :iconenvynoplz:
I hope you enjoyed it and thank you for reading. :iconenvyhappy:
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The damage is done to your desperate life.
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a six word story.

i struggled for a long time with the title for this piece. i'm still suppressing the urge to give it the name of the person who inspired it.

eleventh may, 2014
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I wrote this when someone precious to me was going to leave me.
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Updated, as chromeantennae has found this piece's name. He really has a gift for discovering the titles for poetry. Thank you, Ricky :heart:

Please: I would be extremely appreciative of critique on this piece. Does the format work? Do the sections convey the story appropriately? Is there flow? What do you feel while reading the piece?
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ok so this my fist time righting soul eater story it was ltitle harder then I was thnking it wood be to  do it but stell did it
any way this story take palce in artle uvnruse

one where ever thing in manga happen only few thing in manga did not happen like crona turning eivl again but  the fianly batte with medusa that happen in anime happen in this unvurse and if watech the anime end  exas that happen after show over you see

medusa snake mvoeing around that htined at that she not dead after all that and what death the kid others said  befor final epsidoe end

there thee il be anther kishin  some day that in retune give me the idea to make this stroy
beside doing it this way is one onl way I can use corna  who is in awosme charater
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Series : Crossover (Disney/Dreamworks)
Rating :  G
Pairing(s) / Character(s) : Jack❤Elsa
Word Count : 106
A/N : Okay, so it's official. I'm a huge fan of this ship now, seriously hardcore. ^^; I've got plenty of other fan art and adopts coming up, but I really felt like writing something. ;P BTW, I used heresy on purpose. To me, Jack lives by a doctrine of being wild, free, and true to yourself, so I felt that he would see Elsa's restraint as blasphemy. He'd want her to embrace what she is.

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Artwork : Doria-Plume
I won't be alone by Doria-Plume

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(I have trouble with my hands and typing, so know that I'm very thankful for every fave and comment.)

Other Jelsa Writings :
FF : Hope Broke the Crown
The storm has arrived and your hands are cold against my face—the temperature of my lonely heart. Our reflection is a frozen fractal of blue and black on the window pane. It ignites white as the boiling night howls and roars. I stare into its endlessness. We are the storm. The lightning does not ebb. Its call is primal and low, a rumble up through our feet to our chest.
I touch your hands. You’ve shared this dark with me, this restless storm. It calls to us both. Snow. Cold. Wild with ice and rebellion, we are the whistle of winter wind—ghosts ushered away in Spring, a dream that life evaporates with new growth.
Rendered invisible.
Your eyes tell me all I need to know. My answer is voiceless as my lips curve into a smile. I believe you’ll come back to me. I believe in you.
The coming sun has started to break the shadow of the horizon and I feel your hands leave mine. You open your mouth to speak and I shake my head, already knowing what you’l

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THANK YOU TO TrollainWolf FOR THE PLOT IDEA!! ///w///)/
She deserves as much credit as I do, guys!!

Karkat (c) Hussie

You (c) Whichever anime dude make nekos a thing
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